''The Lost Colony of Isla Sirena'' | MYSTERIOUS ISLAND CREEPYPASTA

[@DrCreepen]

Thanks to everyone for making this hit 100k views. This is pretty much the first story I recorded after I'd moved to the Netherlands, so it will always be a special one for me. Enjoy!

[@jackdare]

This story stirs some strange 'nostalgic longing with a twist of adventure' feeling for me.. I can see why it's special for you in context of your move. Also, I've listened 3 times since the day it dropped.. glad I could push it past 100k mark for ya 😂

[@MrEvan312]

It'll always be special for me too, Doc, this and the Cabin story you so graciously read out. I hope to someday have something new and juicy to offer your subreddit, but I've become horribly stagnant and focused on work. Here's hoping. Keep at it, Doc!

[@MrsCaranAmy]

Congratulations Dr. Creepen. I hope you are enjoying living there now. Have a superb Sunday♡♡

[@jamesnorth7318]

Dr creepen ya never reply. I've done a bit of travelling over the years but you seem to get to the good places ie Istanbul any advice for someone looking away from the UK again after covid

[@phoenix_wolf7953]

awesome story Dr. Creepen

[@MrEvan312]

Hello Doc and friends! Author here! I remember Doc commented on his feelings about my story over on the subreddit a while back, but I was not expecting it to be done this soon! Doc is truly a saint for having put what was clearly a MASSIVE amount of time into this narration, so be sure you keep giving him love! Unlike the other two stories he has so graciously narrated, this story was two years in the making, having languished forgotten and incomplete much of that time, and it went through a few different formats. It started as a day-by-day POV-style lost journal, then was abandoned, and finally I found it and gave it the finish it deserved, which was much better than I expected it to be. What I like to call "Redcoat-era horror" is something I aim to expand upon and, if the stars align, perhaps you'll see a short piece of mine over on the subreddit this December! Thank you all for your kind words and, once again, thank you Doc for this making this titanic undertaking! Makes me glad I saved this story from oblivion all that time back.

[@AdmiralPureBlood]

Great story keep that keyboard clacking

[@A.A.L]

Great story! Would love to see this as a movie! You’re a very talented writer, thanks for The entertainment

[@8chickenrollsstackedontopo150]

Very nicely done! The lines of the each person gives them so much character, the atmosphere was also so damn great!!

[@GR-bn3xj]

I have to admit I really really enjoyed this one. You did awesome!

[@jojoe21620]

@@A.A.L I agree. I would love to see this become a movie it was a great story.

[@colewyatt5298]

Dr. Creepen: "I hope you have 2 hours to spend this evening" Me who absolutely does not have 2 hours to spend this evening: "I'm listening"

[@MrEvan312]

Doc put a lot more work into this than I thought was needed, definitely more than I would've ever asked of him!

[@amandalyons1719]

I've had 24hrs since we all got the China bloody flu

[@robynewilliams-heller1816]

This was one of the best written and narrated stories I've heard in a very long time. Kudos to the writer. Also to the narrator, ...of course. Well done.

[@MrEvan312]

I'm honored, Robyne! Overall I like how this story turned out after a long time on ice, but I'm always surprised at how people enjoy my work. It's not really a humility thing, just perspective I suppose. Either way, the amount of praise and support I've seen in this comment section is deeply cherished!

[@robynewilliams-heller1816]

@@MrEvan312 Well Deserved.

[@jamescannon4186]

When he says Abes word rang through his head for some reason i just heard echoing“Don’t tell the captain about the gin”

[@MrEvan312]

"Snitches get stitches, Daniel..."

[@TRNcBrwn357]

😂

[@lucianoben-malek693]

Mysterious island stories are a genre there really could have more of. Thank you Doctor!

[@crob763]

Luciano Ben-Malek that and more ocean, space and military stories.

[@lucianoben-malek693]

@@crob763 exactly! I'm surprised there's so few of them!

[@SuperBlackCocks]

@@crob763 literally my four favourite genres

[@caraf8727]

@@crob763 I agree about the ocean ones! I cant get enough

[@MrEvan312]

Mysterious islands, particularly in the age of sail or the colonial times, are indeed a relatively untapped genre. We'll see if I can fix that, but in the meantime there is this tale :) I'm glad you enjoyed, Luciano!

[@maynardskunk4834]

Please don't stop what you're doing doc it is seriously helping me in my life

[@winstonwins1096]

A well written, eloquently spoken masterpiece. Hats off to the Doc for picking this one up and a well deserved congratulations to the author of this heartfelt, disturbing little gem.

[@MrEvan312]

Thank you, Brian! Daniel's probably one of my most emotionally-developed characters in probably any of my completed works, and he's definitely the most eloquent.

[@lislecuson7630]

A nice long story for the 300 miles left to drive today. So I buckle up and put the rig in gear and listen away.

[@MrEvan312]

Hope you had a safe ride, Lisle! And I hope you enjoyed!

[@aakashsharma7423]

@@MrEvan312 great work my friend

[@JohnMiller-ll8oe]

Keep em rolling. Rubber side down!

[@immauniwolf8040]

Thanks for spending extra time with us. Hope you're settling in nicely.

[@MrsCaranAmy]

These epic stories involving the sea are some of my favorites. The visual of the ocean was soothing. Your accent was great for Lobo. The tale was suspenseful. Thank you. Have a superb Sunday and I do hope you are enjoying living in Amsterdam ♡♡

[@ejk4555]

Dude I just want to tell you how much of a godsend you are with always releasing long-form creepypastas (and obviously doing a bang-up job with the narration!!) I am exclusively a fan of creepypastas that are at least 40 minutes long and up, and your channel is the oooonly one that reliably produces this length pastas. Thanks for all you dude, Dr. Creepen

[@DrCreepen]

My pleasure... Enjoy!

[@MrEvan312]

Doc's is a labor of love, the amount of time he spends looking for and making long-read narrations... he truly is a god-send. I'm glad you enjoyed, Edward!

[@granny13ad33]

This was truly awesome, filled with fear and suspense. It's one of the best I've listened to, The Hollows and The Hills another. I do like the long ones. Both are excellent!

[@theCidisIn]

What's up do Doc. Sounds like you probably put a lot into this long one. And on a Monday too! Aren't we lucky! Thanks Doc! I bet the traveler element connects with you.

[@DrCreepen]

been recording this one on and off for a couple of weeks to be honest

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad you enjoyed, Cody! This is one of my longest pieces, but had I known it would take so much work for Doc I don't know if I would've shared it. He's a saint :D

[@nonamesupplied1875]

That one was a bit slow getting started off, but I'm glad I listened. Thanks, Doc.

[@MrEvan312]

A lot of people have talked about the pacing I set for this story which I don't know if I consciously paid attention to. This story is a complete overhaul of the original day-by-day, lost journal entry format which would've been agonizing the way I wrote it. I'm glad it was worth the listen, NoName!

[@johnfromdownunder.4339]

This story made me cry because the men so far anyway,treat the young ones with care and respect and it just feels so wholesome and warm. Like all Greek tragidys ( can't spell) it sets up the kindness and good so when the darkness comes you feel so much more for the characters. That is the key to great story telling. Or formula. I'm 41, and I feel like I remember a time of my youth when I didn't know how cruel and how nasty humans really are today. I wish I was back there. That you.

[@MrEvan312]

I'm happy that it struck a chord with you, this story is one of my best instances of true emotional investment in my characters partially because of how long it took to write.

[@CreepyGhostStories]

Incredible narration, Great story thanks!

[@MrEvan312]

Thanks, CGS!

[@TheBaconlaser]

It's CGS. He's here to cover Isla Sirena with the Blue Mist and let the monsters battle it out.

[@theunironicpeasant4266]

Listening to this felt like watching a movie. I loved the atmospheric pacing and the historical setting. Glad I saved this for the long day at work today instead of listening the second you posted it lol ^_^

[@TheWorpler]

spooky island genre, love it. Just like empty houses, basements, attics, caves, forests, abandoned buildings, rituals, etc etc etc...

[@MrEvan312]

Hell yeah :D

[@sonjarenae3968]

I felt an actual electric jolt of excitement course through my mind when I realized that not only does the title sound like something I’m really going to enjoy, my favorite narrator uploaded it 🙌🏼👌🏼

[@MrEvan312]

I'll tell you, I was quite happy to see this in my subscription list this morning. I hope you did indeed enjoy, Sonja!

[@andrika1990]

Dr. your voice is so soothing its hard to get through your vids without napping. Amazing content as always though. This video also puts me in mind of a song called Seven Widows Weep by a band named Sirenia. How fitting

[@MrEvan312]

That is interesting indeed, Nefertiti! I'm glad you enjoyed!

[@GlitterismyCRACK]

THANK YOU SO MUCH DOC!!! 2+ hours!! I got dinner made and laundry done.😁 Fantabulous story loved it!

[@nonono965]

End of my night shift. Got chamomile tea. Got 2 hours to relax before I go to sleep. Thank you

[@MrEvan312]

Thank YOU for listening, D!

[@dylanmorris7357]

Oh boy I can't wait to listen to this one Doc. Mysterious Island stories are the best.

[@MrEvan312]

I hope it didn't disappoint, Dylan! Islands, the wood and sailing era, colonial era, I think are all relatively untapped genres of horror.

[@dawsonvandevoorde7157]

MrEvan312 fantastic story!

[@ladyfaeryj5108]

I swear, I love ALL historical fiction. I also love mythology. Historical scary mythological fiction just makes it that much better! Thanks, Doc! And thanks to you, awesome author! (I can't read your name while commenting, sorry)

[@MrEvan312]

I think that historical fictional horror has a lot of potential, and I am to start doing more stories in this fashion, like the Hundred Year War, maybe ancient Greece (adding my own twist on existing monsters perhaps). I'm glad you enjoyed it, LadyFaery!

[@brokensoul2821]

I love all of your work Dr Creepen, I really loved this one and your voice is the best to go to sleep to. Cheers from Australia my friend 👏👍☺🎉😆

[@MrEvan312]

Hats off to Aussie listeners, I'm glad you enjoyed Broken!

[@stevietricks]

I'm a little lost for words. That was incredible. What a story. What a narration. Thanks again good sir (Doffs hat)

[@robynsmith4164]

♥️ Thank you SO MUCH Doc for masterfully narrating yet another wonderful tale for all of your loving Subscribers! I pray you and your loved ones are staying happy and healthy! 😁 Love from Texas ♥️🤠🌴

[@tjbrown1979]

Man it was a great story, also I find the longer ones are great. I do understand that they have to be exhausting but man you bring it. Always happy to listen to you and enjoy this channel too much. Thanks bro!!

[@jeannedarc9491]

Thank you for these longer stories..I listen at night when I’m in bed and it’s nice to listen as long as I need to to fall asleep. Loves these epic stories! More please, more outdoor cabin in the woods thrillers..love out doors thrillers set in winter time with creepy interlopers..mmmmwwwahhhhh! Dr. C. Best reading voice on you tube..bar none!

[@MrEvan312]

Thank you for listening, Gates! Perhaps I need to write some more of those backwoods stories! I'm sure something perfectly suited to those desires will come along soon, Doc's got many great contributors on here.

[@jsa7x1999]

Beautiful. Simply beautliful. Amazing story sir, hope there will be more stories from this time period.

[@MrEvan312]

It's a genre I've titled "redcoat horror" and I indeed hope I can return to my writing roots someday and add some more decent stories like it! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I also did one about Valley Forge that Doc narrated for Christmas but it pales in comparison to this story.

[@Cybraw2005]

This is one of the best stories ever. I was captivated right from the start.

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, one of the best decisions in my life was rescuing this from a slow death and being left unfinished.

[@christow7989]

Thank you so much for recording this story!!! I really like the long stories the most! I appreciate all the time you put in to what you put out. Have an awesome day!

[@MrEvan312]

Thank YOU for listening, Red! Doc's work is definitely a labor of love, he makes that clear.

[@mrspike33ehrhard67]

Who dares dislike a video before they even had a chance to finish it

[@MrEvan312]

Heresy, I tell you!

[@sebastiandiaconu1221]

lost souls

[@5113-q3w]

😏😁

[@1953Johnnyp]

Mabe idits dat kunt reed!

[@mr.halloween3371]

The days you upload are the highlight of my high stressed life. I hope all is going well for you in your new home.

[@XBREE77X]

"Amaze them and fill that book" are the words i hear as I open my new scetchbook and settle down to do some drawing :)

[@MrEvan312]

Take care on your sea voyage, shiny ;)

[@deanmorgan1821]

Wow that was excellent! Thank you so much Doc! Your exceptional narration really draws me in and brings these stories to life. I can't get enough!

[@honeysantiago7891]

Wow, this story is freaking amazing! I love this one so much so, that I'm keeping it on my "favorites list"! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us, Doc. And as always, Good Sir, I am sending you lots of hugs, plenty of love and many, many blessings! 💞💞💞💞💞

[@someguy6528]

Really loving these long ones Thank you, doc.

[@MrEvan312]

Thank YOU for listening, SG!

[@Niharyeluri]

It's been 31 seconds since you've uploaded this vedio and I'm already here 🖤

[@MrEvan312]

I personally came across this in my subscription list when I got up to go pick up my moped and found out that Christmas had come much earlier this year!

[@gigidodson]

Yay a long story! A fabulous way to spend a rainy afternoon before an evening of American high school football. How can anyone dislike this?

[@tobyturtle10]

Loved this story! Thanks so much for the commitment you have to bringing us these works❤️

[@MrEvan312]

For lack of a better word, he is truly committed to this :D it's clearly a labor of love for our dear Doc.

[@bleakdestiny6095]

Fantastic tale! I absolutely love stories like this. They're old, timeless and speak volumes. Thank you so much! 😘

[@MrEvan312]

Thank you, Bleak! I feel the olden days like Colonial America or even earlier times have a lot of untapped potential for effective horror, given that our very science was still in its infancy and plagued with dogma and fear. The world seemed a lot bigger, scarier back then, and we were so much less equipped.

[@lindseyfishel3909]

Thank you for reading this. I started this story on two other accounts but always fell asleep halfway through

[@amylynch4117]

I’ve been listening to your narrations for a few months now. I came across them by pure chance! I absolutely love your work! Thank you 😁

[@MrEvan312]

Thanks for listening, Amy! Come to think of it, I cannot remember how or when I came across my first Doc narration. Feels like many years ago.

[@punkinazz69]

This was an amazing story of man vs. the great medium of Life and Death, the Oceans; it was completely worth it to sit and listen to this story! Thank you so much for narrating this tale, Doctor Creepen! 😊✨

[@MrEvan312]

Thank YOU for listening, Punkin!

[@punkinazz69]

MrEvan312, no problem. I really enjoyed the story.

[@sirenetyx792]

Thank you so much, this is such a wonderful treat!

[@bambam144]

holy cow this was great many thx for the narrating and many thx to the guy, who has written this story. really good stuff.

[@Mellectic]

This was fantastic!! ♥

[@mandyryan1946]

A long story for a gloomy monday afternoon. Thanks doc, luv u😘💕💕

[@MrEvan312]

Or any afternoon really, but most welcome on a gloomy one. I hope you enjoyed, Mandy!

[@mandyryan1946]

@@MrEvan312 i sure did, kept my attention all the way. Thank you. Look forward to hearing more of your stories 😊💕💕

[@MrEvan312]

@@mandyryan1946 All the two hours? A truly flattering compliment :) you may indeed see a much smaller colonial-era piece on the subreddit this December!

[@mandyryan1946]

@@MrEvan312 looking forward for more😊

[@michelehaefner74]

The longer stories are great! Especially on a crappy Monday! ❤️Dr. Creepen

[@MrEvan312]

Doc's like Flex Tape, he can fix anything.

[@robertwjenkins6916]

Great narration and story with a new spin on the mythology of sirens...great job

[@MrEvan312]

Thanks! I aim to do a lot more ancient/pre-modern era stories that have a twist on established monsters, like in this case while the songs of the sirens is familiar, the creatures themselves are quite different: some sort of intangible, invisible voices that possess humans as hosts

[@aTaintedRose]

I work as a records archivist alone in a dim dusty 5000ft, 3 story warehouse. Spending days alone in a place worthy of a horror story while I catalog, preserve, and reboxing records I really enjoy having you and your stories to keep me company Doc.

[@SariennMusic73]

Just the first sentence sounds like a Dr Creepen story title. 10/10 I'd listen to it.

[@aTaintedRose]

@@SariennMusic73 lol. If I decide to post any of the creepy stories I have about it I'll keep that in mind for a title. ^_^

[@MrEvan312]

@@SariennMusic73 I'm not the only one who immediately thought of that same thing :D

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad you enjoyed, Stazi! I personally didn't think this story would be so long but if I were an outside viewer I'd love to have this to listen while doing work like that.

[@aTaintedRose]

@@MrEvan312 Thank you for taking the time to write it. I personally enjoy the longer stories like this because of the work I do. Longer stories means I don't have to stop my flow to find another one. Plus your writing style is very enjoyable. Your pacing, flow, and level of detail all create a rich world that is easy to become emersed in.

[@LegendofLaw]

I love the irritation he has with his sister...and he gets a little grumpy because she has no chores. I remember growing up and feeling that exact same way

[@MrEvan312]

As the middle of three sons, I got the vast majority of the work to do at home even today, so I definitely vented a bit of my own frustration there :D one of my biggest downfalls with this story was just letting Ariel vanish the way she did without Daniel trying to save her, a bit of a gap that I never patched.

[@zachyeomans8925]

Jokes on me, instead of sleeping for two hours before work I listen to this. Worth it!

[@lindleloverwatterson3484]

same. to hell with this job, I can run on autopilot at this point and still think about this story lol

[@rustyault5042]

Your videos make work so much better

[@tiffanypriore9220]

I love stories like this. It was so good! I love stories based on olden times, early settlements, colonial days, & even old westerns. Anybody have any good recommendations of stories like I listed above?

[@julyol119]

Aah, so relaxing but still full of suspense :) You really are a master of the craft, Doc!

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, July! Many of my stories employ buildup over time, especially this one as it's one of my longest.

[@ninanightmare3371]

You spoil us! Thanks doctor!

[@rwarts5150]

Dr Creepen is the best narrator on you tube in my humble opinion and Nina Nightmares latest story is next on my list of things to creep me out with

[@ninanightmare3371]

@@rwarts5150 I hope you like it!

[@rwarts5150]

@@ninanightmare3371 I'm watching it right now I'll leave a comment to let you know 😉

[@jeremeygloyd2894]

What an amazing story! Great job doc that was awesome! look forward to the new stories this week! Keep up the great work man!!!

[@MrEvan312]

Thank you, Jeremy!

[@cherryclarke4704]

What an Amazing story with a smattering of horror terror and love at the end wonderful 🖤🖤🖤🖤

[@-DEATHSTROKE]

Yes!!! Spoiling us with a longen, thanks Doc

[@MrEvan312]

A long-un indeed, I was truly not expecting it to be just over two hours! It's one of my longest pieces, but still!

[@JessicaDuBois]

Thank you for doing this story Dr. I love all of your work. You perfected storytime. I wish you would do a camp and do storytime. No kids lol drinks and some good food. Some herb and a blanket! It would be fun! So many would come.

[@MrEvan312]

I'd sure as hell go! If anyone from Doc's viewership came along I think we'd all get along, there are some lovely people here.

[@jacksonlawrence6929]

@@MrEvan312 that would be an odd ass gathering

[@spike.strat1318]

That was well done! by both writer and narrator. You know a good story by how quickly time passes in the reading or telling, this was the quickest two hours i’ve experienced in quite some time!

[@MrEvan312]

Thanks, Spike! This is the longest of my stories that Doc has narrated and he did so stunningly well.

[@jeredclarke1962]

Doc, this may be your best narration yet! MrEvan312 this was amazingly wrote!

[@MrEvan312]

That is a very high compliment, thank you Jered!

[@kimlambert159]

I love this story so much I've listened to it three times so far

[@MrEvan312]

I'm both flattered and shocked that you dedicated an entire 6 hours to listening to my work :D thanks for listening, Kim!

[@kimlambert159]

@@MrEvan312 you bet! I have never done that before pretty much the dedicated every night for an entire week and listen to it three times! I really really enjoyed it thank you for your amazing creativity!

[@beverlyhollenbeck3406]

Wonderful!!! Epic sea stories are marvelous, pulling as they do, to our first home. Love catching up!

[@heartfireful]

2 hours ☺️, THANK YOU DR.

[@MrEvan312]

Thank YOU for listening, Bridgette!

[@JennyLane8666]

That was *brilliant*! Beautifully written, masterfully performed. Truly one of the best spooky stories of recent times. Bravo!

[@SpartanJackson]

Absolutely love it...thanks for the upload Doctor!!!

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad to hear it, S-0331!

[@genieglasslamp5028]

Tonight our story.......... Dude its three in the afternoon.

[@MrEvan312]

Gonna be evening by the time you finish :D

[@LegendofLaw]

You should have listened to it at night. Jumping ahead to listen through the day is cheating.

[@sirandrelefaedelinoge]

Have you not heard of Time Zones...?

[@cassiemcfarlane1340]

Holy Cow! This was awesome, just bloody brilliant! I have no idea how I managed to fall asleep 3 nights in a row trying to finish it but I was excited each night to recap and plug on til I got it finished. ❤️❤️❤️❤️. Great story Dr Creepen!

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad you enjoyed, Cassie! And thank you for sticking it through, it was a long read indeed.

[@babalon7778]

I love adventuring stories for us adventuring types! Now if I can only finish it uninterrupted... After rewinding over 9000 times I finally got to finish this and it was totally worth it!

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Babalon! And thank you for sticking through with it, I wasn't expecting it to be as long a read as it was.

[@kimberlygreen6448]

That was so good thank you love your voice it makes it much better

[@joleenphillips2415]

Yay!! Lol. Love the addition of the seagulls in the background. Driving over the Houston ship channel right now. Thought, "Dang those seagulls are loud today. I can hear them even with the windows of my truck closed."

[@DrCreepen]

Haha... I tried putting them low in the mix too!

[@joleenphillips2415]

@@DrCreepen lol. It's fine the way it is. If nothing else, it made sitting in traffic even funnier. Hope everything is going well with your family settling into a new home- and a new country!

[@MrEvan312]

*In the distance* "Mine. Mine. Mine. Mine. Mine. Mine..."

[@joleenphillips2415]

@@MrEvan312 lol

[@jackdurden466]

Wow, what an amazing story to be so very well written AND to have one of the Finest narrators that I’m aware of to bring it to life! I’d truly love to hear more of this type of island story, I’ve only heard this area tapped a couple of times for very short tales. All in all, I suppose they did better than they would’ve had they been on Isla Nublar or Isla Sorna. (To all those who got that reference, you rock 👍). Keep picking these winners good Dr!

[@MrEvan312]

I DO get that reference, Jack (a lovely coincidental first name, by the way) and actually that's what came to mind when naming the island: islands in POTC like Isla Cruce. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[@jackdurden466]

@@MrEvan312 I listened to this again a year later and it is just as great as the first time. Such an excellent job you did! I love the islands disappearance, as if it was swept away from existence, leaving no trace that it was ever there, and the damage done. And beyond all of the macabre massacre, still a fairly happy ending, I suppose it’s different to everyone, the size of the loss vs the gain. But I find it quite beautiful. Thanks again for your work, I hope to come across more of it..👍

[@jackdurden466]

@@MrEvan312 and I still have one question, are the main characters long ago predecessors of Rudyard Kipling?

[@MrEvan312]

@@jackdurden466 Thank you once again, man :) I do think it's one of my best endings, and this story saw probably the best character developments and interactions of just about any story I've done so I'm really proud of Daniel, Abigail, and the others. It's probably my masterpiece... As for your question I THINK someone actually asked me that before as well and no: a) I actually had never heard of the man beforehand, at least not enough to set in my mind, and b) something I unintentionally did in the story was that Daniel and Abby have no children despite a close and loving marriage and being young and healthy. They also seem to have aged unnaturally fast; I think in a way I can retconn it as the curse, in the end, having its own effects on them and taking its secrets to the grave with them, all but what is kept in the journal.

[@JoBienandFabian]

I've been a bit busy. I don't always listen the day of but I'm glad that both the long and short stories are always available. It's nice to have something to listen to everyday.

[@MrEvan312]

Doc's got so many stories new and old I still need to listen to. I bet he probably has about a year's worth of material overall.

[@cooperlisa69]

I just love your voice! Great stories!

[@fluffinavi7460]

Mom loved this one. We listened while she baked scones and pastries! It was double the treat!🥰

[@MrEvan312]

I'm very glad you and yours enjoyed, Fluff! Nothing like working with food while a tale is spun in the background.

[@MrJustinreese]

I loved this story! If the author is reading this, you wrote a great story. Doc, as always, yours was a captivating narration which did the story justice. Thanks for the tale.

[@MrEvan312]

He is indeed, thank YOU for listening Jon!

[@mkcollectibles9387]

Tyvvm to the author & you, Doc, for the epic tale....amazing story!

[@staceesgotti9859]

I love your amazing voice! Thank you for all you do for us!! ❤❤

[@acharonim4659]

This should be made into short film.

[@MrEvan312]

I would love to see it done someday, maybe as an anime-styled horror but I feel an indie live action group could do this as well.

[@rboyd3435]

Awesome story!

[@stormblessed9618]

Not many stories are this good, and you’re a great narrator.

[@MrEvan312]

Doc's great performance and his style of reading really suiting him to the character of Daniel did my story proud. Glad you liked it, Storm!

[@rza808]

Great Job, story was excellent. Any time you read, I can close my eyes and literally see a movie with your words.... thank you Doc, from Hawaii

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad you enjoyed, Rj! I myself have a very vivid imagination so often I can picture written events being a movie in my head or if I stare at a blank wall long enough.

[@doramedeiros2048]

In Portuguese it means mermaid island. And as usual your narration is superb.

[@MrEvan312]

Interesting, Dora! Of course mermaids haven't always been the nicest creatures of myth either, not many deep denizens seem to look on us kindly :D I'm glad you enjoyed

[@victorcortes1794]

Dora Medeiros So does in Spanish 🤔

[@MrEvan312]

@@victorcortes1794 Mermaids and sirens aren't strictly the same creatures but I see your point.

[@LigeiaNoire]

And lobo is wolf!

[@lindleloverwatterson3484]

umm ... it means mermaid island in English as well

[@rygygardens]

Monday just got a little better thanks to Dr Creepen for giving me a good prescription for a long awesome story!

[@MrEvan312]

Better than any medicine I know, ain't he? I'm glad you enjoyed it, Ryan!

[@rygygardens]

@@MrEvan312 the Dr just seems like an all around good dude, I love his narrations!

[@juanitafrederick8306]

Hey sexy voice This was a sad one. Had tears in my eyes when it was over. Keep them coming.

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad you enjoyed and had a range of emotion with this one. As far as horror I've written, this one is definitely the most emotional and eloquently written. Somehow I got very in touch with Daniel's emotions and I think they played out very well.

[@cutenose38]

Hiya doc its jenny and the cats and we have our favorite drinks and we are ready to listen 😸😸😸😸😸

[@kamnell151]

That story was truly captivating, and, I dare say, a word canvas of straight up bad assery

[@MrEvan312]

I'm glad you think so, K! I think out of all my stories some of my best and strongest characters were woven into this one, with the likes of Lobo, Abe, Abby and Daniel.

[@violetfemme411]

I was loving this story which reminded me more of classic horror from the pen of authors like Algernon Blackwood. The feeling of claustrophobia that permeated stories such as "The Willows" was intense, and without all the cliche and predictable Creepypastas.. UNTIL the black eyes and ear to ear grins. But it did not disappoint and was definitely creepy and well written with an above average narrative as you will undoubtedly agree 😊 Are there more by this author?

[@MrEvan312]

I believe it was Doc or Otis Jiry who narrated that exact story and I happened to listen to it, a very intense and suspenseful story that left you feeling as hunted as the protagonists. I'm glad you liked it, I do have other stories (a few of which are narrated here) such as the Cabin with the Red Light

[@richardsaxon1795]

I guess I'll just stay up then!

[@MrEvan312]

By Doc's decree was it made so :D I hope you enjoyed, Richard!

[@coryedwards9940]

Iv got my drink my smoke and more than 2 hours to spare thank you send me to another world good sir

[@MrEvan312]

Take care on Isla Sirena, Cory! Stay on the paths...

[@rydog3452]

This story is awesome. Not fully though it yet but it is awesome. Edit: love it. So glad I had the time to listen to it. To whoever the author is tell him to keep posting.

[@MrEvan312]

I hope the rest satisfied you, rydog! As far as conclusions go I think it's one of my best.

[@Bohemianstory]

This story is nightmarishly scary. This is so sad. Thank you for this tale.

[@MrEvan312]

Thank *you* Alicia! It's definitely a bittersweet ending, a lot of sorrow along the path for our protagonist but it's one of my favorite endings.

[@bobbyjones1691]

Would be a helluva movie

[@allebenali]

Reminds me of of cassettes from the 80s...love it

[@aramos3639]

Wow, this is a damn good story You can make a film outta this material

[@MrEvan312]

Out of all of my stories, except for a film project I personally made that came from a short story I wrote as a freshman, this one definitely would make a good animation or maybe even live-action.

[@Mia_Mina]

I really like this story. It is very intriguing to me. Very well written and narrated! However, you have a wonderful way of narrating as well. I aspire to be as good as you and a few others one day. Thanks Be Safe.

[@MrEvan312]

Doc's voice could not be better for what I envisioned Daniel to sound like, he really did a bangup job I agree! I'm glad you enjoyed it