Dr. I know this comment is a bit delayed, but I finally was able to listen to this story in it's entirety. I have to say I really did enjoy it. You were able to do all the character parts so well, and tell the story as if I were there as it were happening as well as the description of the creature. Well done my dear doctor.
@gigidodson5 жыл бұрын
My company was closing down. And it was just me and 2 managers left to finish closing the company for good. I found an unused room in the back of an unused portion of a warehouse. It was CHOCKED full of things that wasnt on any inventory. So we went in to take inventory, contacting the owner saying what we found. The guy just said throw it all away. There was an entire apartment full of things. Tables chairs bed an entire kitchen stuff desks computer stereos microwave sofas and chairs. We split it up and took it all home. Better than sending it to the landfill.
@lisadgingersnaps98435 жыл бұрын
Agreed! Congratulations
@realbrat405 жыл бұрын
Ok you better cleanse that stuff both physically and spiritually before you take it anywhere near your home. Did you let him know that you would be taking some instead, maybe he had a good reason for saying toss it. Like infestation of mites, roaches, rats, etc.
@gigidodson5 жыл бұрын
@@realbrat40 This was well over 20 years ago. I still have the dishes, but thats about all.
@lalalager21lovelyjubbly775 жыл бұрын
to right you can always find buyers for practically anything
@wat84375 жыл бұрын
@@realbrat40 bed bugs creep me out. Sucks on your body while you sleep. Feels a bit violating, actually
@punkyreggaeparty87864 жыл бұрын
Fantastic! Love creature features! Thank you, Dr. C. Stay well.
@adelardchipili83475 жыл бұрын
This is one of your best works This is one of my favorite stories now Thanks dr
@purplevladgirl68885 жыл бұрын
Thankyou for over an hour! Netherlands suits you Doc Creepen, Enjoy everyone and have a great day..
@ruthwalton34575 жыл бұрын
Wellllll found all my briefcases. Funnel ... bleach. ... all soaked now😲 no monsters here 😂😂😂 it has occued to me. .. if I never work again I cannot bring anything home snick snick snick😜 Thank you 😍😘
@chrisjames.2145 жыл бұрын
Man I literally click on one of your videos by accident and I've been hooked ever since I listen to your videos while I work ten-hour shifts I really do enjoy your long videos please keep making more and enjoy your new place of residence. Doc
@TheBaconStrip5 жыл бұрын
A long story! You're most kind! A wonderful performance amidst moving. The dedication you have to us and the art itself is amazing! Thank you so much!
@davidhoyt4544 Жыл бұрын
2
@riaaqua28145 жыл бұрын
Yay it´s there! And hands down for you dear Dr. for staying so strict to your schedule although managing to settle down in your new place and your work life! I hope you got the much deserved rest! See you on Wednesday!
@tiffanybenefield19805 жыл бұрын
Doctor Creepen, Thank you for sharing your heavenly angelic musical voice with us. I'm sorry I'm late to listening to this story. I've been super busy the past 2-3 days. Hope you & EVERYone else has a awesomeliciius day and night.👍😍😇😘👌
@madreverbowski61045 жыл бұрын
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💖💖💖💖💖💖 With the new move.. Wondering if the accompanying video is of your new lands? 👀👀
@traceyhindson34375 жыл бұрын
Oh no...what an amazing ending thanks for a great story and narration x
@loanianderson19785 жыл бұрын
Dropped everything when I saw the notification of your new narration! 💜 OMG over an hour!!
@dragonflybtchbauer76555 жыл бұрын
Why didn't the agents come in with bleach? And also why wasn't that some of the 1st info the letter writer provide to Ray. This cldv been a good story, maybe even great. I totally dig the premise. But it reminds me of the ridiculous horror flicks from the 70's & 80's where the victims constantly make stupid decisions that can only lead to death
@christosvoskresye5 жыл бұрын
Yeah, I'm thinking I would keep a super soaker full of bleach if I thought this might happen.
@SmokeyMountainSuccubus5 жыл бұрын
Could be the agents don't know. The people that sent the info to Ray clearly didn't do it with the consent of the company, also the paper mentions the creature is especially vulnerable to bleach during stage five. Maybe before then it's far less effective. I do agree there are plot holes and the main character is a bit dumb, but I personally think it's solid enough to be a good story at least.
@someguynamedvictor5 жыл бұрын
Dragonfly B!tch Bauer literally was thinking a lot of the same. The ideas are wonderful. There are definitely some unrealistic writing choices which are totally excusable in a genre like this. I thought the bleach one too like wtf why not tell this dude immediately.
@keepermovin59065 жыл бұрын
They were only going in for Ray they probably didn’t think they would even come in contact with the creature but it still was stupid not to bring any bleach
@meredithahern-tamilio46675 жыл бұрын
Didn't she say that chemicals would work?
@davidbuller43285 жыл бұрын
Fantastic story Dr 👍 I was completely enthralled by it, thanks for what you do for all of us 👋🏻😺
@rewatteefroimchuk85895 жыл бұрын
Thanks Dr Creepen! I voted for this story and i loved it !❤❤❤
@Kurisiti5 жыл бұрын
I KNEW IT!! >~< The moment he started feeling the itching sensation I knew it, I knew that thing was going to use him as a host! However sweet lord did he take forever to get to his computer and begin printing out the instructions. Although if it was me, my ass would've done been out the door (yes, you read that right, I'd take the bullet versus dealing with a species containment breach)! This was such a delight to listen to; you did such a marvelous job narrating it! X3 X3
@CalebLaw15 жыл бұрын
Or rather, what I'm trying to say is that he doesn't have any right to complain about the printer and/or his death, if he dies. Also, wonderful narration, Dr. Creepen! Always a treat to hear you read creepypastas.
@RonKhan5 жыл бұрын
I'm working hospitality again, after working in a call center. Because life is a string of unrelated coincidences. Loved the story.
@stevietricks5 жыл бұрын
That was a absolute belter Dr, wow, my head went down so many routes trying to figure what might come next, great piece of work. Thanks again good sir (Doffs hat)
@CosmicErrata5 жыл бұрын
Quite the ride! Dat ending tho...
@kristenkrueger55275 жыл бұрын
Wow!! Excellent interesting story . Kudos to the Author and as always love your narration. Glad your getting settled but also sounds like a great adventure ❤️❤️❤️
@joshuam48355 жыл бұрын
One of the best stories you have posted so far. Great narration as well. Thank you, sir.
@autumndatri72355 жыл бұрын
First time I've heard customer service as "hospitality work".... I like it
@Kittykitty777295 жыл бұрын
Working in Hospitality. The struggle is real! 9 years of my life I won’t miss! 😆 I liked the people I worked with and my manager was great but corporate and some of the guests made it rough. ♥️
@leighanndunn33215 жыл бұрын
Oh I would love to see this story played out on screen 📺 Thank you Dr.
@youwatch2muchtv5 жыл бұрын
I could’ve sworn ive seen something like this.
@ALkillu7775 жыл бұрын
Thank you good Dr. for this wonderful tale of the macabre and unusual.
@ChanChanSama5 жыл бұрын
I swear i been waiting for a long video to come out from a creepypasta channel and im glad its from Dr. Creepen
@maynardskunk48345 жыл бұрын
Another excellent story! Thanks doc
@lindadean33745 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much...Dr. C...🌻🌻 Another great story & amazing narration..!! Ur the Best..!!! 🌻🌻🌻
@Lemurai5 жыл бұрын
Other than Japan and a few other countries (that don't accept tips) I make sure I always take care of the house keepers when I travel. It's a good chance you'll get clean linen when they change your bedding lol!
@theCidisIn5 жыл бұрын
This is why you keep your work and home life separate if at all possible!
@theCidisIn5 жыл бұрын
By the way, I'm sure am happy for you that your move is still going well.
@teddydog62295 жыл бұрын
I'd waited for a giant centipede story for ages. Cheers Doc !
@robynewilliams-heller18165 жыл бұрын
I love the way Dr says: "Garage ".😊
@natemarx49995 жыл бұрын
This channel is everything.
@pamgranger70522 жыл бұрын
Wicked. Loved it !!! And of course, your so smooth voice.. I confess, it's Saturday and I've been listening to you all day long. With no end in sight..
@kimlambert1595 жыл бұрын
A Humdinger for sure Doc!!!
@abigailcleveland35172 жыл бұрын
So scary I got up snd locked my doors. The sounds of the “thing” gave me chills. Well done well done Dr Creepen!
@christosvoskresye5 жыл бұрын
Sorry for having left you folks hanging, but it's only right to give you an update. I turned out I did NOT contract a terrible disease from the specimen. In fact, I had something in common with it: a pre-existing allergy to bleach. Normally I don't even think about this, since I don't use the stuff -- which was part of the reason I thought it was weird for Sal to keep so much of it in the basement. Anyhow, some of the bleach had splashed on me, which did raise a nasty blister once those bumps merged, but that was it. If I had contracted the disease, it would have created a sunken, gray-green patch, not bumps or blisters, followed by a nasty cough as my lungs were attacked, uncontrollable diarrhea as my intestines were attacked, and terrible hallucinations once the brain-blood barrier was breached -- and it would go downhill rapidly from there. These were not my symptoms, so after a period of quarantine, I was released. Sal's evidence released on the Internet had the effect you would expect: No one believed it. I think it actually won a "best creepypasta" award of some sort, and there was talk of making it into a video game, but her company was able to quietly discourage that. You might think she would be a target of retaliation from her company. That's what she expected, certainly. However, they were shutting down that particular "product" anyhow -- they had something else much more "effective" and controllable. More importantly, a different division of the same company was impressed by her initiative and resourcefulness more than by her "disloyalty" ... and they had a job at a remote site where initiative and resourcefulness were necessary, and where loyalty is guaranteed by the nature of the problem. I can't say anything more, but I can assure that the site is very, very, very remote. She normally works there on a six months on, six months off basis now, though she did take about 2 years for pregnancy and maternity leave when our daughter Ingrid was born. (I never met our daughter's namesake, and all Sal says was that she used to work with her, but there seems to be a sad story behind the name.) As for me, I've been trying to cope as best I can. I still have nightmares from the experience narrated above, but the therapy (provided by the company) has helped. Sal's "remote" deployment has also caused problems, but she says she should be finished with it by the time Ingrid is old enough to start asking questions. Until then, we keep plugging along, making do the best we can.
@jeffbell26685 жыл бұрын
a instant classic thanks for the escape Doc.
@michelepruitt31455 жыл бұрын
YEAH! 🤗 The Dr. Is In The House! 😍 I Love It! 😙 Makes Me Happy When You Upload A Strory For Bedtime! Thanks Dr.! 😉🙋✌💜🐺🐶🌷🐢🐾🐳❤💋
@ninanightmare33715 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much doctor for an amazing and long narration! You're awesome!
@MidnightVentures5 жыл бұрын
Nina has spoken.
@GlitterismyCRACK5 жыл бұрын
Thanx so much Doc for the hour 20 of your time!!!
@nonamesupplied18755 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the new video, Dr, and even though you're not American, have a happy labor day anyways!
@cassieg.57425 жыл бұрын
Hi Doc, Loved the narration. I couldn’t click fast enough,when the notification bell rang. Wait, I got to get my favorite drink!!!!❤️
@melissamorris30025 жыл бұрын
Loved that story was totally different loved more please ♥️
@Ariel-rm8oi5 жыл бұрын
I have been so anxious today about starting a new job tomorrow, and just as I was about to pull up one of your narrations to relax to this popped up. I just wanted to tell you I really appreciate you creating and making this content available to all of us!
@purplevladgirl68885 жыл бұрын
Ariel Teague good luck tomorrow Ariel 🍀☘️🍀 Hope it all goes well for you! Just relax and let the good doctor soothe all the anxiety away with his velvety voice!
@racerx0095 жыл бұрын
You'll do fine. Doctors orders. ;)
@marilynhands5765 жыл бұрын
Ariel Teague Hi Ariel! All good wishes as you start your new job! The doc’s flock will be thinking of you tomorrow and sending out good vibes your way😊. PS. Ariel is a beautiful name. Lucky you😊😘
@sexygrandmadarkness27225 жыл бұрын
You Go girl 😉.. you'll be fine Ariel lovelicious 💘 your Name:) much love Sexy Grandma Darkness;)
@bleakdestiny60955 жыл бұрын
Wow! Over an hour! Thank you so much Dr. You have made my night! This story puts me in the mind of my favorite author, Dean Koontz . And with you being the best narrator out there working you're magic with that sexy, silky voice I truly believe I have died and gone to heaven! 😘😍
@jackiealpeter49935 жыл бұрын
Thanks for helping me thru housework with this long one,Doc! So intense. I was talking back to you at different points in the story,lol! Felt so bad for the protagonist in the end,tho. Are your gopro images from Holland now? Thanks for your perseverance finishing this one during your move. Be looking forward to hearing you Wednesday,Lord willing. Happy new home! Peace.
@kathyannalexander45065 жыл бұрын
Oooh a nice long one, thanks doc
@honeysantiago78915 жыл бұрын
That was an interesting story, and yes I enjoyed it very much. Thanks, Doc, I needed a good "session". And as always, Good Sir, I send you tons of love and many, many blessings! 💞💞💞💞💞
@chuckcarney20995 жыл бұрын
Digging this story Doc!💯🖤🤠
@JT-cloverbottomt5 жыл бұрын
Awesome story Doc!
@connieb90345 жыл бұрын
You’ve got such a beautiful voice omfg 😍but amazing creepypasta also
@bexyrexy5 жыл бұрын
Beautifully written and narrated Dr.C! 💎
@robinmariemi5 жыл бұрын
Awesome story! Couldn't wait to hear what happened next! After all the guy went through... I was rooting for him! I enjoyed the unexpected conclusion. Love your narrations, you're the best! Thanks, Doc, for another great story! Looking forward to the next. 😊
@lalalager21lovelyjubbly775 жыл бұрын
Got to say it Doc, great story, as always. Keep em coming if you are still able, someone wants to make you a strigoi. All the best Doc love and stuff to you're family.
@xldda4 жыл бұрын
Good plot. I have listened to many scifi and horror stories, many of which are copies of one another. This was original to me. Kudos to the author. And well narrated too.
@ballknocka00015 жыл бұрын
Dr Creepen! You are my FAAAAAVE!
@dianamilner85544 жыл бұрын
Incredible as always . Thank you for the nightly read
@cadillacdeville58285 жыл бұрын
Dr. Creepen and a day off, what a great combination.
@sexygrandmadarkness27225 жыл бұрын
Hey 😀 Caddy D:) how are you? I'm good 😊 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness;)
@racerx0095 жыл бұрын
Uh Caddy, we needed you in today. ;)
@sexygrandmadarkness27225 жыл бұрын
@@racerx009 Hi there 😀 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness;)
@cadillacdeville58285 жыл бұрын
@@racerx009 Racer X, you've been M.I.A as usual. :-)
@cadillacdeville58285 жыл бұрын
@@sexygrandmadarkness2722 Gurlll, I'm about to go workout and take a bath while it's quiet at home. :-)
@mkcollectibles93875 жыл бұрын
Tyvvm for this story .... Damn, atleast he went out fighting!
@soulreaper21365 жыл бұрын
Amazing story Doctor. A delicious blend of intensity and suspense, mulled with bloody action and, my among my favorite thing-- a good fight! The dramatic final stand here was very well executed I must say, so much applause for the good doctor and the author of the story.
@BIERSIPPER5 жыл бұрын
I always listen to these with my mom, u have the best voice for scary tales mate, loyal subscriber 👍💪👌
@matthewhardy6475 жыл бұрын
“Vandal Bat’s handle”. Hilarious. Loved the story and the narration was top shelf as always. Hearing the words “Vandal Bat’s handle” said aloud was the cherry on top.
@bladeguru63585 жыл бұрын
One of the best I’ve ever read. Outstanding!!
@DeSoya875 жыл бұрын
Nice one! Cool to hear your in the Netherlands hope you like it here. Greetings from Limburg lol
@aqsatti5 жыл бұрын
Nice one doc
@thearticulateautistic5 жыл бұрын
Wow! Superb!
@TheWorpler5 жыл бұрын
Woohoo, a nice long one from the Doc!
@nikkit18925 жыл бұрын
Great story thank you
@ike82365 жыл бұрын
The creepiest thing was his girlfriends manly voice.
@ericmcgill55775 жыл бұрын
Paul wow
@LuisaD934 жыл бұрын
Or was it 🤔🤫🤭
@StygianTheCandleMan3 жыл бұрын
Mommy is daddy
@TayTayMakesBeats3 жыл бұрын
Did you just assume the girlfriend's gender!?
@chrislopez73953 жыл бұрын
That sounded like an Mr mom to me
@ninobrowne17315 жыл бұрын
So enjoy when you give us an hour plus of your voice 👏🏾👏🏾
@phetes8104 жыл бұрын
Thank you again. You help me get threw it all
@loanianderson3945 жыл бұрын
I just had to listen to it again, I swear when you made the slithering sound I was eating a grapefruit, squeezed it and it hit my glasses, hehehe, It gave me shivers. Always wear headphones when you listen to his stories, you can´t miss a thing!
@cassandrawright27815 жыл бұрын
Wow. That was heavy. Hey doc.
@robertvanderhoof52832 жыл бұрын
Another great ride. Thanks Doc.
@dylanmorris73575 жыл бұрын
Amazing story Doc. Also, Happy Labor Day!!!!!
@PMCreepypasta5 жыл бұрын
Just been waiting for this all day
@theweedusama2 жыл бұрын
The most terrifying part of this for me is the thought of cleaning up that kitchen floor 😬 love your channel. Just catching up with your older to me content and smoking up lol
@georgegascoigne74565 жыл бұрын
Must admit that one was pretty epic, and well narrated. Just what I need on night shift
@brendalewis24315 жыл бұрын
Glad that you and your family are settle and enjoying Holland 😄
@Loader2K15 жыл бұрын
I'm seriously hoping that Ray didn't get his head blown off by the faux police squad waiting for him. Great story.
@cartoonrush56605 жыл бұрын
I don't even skip ads on dr creepen channel
@falteredstar5 жыл бұрын
I love the narration in this! Keep it up!
@kintero275 жыл бұрын
Fantastic story and fantastic narration 😁
@cutenose385 жыл бұрын
Hiys doc its jenny and the cats we have our favorite drinks and are ready to listen. 😸😸😸😸
@sanniwartinen35955 жыл бұрын
Awesome story as always!
@harrygrimley4352 Жыл бұрын
I could see the movie. Thanks for sharing this with us.
@steverobinson41995 жыл бұрын
I'm a new subscriber. But I Do have a couple things to say as a newbie. 1; are you South African? As an old boss pronounced the word garage the same way you do. As a Yank, I didn't know what he meant at first lol! 2; coming from a completely straight man, your voice is so soothing, sends a slight chill up my spine. I love listening 👍👍
@turantulatom915 жыл бұрын
I love how you just know ive stolen from work.
@LuisaD934 жыл бұрын
Well.~~~ he certainly knows now and so do we 😬🤣🤪😁
@abay52583 жыл бұрын
Lmaooo
@KatieM7863 жыл бұрын
...allegedly rumoured....😉
@Shadow-dr3mh Жыл бұрын
This is my favorite one my 3rd time reading this one for a long shift 🙏🏾
@TheDianne8883 жыл бұрын
Another great story!
@IHaveWaffles5 жыл бұрын
Only a close range lower caliber firearm would create some splash. Any rifle round (including a 5-7) would not create any significant splash back and be perfect for dispatching many critters. Out in the sticks a .22 is good for small critters, while a larger caliber is needed for bigger predators.
@marctan3665 жыл бұрын
Tnx for this doc
@lurchfowler25 жыл бұрын
Poor guy all that and it still got him in the end up
@Yakfishinjosh5 жыл бұрын
Another well read masterpiece
@stevenconroy58645 жыл бұрын
Thanx 4 another great story doc
@jnokomis5 жыл бұрын
My dearest Dr such a long one tonight. Messy but good hehe. See you soon dearest Dr, I have lost track of what day this is
@fastaslightfiber25345 жыл бұрын
Good stuff Doc 👍
@darkadalia5 жыл бұрын
You would think that these people would've been prepared for something like this. Anyway, thank you for another narration, Dr.! 🙂
@LordBitememan5 жыл бұрын
The strangest thing I ever took home from work was a rear projection monitor after the company had junked them all three years prior. I'm a big retrogamer and my main retrogaming station blew its monitor. So I threw that old rear projection on it and was gaming again in no time.