Dystopian Horror Story "We Wake Up After 96 Years of Cryosleep" | Sci-FI Creepypasta 2023

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The Dark Cosmos

The Dark Cosmos

Күн бұрын

After 96 years locked in cryosleep vessels, a hundred volunteers finally wake up from their scientifically induced slumber… Well, most of them wake up. And the results are not as expected. The project might have been a scientific success, but the lives of the volunteers are anything but fortunate. Grief, shock, mutations, illness, depression, violence, and the occasional miracle. The remaining volunteers will have to stick together if they want to stay alive.
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@KieraRhodesVA
@KieraRhodesVA Жыл бұрын
Hi all!~ Thanks for tuning in 🥰 I would like to give a big thanks to Lauren Kong for voicing Nurse Holland in this video ~ you can find her on Twitter at twitter.com/LaurenK_VA
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
@@AussieBigG which part?
@arthurchadwell9267
@arthurchadwell9267 Жыл бұрын
She has an excellent voice.
@mattwalters6834
@mattwalters6834 Жыл бұрын
Excellent narration
@kostas6621
@kostas6621 Жыл бұрын
Wow! Great story....very sad though....all these mutations from cryosleep...touched my heart.
@amig9318
@amig9318 Жыл бұрын
Cryo sleep would be terrifying. And the illustration has a horrible creepy vibe. Great job, great story. Thank you ❤
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it Amig!
@sheldonshniklefritz95
@sheldonshniklefritz95 Жыл бұрын
This is absolutely heartbreaking, you guys killed it again I'm more and more convinced TDC that you guys are the very best out there
@danirangelnieto2115
@danirangelnieto2115 Жыл бұрын
Thank you very much!! ❤
@mattwalters6834
@mattwalters6834 Жыл бұрын
More of a feel pasta 😢 Very good narration, new subscriber 🎉
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Welcome to our community!
@fattychoccie
@fattychoccie Жыл бұрын
I've been a creepypasta fan and short story fanatic for 15 years but it's taken me until yesterday to discover that I love this genre 🥹🤦🏼‍♀️ so refreshing to hear top quality writing in this area and I'm so chuffed to have found your channel! Can't wait to start binge listening 🫶🏽😁 THANKYOU! x
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Welcome to our community Lucia! And thanks for taking time to share your delight :)
@SilverBackGorillaSak
@SilverBackGorillaSak Жыл бұрын
I’m not even sure how you ended up on my feed but I tried to go to sleep listened to it 29:01 and obviously I have to finish now lol! It reminded me of the last 7 months of my life, depression is will have you clinging to sleep as of there is a reality there worth living outside your own! What happens when the monsters are reality and don’t exist in our dreams? Great job! ❤❤❤❤
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Hey Bryan! Thanks so much for taking time to show appreciation! Welcome to our community :)
@SilverBackGorillaSak
@SilverBackGorillaSak Жыл бұрын
@@TheDarkCosmos1 most certainly and thank you for taking the time to acknowledge my comment! 🤙🏾
@snowjohnson8095
@snowjohnson8095 Жыл бұрын
KZbin...where is my notification? Also Kiera narrating this should be good as usual
@BuffaloveBills
@BuffaloveBills Жыл бұрын
This was interesting and addictive, I didn’t want it to end. Thank you
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@MsGorteck
@MsGorteck Жыл бұрын
Lovely story, the voices got it right, congratulations. The music totally added to the mood and story. Thank you
@SilverBackGorillaSak
@SilverBackGorillaSak Жыл бұрын
31:15 I knew I felt that depression sitting in there somewhere! ❤❤
@princessforanight8579
@princessforanight8579 Жыл бұрын
Thank you, this story pulled at my heart-strings
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Aww, thanks princess for a night!
@idolhandz3946
@idolhandz3946 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the story! I listen to a lot of creepy pastas, so I’ll happily add you to my listening entertainment experiences. Good delivery, enjoyable suspense. Recommended.
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Welcome to our community!
@cherryclarke4704
@cherryclarke4704 Жыл бұрын
Boy oh boy this is going to be brilliant 🎉🎉🎉
@Hiikey.
@Hiikey. Жыл бұрын
This was absolutely wonderful 🖤
@Morbazan125
@Morbazan125 Жыл бұрын
Instantly thought of ‘passengers’ just by the title.
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Ha! oh man, that film was next level
@thetalkingbear
@thetalkingbear Жыл бұрын
Nurse Holland sounds absolutely adorable.
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
We know, right?! Glad you enjoyed this :)
@danielmoralez3
@danielmoralez3 Жыл бұрын
If this ever becomes true, I'm automatically going to volunteer for this project no questions.
@PAX---777
@PAX---777 10 ай бұрын
Likewise.....this "society" sucks a**!!
@merihimsolomon2331
@merihimsolomon2331 Жыл бұрын
Excited about the story 😊
@CrossaIicious
@CrossaIicious Жыл бұрын
That turned wholesome in the end!
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Indeed!
@brzanimeedits8770
@brzanimeedits8770 Жыл бұрын
With that voice.... Ya u have a new sub
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Welcome to our community!
@lyndellrobinson3611
@lyndellrobinson3611 Жыл бұрын
Stellar as always!
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
You know it!
@spudlee3547
@spudlee3547 Жыл бұрын
Thankyou very much ❤️❤️
@shadowfire9118
@shadowfire9118 Жыл бұрын
Great story that was epic
@I_AM_G_FORCE
@I_AM_G_FORCE Жыл бұрын
Enjoyed this. Ajay try listening to "Girl in Space"
@izzafizza339
@izzafizza339 Жыл бұрын
This is kinda sad the character is feeling so bad and the description she gives and the chaos is terrifying
@jessicascalf6852
@jessicascalf6852 Жыл бұрын
Wow this was a GREAT story and PERFECT narration!!!! I listen to a lot of stories everyday but this one and the narration has def left an impression on me.
@danirangelnieto2115
@danirangelnieto2115 Жыл бұрын
So glad you liked it!!
@KieraRhodesVA
@KieraRhodesVA Жыл бұрын
Thanks do much!!
@Halloween111
@Halloween111 Жыл бұрын
Moral of the story, in 100 years, people will still suck as much as they do now.
@byrondhouston
@byrondhouston Жыл бұрын
Nice story!
@davidcook680
@davidcook680 Жыл бұрын
Another great video
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for signing up to be a member David!!
@glorbojibbins2485
@glorbojibbins2485 Жыл бұрын
Good one
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Thank you! Cheers!
@H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ
@H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ Жыл бұрын
✨ *FAR OUT!!!!* ✨ P.S. I’m gonna need a list of stories narrated by voice-actor, Keira Rhodes, please! 😉💋👌
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
No problem, here you go! kzbin.info/aero/PLTOoCCpcidH1m1cLuTqxar9ECw3M3RDyg
@H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ
@H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ Жыл бұрын
@@TheDarkCosmos1 HECK YES!! Thankee Sai!! xo
@johannageisel5390
@johannageisel5390 Жыл бұрын
This story seems to me like an allegory on the fate of refugees: The poor and destitute leave their families behind, hoping for a better future, go through an experience that can traumatize them, arrive in a foreign world where only some kind-hearted volunteers care for their fate, the majority of society only cares about their economic value, and when some of them break and do shitty things, they all get punished for it.
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for sharing your interpretation!
@joeshmo6842
@joeshmo6842 Жыл бұрын
I’m in love with her voice new
@morrisminor56
@morrisminor56 5 ай бұрын
Very good.
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 5 ай бұрын
Thank you! Cheers!
@thebuddha4208
@thebuddha4208 Жыл бұрын
All right, let’s get these devices working again go to sleep for another hundred years. See if things are better.
@breadboy2712
@breadboy2712 Жыл бұрын
Sweet
@deanschuette8294
@deanschuette8294 Жыл бұрын
That’s how long we’ve been on them
@bobmiller7502
@bobmiller7502 10 ай бұрын
I dont like horror i never watch/listen to it,BUTT im glad i gave this a go,really good story,well read, nice while im working. thanks for sharing sister,dam good job there
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 10 ай бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@omaracevedo4784
@omaracevedo4784 Жыл бұрын
So chicken was certain to end so some went into space and some went into cryo sleep only to wake up 100 years later to a world that was the same as when you left it.?
@Elayzee
@Elayzee Жыл бұрын
Incredible story concept. But what hard drive is the title talking about? I listened to it twice in a row and do not hear single thing about any kind of hard drive. I'm confused.
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Hi, thanks for tuning in! It was an editing mistake - I forgot to edit the text for the rest of the story :D
@Elayzee
@Elayzee Жыл бұрын
@@TheDarkCosmos1 OH!! Okay, that explains it! lol! Great story!! I enjoyed this one very much :D
@INVESTORY-Greg
@INVESTORY-Greg Жыл бұрын
👍👍👍
@sandrakiefler4649
@sandrakiefler4649 11 ай бұрын
Wait……WHAT!?😳I don’t believe it! I mean seriously tho…like wtf is happening my dudes!?🤨Really? A “dystopian sci-fi horror” (ish) story ends like that…what!? 🤷‍♀️ I mean it’s not like the story ended like some Disney fairytale… “And They Lived Happily Ever After” type bs ffs but still…it was an oddly positive feeling ending…..all things considered. But anyways, I must say that I truly enjoyed this one my dudes and I very much hope that they either have written more parts or plan to do so…and hopefully sooner than later!!😉👍
@Exxperiment626
@Exxperiment626 Жыл бұрын
Great story. But the hell didnt they wake them up earlier? Why wait 96 years?
@anthonycoffey6565
@anthonycoffey6565 6 ай бұрын
The only way i could accept going into some kind of cryo sleep is if i could bring my dog with me 🥰 Also, id put all my $ in a savings account before hand 😅
@paullocubin4865
@paullocubin4865 Жыл бұрын
So good apart from the background musice
@Kevbo4
@Kevbo4 Жыл бұрын
Great short story and narration. The detractors here are a strange juvenile bunch I really recommend you ignore. Write what you feel not what others demand of you to satisfy their peculiar preferences.
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Your kind words are much appreciated sir!
@PAX---777
@PAX---777 10 ай бұрын
Sounds like modern times in the begining..... depressing environment, people offing themselves....
@AngloSaxonWheatFarmer
@AngloSaxonWheatFarmer 2 ай бұрын
People have been doing that for all of history, and don’t kid yourself we’ve got it the best
@superluminalprobabilityclo6884
@superluminalprobabilityclo6884 10 ай бұрын
I'm sorry did this really happen? Your accent lends automatic credibility to everything you say
@gazblackheart4596
@gazblackheart4596 Жыл бұрын
why is the title in the video wrong?
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
I forgot to change it while editing :D
@persophone4554
@persophone4554 Жыл бұрын
The artwork doesn't match the story!😥
@lukejackson4820
@lukejackson4820 Жыл бұрын
Nothing really sci-fi about this story besides cryofreezing we've only got a couple years until that's real hopefully LOL but it was very touching I'm one of the Rejects Society doesn't have a place for me it's okay I still have friends and they are my family and of course I have you mom love you
@arthurchadwell9267
@arthurchadwell9267 Жыл бұрын
Sure it's hurried, sure it's experimental but it's perfectly safe! Sound familiar?
@cliftonsteed372
@cliftonsteed372 8 ай бұрын
Maybe tone down the piano music. My hearing isn't what it used to be, & whenever "piano" would crescendo, your voice disappeared.
@thebuddha4208
@thebuddha4208 Жыл бұрын
OK judging for inflation the money you got is not worth $73
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
HAHAHA love this
@larrygraham4875
@larrygraham4875 Жыл бұрын
This sounds like someone's a fan of the outer limits....seems a lil familiar
@warplanner8852
@warplanner8852 10 ай бұрын
Good story. Lose the piano player.
@CalGcastglassnz
@CalGcastglassnz Жыл бұрын
Are yu a kiwi or pom?!
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Kiera is British :)
@printisdead1983
@printisdead1983 Жыл бұрын
So does the horror ever start or is just gonna be a bunch of the character just experiencing emotions....this one was annoying
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
LOL sorry you feel that way. Perhaps you'll find enjoyment in our other stories :)
@printisdead1983
@printisdead1983 Жыл бұрын
@@TheDarkCosmos1 i meant nothing toward thine narrations, just the ..spark wasnt there ....im also upset i was listening to this 43 hour zombie audiobook...i know what you are thinking ...those suck....well this one was COMPLETELY DIFFERENT it was like shawn of the dead meets Michael chritons lost world.(minus the dinos...and i also realize that sounds crazy too lol)...but alas...youtube has strucketh it down (i guess cuz it doesnt show up anymore .) Subbed tho
@frocurl
@frocurl Жыл бұрын
It's ok drags a bit just another high-school level writer that's interesting I guess idk
@KieraRhodesVA
@KieraRhodesVA Жыл бұрын
Thanks for your feedback! But this is not a highschool writer. Dani is a permenant member of our team, and having worked with her for a year, this is my favourite piece from her. We'd appreciate if people could keep their feedback to what they would change, rather than insulting our team. Thanks!~ 🥰
@frocurl
@frocurl Жыл бұрын
@@KieraRhodesVA no insult intended my opinion isn't important. I'm a nobody and I did enjoy and appreciate it. I regret my remarks
@shotgunblues627
@shotgunblues627 Жыл бұрын
Yikes that sucked
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Here, have a tought donut 🍩
@shotgunblues627
@shotgunblues627 Жыл бұрын
@The Dark Cosmos not being able to take criticism without lashing out might be why your channel isn't very good. Js
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
@@shotgunblues627 lol offering an emoji is lashing out? 🤔
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
@@shotgunblues627 and btw, you didn't offer any criticism. You only gave an insult. So whenever you're ready, go ahead and provide constructive criticism
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
@@shotgunblues627 oh never mind. Coming from a channel with 2 uncreative shorts videos, no thanks to any feedback you'll give 🤣🤣
@did_I_hurt_your_fee_fees
@did_I_hurt_your_fee_fees Жыл бұрын
Good story but the sound effects are really jarring and unnecessary and would be really awesome if they weren't there
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for tuning in Joe :) we all have unique preferences when it comes to scary stories.
@BaldingClamydia
@BaldingClamydia Жыл бұрын
This was so well-written, and extremely well-narrated! It's such a good story you can pick it apart for symbolism and such; the last part definitely sounds a bit like all the guys that came back from Vietnam. No one helped, no one cared, no support, etc
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for taking time to show your appreciation for this story!
@sharibigay4712
@sharibigay4712 Жыл бұрын
First time listening to a narration of yours, I really enjoyed it. Good job, nice voice great timing and emotions. Thanks, also thanks to the writer.
@KieraRhodesVA
@KieraRhodesVA Жыл бұрын
Thanks so much!
@gordish5307
@gordish5307 Жыл бұрын
I don't tend to like stories done with female voices. You are an exception I'll check out your other videos :)
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Thanks Gordish! We're a team of narrators so we offer lots of variety :)
@xlaostha704x
@xlaostha704x Жыл бұрын
I hate conventional horror movies but when you throw in a sci-fi aspect to it, i'm all over it.
@Ckbtony1983
@Ckbtony1983 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for choosing vault-tec a better future underground
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Love that!
@robertsmith987
@robertsmith987 Жыл бұрын
WOW beautiful story 😊so it seems that world went on and the project wasn’t needed
@Eyeslayer
@Eyeslayer Жыл бұрын
Not sure if all the stories are as good as this one but now I want to know. Good job
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Spoiler alert: no, not all of our stories are as good as this one. Especially the older ones. :) keeping it real
@chrismclaughlin3988
@chrismclaughlin3988 5 ай бұрын
​@@TheDarkCosmos1I respect that. You give plenty of options to choose from if it's not their flavor. Great audiodrama's with male and female narrators 🤟🏼
@TheWarriorz90
@TheWarriorz90 Жыл бұрын
This was a good story for sure,way to go 👍
@bertramgunn
@bertramgunn Жыл бұрын
You're a fresh breeze in the story community 😊😊
@danirangelnieto2115
@danirangelnieto2115 Жыл бұрын
That's so nice! Thanks for watching 😊
@billyholmes5551
@billyholmes5551 Жыл бұрын
Don't be so fresh with her 😂😂
@russellperry9902
@russellperry9902 Жыл бұрын
Welp, I left my like and here's a comment and thanks for narrating this one. It's pretty darn good.
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Much appreciated!
@zombiebullshark3834
@zombiebullshark3834 Жыл бұрын
Love the story love the narrators voice
@PAX---777
@PAX---777 10 ай бұрын
Simp?
@CT-nb5lm
@CT-nb5lm Жыл бұрын
ePIc quality!
@tiffanysparks8319
@tiffanysparks8319 Жыл бұрын
Damn that was beautiful
@morris2970
@morris2970 Жыл бұрын
Why are the titles dif one says "we woke up 96 years cryosleep but video says we found a hard drive from the year 2091which is it👍
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Oh snap!! That was my bad, I forgot to change the other title while editing the video LOL this is the cryosleep story :D
@jaytraveller
@jaytraveller Жыл бұрын
I'm not crying, you're crying!
@MyKharli
@MyKharli Жыл бұрын
good story but even a ruined earth is a million times easier to survive on than space
@HammarPwnsYourFace
@HammarPwnsYourFace Жыл бұрын
So who is nurse Holland to her? Or did I just miss it when it was said?
@BLUE-fp3bn
@BLUE-fp3bn Жыл бұрын
There's relatives and there is family...❤️
@-DEATHSTROKE
@-DEATHSTROKE Жыл бұрын
Crikey I'm late again sorry fam 🙏🏻
@sridhar47
@sridhar47 4 ай бұрын
That was a beautiful ending
@xotube2206
@xotube2206 Жыл бұрын
Weell.. At least it wasn't a nuclear wasteland
@remy5347
@remy5347 Жыл бұрын
Imagine leaving earth because you thought the apocalypse was here and it turns out nah Nothing happened. Lol feels like how ppl talk about climate change
@ikonerms
@ikonerms Жыл бұрын
You think climate change isn't real? Even though you know things like the ice age happened?😂
@johannageisel5390
@johannageisel5390 Жыл бұрын
Dude, climate change is happening and it is devastating. But you don't live in those parts of the world where the people are starving because there is a horrible drought, or where millions of homes are being washed away by floods. If you cared a little about what is going on in other parts of the world, you would know that the apocalypse is already happening. We're just not feeling it so badly yet. Although... I live in Germany and I only have to look to our dying forests, to the snowless Alps, and to France, Italy and Spain having a winter drought. Our vegetables an fruits (which we get from those countries) have become small and twice as expensive.
@onlyonewhyphy
@onlyonewhyphy Жыл бұрын
3:05 - What...? Never heard of such a person, who would gladly throw down their life for anyone they know of a Genetic relationship to them. Just a very odd and emersion breaking line. Really ripped me out the story, such a hard and unnatural virtue signal. Unbelievable, unrelatable. 3:35 - I'm seeing a pattern develop 7:40 - Good. To me, here, as the listener, that aspect is super important to me. This tale is beginning to annoy me. 8:04 - Another excellent example of useless information. The author is just saying things for things sake and we're not even 10 mins in. 12:59 - why would that moment ever be assumed to be one of "Overwhelming joy"?! 14:53 - Did they forget they were in Cry-Sleep, just here? My god, this is badly conceived. 16:21 - Much is explained, right here. Glad the author decided to include this line. Just a stones throw from the main character owning a Katana & Overcoat 18:31- Wow, them novelties of the future eh? Heating... Lighting.... Phenomenal! Such imagination to present us with these notions of the _Future!_ And no sense of self-awareness at all. Fantastic. 20:01 - Over half way. Nothing has happened since waking. There have been many, many words spoken but the story hasn't progressed by a step, so I know now, the conclusion will be disappointing (it was, very). This author has no story to tell, which is why even with it's length, they're already padding it like a teenagers bra. The only thing keeping me engaged at this point, is curiosity. I want to see how bad it gets. 26:35 - Yawn... 27:22 - She's been banging on about the Money constantly. Either the character is a sheety person, or the author is. 28:27 - 😂 oh dear god, pathetic 29:44 - Exciting!! 30:02 - eh, that's not what " inexplicable" means.... she must have been.... assaulted. There, I explained it. So, definitely not inexplicable. 32:42 - That's a hell-of-a-lot of crying. And people crying don't normally band together to fight. Can't see through tears, ya know. They tend to be the ones scared and desperate for help. But no, this pile of wailing cryers are an army, cuz we are stronk or something. This story has been _awful!_ 33:25 - There's that complaint about money again. Forgetting so quickly her own description of "overwhelming joy" at her 2nd chance at life.... nah G, where mah MONEY?! 😂😂😂 *_THAT was painfully bad and nothing but work, to listen to. A story was written. But we would have all been better for it being left never said. Barely coherent ramblings of a teenaged minded individual who lacks any original creativity. Also, she never got her money! I don't know if you picked that up._* 😂 *_2/10._*
@TheDarkCosmos1
@TheDarkCosmos1 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your honest feedback and thoughts! You're the first person that had this monumental detailed breakdown, so I went through all of it. Our team goes through comments to see what could be improved on our next projects. So a portion of your feedback will be taken into consideration. I'm proud to say that our writers come from different backgrounds. Dani for instance, is from Venezuela and so the overall writing style offers an experience that some will find odd. It's okay not to like stories such as this - each to their own unique taste!
@onlyonewhyphy
@onlyonewhyphy Жыл бұрын
@@TheDarkCosmos1 don't worry everyone else needs to be seen to gush over the story, so I'm the odd one (honest one) out. Apparently this badly written Group Therapy Tale was really good and "Heartbreaking". I didn't pick up on any of that, but what does it matter. I wish the channel luck. I hope to avoid stories written by this author for the rest of my life...
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