Eldritchrune - Chapter 1: Rough Beginnings - Deltarune AU comic dub - Created by Lynxgriffin

This took a long time but it is finally finished!!! I hope you all enjoy the people who helped make this happen!!! :D
Eldritchrune and this comic belongs to - @LynxGriffin
- www.tumblr.com/lynxgriffin
- lynxgriffin.tumblr.com/post/7...
Deltarune Belongs to - TobyFox
- / tobyfox
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- CAST -
‪@sirjellos9472‬ - The Narrator (From the Story Setup)
- www.castingcall.club/sirjellos
- / sirjellos
- / sirjellos
‪@waterdt2701‬ - Kris (The fallen lightner)
- / @waterdt2701
‪@PokeGOD69420‬ - Ralsei (The Dark Prince)
- www.castingcall.club/PokeGOD6...
‪@JoJoanneVA‬ - Susie (The Eldritch Beast)
- / woefulwhitewitch
- / hecatetheva
- www.castingcall.club/hecateva
- www.youtube.com/@HecateVA/about
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- Music Used in this video -
- • DELTARUNE Orchestrated...
- • Hollow Knight OST - Fa...
- • Deltarune - Empty Town...
- • DELTARUNE Chapter 2 OS...
- • Hollow Knight OST - Di...
- • Another Him - Orchestr...
- • Deltarune Chapter 2 OS...
- • Hollow Knight OST - Cr...
- • Hollow Knight OST - Gr...
(ALL MUSIC BELONGS TO THEIR RESPECTIVE OWNERS/CREATORS)
Editing by: Disc-Cube Clown (me)
(I DO NOT OWN THE CHARACTERS, COMIC, MUSIC, THE GAME DELTARUNE, THE VOICES, OR ANYTHING!!!)
(ALL I OWN IS THE AUDIO, AND EDITING!!!)

[@eatingsockswithbacon2996]

love how ralsei in this world isn't that different from normal ralsei

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Same here! Sure there might be creepy moments, buts he’s still our fluffy boy! ☺️

[@PokeGOD69420]

Dang right he is! 😈😆

[@eatingsockswithbacon2996]

@@Disc-CubeClown i replayed both chapters recently for this reason.

[@obi-nh9eh]

Interesting

[@yessersonyessuroni9496]

@@Disc-CubeClown Can you do a twin runes comic dub?

[@StoryTeller796]

This is honestly so sweet with Tobey's tone and messages being mixed with this AU's just much more horrific setting.

[@gh0st1e7]

I like how Ralsei voices start all creepy and ominous and then it's just the voice of reason but echoey

[@Disc-CubeClown]

WHAT? NAH HE’S A INNOCENT FLUFFY BOI! NOTHING CREEPY HERE!!! ;)

[@solidonseraindogthetenth1679]

​@@Disc-CubeClown When I look at the art style, I notice that Kris looks like Emily from Amulet.

[@wsurviver8376]

Well I love eldrige monstrosity Ralsei still being extremely kind and sweet. Honestly I really wanna meet this world’s version of Lancer

[@Disc-CubeClown]

I did actually ask Lynx about Lancer and weirdly Lancer is the exact same as Deltarune's version. the answer is that it's just funny :D (don't worry, other characters like King, Queen, Rouxls, Jevil ECT are all creepy it's just lancer.)

[@wsurviver8376]

In all honesty I do really actually like the idea of Lancer being the same it seems to me like it would be even more amazing to see him befriend Susie and stuff

[@fnafworks6228]

​@@wsurviver8376fucking "Wowie! You sure are big, purple girl! Wanna be friends?"

[@likes2drawstuffs]

​@@Disc-CubeClownwhat if he can multiply it something and it's like a survival tactic against the Eldritch horrors of this world

[@archmagetyler]

Okay my brain can’t get over Susie looking a lot like scp-682…. I think that was the right one at least.

[@shcdemolisher]

Yep that’s the right one.

[@lasagna3289]

Unfortunately, because you've said this, you now owe the creator of the comic five dollars

[@imakecrappyvideos9360]

Can't believe the closet was an entrance to the dungeons of fear and hunger

[@TheDreadChronicles]

When Kris and the other Lightners play Call of Cthulhu

[@Disc-CubeClown]

XD LOL

[@purplehatter550]

Call it a hunch, but knowing how Kris can act, I think is promise to Susie might just be real.

[@JackNick2000]

In this AU, Kris is adopted by this world’s Dreemurr family, which is part of a cult. Said cult is dedicated to sacrificing people to stop this vague invading army. So safe to say Kris ain’t breaking this deal anytime soon

[@braydeslaurier5960]

​@JackNick2000 ok so safe to say he's keeping that promise and THEN SOME.

[@dog998]

Susie’s stomach is the backrooms

[@Disc-CubeClown]

lol true

[@MotorcycleCheetah]

This I need to see more of. I love Dark Tales.

[@Disc-CubeClown]

don't worry more will be out soon! Chapter 2's video is in development! 👍

[@povyourescrollingthroughco3153]

Anyone else think susie sorta looks like scp 682? Also, love the dnd style music of scarlet forest

[@joeyrony2887]

Sorry buddy you gotta give LynxGriffin 5 bucks. (the have a rule that if you say susie looks like scp 682 you must give them 5 bucks)

[@povyourescrollingthroughco3153]

In my defense, i didn't know that rule existed (also that rule isn't take too seriously right)

[@BoneFire-]

I love the choice of Hollow Knight music in the background

[@Ace-go3lb]

love how susie is litterally just SCP-682 the hard to destroy lizard

[@PokeGOD69420]

Cool Dub. The voice were good (Especially that Ralsei guys 😉)

[@georgewebb9074]

What are amazing concept for a deltarune au

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Lynxgriffin was a genius for creating this au.

[@lasagna3289]

I love the voice acting of this :D

[@sxvliz_]

0:52 "I don't believe i require a tutorial on speaking" yea u do ur british

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Nope, he’s Australian just like me :D (Probably something with the mic though)

[@PokeGOD69420]

But I am British 😈

[@Disc-CubeClown]

XD

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Despite me being Australian half of my family blood is British which would explain why people said I sounded British during a video XD

[@lasagna3289]

@@Disc-CubeClown they*

[@JoJoanneVA]

Woaw that Susie voice is neat wink wink

[@Red-or3yu]

man there hasnt been any type of AU's for deltarune and any that are amazing and just what undertale did with random good ideas this does the same

[@aboveaveragegaming5503]

i mean papertrail but yeah i get you not many but the game isn't even technically fully out yet so i get why the wait

[@Red-or3yu]

@@aboveaveragegaming5503 why i know it aint fully out and Papertrail just kinda stopped at the biggest part of it cause the player left which made it feel incomplete

[@aboveaveragegaming5503]

the og comic for paper trail did finish though at least as far as i could tell though don't know if you saw it outside of the comic dubs tbh@@Red-or3yu

[@lorrainebrunner2490]

I really want a part 2 to this! ^U^

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Currently it’s being edited. Also Noelle will show up next chapter. Be excited!

[@Buhhhdy]

I like how this version of deltarune reminds me of the hobbit/the lord of the rings in some sort of way

[@pre-gameshuichi5790]

AHHHH ITS FINALLY OUT EEEEEEEE (me fan girling lol)

[@samueltrusik3251]

Absolutely love this! Also, this is made by the same person who made paper trail, right?

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Correct! Also Undertale: Dogs of Future Past

[@Fools_Blade]

​@@Disc-CubeClownthe person who made "Dogs Of Future Past" also made "Paper Trail"!? Man no wonder they're both so good.

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Lynxgriffin is one of the greatest artist ever!

[@midvamp]

OH FR OMG? THIS IS SO GOOD @@Disc-CubeClown

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Thank you! I couldn’t have done it without the Lovely people in this video

[@Drago_Cuven]

OMAGOSH YESYESYESYESYES THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!

[@andrewler13theundeadwarrio51]

EldritchRune rings a bell, since last 2 years, I used to name my delta rune character, Dren Rune. Also eldritch rune ralsei is more of a Dark Lord ralsei, like a lord who one day will be king, wa ssuppose to he superior than a prince.

[@user-in5nu8ho4l]

The hollow knight music made perfect

[@colinbrown3170]

At least it's not sans , asgore, or Chara killing them . That'd be worse. Infact Dr WD Gaster would've been much more terrifying.

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Facts

[@samala2931]

This is cool

[@placodermwisp8229]

Scp - 682 that you????

[@qawsqawslol3997]

I'm gonna sub to see more of this it seems really cool.

[@Megamanfan264-dk2lm]

Kris: looks through the book, finds out ralseis search history'' oh my god!!!

[@tigerandfriends9481]

Common lynxgriffin masterpiece

[@pepsicola4575]

this is a very cool and creepy deltarune au 👍

[@sciencey2858]

Nice.

[@Skullfiend]

Well, this will certainly bebinteresting to follow!

[@blackshade-7821]

AWUHALIJHLSDKJHSALDKJHASWAW THAT'S ADORABLE AT THE END HELP

[@thecrispy7933]

darksouls + deltarune is litterally this

[@surefireboom8demetro911]

come on bring more of this!

[@Disc-CubeClown]

Chapter 2’s dub will be done soon it’s just being edited

[@Ghost92834]

Nice use of hollow knight music

[@greenhydra10]

So... A Deltarune AU with elements of Lovecraftian horror (one of my favorites), *and* it's by the creator of Paper Trail, one of the comics that got me into the fandom proper. Yeah, this is probably gonna be in my top 10 UT/DR AUs. But why do they keep turning Susie into SCP-682? And I bet you thought we wouldn't realize what Ralsei was humming at 1:59, didn't you?

[@Disc-CubeClown]

:)

[@PokeGOD69420]

😂

[@joeyrony2887]

gotta pay Lynxgriffin 5 dollars (their rules not mine)

[@ryoal]

Only like 700 views?

[@-hyperlink_blocked]

Now I'm curious about Jevil, but especially Spamton...

[@Disc-CubeClown]

:)

[@braydeslaurier5960]

​@@Disc-CubeClownI don't like that smile

[@Disc-CubeClown]

:) just go check the artist link and hopefully you shall see them…

[@kasakgaming1721]

​@@Disc-CubeClownI don't like the implications of that 😅

[@nicnakneo]

Susie looks like scp 682

[@solidonseraindogthetenth1679]

I MADE A STORY BASED OFF OF THIS! So in this story, there are three worlds. One is full of light, one is full of dark and the third is basically the closest thing to earth. In the world of light, there is a King of light. He is the source of all light and life. His citizens are both his people and his children. In the kingdom of light his children and people get to study and train because they have a mission. To spread light all around. Then there’s the realm of darkness. It is full of dangerous creatures, like demons and monsters. They can get to humans by receiving their souls and giving the magic abilities in a pact. For ex. If the human vassal dies, the creature they made a pact with can bring them back, plus they can be more dangerous than the normal human. The children of light are human too, but their souls are protected by the blood of the King of light, so as a result the dark creatures can’t do anything with them, not even touch them. Children of light can also be powerful compared to an average human. Their magic is light and it’s not their own light. It reflects the King of light the way the moon reflects the sun. The magic of light reverses bad things(ex, healing, restoring), lights up darkness, redeems(if the redeemee is willing) and other things beneficial to those around them. Dark magic is dark magic, it is everything in the name and does not help those that need them. But with both forms of magic, if their warlocks are far from their benefactors, their magic weakens. Our protagonist is a girl named Rosie. Being a citizen of light, she is also a daughter of the King of light, making her a princess of light like all of her sisters. She studied light of magic, worked in the garden with all her siblings, and trained in the paths of light to one day face the darkness. One day Rosie and her siblings are heading off to the garden to do their chores. Then one of her brothers sounded a horn alerting everyone in the room. A dark creature with his vassal, a knight of shadows, came in(Yes, sisters, he seemed cute, but he’s a knight of shadows, so forget he’s cute). They came because they were looking for a vessel of light. A vessel of light could be anything light related. It could be a person, because they carry light; or a sacramental tool. What was it they were looking for? They don’t know. All the shadow creature and his vassal know is that they need one. Rosie’s brothers picked up their swords and were responded with, “Like hades, you are!” Then attacked. But this knight of shadows had some upper hand. One, he had experience from fighting monsters; two, he was a vassal of darkness, so you should expect him to fight dirty; three, he had his dark prince nearby helping him, while with Rosie’s brother, their father and king was someplace else. Eventually the knight of shadows(his name is Kris, btw) knocked down all her brothers. Rosie and her sisters raised their hands ready to cast magic to get rid of this attacker and away from their brothers, but the dark knight put his sword to one of their brothers. If they struck, he can put their brother to the sword first. So Rosie’s sister, Jade, shouted “WAIT!” Rosie, Jade and all their siblings began to discuss what they had to do next to protect their people and land. Rosie turned to the dark knight. “Hey, What was it you needed?” “A vessel of light.” he answered. “I will bring your request to the King of light.” She replied. “Be quick. My patience is running out.” Rosie went off to find her father, “‘My patience is running out’ he said” She thought to herself. “He says he is growing impatient while he threatens my brother, a son of the king. That heathen….” Her rage suddenly calmed when she walked into the room the King was working in and he called out to her saying, “Rosie, are you losing your temper over someone? Breathe.” Rosie obeyed and explained what was going on to the King. The King of light already knew what was going on, but it was considered courteous to let her speak about the problem. The King of light then picks up a dove and says, “I am sending you to go tell that wayward lad to wait longer, let my son go. He’ll get what he needs soon.” The King of light then takes Rosie to a pew and where there should have been a podium, there was a spring of glowing, crystal clear water. The king then took out an empty jar and filled with the water. “This is living water. It is effective against dark creatures. You will need it for the mission I am going to send you on.” He then explains to Rosie that that knight is a human that is enveloped in darkness. And he is sending her to take him back from darkness. Since her light magic will fade when she gets far from the Kingdom of light, she will carry a vile holding living water as a stand in for her source of magic since the living water also is from the King of light. Everything good is from the King of light. So the king of light and Rosie head to where Kris(remember that’s his name) and his dark patron were at and the King of light said to them, “Here is the vessel you needed. Now do not threaten my young ones again please.” The dark knight laughed. “This girl? The thing we need?” “That girl is a daughter of mine and has some of my light in her. So be aware of what help is given to you.” The dark prince pulled at the dark knight’s arm. “Hurry, we have to go.” And off went prince of darkness, vassal and princess of light. Will the light lady save a soul or will he be lost to the shadows? I will not be rapping up this plot. Sometime in the middle of the story, Rosie: Falls down a small ledge. Kris who has gotten attached to her: “Princess! Are you ok?” Rosie: “I’m alright. And please just call me Rosie!”

[@justanedgyguy2867]

Susie reminds me to SCP-682 lol

[@Disc-CubeClown]

OMG I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE!!! XD

[@joeyrony2887]

Both of you must pay Lynxgriffin 5 dollars (anyone who compares susie to 682 must endure this punishment)@@Disc-CubeClown

[@glasscup5258]

Dark souls🗿

[@krismemer5924]

Average day tbh

[@Elitesimpcameraman.]

lol

[@foxxoice5090]

Underworld but .its. deltarune

[@gabrieltolman4674]

Deltarune mixed with Scp. XD

[@unbudging1183]

Scp 682

[@gabrieltolman4674]

@@unbudging1183 YES! SOMEONE GETS IT!