Ep-9 || A mafia trapped you in his fake innocence and love for revenge...[ Jimin FF ]

[@jiminieeee1810]

I don't know why I have strong feeling that Jimin is not Mr.park's son. Juwon is completely like Park family while Jimin is different and they even treats him differently from Juwon.

[@marvieescalante9396]

@@jiminieeee1810 yeah sme here mybe he is mr.and mrs park 2 son 🤗

[@jiminieeee1810]

@@marvieescalante9396 I'm also feeling the same.

[@marvieescalante9396]

@@jiminieeee1810 yeah coz jimin very dffrnt frm juwon im so excited this girl i hope our author psted nxt ep.soon💜

[@Eunju6912]

This is getting too much I mean it's getting boring when this toxic atmosphere will end I hope they get what they deserve

[@farrynosby-jackson1836]

oh please make jimin stand up to father and stop making him do his bitting and don’t let anything happen to yn jimin hope you make happy ending and jimin father gets what deserves

[@KomalGaikwad-se5st]

I am waiting when y/n did the same thing same torture with park family mr.and mrs.park I want y/n to fight back and did tit for tat

[@pandaeats2688]

Hey i hope you won't take it in a wrong way. It is a constructive critisism. I am an author too. I used to post on yt too. But i stopped posting because of my job so now i just read nothing else😅😅😊 As an author tyere are few tips i would like to share, you really have potential. 1st focus on 1 story at a time, you post multiple stories in a week a viewer don't read stories like that they stick to 1. So if you have multiple story idea write it down somewhere and keep them save but focus on 1 story at a time. Qhen you focus on q story at a time you do much better your mind will brew better ideas. Your subscribers follow one story at one time so if you follow multiple story line the veiwers won't enjoy your views will reduce and can reduce subscribers. The people who follow 1 story line for eg. If someone is reading this jimin ff they will get bored eventually, because of the delay and long plot. I get it you want to give story a depth but if you post this story so late then, it will irritate the viewer it maybe not that long in your point of view but in their brain it is going on for a while now and they will hate why it is not ending yet. This are just tips, i am not critisizing you as an older sister just giving you guidance, because with good views you will feel happy and with your good storues your viewers will feel happy. So it is a win win situation 😂❤ I hope you will work on where you lack ❤❤

[@fictionalworldof7kings]

You are right. In past I used to make next parts within two days or I have even post two ep in a day but lately I'm dealing with some health problems so I'm not able to write for long time and that's the biggest reason its taking a lot time in next ep. Plus I don't write a story continuously...whatever I'm posting is expect this ff are mostly draft which I have left in past and now I'm posting it or sometimes I don't get idea how I will connect things with next scenes, in that situation I start writing other ff and it helps my mind to get refresh so it's not like I focus on writing other ff....for now this ff is my priority and I wanted to write something different in mafia so it kinda got hard for me Plus I'm trying to put some extra editing in videos which takes a lot time in editing 😅🥲 AND MOST IMPORTANT...."I don't know how days are passing so fast🥲" I also want to post fast fast so I can start my next series but unfortunately it is taking a lot time.....🫠

[@pandaeats2688]

@@fictionalworldof7kings oh my I hope you recover soon honey. Don't take any pressure love you. Yk it is better to take rest make sure you don't over work yourself ok

[@anjanapisharodyr-1247]

U really made usre my each thought was delivered thanks for this comment 😅❤

[@littlesquirrel13]

I actually just wanted to say that....THERE ARE some viewers too who watch 2-3 series of the same channel and I'm also one of them 😂 . I really enjoy when you post different stories... because again it's not like we'll watch only one series at a time 😂😂, like.. I watch multiple series simultaneously...... it's like watching different serials 😂😂😂. Yeah that was my pov.

[@VanshikasehrawatVanshikasehraw]

And also please show their little happy family in future and a great love story please make some more episodes only of them and child also if you can it's a humble request

[@ÃłïçıāBəñÇhābænë]

I wish at the end of all the story Jimin won't get hurt🙃

[@fictionalworldof7kings]

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[@Taetaexbery]

Unnie how are u? Unnie can u tell that when will u upload the next episode of this Ff just curious.💜

[@Taetaexbery]

Unnie please reply 💜

[@anannatabassum-wh1vt]

Plz author make y/n fight back against this family.. Plz punish them quickly

[@minkook2405]

Can't yn be a lil more strong i mean she's already but with jimin too i want her to move on from him and not forgive him easily no matter what excuse he gives because in the end he's wrong too he's just a dad's puppet doing everything that he says without caring about yn feeling so she should too act like it's not effecting her and i hope there's more scenes of yn and je-soo... I know it's a jimin ff so eventually you'll end her up with him but i just really hope that she ends up with either jesoo or jhope

[@jiminieeee1810]

It's Jimin ff so I hope in the end Jimin and Yn will together

[@marvieescalante9396]

Nah jimin not that bad to yn he care he worried and he love yn not easy for him too show coz everyone hate yn yes he is a puppet bt im sure he have a reason for that we just wait a lil more and stil its jimin ff so yn should end with him sorry my dear😊🤗

[@_bts_taekookmin_love_]

Btw who is Jesoo🙂

[@jiminieeee1810]

@@_bts_taekookmin_love_ you didn't read pervious ep? He is a servant and he is very soft with Yn.

[@_bts_taekookmin_love_]

​@@jiminieeee1810ik but i forgot his name was Jesoo yeah That servent who took yn's pic and Jimin took away his phone🫠🫴🏻

[@sagarikachakraborty5435]

U are such a great writer

[@DanielaRishko]

The story is so good I hope u post a new part soon I can’t wait it feels like I wait years for new parts

[@jameelahmed1046]

Plzzz next part we can't wait anymore 😢💜💜💜

[@girdharbhaimoliya4634]

Please make next past fast sorry for telling you this but I am waiting for so so so long for these ff so please can you make fast

[@_bts_taekookmin_love_]

Author Unnie think those buildings are as tress Le me okay think those pumpkins are as a lamps🫡😹

[@fictionalworldof7kings]

😂

[@unnati3003]

Next part plzzzzzzzz i love it its so much interesting

[@candychavez2466]

💜💜💜💜💜

[@marvieescalante9396]

Hmm im thinking is yn parents really her parents? And yeah is suzy is really a daugther of Mr.andMrs.Park 2? Its interstng and damn that juwon he is sick they are sick specially Mr.Park i wnt a hard punishmnt for him until he begging to yn i hope they hurt like how they hurted yn thank u sweety for your hard work on this cant wait more im impatient 🤗🤗🤗💜💜💜

[@safuramehak315]

Next part soon 💜💜💜💜

[@syuniverse09]

@author please make a ff on tae one shot please .......... I am missing Tae so much 💜💜💜💜😔

[@syuniverse09]

Please end this toxic environment 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

[@Ravi-fq4pt]

Let the author cook

[@farrynosby-jackson1836]

and one question who is j-hope to yn is he her brother or ex boyfriend please say he her brother

[@soumitasarkar9030]

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[@7PJM]

amazing as always, sister please make them happy together. don't let anything happen to both of em. lots of love. we are eagerly waiting for the next part. take care 💜💜

[@kiara-r3p]

Waiting for next episode soon

[@ncf3298]

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[@nairaneves3028]

Bro I just had this crazy theory.What if jimin is the Parks 2 son and Suzy the Park 1 daughter?

[@themajidshow4960]

Next epi soon plz

[@7PJM]

heyy sistaaa, you know I think you should write ep-8 lastly in video title. At first :- Jimin ff | .............ep-8. I guess it will attract more views. I thought to comment this ✌🏻✌🏻😊😊

[@7PJM]

try this once PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE sisteerrrr

[@fictionalworldof7kings]

Okay I'll try....thankyou for suggesting 🥰

[@7PJM]

@@fictionalworldof7kings and yk your writing skills are hwellaaaaa amazing 😍

[@ÃłïçıāBəñÇhābænë]

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