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@SagaLarton5 ай бұрын
Zzzzzzzzzzzzz
@UpInTheAtticJSW4 ай бұрын
I've been reading and reading about Hemingway for decades, but your video held me from beginning to end. This is how great writers endure: through people who can appreciate AND ARTICULATE why they are great.
@DaBerryBest4211 ай бұрын
1. Observe and write it all down 2. Empathize and understand 3. Practice these over and over
@shahxad65339 ай бұрын
nice
@sobieskilinda4 ай бұрын
@@Bez00But, worth it.
@COJAZZ34 ай бұрын
Thanks
@tmotus843 ай бұрын
@@Bez00is that’s how you felt, then you missed the point of being a writer
@tmotus843 ай бұрын
@@Bez00 rude of you to want a shortcut in a craft that works to avoid shortcuts and begs to observe the intricacies of life
@JammCo Жыл бұрын
These skills shouldn’t just be practiced in writing but in our everyday life. Great video.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
So true! Thank you!
@marknewton69847 ай бұрын
I wish I could write like him.😎
@sarcasmo57 Жыл бұрын
Never underestimate the importance of being Ernest.
@greggoreo6738 Жыл бұрын
When you feel you're making no headway, you're probably making heming way. Lean into and write forward. Respectfully submitted for your consideration Gregg Oreo Long Beach CA etats unis
@likeasonntagmorgen Жыл бұрын
That’s wild
@kathleenscullion8348 Жыл бұрын
Wilde,clever wit!!!!
@HidingPlainSight Жыл бұрын
😂
@HidingPlainSight Жыл бұрын
@@greggoreo6738😂
@Razdanvinodk8 ай бұрын
A man can be destroyed but not defeated . Hemingway is an all time favourite writer of mine! Love his writings, specially went to key west from India to see the Hemingway house; it was a pilgrimage of sorts for me…….
@marknewton69847 ай бұрын
You have good taste.
@jumpingship3001 Жыл бұрын
These are life skills that we should practice. Reading and writing with your whole being is magical and rewarding. Keep at it people.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Agreed! Thanks for your comment.
@happymaskedguy1943 Жыл бұрын
What does ‘writing with your whole being’ even mean? It’s nonsense. Make the effort and try to write with emotion.
@jumpingship3001 Жыл бұрын
@@InkwellMedia Your welcome.
@casey36357 ай бұрын
@@happymaskedguy1943 Ah, I understand the skepticism! Writing with your whole being isn't about penning a grocery list with fervor-it's about infusing your words with depth and authenticity. It's about channeling your experiences, emotions, and observations into your writing, creating a tapestry of human expression. If that's 'nonsense,' then maybe we should all embrace a bit more nonsense in our lives. After all, writing with emotion is just the tip of the iceberg, writing with your whole being is diving deep into the waters of creativity and connection.
@jumpingship30016 ай бұрын
@@casey3635 I appreciate your comment. Said like a teacher helping someone along.
@fortissimoX Жыл бұрын
Although I'm no writer and have no intention of becoming one, I've clicked this video knowing that there would be some good universal advice. And surely, it was there. Thanks.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@GuineaPigEveryday10 ай бұрын
Practicing empathy is something everyone and anyone should do
@julesanderson58025 ай бұрын
What a crazy way to get advice tracking down a writer showing up to their house then going on a boat with them is wild
@delstanley13493 ай бұрын
Sounds like the makings for a Stephen King novel, or a Patricia Highsmith 😁
@7deepbreaths.sounds3 ай бұрын
Makes you wish you were alive in the early 20th century
@CulturedCarlo9 ай бұрын
Sounds a lot like mindfulness!
@jancoley90518 ай бұрын
You didnt insist, or plead, or repeat to hit the like button or beg us to subscribe, but I enjoyed this so much I will do both. This was so inspirational, this can be considered a "feel good video" Also such a smooth voice and flawless delivery. Surely there is more pleasure and learning you are willing to share, so I have signed up. Also this has made me realize that I need and must return to my journal for my own satisfaction and sanity. Thank you.
@AntPictures Жыл бұрын
You need not judge but understand. That's probably the most important advice you can give a person of any craft.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
So true!
@phyllisjeanfulton Жыл бұрын
On some level, this applies to all areas of art. ❤
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Absolutely!
@markmarco2880 Жыл бұрын
To observe and to attempt to experience the pain and passion of others…is empathy in action. You can be bankrupted of freedom in the prison of your mind and at the same time be liberated in knowledge. This through the observation of Nature. Thank you for this post, so rich am I.🌿🐇
@Acacius19928 ай бұрын
Good then i an give up trying being a writer. Nothing bores me more then to experience or observe others or nature
@philm9593 Жыл бұрын
I'm a procrastinator of the worst kind. Really terrible. However, these Hemingway exercises might give me the kick I need. Loved your presentation. Thank you.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Phil!
@Lizard1582 Жыл бұрын
Surely...
@lonewolf5238 Жыл бұрын
As a past future president of the Procrastinators Club I admire your courage. We expected to have held our inaugural meeting again last week but no one showed up 😋
@philm9593 Жыл бұрын
@@lonewolf5238 😂😂
@redtobertshateshandles Жыл бұрын
I read about Soichiro Honda once. His philosophy was first make something. Then improve it. Whilst I'm not a writer, I had procrastination many times before making a part or repairing a car or motorcycle. Starting at the beginning is a good start.
@jancoley90518 ай бұрын
You did an excellent job presenting this information. Just truly enjoyable to hear your perspective.
@jimrodgers85411 ай бұрын
I read the book 40 years ago in Las Vegas. I actually read it 3 times to get all I could from it. I'm a painter who answers art issues through authors and musicians and actors and their resolutions. Looking at others artists doesn't give you your answer. 35 years of art and I still use this process.
@curiositypiqued65738 ай бұрын
Dyou have a book out or something???
@erikpeterson25 Жыл бұрын
The Old Man and the Sea is one of my favorites ...a classic 👍
@superdeluxesmell Жыл бұрын
Hot take.
@redtobertshateshandles Жыл бұрын
Other Hemingway works seem as if written by a drunkard imo.
@marknewton69847 ай бұрын
The Lions on the Beach!
@renatajd77586 ай бұрын
It is horribly story of a person who wasn't a fisherman.
@WillieLewis-o7p8 ай бұрын
Helpful advice... inspiration is hard to find in today's world ..i write collectively in a chaotic pattern then place it together like a puzzle
@6equj5_8 ай бұрын
Slow down and receive! Lovely. Thank you.
@MikeMesseroff7 ай бұрын
Wow, what a beautiful lesson and video. Thank you! 🙏
@johnnyk74802 ай бұрын
Wow wow wow. You did a good job explaining how Hemingway writes in a succinct manner. Please carry on!
@theothercomicguy Жыл бұрын
A well presented story with something useful to boot. Thanks.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
@WhenShadowPlays Жыл бұрын
Kudos to your efforts for making such a wonderful video and also thank you for sharing with US! ❤
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@MichaelJTribula Жыл бұрын
I felt like I took a moment and took a stroll through time. Thank you.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching, Michael! Glad to hear you enjoyed it.
@bradleys47838 ай бұрын
This was wonderful. Well done. Made my day. Thank you.
@TonBil13 ай бұрын
HOW TO LEARN 'SHOW, DON'T TELL' 1. Pick a simple situation. 2. Observe closely, including your own emotional responses. What actually caused this emotion? 3. Put all of this in words. 4. Practice empathy with everyone in your observation. Do not judge, but try to understand. 5. Practice a lot with the apprentice's mindset. (My personal summary of this important lesson)
@grantmoulton9204 Жыл бұрын
Profound advice. You make me want to read his works and also improve my observation and empathy. Thank you.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching!
@marknewton69847 ай бұрын
A Farewell to Arms
@allencollins6031 Жыл бұрын
You are well spoken. It is refreshing.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Allen!
@billmarshall8438 Жыл бұрын
True, she is. So many use synthetic voices these days out of laziness or lack of English ability. It's great to hear a real person, especially one with a professional level voice.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
@@billmarshall8438 Thanks so much!
@fragr33f745 күн бұрын
Thanks for sharing these tips. Really enjoyed the clarity of the video 👍
@michaelwtreww7 ай бұрын
Hemingway is among the top of my favorite writers for his cunning and deceitfully simple language.
@EnfieldsMikeP4 ай бұрын
he was a cunning linguist and some say a master debater
@VikingMan4410 күн бұрын
I'll never forget reading "The Old Man and the Sea". Hemmingway's simple story about fishing was a moving parable about manhood.
@Formo1274 ай бұрын
The background music is soothing. Your way of explaining is awesome.
@RhinoToolSystems11 ай бұрын
Thanks for taking the time to make this video. I found it to be valuable for both writing and life.
@InkwellMedia11 ай бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for watching.
@lastrada52 Жыл бұрын
What excellent advice. Wonderful. All true.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching, John!
@kellebelle94147 ай бұрын
So great to hear Hemingway 's advice
@pcb913426 күн бұрын
Great video! I learned a lot! When I read you are also Christian, with more reason I subscribe! Congratulations for your work and God bless you!
@InkwellMedia24 күн бұрын
Thank you so much! God bless you too!
@TicketToLiterature8 ай бұрын
Great video... I have read the old man and the sea recently. Hemingway is a delight and an experience to read. Thanks for the valuable lessons.
@marknewton69847 ай бұрын
You may like his short stories. Soldier's Home
@MrPappy-tk1vy Жыл бұрын
This is a very well-made video. It points out some very basic concepts that are very important for conveying a message or painting an image literally.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
@lauramason56677 ай бұрын
This is the best video I have seen on writing. I thank you with all my heart.❤
@stevefritz51828 ай бұрын
My first time viewing your videos. I love your soothing tone. I look forward to seeing what else you have to teach me.
@doriskarloff96411 ай бұрын
Thanks for posting - very interesting. I love the writing of 'The Old Man and the Sea' - it's beautifully crafted.
@InkwellMedia11 ай бұрын
Thank you for watching!
@sephardicflavors5 ай бұрын
I love your explanation ❤
@robinwitting2023 Жыл бұрын
Superb! I've read The Old Man and the Sea and A Moveable Feast half a dozen times. Masterpieces of the craft. This video was excellent. You speak with superb diction and clarity. Robin Witting England
@robertgerrity878 Жыл бұрын
Now do the Nick Adams Stories (Scribners TPB), then Winner Take Nothing, before reading the novels. Do not skip Hills Like White Elephants. Leave the novel The Garden of Eden until last.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your kind comment, Robin!
@marknewton69847 ай бұрын
A Farewell to Arms and his short stories. Will change many a life... The Florida Beachcomber 😎
@marknewton69847 ай бұрын
@@robertgerrity878Good choices!
@williss11929 ай бұрын
"Show, Not Tell" is something taught in middle school and the writing rule everyone knows which I've also seen a lot of online writers ignore the most
@christiangonzalez10829 ай бұрын
Great, precise comment on Hemingway. Thankyou.
@InkwellMedia9 ай бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@radharcanna Жыл бұрын
Great advice. Love your voice and delivery!
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thanks so much!
@fredcolon2341 Жыл бұрын
I have wrote different types of stories threw the years, but never put anything to print, one of these days I will, Hemingway is one of my favorite authors..
@doreekaplan258911 ай бұрын
Dude you need a dictionary, Spellcheck, Grammerly, or even a first grader.
@thiagoalves540410 ай бұрын
The exercise also helps you to live and experience the present more. Thanks for the video :)
@InkwellMedia10 ай бұрын
Definitely agree. Thank you for watching!
@JohnSiddique Жыл бұрын
This is wonderful. I’m blessed to be well published, but have been away from the deeper heart of writing after a long difficult period in life. This got to the heart of me a bit. Thank you so much. I love being a writer so much. Studied Hemingway’s techniques as part of my Masters. This woke me back up a little to writing life. Gonna start with reading some Hemingway and the book you shared
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you, John. I love "A Moveable Feast" too. That's always a great one to re-read.
@JohnSiddique Жыл бұрын
'Adore a Moveable Feast' Was just thinking of rereading that, it's an incredible book. You're video really helped, and I think God's listening in - as after I watched your video yesterday I was invited to write a small essay commission - I said yes straight away Blessings to you - you ar e really helping people. @@InkwellMedia
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
@@JohnSiddique That's wonderful! Thank you for sharing. All the best with that essay!
@BalkarSingh-sd1cf10 ай бұрын
A nice presentation. Selection of text lines made it more aurhentic and convincing for audience.🙏
@InkwellMedia10 ай бұрын
Thank you so much!
@seanemmettfullerton Жыл бұрын
Your channel is excellent, Nicole! Thank you! Loved the Hemingway 3 steps... ha! rinse and repeat :)
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Sean!
@philopolymath6 ай бұрын
Lifting a glass to his mouth before and after each word gave great strength.
@dalejirschele12997 ай бұрын
I am not attempting to be a contrarian, I just found it interesting that recently I have been reading "Reading Like A Writer" by Francine Prose. I believe she is the first person I've seen that questions the form of bad advice given young writers, that the author is to show not tell. "Needless to say, many great novelists combine 'dramatic' showing with long sections of the flat-out authorial narration that is, I guess what is meant by telling." I won't quote any more of her book here, but it's the first chapter called "Close Reading" and on page 25 of my copy. She says this after quoting a selection by Alice Munro that she notes does not follow this rule. The entire piece is nuanced and I believe worth reading, this work by Francine Prose has become my favorite book on writing/reading. Thanks for the opportunity to comment, have a good day, cheers!
@mattgrey-rl4dq Жыл бұрын
A wonderful post. Your voice is perfect.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@bikramsingh80873 ай бұрын
THIS IS A PERFECT VEDIO OF ITS GENER
@ernestocaceres212519 күн бұрын
Muy bueno. Excelente video. Bendiciones desde Argentina.
@InkwellMedia19 күн бұрын
Muchas gracias!
@MsSuperww4 ай бұрын
Beautiful video!
@thomas_m3092 Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Nicole, for all the nice videos. You explain things very well. Lovely voice as well.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Thomas! Happy to hear you are enjoying all the videos.
@stevensandersauthor10 ай бұрын
Great video. And thanks for using Hemingway.
@InkwellMedia10 ай бұрын
Thank you, Steven!
@rafaelisharianto5901 Жыл бұрын
Excellent presentation. Thank you
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@localepoxyflooringwollongo51412 ай бұрын
You're making a difference, one video at a time.
@rene.rodriguez Жыл бұрын
That was amazing. Liked and sub’d. Thanks for sharing!
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
@lonewolf5238 Жыл бұрын
Many, many years ago while attending yet another writer's workshop, I discovered the 3 Keys to Successful Fiction Writing, scrawled on a blackboard with yellow chalk, in huge letters: Inspiration Aspiration Perspiration I've long forgotten everything about that workshop, save that blackboard image. I'm a good writer. I had a successful career as a writer-producer in commercial television for nearly 20 years, won a stack of awards, even had some success in Periodical writing (aptly named). But I have been a complete and absolute failure as a novelist. Because while possessing two of those three keys, I have lacked the one most important: *Inspiration* Examine the career of any successful novelist and you will find, at its heart, an abundance of inspiration. Without it, even the best wordsmiths are doomed to fail.
@stphnwlkr Жыл бұрын
If you're relying on inspiration you'll never get anywhere. Inspiration is a cop out. Replace that with discipline and you'll be fine. Too many people romanticise writing and let the muse or inspiration lead them.
@javiervidal3665 ай бұрын
What does inspiration mean to you?
@lonewolf52385 ай бұрын
@@javiervidal366 it's an idea, but not just any idea, but _THE_ idea, an intuitive spark of imagination that ignites the fire of creativity. Its absence is entropy: the artist looking at an empty canvas; the musician with a silent instrument; the writer staring at a blank page. No amount of self discipline will ever fix that problem.
@MyWritingJourney9Ай бұрын
Beautiful!!
@jamesrichey Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the bit of inspiration. I really needed it.
@netelinprj6 ай бұрын
What a good video to watch and learn, thank you a lot!
@nilumohapatra4841 Жыл бұрын
makes a joyful viewing. thanks
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Nilu!
@nospam-hn7xm8 ай бұрын
Nicely done! Thank you for sharing.
@TheBricknell10 ай бұрын
I really enjoyed this. Thank you for making it.
@InkwellMedia9 ай бұрын
Thank you for your kind comment! Happy to hear you enjoyed the video.
@rherold2001 Жыл бұрын
Excellent video! Thanks for creating it!
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Robert! Glad you enjoyed it.
@lukaschumchal77979 ай бұрын
I Wish i could be direct as hemming way 😊 thank you 😊
@bodhicat111 ай бұрын
#3 is the key!
@bhaskernitesh Жыл бұрын
Brilliantly presented.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thanks so much!
@marknewton69847 ай бұрын
The Killers. Inspired Camus.
@jameswykes93922 ай бұрын
Great video - many thanks.
@Autojones3 ай бұрын
I can't remember who said it but it was a famous writer and I saw the quote many years ago. but they said it was 2 steps for them... 1. Writing is reading so read lot's of books. 2. Take a book of your favorite author and copy as many pages as you can, (the whole book if possible) you won't notice it but you will pick up style and structure from them and still have you're own. I'm paraphrasing but that was the gist of it.
@Michajeru Жыл бұрын
This is good advice. I'll attempt to follow it.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@rebeccadear91903 ай бұрын
Wow! Amazing vlog. Ty
@mattlevy9143 ай бұрын
Fire. As I watch the clock tick my life shrinks I told my shrink. Clinks of glasses the brinks of flasks ringing and writhing to the sound of my ailing pen bleed. I forgot myself, the privilege I been bestowed from the flicker of gold, honey of the birds and the bees. What a fortuitous roll of the dice. Watch mice scurry, I resonate cause I to am frightened. Wait for a waive of the wand, the vanishing gong, a sarong on my head. I wait for the day, the wave to lift the weight, the wheels of fate have crushed me like a train. Who am I to stop locomotion, I just observe. Who am I to rot, unless I’ve stolen. The precious gift, my mere existence, rips I feel their eyes stamping.
@sitrakaforler86967 ай бұрын
Really thank you ! it was a great video !
@bogotta11 ай бұрын
Thank you Nicole, this was nice.
@InkwellMedia11 ай бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@MrNess2911 Жыл бұрын
Thanks Nicole!
@christophermaguire920611 ай бұрын
Great episode thanks a bunch very helpful
@InkwellMedia11 ай бұрын
Thank you so much, Christopher!
@philipswain41228 ай бұрын
Many thanks for posting
@doreekaplan25892 ай бұрын
For me, "a writing exercise" is the writing itself.
@emerialon561210 ай бұрын
I think i just found the last thing i need to start writing. Thank you.
@InkwellMedia10 ай бұрын
Thank you for watching! So glad to hear it inspired you.
@gustavbrinkel5489 Жыл бұрын
He got sum nice words
@antoniopacelli8 ай бұрын
Hemingway had one of the most Musically Sounding Name Ever.. It seems a Poem in itself almost...
@Anthony-gq7dk Жыл бұрын
Beautifully delivered .
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@raymondolinger1097 Жыл бұрын
A wonderful presentation!
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@panosgiannoulis2604 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for this excellent job!!
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it!
@David-jb5dv Жыл бұрын
thanks for this. I found it useful.
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@ShakespeareCafe10 ай бұрын
John Muir is the model of clear and concise writing.
@GaiaCarneyАй бұрын
Thank You 📚
@bayblue93078 ай бұрын
Well done!
@redtobertshateshandles Жыл бұрын
I guess that's why anglers love the Old Man and the Sea. We might not all have sharks take away our catch but we understand the disappointment of losing a fish. Many thanks for this video. I just realised the fish' point of view. 😂
@RedWinePlease Жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! Truly appreciate your support.
@kapinjalvishwakarma4987 ай бұрын
Thankyou for this 😊❤
@kennedyebong4864 Жыл бұрын
This is awesome. I love this
@InkwellMedia Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Kennedy!
@just_that_average_joe7 ай бұрын
Today I learned Hemingway had some really defined calf muscles 1:04