I think it was a lovely audio. You have a soothing voice. As a listener who has no real qualifications to give advice on how to improve, I think you could use a little more confidence. You seemed to stumble a few times. My one other thought that may just be a personal pet peeve is that you mentioned having emerald eyes, yet you used an image with red eyes. It might just be me, but I know that I found that a little distracting. I would recommend either finding an image with green eyes instead or changing that one word and saying ruby eyes instead of emerald eyes to better match the picture used. To clarify, these are minor nitpicks to try to help you improve. Overall, I think you did a great job. I really enjoyed it, and I'm glad I stumbled upon your channel.
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Thanks for your suggestions, I make all the images myself and I always give my characters red eyes, I made the image before I read the script, so definitely an oversight on my part. But thank you for pointing it out.