First Step In Writing A Screenplay by UCLA Professor Richard Walter

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@ProgrammedForDamage
@ProgrammedForDamage 6 жыл бұрын
"The writing down is the thinking of it". So true. The amount of times I've had the outline all settled in my head, and then as soon as I start putting it down it morphs and takes on unexpected turns.
@DragonZlayerx12
@DragonZlayerx12 9 жыл бұрын
It's nice to see people help people who want to start writing screenplays. It helps the people who want it. This may just help me write better
@sqdtnz
@sqdtnz 8 жыл бұрын
I'm more into writing novels than screenplays, but what he is saying is very interesting, and very insightful. I especially like the part where he says it's better to not plot the entire story first. Instead just write, and while writing, trust your creative mind. The story will develop itself in unexpected and interesting ways. Thank you very much!
@stacyyoust
@stacyyoust 5 жыл бұрын
How boring to get stuck writing to just to flesh out a logline and make it meet up right.
@aaronkaminski9357
@aaronkaminski9357 7 жыл бұрын
"Well this guy got murdered. He got killed. ... Well I thought that was something to write a script about." Minds of Writers.
@desmondhodges9710
@desmondhodges9710 5 жыл бұрын
Did you see how he was talking about Muse's & how they Give you creative abilitys but you have to be open to them.... I have a friend who makes music . he's a undergound no name but he's very talented. I once asked him how does he do it. He replied " it comes from a place.. A source like something is puttind the words in my head & my body is the vessel flows threw."
@imacheetah100
@imacheetah100 4 жыл бұрын
I thought you said he got murdered until i read the rest of your message
@FranciscoAlves-om2kj
@FranciscoAlves-om2kj 8 жыл бұрын
When he said "Twilight" I almost got an heart attack, then he said "Twilight Zone", and I was "phew". Excellent.
@duckduckgoose8049
@duckduckgoose8049 8 жыл бұрын
same lol
@natedoggg2002
@natedoggg2002 7 жыл бұрын
Francisco Alves 😂
@FranciscoAlves-om2kj
@FranciscoAlves-om2kj 7 жыл бұрын
I don't know who you are but I love your name. You deserve a beer.
@jesssands5349
@jesssands5349 6 жыл бұрын
Did he say what episode he wrote for Twighlight Zone?
@mattheww797
@mattheww797 5 жыл бұрын
he's not credited for a twilight zone episode on his imdb...
@lamerafiera
@lamerafiera 11 жыл бұрын
That is how I learned that I would like to write screenplays because they are like poetry, their main goal is to elicit emotions, Richard's words of wisdom sound like music to my ears.
@jamesvaughn6399
@jamesvaughn6399 8 жыл бұрын
What of the best quotes I've heard is "writing is rewriting" Always remember your first draft is shit. Most hollywood screenplays are rewritten up to 50 times.
@ThatCreeNative1
@ThatCreeNative1 8 жыл бұрын
Yeah, what I did for my web series is make different characters, scenarios, plots, and direction. I kept the premise. What did I get? I got four main characters I love. Others coming in later. The plot that makes it all tie together. Scenes that I can't wait to shoot. I'd say I rewrote my story many, many times. And wow. I amazed myself with the twist and turns. Things I never thought I'd actually think of! I usually sit down and try to tear down an idea rather than praise it. But if it isn't torn down or isn't that bad? I'll keep it.
@tangobayus
@tangobayus 7 жыл бұрын
You should write a good enough outline or treatment so that your first draft of the script is pretty good. A crappy script with 50 rewrites is a crappy script with 50 layers of bandages.
@satyanarayanyadaw2447
@satyanarayanyadaw2447 6 жыл бұрын
James Vaughn Still so many come out dumb
@yugioh887
@yugioh887 6 жыл бұрын
Not the Last Jedi tho
@aaronsanders6162
@aaronsanders6162 5 жыл бұрын
And most of them still need 20+ passes
@keving2115
@keving2115 9 жыл бұрын
man I want to hang out with this guy.
@crispwhite9068
@crispwhite9068 5 жыл бұрын
Why lol? He's just a teacher. He probably would decline, he doesn't gain anything from you.
@BabyBearRudy
@BabyBearRudy 5 жыл бұрын
I love these interviews! I really appreciate the fact that the interviewer doesn't interrupt to summarize what they say or try to assist them get the words out, she just lets them talk and sometimes it gets messy but it's raw and truthful.
@The_PoorMansAuthor
@The_PoorMansAuthor 9 жыл бұрын
I write with my heart, edit with my mind...
@zunairakhan2671
@zunairakhan2671 6 жыл бұрын
Phillip J. Webster i m finding a screen writer partner for my project if you are interested write me at zunairakhan3333@gmail.com
@2012XF3
@2012XF3 5 жыл бұрын
Shit dollars with my butt.
@jamesrossmusic6013
@jamesrossmusic6013 7 жыл бұрын
I love listening to this guy...I could listen to him for days.... He is not only giving useful info, but he is so animated and interesting... A real person with a great personality!!!!
@lmjf991
@lmjf991 10 жыл бұрын
You're great sir. Thank you for the advice and pointers based on your experience. I'm a young, black, cuban guy and after hearing you I feel like I would love to hang out with you. Now imagine that. A young Cuban and an old jew hanging out. You and Larry David. Love him also. Thanks again.
@filmcourage
@filmcourage 10 жыл бұрын
lmjf991 Here's our full interview with Professor Walter if you ever want more Essentials of Screenwriting - Complete Film Courage Interview with UCLA Professor Richard Walter
@FranciscoAlves-om2kj
@FranciscoAlves-om2kj 8 жыл бұрын
Thank you guys for all your videos. They are indispensable to amateur writers who do what they do. Again thanks!
@douniabeautyvlogs1886
@douniabeautyvlogs1886 8 жыл бұрын
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@ahmadtdk98
@ahmadtdk98 9 жыл бұрын
This is just amazing .. when he said "I want my life to be changed forever" 7:38
@YourLBN
@YourLBN 8 жыл бұрын
My favorite portion of the entire video.
@JorgePrietoNYC
@JorgePrietoNYC 10 жыл бұрын
Agree 100 % the character speaks to us and they guide us they make us (the writer) mad , sad, frustrated is amazing. I'm constantly amazed. Thanks for this posting and thanks Richard Walter.
@MsSblackwell13
@MsSblackwell13 10 жыл бұрын
He is right about mainstream film losing is the art of mystery because they want as little risk as possible. As much as Hollywood is not necessarily original that doesn't mean rehashing the same story/plot from random 80's blockbusters. I don't expect reinvention of the wheel of an 100 year old institution, yet even within conventions of whatever genre the film I'm viewing- I should not be able to predict the ending of the film or worse know that the best part of the film(s) is in the trailer/tv spot.
@ThatCreeNative1
@ThatCreeNative1 9 жыл бұрын
+blackwell008 I love mystery. My web series has a lot of questions, raises more as it goes on alongside answering some questions but two more spawn. I don't know why people think making a story is hard. I find it easy.
@beckyisza
@beckyisza 6 жыл бұрын
Art is a function of surprise. Love it.
@FilmForger
@FilmForger 5 жыл бұрын
I totally understand of what he's saying..... I see it as letting your characters talk among themselves in your head - and just write it down - and start up something between them - then let it age like a good Mead. BUT first, go out and live life to experience interesting things to spice up your writing. I've been a long-time songwriter but just started writing scripts - Cheers!
@belendossantos6699
@belendossantos6699 7 ай бұрын
I swear I'll watch one random video from this channel per day and I'm automatically inspired to write. This is so therapeutic for me 🙏🏽
@filmcourage
@filmcourage 7 ай бұрын
Great to hear that!
@thereccher8746
@thereccher8746 7 жыл бұрын
I find it most helpful to sketch out an outline WHILE I'm writing my first draft. That way you have that balance between structure and organic story-telling that's tricky for many writers to pin down.
@Musicinme2012
@Musicinme2012 10 жыл бұрын
I'm writing a drama right now and as I write the story ideas keep coming so I just put them together
@rievans57
@rievans57 10 жыл бұрын
exactly, I call what you and I do the flow system. We just let what comes out come out and then go from there. many writers want to edit too quickly and get bogged down.
@rievans57
@rievans57 10 жыл бұрын
***** in the process of editing a short, shot it gorilla style as they say but the next short will be more conventional, you?
@PackCorey
@PackCorey 10 жыл бұрын
I have a idea for a movie that was like a gritty and brutal crime-drama mixed with a bone-chilling and atmospheric murder-mystery thriller! Something like The Departed meets Se7en.The story centered around two female protagonists both between the ages of 28-33. One woman is a straight-laced, dedicated and brilliant FBI agent, who has helped both the FBI and CIA catch some of the world's most dangerous criminals, is assigned to partner up with a veteran FBI agent, who was close friends and worked with her late father who was also a FBI agent/Navy Veteran, to recruit and lead an elite team of special agents to track down and capture a cunning yet highly-intelligent serial killer/domestic terrorist who starts to target her and her team when they get too close to his tail. The other woman is a hard-edged, street-wise and unorthodox DEA agent who goes rogue by going outside her assigned case to infiltrate a notorious crime-boss' organization who operates a sex/drug/gun-trafficking ring and is associated with a corrupt mayor running for governor, who is also tied with the Greek mafia. She begins to use illegal and unethical methods and tactics to destroy his empire including igniting a war between his gang and the other crime-families/street gangs of the city. Her ultimate goal his to kill him and his crew to avenge her late son's murder which she believes he's responsible for. Eventually the two young women's lives and investigations collide and get tangled up together which make them begin to realize that their investigations are somehow connected. The working title for now is called "The City" and the list of directors I could see directing the film is Martin Scorsese, Michael Mann, David Fincher, David Cronenberg, The Coen Brothers, Paul Greengrass, Brian Helgelund, Christopher Nolan, Clint Eastwood, Ben Affleck, Kathryn Bigalow, Oliver Stone, or Francis Ford Coppola. I have in mind of Jennifer Lawrence as the vengeful DEA agent and Rooney Mara as the determined FBI agent for now. What do you think? Do you think it's a good idea? Do you think it would be both commercially and critically successful?
@PackCorey
@PackCorey 10 жыл бұрын
James Down You're absolutely right! I shouldn't post it on the internet! However, I glad you liked my idea!
@HeartsForArtCo
@HeartsForArtCo 10 жыл бұрын
Pack man it sounds like every crime drama tv/movie i've seen. unless theres a twist or very engaging dialogue or character development, i wouldnt watch it. also, i find neither female believable as authoritative. just the baby-facedness alone. maybe if they went charlize theron like.
@rogersjgregory
@rogersjgregory 4 жыл бұрын
I’m in the middle of writing a screenplay now, and at page 162, I’m starting to think that maybe this will work better as a series.
@jim50157
@jim50157 8 ай бұрын
At 162 pages, yes it is quite possible. While normally, I would say page count doesn’t matter (and it really doesn’t, depending on the quality of the story, and how well one might be immersed) but if you find yourself at 162 pages and feeling like it would be better as a series, then it may well be. What is the pacing like? Are character arcs fully developed? Are plots fulfilled? Try splitting it up in parts, see for yourself if it works in such a way, if the story still flows - restructure, rewrite, rewrite, and rewrite - is all I can say. From one writer to another ;)
@minimontrealmoments
@minimontrealmoments 7 жыл бұрын
Your videos are very easy to watch, not only because of the interesting information, but also because of your natural, honest way of speaking. .
@zatanna2957
@zatanna2957 8 жыл бұрын
Make people care about the characters whether it's good or bad
@mantan9400
@mantan9400 11 жыл бұрын
Richard is so funny because that is exactly what I do with the outline… I always end up deleting it before actually working on the script.
@davekarner9385
@davekarner9385 9 жыл бұрын
Last time I "let it go" my main character was dead on page 47. Not good advice. Know your story. Start with a logline that describes the main idea. Then write one paragraph that expounds on that logline. Then write three pages expanding further. Then I write 15 pages with important scenes and snippets of dialogue that have come to me and left an impression. You should have a decent plot line/story after 15 pages. Next, I start following the 15 pages onto notecards, each card = one scene. If I have 36-45 notecards, I know I have what I need to move to screenwriting. The inciting incident, plot twists and climax are all represented on a card. After draft one, I re-read and then make scene adjustments where necessary. It's much easier to get a first draft finished with a complete set of notecards based on your outline.
@ThatCreeNative1
@ThatCreeNative1 9 жыл бұрын
+Dave Karner Damn that's hard. But when I wrote my script for my web series it was easy. Took me just a week to construct the characters and story. Alongside the locations and setting. Having a main character is boring, having a compelling story that can continue without one person carrying it is an amazing writer. George RR Martin. No main character and Game of Thrones is so damn good. It inspired me for my web series. Add so much depth into characters that you don't neglect a single one. Writing for just one person is too easy. Writing for a lot of people in a story and you are a genius.
@saintmaster22
@saintmaster22 7 жыл бұрын
dead maine character on page 47 sounds really interesting if you ask me
@FrapsomaticalOption
@FrapsomaticalOption 7 жыл бұрын
In my opinion you are not writing a story then, you're constructing one and I think often it lacks the sincerity of storytelling. It needs to develop and certainly you can't see the outcome of it before you are done. It's like writing your first draft and publish it. Walter also describes in one of his books how you need to explore differend paths your story could go. If your protagonist dies at an early stage of the story and you're not happy with that path, at least you explored it and know that it doesn't work. On the other hand maybe you are totally amazed by that, because you didn't expect it in the first place and now there are multiple choices occuring in front of you and are shaping a story that engages you even more than the one before. I think for a writer writing is all about the process and not the result, it's about exploring your inner sub- or unconscious self, a journey to your heart. If you base writing on a strict plan it might work and you get a movie or book out of it, but I can promise you almost certainly that you won't feel as fulfilled when you want to be the guide of your story as if you are being guided by it.
@nellyb5446
@nellyb5446 5 жыл бұрын
Dave Karner you should go with it... dead by 47 should be the title.. the remaining hundreds of pages could be his life getting to that critical page 47 point... that also made me laugh out loud btw.. but only the conjuring of the protagonist building his character in the mind of the reader, becoming well established and then... dead.
@markyparky3
@markyparky3 10 жыл бұрын
Hi, just wanna say, love what you have to say Richard, also what you've written. Marcus.
@MJBrewer
@MJBrewer 11 жыл бұрын
That's cool that he says, "You don't have to make people feel good--you just have to make them feel." He is so right! Many times I've left the movie upset by what I had seen, but appreciated it tons more than when I see a brainless non-provocative film.
@MiaCatAdventures
@MiaCatAdventures 7 жыл бұрын
This is brilliant ... best interview on screenwriting I've seen - thanks for uploading it
@noelhoffmann6057
@noelhoffmann6057 5 жыл бұрын
My son read a book I wrote 5 yrs ago that Im rewriting. He said the guy in the closet! Now THATS a memorable character. If you remember this guy five years after reading it then you've got a great character.
@demetriusdion286
@demetriusdion286 5 жыл бұрын
The Pre-Visualization stage of Screenwriting is the most important stage of writing, this is before you put fingers to the Typewriter keys. The complete Screenplay is Visualized in your mind first, then you start putting words on pages, don't care about the grammar, choosing the perfect words, just vomit it on the page first, then rewrite and revise it later like a diamond in the rough. Writing is Rewriting. Get into your own head, and write what only you can write. There's nobody like you, therefore, you have no competition, but your self.
@BlackSpikeD
@BlackSpikeD 11 жыл бұрын
Just started screen writing/using Final Draft 8 for my channel yesterday (I took drama classes in high school, but never learned how to write a legitimate screenplay. ANyways I agree with his thoughts on going to the theatre, I personally don't watch trailers for films im really excited for to not spoil anything and try to expect the least amount possible. lols I woke up like 20 mins ago with a bunch of ideas to change what I wrote yesterday, So here I am :)
@lisazoria2709
@lisazoria2709 8 жыл бұрын
Great vid! I'm not sure about the "no planning" suggestion, though. Sometimes it depends on the kind of story you're writing, and I think people should just do what works for them. There seems to be this idea that planning takes the authenticity and spontaneity out of writing, but think it depends on how you do it. Planning out a story shouldn't be thought of as something absolute and immutable. It's more like just creating a guideline to start from in case you get stuck. It's important to leave room for growth during the writing process. The outline /plan is just the beginning, and the story will inevitably change and grow in unexpected ways with each draft. Planning an outline doesn't have to be tedious and analytical, you can go by the same intuition and gut instincts you go by when writing on the fly. Only difference is, you're doing it in your head instead of on paper. For me, it's like watching different cuts of the same movie and I never know what's going to happen until it happens, then I gather my favorite scenes /ideas from each of my favorite "versions" and put together an outline to start from.
@cubanita365
@cubanita365 7 жыл бұрын
completely agree with you, although I'm one of those who get too stressed out with all the planning, but I know many who benefit from it. it all depends on the person really, as you stated.
@clay_reznor647
@clay_reznor647 5 жыл бұрын
God. What an amazing guy. I would love to just throw some topics at him to just see what he has to say.
@InvictusNewsService
@InvictusNewsService 7 жыл бұрын
Richard, I enjoyed your commentary and advice. It made sense.
@tangobayus
@tangobayus 7 жыл бұрын
The outline should be a living document. When you have a problem with the script, change the outline and then the script. There should be a numbered point in the outline for every numbered slug line in the script. Keep them in sync.
@Greenrivers14
@Greenrivers14 10 жыл бұрын
I like screenwriting but my dialogue always seems boring or i never know what to add
@filmcourage
@filmcourage 10 жыл бұрын
Your comment makes us realize that we need some videos on screenwriting dialogue. We are trying to schedule a screenwriter currently. If it goes through, we may pose your comment to the guest.
@Greenrivers14
@Greenrivers14 10 жыл бұрын
ahh really? that would be really helpful! Thank you
@filmcourage
@filmcourage 10 жыл бұрын
We appreciate your feedback. Hopefully it will be something helpful to you and others.
@multigeekmedia
@multigeekmedia 9 жыл бұрын
Let me recommend something you could implement right away. It's called "get to the scene as late as possible". I assume you have an outline, so you know what needs to be accomplished, so have the characters' personalities come out in dialogue, along with plot. Also, using items or commenting on something within the scene, rather than talking about things that happened off screen, usually help with dialogue.
@oscartovar5756
@oscartovar5756 7 жыл бұрын
Have a dialogue with your best friend. You see how conversations pour out without any effort when you're speaking with him/her? Try to have the characters do the same.
@federico5756
@federico5756 5 жыл бұрын
I'm a musician but I have an immense passion for films and filmmaking. Related to screenwriting, I always read that the best thing is to write everyday. I have never written anything in my life. How should I start? What do I write about everyday? Do I write in a script format already or just a Word sort of format with nothing but "words"?
@MehdiHusain
@MehdiHusain 11 жыл бұрын
Funny. Every single interviewee answers that work and discipline is the key. And they keep asking.
@browntroy101
@browntroy101 9 жыл бұрын
Thanks, this is a simple and great way of explaining.
@desmondhodges9710
@desmondhodges9710 5 жыл бұрын
" You have to be available its never easy to get into & you have to own that ! " Muse exist and they inspire everyday but you have to be willing to open your self to them
@emmanuelx7268
@emmanuelx7268 10 жыл бұрын
absolutely agree. I was very impressed and almost could not believe that it was i who wrote the ending chapter of my move script
@filmcourage
@filmcourage 10 жыл бұрын
Emmanuel Reyna Did you just complete writing your first screenplay?
@zachs5010
@zachs5010 10 жыл бұрын
Congrats!!!!!!
@emmanuelx7268
@emmanuelx7268 10 жыл бұрын
Film Courage that is correct, i been writing for a little over five years. In particular editing a film trilogy that is my passion to produce. something that begun as simple creative writing now is a 120 page script. the objective now is to expose the project and find a team that can visualize
@ianredgate4031
@ianredgate4031 9 жыл бұрын
Emmanuel Reyna get your head out of your ass anonymous shithead. you can't even write a sentence
@luke2193
@luke2193 8 жыл бұрын
aren't you a bright ball of sunshine!
@MrDeaconJack
@MrDeaconJack 11 жыл бұрын
Further to my previous comment concerning your scene description -- look up this video here on KZbin: "Write better scene description." Very helpful and practical. Also, I read some more about your story. I greatly admire that you've taken the time and great effort to write something so personal. My son has experienced much of what you've been through, for the same reason -- simply because of who he is. Don't give up. Keep working at it, make some changes, tighten it up. And good luck.
@GeneralSherman64
@GeneralSherman64 10 жыл бұрын
Mine is about a futuristic amusement park where dinosaurs are brought to life through advanced cloning techniques. I call it "Billy and the Cloneasaurus.''
@CipherA
@CipherA 9 жыл бұрын
Terrible idea. Don't go through with it. I should know because I'm this totally knowledgeable incredibly credible dude. I'm also the kind of guy that tells people their ideas are terrible and then steals them and calls them his own, so, yep.
@multigeekmedia
@multigeekmedia 9 жыл бұрын
It sounds exactly like Jurassic Park. Is it your first script?
@GeneralSherman64
@GeneralSherman64 9 жыл бұрын
multigeekmedia no actually i wrote a script on my experience in Vietnam. The year was 1968. We were on recon in a steaming Mekong delta. An overheated private removed his flack jacket, revealing a T-shirt with an ironed-on sporting the MAD slogan "Up with Mini-skirts!". Well, we all had a good laugh, even though I didn't quite understand it. But our momentary lapse of concentration allowed "Charlie" to get the drop on us. I spent the next three years in a POW camp, forced to subsist on a thin stew made of fish, vegetables, prawns, coconut milk, and four kinds of rice. I came close to madness trying to find it here in the States, but they just can't get the spices right!
@multigeekmedia
@multigeekmedia 9 жыл бұрын
GeneralSherman64 Well, I say this because it seems like you have some passion for writing. Your first 2-3 screenplays will be terrible. Mine were, my partner's were, it's just a fact. Move on to a new project. Are you working on anything now?
@saintmaster22
@saintmaster22 7 жыл бұрын
im amazed that no one caught that reference
@MrTwhispers
@MrTwhispers 9 жыл бұрын
This will help in my writing of my screenplay, Space Age.
@SteveHovland
@SteveHovland 9 жыл бұрын
James Cameron's treatment for Avatar is more than 100 pages long. Paddy Chayefsky said he didn't start writing the script until he could tell the story for 45 minutes.
@charleslovett8137
@charleslovett8137 7 жыл бұрын
Helpful and thoughtful comments!
@haynesrobert2830
@haynesrobert2830 5 жыл бұрын
Outline can help prevent writers block
@Spacedoggs
@Spacedoggs 6 жыл бұрын
"...well, this guy got killed." Now THAT'S comedy. Thank you.
@dilfill
@dilfill 6 жыл бұрын
Great video. Thanks for posting!
@rufusjonwilson5262
@rufusjonwilson5262 11 жыл бұрын
Awesome!
@maurolima7348
@maurolima7348 9 жыл бұрын
Amazing. Thank you!
@Rodney92
@Rodney92 11 жыл бұрын
This guy is the real deal screenwriter.
@ericthered760
@ericthered760 6 жыл бұрын
Tears streaming down their faces ? Remember the movie "Love Story" from 1970 ?
@KevinAndrewMan
@KevinAndrewMan 3 жыл бұрын
The unknown of the story is where the fun is. If I'm not having fun with it, something's wrong.
@PenjiProductions
@PenjiProductions 10 жыл бұрын
I have plenty of inspiration for my writing!
@j.goebbels2134
@j.goebbels2134 Жыл бұрын
Shows professors don't know everything, if they know much of anything. Fact is, the story is not about butt in the chair and hands on the keys. That is a reactionist beginner's view. So much of story - true, deep, magical story - is composition through notes and brainstorming and storyboarding and research and discovery. Sit and write when you have a story. When you don't have a story, all of your writing will inevitably reflect that.
@TheKrazyLobster
@TheKrazyLobster 8 жыл бұрын
BIC HOK, as Howard Tayler would say. "Butt In Char. Hands On Keyboard"
@PeterBethanis
@PeterBethanis 8 жыл бұрын
"I remember asking Neil Simon..." Name dropping, that's a really cool way to impress people. What's next, a video on the day you gave Tolstoy advice when he got writer's block while writing War and Peace.
@rievans57
@rievans57 10 жыл бұрын
. . . my creative writing process is like making a pot out of clay, the words are my clay, once I have a glob of clay in front of me I slowly begin to shape it . . .
@thereccher8746
@thereccher8746 5 жыл бұрын
Just write is bad advice. You can sit your but in the chair and start without a plan, than you run the risk of hitting a dead end, or you'll run into mistakes that are way too deep in the foundation which can't be fixed with editing and re-writes and you'll have to start the whole thing again. This is why some studios demand outlines for professional level writers.
@anonymousreviewer1711
@anonymousreviewer1711 9 жыл бұрын
I'm writing a comedy about making a movie.I want to give it the feel of one of those movie's about rock band's.Like Spinal Tap or Tenacious D and the pick of destiny.The difference is this movie will feature a film within the film like Quentin Tarantino's Inglorious Basterds.
@decaturdev7127
@decaturdev7127 9 жыл бұрын
J Mark Cool story, bro.
@anonymousreviewer1711
@anonymousreviewer1711 9 жыл бұрын
Decatur Dev Ya I think so
@TheSMLIFfilms
@TheSMLIFfilms 8 жыл бұрын
For right now I'm writing primarily fictional stuff, but my real passion project that I hope I get to one day is to make a film about Rick Baker and all of the special effects wizards that rose in the 1970's and changed Hollywood forever. I just love the idea of all these hippie outcast kids like Rob Bottin who sit around and make plastic monsters because it's the only way they can express themselves, and they end up changing the industry.
@TheTrueforeigner
@TheTrueforeigner 11 жыл бұрын
minimising risk, elminating uncertainty, does that mean that certainty isn't sexy?
@sonnybrown4758
@sonnybrown4758 10 жыл бұрын
Great advice
@xman577
@xman577 10 жыл бұрын
I've been ready for years. but I have a large problem. I am handicapped I can't read or write. I Record all my stories with a microphone. you can see where this will make it hard for me to write my stories on paper . right now I'm using the Google mic to write this message.I am mostly write science fiction.and comedy and comedy drama. I need help. I need people who can listen to my story to tell me if they suck.when they dont suck or have a possibility of a decent.I have been looking for a cool rider but I haven't had any luck. xman77
@phronze1
@phronze1 9 жыл бұрын
I'd be happy to read some of your work and offer feedback. I'm not an industry professional, but rather an amateur enthusiast if you will. I see you haven't had any replies to this, but if you're still looking for someone respond and I'll be glad to help.
@James_Bowie
@James_Bowie 4 жыл бұрын
This guy could pass as Larry David's father. 😀
@andrewofkansascity
@andrewofkansascity 8 жыл бұрын
Unforgiven didn't win the Oscar for Best Screenplay!
@txhypnotist
@txhypnotist 7 жыл бұрын
He get's off topic on birthing classes, which is where I turn off this video.
@donnasanchez5484
@donnasanchez5484 5 жыл бұрын
Where do I turn in my screen play?
@filmcourage
@filmcourage 5 жыл бұрын
Here are some thoughts on what to do with a finished screenplay - bit.ly/2qj3x03
@giuoco
@giuoco Жыл бұрын
He’s is great at sounding confident and informed but how can he possibly teach screenwriting well if he has never written a decent film
@ryan_hakes
@ryan_hakes 8 жыл бұрын
TODAY WHEN I WASN'T EVEN LOOKING FOR IT OR EVEN KNEW I SHOULD BE I FOUND OUT YOUR NAME. NOTION IS IT THAT INTANGIBLE TANGIBLE PASSERBY SO STRONG LIKE THE WIND SOMETIMES OR GENTLE CRY SOMETIMES FALSE SOMETIMES TRUE SOMETIMES HAPPY SOMETIMES BLUE NOTION COUSINS WITH SIBLINGS PERCEPTION & CONCEPTION ITS SO NICE TO FINALLY KNOW THE VOICE HAS A NAME NOT MINE
@alexisascencio9397
@alexisascencio9397 6 жыл бұрын
Is there a way I can reach out Richard Walter? Perhaps, an email??
@noelhoffmann6057
@noelhoffmann6057 5 жыл бұрын
I hear my jokes too. Thank you!
@jemhoare2105
@jemhoare2105 Жыл бұрын
@2:20 It's a Weird Al convention.
@zuneslave
@zuneslave 9 жыл бұрын
Writing is a waste of time, unless you're in their little Hollywood club. Nobody worthwhile will read your script, even if you enter all these so-called "screenplay contests". It's all a con these days to make money off of desperate people.
@DragonZlayerx12
@DragonZlayerx12 9 жыл бұрын
zuneslave If you don't try then the "Hollywood club" people would eventually lose all their people, also some people just enjoy writing, not wanting to have a good time
@jonathanakerele8006
@jonathanakerele8006 9 жыл бұрын
zuneslave In a monetary sense, yeah you could say writing is a waste of time if you're not getting paid for it right away by an agent or a producer because you have no money to show for all the time you spent writing. Beyond the financial concern, I would never consider writing a waste of time because it takes time to put together a work of art in written form that you can be proud of and excited about. I do agree with you though on the scam artists trying to make money off desperate artists. That can be a problem at times and kills your creative mood from focusing on the story you're writing to worrying about having money in your account to cover daily rising expenses which is kind of sad.
@falcychead8198
@falcychead8198 9 жыл бұрын
zuneslave You've found the perfect excuse for not trying.
@jonathanakerele8006
@jonathanakerele8006 9 жыл бұрын
Falcy Chead The industry can seem like a scam in itself given the financial struggles of getting in and staying in, but I don't think that's a reason to not write. If your motivation is just to make money, you'll stop because it's moving to slow or you're hitting too many brick walls. If your motivation is to just unleash your creativity as best you can regardless of the financial gain then you'll keep at it and keep finding new ways to refine yourself as a writer no matter what because you enjoy it and want to put the best product out there as possible.
@xexious2
@xexious2 8 жыл бұрын
+Falcy Chead I always hate it when people just say you're making excuses when people say totally true things. I mean he's wrong but not in the way you mean, you probably will never get your script sold, but nowadays it's possible to go independent rather well, so it depends on what you are writing. But his pessimism isn't misplaced.
@desmondhodges9710
@desmondhodges9710 5 жыл бұрын
IM am the only one who caught that !!!!!!! Go back and watch what he said about the Muse!. Mythical beings also in Christianity. They're purpose is to inspire artist of all trades
@dylancosta1949
@dylancosta1949 8 жыл бұрын
hahaha the "jive black" accent at 4:03
@TheTrueforeigner
@TheTrueforeigner 11 жыл бұрын
Goddamn funny! Wouldn't mind him as my neighbour and friend!
@paxonearth
@paxonearth 9 жыл бұрын
LOL at 4:31. So true...
@6663000
@6663000 3 жыл бұрын
Just realized that his sister was Jessica Walter after a Google search.
@crispwhite9068
@crispwhite9068 5 жыл бұрын
6:48
@jaqueblanc3397
@jaqueblanc3397 11 жыл бұрын
This is my best joke: I saw a sparrow today, it was a bird so it flew away, end of joke.
@GerolamoUrsidYulin
@GerolamoUrsidYulin 10 жыл бұрын
"VEN" movie concept fo SALE
@CollateralTimbre
@CollateralTimbre 11 жыл бұрын
Unlike other language artforms like poems or novels, screenwriting has a more ambiguous stature, the film as a collaborative end result both absorbing & radiating the script it consumes. In mind via current treatment-pitch (Alien Anonymous) 'A wry high-concept Hollywood-insider global social commentary comic thriller sci-fi'. Have plot-drive, now need character-drive. Rep x Chutzpahductions. A.A will sweep 2015 Oscars! A-List Directors, i.e., Peter Weir, Ron Howard, etc~reachme @ArtistGeneral
@migol1984
@migol1984 8 жыл бұрын
i thought he was talking about quentin tarantino there for a second.
@giuliano6248
@giuliano6248 5 жыл бұрын
he poses a some of his sentences as questions
@shethewriter
@shethewriter 5 жыл бұрын
Man, these professors have little to no actionable advice. It’s just memories and anecdotes and yadda. I’m getting academic flashbacks lol
@kevinreily2529
@kevinreily2529 4 жыл бұрын
Richard wrote the Original Draft of American Graffiti while at USC film school. And you? The Screenwriting professionals who have come through the UCLA screenwriting department are everywhere in Hollywood. Largely because of him and Lew Hunter's guidance. It's funny when people complain about screenwriting videos, it never fails that they all end up the same way.
@saintmaster22
@saintmaster22 7 жыл бұрын
the last part with no sound is incredibly akward
@seriouskaraoke879
@seriouskaraoke879 5 жыл бұрын
How to write a great screenplay. First, write a screenplay.
@SalPaints
@SalPaints Жыл бұрын
This made me feel better about my ADHD brain.
@BlackSpikeD
@BlackSpikeD 11 жыл бұрын
But the industry is playing safe to often and its frankly boring... Originality is more intriguing That's the way to go playas :) u get a full experience. For example I'm a big fan of the director christopher Nolan for his originality, and will avoid seeing any information on his lastest films because at the end of the day I know I will watch them and hopefully enjoy it (Ive seen all of his full production films and in my opinion Dark Knight Rises was the worst and Inceptin the best.
@teerevevourdeminingo4274
@teerevevourdeminingo4274 4 жыл бұрын
he reminds me of a slightly younger and sober Michael Johnson.
@MegaNYguy
@MegaNYguy 11 жыл бұрын
The saying is...oh you wrote a great screenplay? That's nice, write 10 more.
@ryanthoroman3293
@ryanthoroman3293 5 жыл бұрын
If you look up his bio,its funny.Hes written a lot of stuff just nothing good.Hes a studio hack.Probably get hired on the spot if you copy his style knowing studios.
@somaxy
@somaxy 11 жыл бұрын
I'm at the 2:13 mark and I'm thinking about clicking on "brutal mass brawl at Russian army base shocks" to the right........ugghhh
@jaqueblanc3397
@jaqueblanc3397 11 жыл бұрын
Stop being envious of my amazing jokes.
@RonAlmeida
@RonAlmeida 11 жыл бұрын
Playing to the gallery of the mainstream of mediocrity is the only sin for any artist. But how many want to be artists, they just want fame and fortune the worst reason to create but Hollywood has been doing only that.
@bigboyamos95
@bigboyamos95 9 жыл бұрын
I'm working on a satirical script about God. It's called God: The True Story!!
@PANDAxCLITx666
@PANDAxCLITx666 9 жыл бұрын
I'd watch it.
@zilmanar
@zilmanar 11 жыл бұрын
Is that a real question? Is certainty not sexy? Good grief!!! You need to observe real people! The bored housewife with the perfectly reliable husband who is always home at 7 PM slowly eyes the dark and mysterious stranger she sees outside the supermarket. The young man who has pledged his heart to the pure-hearted girl he's known since school can't stop thinking of the dangerous bad-girl figure. There is a REASON we use these kinds of things! YES uncertainty is sexy!
@FaithfulBM
@FaithfulBM 6 жыл бұрын
He talks like an artist who doesn't want to be controlled. Sure, a script can develop into different things IF YOU LET IT. If you have a good outline and know the story you want to tell and plan it properly, there is no reason you can't follow your outline related to the major events. There are many versions that a story can become. Guys like this get off on "discovering" a story accidentally...like your imagination has a life of it's own. That's just silly and will more often than not cause you to waste a lot of time. You will write bad stuff and then have to keep rewriting. If you know where you want to go..you can write great stuff while headed in that direction...and just clean it up or rewrite sections later.
@TheTMNTurtle
@TheTMNTurtle 6 жыл бұрын
what the fuck is he talking about? Is the title incorrect, or is he rambling on about not the title?
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