HOW TO COMPARE TWO POEMS OR TWO TEXTS IN A GCSE ESSAY: GRADE 9 MODEL ANSWER FRAMEWORK & EXPLANATION

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This was super useful!!!!! This will definitely stick in my mind whenever im doing comparison essays in class or exams, and ill definitely remember this when im doing my english lit GCSE!

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Sign up for our GCSE AQA 'Ultimate English Language and English Literature' Revision Course: www.firstratetutors.com/gcse-course Struggling with comparing two texts in your GCSE exams? Maybe you have to compare two different poems or two different types of texts - but you don't know where to begin or how to even plan this type of essay? Not to worry - we've got you covered! Barbara, a qualified English teacher, walks you through a framework which will help you secure Level 9 marks in your essay if you practice and apply this framework in your essay writing!

[@Zak-tm6mw]

Got my mock exam for English literature in 2 hours. Wish me luck! This really helped by the way:)

[@libbyxing]

Hope it went well!

[@altay7065]

how did it go?

[@Zak-tm6mw]

@altay7065 got a 6 in lit. got a 7 in language. Have to do better for the real exams though. only got like 5 months left!

[@alirehan48]

Introduction the writers effectively present the *keywords* through a variety of literary techniques or language techniques or structural techniques then saying that the writers effectively present these either in very similar ways or in very different ways Point 1 Begin with the leading text with “Firstly” Mention how does text A states the Keywords and then in the same sentence compare it with the Text B using keywords. Quote from text A and mention techniques and again support it with your point from text B Close of the first example with a conclusion from text A and B Similar points use ‘similarly’ and use “on the other hand” when comparing different points Point 2 Repeat the same format with a different point using “secondly” Point 3 Repeat the same format with a different point using “Additionally” or “thirdly” State more points if you have time Conclusion Restate the key points from the question Conclude and give final remarks on both of the texts

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[@soph8396]

Using this structure you can this use the follow layout for each point paragraph: PEPEEEL - Point, Explain, Point, Explain, Evidence, Evidence, Link

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Watching this a day before my exam😂

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This video is so underrated, it helped me a lot. Thank you.

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I heard of a tuition class, found out that everyone who did go to the class got straight A for English and lit. I found out that they only show your vids. Thanks for your help too wish you more subs

[@bengruzelier]

Great video and very helpful. I like how applicable it is to any comparison question, very well done and well explained

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This was very usefull for my gcse in june. Thank you so much. :))))

[@errii1669]

I absolutely loved this, thank you so much I didnt know how to structure a poem very well and now you have taught me. Thank you.

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this is just great i cant belive i didnt come sooner to watch this!

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Hunni !!! You are fantastic!!! Thx so much for teaching. Very detailed and informative .

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thank you so muchh :))) i was going to go in that exam and structure it so wrong now i can do it xx

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Tomorrow is my gcse thank you for this🙏🏼🙏🏼

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[@mehh_01]

Ah yes my first paper is tomorrow and i find this today

[@indigo-nk2iu]

omg how did it go

[@mehh_01]

@@indigo-nk2iu it was quite ok we got beyond the sky and earth.

[@indigo-nk2iu]

@@mehh_01 ohh i think that's a different anthology, mine is power and conflict :) ughhh got my paper tomz

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@@indigo-nk2iu oh ok good luck then :D

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@@indigo-nk2iu same power and conflict only in yr 9 now but have eoy exams next Monday

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got my mock tommorow morning very helpful for how to start

[@lilgueon3794]

cheers barbara got my exam tmr

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Still effective after four years!❤

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Most useful 10 minutes and 17 seconds of my life

[@JLUK]

The problem is I can’t find similarities or differences between the texts, are there any tips?

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super thankful for this I have a literature mock in two days 🙏🏽

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Helped frrrr, I'm in year 9 this is basically finding gold to me

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This was very concise and easy to follow. Good job!

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thank you so much i honestly had know idea how to do comparative essays

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my mock exam in 10 hours, very helpful

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My assessment is tomorrow and I didn’t quite revise I was to busy revising other things but this was really helpful thank you so much 😁

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I was just sleeping... But yeah this is beautiful

[@damnimstillalive8310]

thank you so much! i always had problems with this topic

[@leonidaschalkias]

so useful and help me understand the structure

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[@music-tm6xh]

Im so confused on how to write about theme, and how to write about structure (and what structure even is 😅) is there anyway u could release a video about these?

[@Zero1._]

Does ur teacher even teach ☠️

[@em_ignite]

Thank You So Much!!!

[@CarterFridd]

thank you, would you add in points about rhyme scheme and type of poem/context when introducing idea in points or after embedding quotes?

[@charmsd.5903]

Thanks!! This is really helpful

[@systemloading45]

Thank you this is extremely helpful! If possible where could a sample/ model answer be found? That would really help thanks!

[@jamiemacdonnell6929]

well, I have my English lit in 11 hours and I am doomed, but now I know how to structure this essay so I have just gained some more marks??

[@indigo-nk2iu]

This is very very helpful thank you! I would just say that I think you sometimes overly repeat yourself, but then again I understand that this is also aimed to help a younger audience :)

[@نوال-ع8ك]

Repetition is quite helpful because sometimes it goes in one ear and leaves from the other. But the Repetition helps to remember it, perhaps for some people

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This was so helpful. Thank you so much!

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[@mohamedelanany2160]

this helping so much I have me exam in minutes 2

[@syedamarium3471]

I write a paragraph about poem A then one about B after because that's what ive been taught, is it recommended and ideal?

[@Blessingstevens06]

can you please do a separate one for comparing poetry where u only get one text and compare because im in y10 and its my first time and my teacher did not teach us how to compare poetry and im really strugling

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It's in the works :-)

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Thank you. This was very helpful :)

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Can you do more video on how to do essays for Animal Farm in 1 month Im really struggling!

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tysm i think itll be helpful tmr

[@matthebditch2853]

Thank you this was helpful, although would it be possible to get a high grade with only a thesis and two developed points, rather than three?

[@lilgueon3794]

I got a 7 doing that in my mocks but i really dont recommend doing that

[@Zoe-br6cq]

Thanks ❤

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[@Daves-w8g]

paper 1 tommorow thank you

[@harry_mtb3076]

is this a 30 marker question? english lit the comparing

[@fwwryh7862]

I can't see the board.

[@jxstin_sxntixgo9094]

Are the devices ur comparing have to be the same e.g simile from one poem being compared by another simile

[@gracesmith5961]

I guess it would be useful for them to be the same, but you could compare a simile and metaphor and compare the atmosphere/mood/ideas they both create

[@DrNirmalaH3N]

Awesome explanation!! Helped me a lot

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@@FirstRateTutors I used this and i got an A!!

[@diamonds4454]

Just got my mock back I got a 5 outta 9 thx alot I lost marks cuz of my mistakes

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thanks gcse literature exam in 2 days 😢

[@alexjames4704]

does this also work for poems?

[@shannen07]

is this applicable to the wjec eduqas exam board?

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Please do model answers

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i really struggle to find points to write from the essays, anyone got any tips?

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wait so each point is equal to point mark ? so if you had a 10 marker would you need to have 10 points

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The question is level assessed, meaning it isn’t marked per point, the whole of the work is assessed and judged on its fluency and quality, if you look on AQA mark schemes you’ll see that it has levels rather than specific points

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Can this model be used for edexcel too?

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can i talk about something similar about to quotes and something diffrent about those same quotes in the same paragraph

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do we have to include context in our answers for grade 9

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