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@tttttt-xg4nb Жыл бұрын
thanks to you i got a grade 8 in my english language
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
You're welcome and congrats!!!
@zaytim4554 Жыл бұрын
Woahh congratsss!!!!!
@Middleman0000 Жыл бұрын
I cant stand how english creative works as I think it actually does more damage to apiring writers than good. We are taught to throw as many techniques in as possible and an interesting and unique narrative with memorable charachters is sort of sidelined. The best stories are written out of passion, not a desire to fit a formula perfectly
@lordexplosionmurder1760 Жыл бұрын
I one hundred percent agree that the best works are made from passion, however the best writer write with passion and techniques all the time, the on,y difference is that they are so experienced that they do it subconsciously. If you look at your favourite authors texts, I’m sure you would fine a good deal of techniques.
@jameslowe84188 ай бұрын
@@lordexplosionmurder1760 he's not saying the techniques are the bad part he's saying how developing a character and a acually interesting and indepth narrative will get u 0 marks and to get a acually high grade u just have to roboticly fill out a formula with little to no creativity.
@cetvies-author-writer7 ай бұрын
the trick is in the have to, but gcse is not writing is about a demo of how you applied learnt techniques. when you try to combine the two, lessons and creativity, very very very complicated indeed.
@freyai7 ай бұрын
And how we are encouraged to not be that imaginative but to write a simple story that just takes away so much to what the story could of been
@cetvies-author-writer7 ай бұрын
@@freyai some writers use it as an exercise of enrichissment. they add challenges to their writings. things, such as these instructions they need to add to their initial drafts. it is very good for the brain, it takes you where you would not go. very very interesting. and of course very frustrating since writing is building and imply much more than 45 min reflexion. you have to go back to your writing to fix it and balance it, ebb it and deepen it. i wrote a book with your name in the title: 'Freya deserts'.
@randomrandom3755 Жыл бұрын
I am in Year 9 and though my IGCSEs are in two years. I love watching your videos and applying them to my current school work. You explain things in such a easily understandable way, you are a brilliant teacher!!! 🥰
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
That's awesome, thank you 😃
@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 Жыл бұрын
bit sad that ur revising in yr 9, nothing better to do?
@tttttt-xg4nb Жыл бұрын
@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 whats the point in being mean??
@randomrandom3755 Жыл бұрын
@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945its really because i got realllyyy bored, I already loved her videos and i was genuinely interested in the topic already. I actually lead a really fun life where i hang out with friends and go out a lot but it doesnt mean i dont have time to study 😹😹😹😹
@randomrandom3755 Жыл бұрын
@@tttttt-xg4nb its okay dw thank you so much for defending me though. this person was just asking a question. i guess because they have really bad time management they thought i watching these videos because i had nothing better to do 😅🤣🤣
@LouisAyers-Mason-qb2pt8 ай бұрын
Thanks this is such a good video and really helped me what to include in my imaginative writing.
@FirstRateTutors8 ай бұрын
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@Salit-om2sy10 ай бұрын
thank you so much i appreciate your videos so much thank you
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@jadekohly9 ай бұрын
Thank you so much. Amazing video. It helped a lot! Thank you!❤
@FirstRateTutors9 ай бұрын
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@fortaang1145 Жыл бұрын
Would it be ok to write in first person, like using "I", or should I stick with third person presepective? Please tell which one is more preferred by examiners.
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
Either but I personally find first person "I" is easier!
@fortaang1145 Жыл бұрын
@@FirstRateTutors Thankyou
@midnight_sky2382 ай бұрын
Thanks! You're the best! You deserve more subscribers! ❤
@distruction9178 Жыл бұрын
This was absolute amazing thanks for the help
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
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@fizantm90613 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for this, if I haven’t seen this I would had been looking around when my test comes up, thank you again
@Anna-ce2jv17 күн бұрын
My son had a paper which said "describe a sunset'. I assume they just meant descriptive writing in this case, or can you create a story around the description? He struggled to write very much as approached it purely as descriptive writing. I wonder if you would be penalised for creating a story with a task like this?
@jeromengundu662610 ай бұрын
"They smell perhaps like cigarettes and then there like a shadow behind them and suddenly there's somebody that's followed them..." Interesting story😭
@nysamiyana6 ай бұрын
Doing my English Language Mock tomorrow😭
@SCOMPLETE7Ай бұрын
Fr same
@vbhgs2572 ай бұрын
Hi thanks for this! Should creative writing stories be in the first or third person?
@MirKhan-g4sАй бұрын
Amazing vivid explanation
@tasnim_haque2 жыл бұрын
Ma'am. I appreciate your hardwork and your clear understanding methods. Unfortunately I have my edexcel IGSCEs really approaching after 4 days and I have no time to prepare this new technique. It would have been even more better if you had uploaded this video one-two months before the final exam. I understand that there were other difficult topics than this one that were crucial to upload before the exam. Still I'll try my best to cope up with and follow your steps. Previously I have followed your 'PETER' formula for writing about the writer's effects. And believe me or not, it really helped me get out of hell! This type of question is absolutely challenging and it needs critical thinking which your video has taught me to do. You are actually a saviour! Certainly I will try my best to follow this creative step as well if I want to get a Grade 9 in English Language B In Shaa Allah. Love from Bangladesh 🇧🇩
@dancemodesick9754 Жыл бұрын
My man said Ma'am is not India is Miss/Mrs
@1_Trident7 ай бұрын
@@dancemodesick9754 ur name says it all g
@1_Trident7 ай бұрын
@@dancemodesick9754 ur name says it all g
@lia-w7v8o3 ай бұрын
@@dancemodesick9754 Everyone says Ma'am you idiot-
@AwapeNembo5 ай бұрын
Best English teacher ❤❤
@chickenmonster3600 Жыл бұрын
this helped but its funny as your example for the beggining paragraph was a sunny sky but what im doing is winter with a soldier in a trench
@KatieliKelesoma8 ай бұрын
hello im in year nine 9 it really help me in my work study it really amazing
@FirstRateTutors8 ай бұрын
Glad it helped!
@Aaron-kj6cs7 ай бұрын
Who's here for tomorrow exam 😂
@Hellomisskitty-vz6pt7 ай бұрын
me lol
@kingviolence93437 ай бұрын
Me 😂
@MalakhiSand7 ай бұрын
Me 😅
@waynemuyangi69777 ай бұрын
I'm here for today 😂😂
@godislove3330 Жыл бұрын
Please is a creative story or description easier
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
I'd suggest creative writing.
@summerxo2998 ай бұрын
does it need to be formal or informal?
@hoe66997 ай бұрын
i watched a video by another examiner and she said it should be formal and u shouldnt use things like exclamation marks because she sees them as childish, idk tho
@ikhwan.advice6 ай бұрын
formal ig but depends ?
@sardine84863 ай бұрын
This is so good
@FirstRateTutors3 ай бұрын
Glad it's useful!
@azizkhan9154 Жыл бұрын
Very useful
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@Salit-om2sy10 ай бұрын
what is a protagonist
@FirstRateTutors10 ай бұрын
Main character
@alesmateixx59582 жыл бұрын
Will this be helpful if I’m doing edexcel
@FirstRateTutors2 жыл бұрын
It cuts across any exam board.
@korirenockKiptoo-lh2qx Жыл бұрын
Nice one thanks
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@lisamenezies5 ай бұрын
I hope it helps in my exam Tmr😊😂😢😮
@cetvies-author-writer7 ай бұрын
this was scary enough...for publication.
@NdumBrandymbappe-kt6vb2 ай бұрын
🔥🔥
@shirleyyldz8747 Жыл бұрын
Can I end a story with a cliffhanger ??
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
You can but make sure it's not cliched and predictable (ie. "and she woke up and found it was all a dream" / "suddenly everything around him went dark"). Avoid, avoid, avoid cliched cliffhangers
@cetvies-author-writer7 ай бұрын
@@FirstRateTutors this must be so textbook!! i came across last week with these exact two examples on a Pearson lesson. talking about cliche.