From a Poor Alien Beggar to a Human Leader's Wife! | HFY |A Short Sci-Fi Story

[@danielspencer574]

Still a better story than twilight

[@tomwittbrodt6753]

I have believed for some time that the Japanese were proud makers of excellent, precisely detailed electronic devices. Does that precision not occur in other fields of endeavor? In this story the name of the lead character is allowed to change between sentences from Zannia to Zinnia, to Zennia and Zannya and more versions of spelling. Are the writers toying with the readers? I am about to drop these stories because they are insulting. There seems to be no respect for the readers.

[@billyw.garrison1334]

I wish that I knew where I'm meant to be !

[@nealschieberl9601]

The redundancy is exhausting.

[@ronsindric4241]

Reasonably well spoken. But stoty line too loose; repetative and predictable it is a starting point though. One other thing; character name spellings are inconsistent and a bit disconnected with the AI speaking. Once a set of names is used they should not vary ! Please re-work. This is a hood tale !