Frozen Heart [a Deltarune AU animation]

[@ZAdist1709]

I love how Spamton doesn't kill Ralsei, instead just chills at the town, I'm happy they were able to help Noelle

[@hamzainium]

It W H A T ?

[@comosedesenha6401]

Why would spamton kill ralsei? He wants D&@|$ not [[murder]]

[@youmumye]

15:22 ralsei got squashed tho

[@cyanideytcuriousseadoggo]

@Red_Duys late stage capitalism

[@milto_277]

NOW'S YOUR CHANCE TO BE A BIG SHOT BE A BI- BE A BI- NOW'S YOUR SHOT

[@bestaround3323]

Poor Kris, even more of a puppet then Noelle. Sussie has no idea what she unleashed by removing that soul. Hopefully she doesn't fall under its influence.

[@ЕрсұлтанЖеңіс]

Susie is not playable for player and player can't give a orders to her without kris so that's mean player now is just a useless soul who can't do anything

[@UnknownExists]

​@@ЕрсұлтанЖеңіс makes sense but ralsei could be in a really big danger probability because he is probably a playable character

[@octopuszombie8744]

Susie is an exception. If it were anyone else that'd be an issue.

[@Duckbærd]

Sussie

[@forkgodsdescendant2503]

This is a really good watch, even though the plot has problems. Susie saying: “Ralsei can you stop kissing Kris’’ ass?” is gold. and totally sounds like something she would say. And the screen quickly flashing with Kris’ commands to Noelle accompanied with the cursed sounding static sound while we’re in Susie’s perspective works very well.

[@nicknack5388]

The fact that suzie takes the soul makes this even sader for me. It's not Kris' fault that we the player are controlling them and Noelle (or at least that's what I think happens, who know what tf Kris is up to without their soul). And after Suzie takes their soul, the only thing left in the ice is Kris. They did nothing wrong (or at least I think so). Them being left behind after being used is incredibly sad.

[@elhoodiestudios5039]

I think that in this au Kris is gonna come back to take revenge against the player

[@chococandyplayz]

Ouch I know I would feel betrayed after that

[@starcobra2575]

Kris didnt do anything wrong, theres actually evidence of this. If you sleep or skip to chapter 2 without a save file you can check the automatically created save file and see what kris did.

[@DarktoLight561]

Kris after breaking the ice: IM GONNA STAB THAT SOUL TILL IT SHATTERS

[@Da_realxD]

Actually kris is a maniac, the player is the light side of kris

[@Miju001]

This looks so GOOD??? I can't get over the fact that it's made in PowerPoint, it's amazing. The writing? The sprites? The attacks?? The hint at a sequel at the end??? This is incredible, I love it, it deserves as much attention as it can get

[@red_apowerpointguy]

Thank youuu

[@Miju001]

@@red_apowerpointguy Of course!!

[@glyphicgames7591]

Don’t forget the [B I G S H O T]

[@w.dgaster8587]

@@red_apowerpointguy Hey Red Welcome I have a question: Can I make a playable version of this awesome animation in Scratch?

[@Just_Ants]

Wait, IT WAS MADE IN POWER POINT? IMPRESSIVE!

[@marcelocampos9197]

Maybe the saddest part of the history is that Kris died because of the player, and now can't come back because of them.

[@pingas6429]

Thats Why I Disliked The Video.

[@smashbrosguyt915]

I hate being controlled by a higher being and having my body used for malicious intent as i watch how the higher being abuses the mental state of my friend while eating a banana peel!

[@sexypotato8266]

They are a horrible person even when the player isnt controlling them, its for the best

[@act3819]

@@sexypotato8266 did Toby fox state that?

[@sexypotato8266]

@@act3819 Did you somehow not play the game or missed the part where Kris fucks up Toriels car, runs away at night to open a fountain opens another fucking fountain when Ralsei already had told them to their face everyone was gonna be fucked if they did, ect or....?

[@abox1209]

Q: So now that Kris is free from they're soul, that means they are *sorta* dead, since no soul= no heartbeat which means that Alphys found Kris's and Berdly's bodies in the computer room. Now will Kris be with his *own* will/mind? Since we already know that the soul is keeping from doing what he wants.

[@red_apowerpointguy]

everytime kris takes their soul out of their body they go crazy and since susie took it out when kris was in the dark world i thought it'd make sense to make them alive in that world and apparently dead in the normal one. ill try to fully explain this in the qna video

[@abox1209]

@@red_apowerpointguy *Insert pog gif* POOG Also nice vids btw 😁

[@hshdthemovie]

@@red_apowerpointguy so in this case the soul isn't controlling kris?

[@abox1209]

@@hshdthemovie most probably, yes

[@GigachadHGDYDBHDB]

poor kris finally has peace though. nobody controlling them against their will. lets see can they survive without a soul.

[@amndmirk]

the fact that susie still has the soul means she's the next one to be controlled. that's scary af

[@blockmaster3057]

Not really cuz Susie already has her soul but us the player took control of krises soul and 2 souls in one vessel sounds bad

[@sansberrocha6169]

imagine last boss: noelle ralsei have like 20 max hp ralsei and frisk duo i have no lore but noelle has flashbacks of kris controlling her so she will atack only frisk eventually noelle casts snowgrave and*kills firsk* but frisk comes back and keep talking with noelle and then noelle jumps out of the building bc she cant take it anymore

[@MykeGG]

@@blockmaster3057 flowey with 7 souls:

[@CountDVB]

Not really. Susie seems to have alot more strength of will than Kris had.

[@Thecooldudenoob]

@@CountDVBlike knowing when the playe made a choice to say "choices don't matter" and the fact that it Susie doesn't wanna do it..... Then she will A K W A R D L Y W A L K F A R A W A Y

[@therandoguyo4565]

can we just talk about how this was made in powerpoint? like i feel like someone really experienced can make something this amazing in that,like the animation and the sounds is just perfection,and the story along with it

[@multiversegamer6587]

Wait this is in PowerPoint?!?!

[@therandoguyo4565]

@@multiversegamer6587 yeah look at 14:52

[@SamDeMonic]

Truthfully I ain't surprised I used to do shitty animations on power point That looked passible With someone who knows what they're doing you get this

[@chuckles2364]

In the end, programming isn't complicated when you think of it like this, it's all just a fancy powerpoint in the end. Honestly since powerpoint is so common nowadays, using it as an example of how programming works could really help more kids get into it.

[@therandoguyo4565]

@@chuckles2364 and i agree with this- but it's not going to be everyday you see a animation that truly does looks like the game it's based off of

[@rapidsloth5654]

4:21 Kris: (says absolutely nothing at all, for almost the entire video) Noelle: yeah you make sence

[@Megamat695]

Kris : … Shakespeare and Noelle : *Claps* You make sense

[@quqgaming]

Kris during the fight: *Casually invents new spells.*

[@AlternativeShae]

"Random bullshit, go!"

[@multiversegamer6587]

This is chapter 979364593739264948. Of course there are new spells

[@thutgf]

@@multiversegamer6587 I thought it was chapter 12345678912345678910 🤔

[@jodibosh7518]

@@AlternativeShae Y E S

[@LeivenFrestea]

@@multiversegamer6587 no it was chapter 219388189301e01039199917288, you were mistaken

[@mauro27279]

11:40 Ralsei: "..Noelle what the fuck?"

[@certified_dumb24]

I absolutely LOVE THE FACT how in the beginning Susie looks like if she was talking to the player, + her walking towards us which makes it more menacing, but then she’s just getting out of the door.

[@lasagna3289]

This is a surprisingly good ending! Kris is free, Ralsei is fine-ish, Spamton got to live and he was absolutely hilarious, Susie and Noelle are friends... Unfortunately eventually Noelle will have to find out. Oh and Berdly is dead, that's kind of a big deal. The writing here is way better than a lot of AUs like this which are often overly edgy and completely out of character. There's still lines that I think feel out of place but I mean that's just my opinion out of 831. It all feels very Toby. EDIT: I seem to have neglected the important detail that gamers don't die, they respawn, so Berdly's fine. Oh also Queen died I guess EDIT 2: Wait POWERPOINT???

[@Themanwhosnortstheglue]

Me saying something as spamton: KRIS WHAT THE [£#$€]

[@maxcraftobjectssituated5519]

Queen didn’t die, she only powered down, the dark world is, as shown, cold enough to maintain ice for a long time meaning queen will be unfrozen in about 1-4 years

[@b.a.r.f1004]

except the fact that the player would come back until eventually win

[@iamgamus]

What do you mean by berdly diying being a big deal? Thats just NOICE

[@Mentallyheld]

you know kris's relationships are ruined now due to them thinking this ARE his actions

[@heroflame608]

Hey man this really good. The dialogue is a bit out of place for deltarune but other than that, it was fun to watch. I do hope we get a sequel of some sort because there are a few unanswered questions left.

[@aresrivera9744]

Yeah I can agree with that

[@CherObv]

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[@erinsneedham]

@@CherObv Bild

[@alochuz1962]

Image

[@undertalefan_4life420]

@@aresrivera9744 hey does anyone know what music they used for When Kris Forces Noelle to use SnowGrave again?

[@chuckles2364]

This feels like it devolved into a fanfic fever dream, Spamton being the peak of that. I think all your ideas were good, just the pacing felt a bit rushed. But, I also don't think anyone would realistically expect you to squeeze multiple chapters worth of development into a single video, given I'm sure that's how long it'd take Susie to turn on Kris.

[@turca7461]

Honestly I think it would be a bit slower, but the video does a stellar job at explaining the reasoning even if it was a bit rushed, Noelle, before really anyone else, was nice to Susie (And everyone else), Susie saw her using strong Ice magic, and she explained it in semi-detail, so Susie, knowing more about Noelle than Kris, And knowing that she wouldn't lie about something like that, believed her first, I do think Susie should've been at least a bit saddened by this, as before this she saw them as a genuine friend.

[@TheKaijuKing54]

One thing I found a little “off” is how quickly Susie was to turn against Kris But other than that, this is cool!

[@alteranimations270]

Maybe because she knew about the soul and the killing spree the player did

[@cyanideytcuriousseadoggo]

Susie was only obeying the player after the prison scene in chapter one by their own choice. So it makes sense from context by Susie would go back on that choice in the animation.

[@vibeboi7927]

Also do keep in mind she's only known kris properly for a day

[@chococandyplayz]

Yeah that really disappointed me on how they didn't even ask what was Kris doing but hey, this is still amazing

[@IloveStarr]

@@alteranimations270 susie and ralsei has literally 0 problems helping kris just Slaughter absolutely everything, susie outright just wants to beat up everything not to mention, and not saying susie is a killer or anything, far from it, she wouldn't ever want to kill anyone, especially kris, and not after hearing like 1 bad thing that could be a small possibility, infact id bet she would be on kriss side moreso than noelle

[@Magi_H2U]

3:36 This was a pretty creative concept you added in this animation here b/c I can easily expect Toby to add something like this for Noelle after remembering what Catti mentioned about her since it almost sounds closely like subtle foreshadowing here: "But lately. She slips...Into the darkness."

[@forrest6939]

i think catti was her talking about noelle crushing on susie

[@Magi_H2U]

@@forrest6939 Also that too in a way.

[@dragonstarbark1471]

Spelling needs small inprovements, otherwise this is animated gold, and the fact it was done in PowerPoint? Insane.

[@CrimsomGloryXD]

I'm pretty sure that "inprovements" is with a M instead a N

[@asdsasds7106]

if somebody told me it was made in powerpoint i would say that they are lying

[@kuish7133]

@Bialy That’s all I need

[@redactedredacted1860]

Yes!

[@averagegenzguy2751]

@@asdsasds7106 damn this literally insane for PowerPoint what the hell

[@nocaps2763]

It’s kinda depressing how the soul, the thing controlling Noelle during this route, gets away with the crimes, while pinning them all on Kris

[@bugonboris6681]

IKR? The Soul (AKA THE PLAYER!) is the real villain! Poor Kris! : (

[@dcx_6412]

@@bugonboris6681 but with sheer determination, I'll break free again, I'll come back for kris

[@Tramon81]

Powerpoint Merit Points aside. This is really good, there is such emotion behind the dialogue. It can be a bit off at times but cannot in good mind discualify the intensity and execution of Susie's wrath and how you could literally feel how betrayed she felt at every moment.

[@bobtheanimator8353]

My initial reaction near the end was "ok. They stopped the player but it took Kris' life." *Susie pulls out the soul* "SUSIE NO DON'T FREE THE PLAYER"

[@ЕрсұлтанЖеңіс]

Don't worry player now is just a soul who can't do anything now because he originally can control only kris because he is a playable while Susie is not a playable so player can't get control on her for the continue a genocide

[@kokwaikan1506]

i have a feeling that voice at the start of the game that lets you choose the appearance of kris is gonna like, help you, the player, come back or smth

[@noahthesk]

@@ЕрсұлтанЖеңіс incorrect the player can still control and move around the soul and this was confirmed at the end of chapter 1 sure we don’t have a vessel but we can sure as hell find one

[@DARS_04]

Other than the not so proofread script, this is cool. The Grammatical hiccups are small, but noticeable (speaking from a non-native english speaker perspective) the spacing in the dialogue needs to be reworked BUT THIS WAS MADE IN POWER POINT? Addendum: Excesive swearing on Susie's end.

[@NightDwella1]

Lol I really love this au because technically the player isn’t able to reset because they’re still alive in Susie’s pocket and they don’t have a save point.

[@aki_know]

OMFG THIS WAS AMAZING AS HELL YOU DID A GOOD JOB WITH THIS, I LOVE EVERYTHING!! THE STORY THE DRAMA THE ROMANCE THE TRAGIC THE FLASHBACK ABOUT NOELLE LENDING HER PENCIL TO SUSIE AHHH THIS IS GORGEOUS AND THE FACT THAT YOU MAKE THIS IN POWERPOINT IS INSANE GREAT JOB!!

[@red_apowerpointguy]

_THANK YOUUUU_

[@matthewroyer1561]

@@red_apowerpointguy no thank YOU FOR BEING SUCH A LESBIAN YOU LITTLE IFRIT!

[@pizzapower8]

@@matthewroyer1561 smh why r u assuming that?

[@sussus1146]

"Drama, Romance, BLOODSHED!"

[@Flowey.The.Flower]

This whole paragraph screams Mettaton.

[@its_clover2]

ok, but the fact that at 12:07, kris was just like: FUCK YEAH, I'M FREE!

[@finnvaneekelen4966]

Okay the use of leitmotifs here is amazing. So far i can hear lost girl/girl next door and berdly hearbteat battle in the battle theme

[@alan07yt]

The 14:11 "WHAT'S WRONG MY [LITTLE FEMBOY]" caught me off guard lmao so clever😂

[@squib9463]

plot twist kris is a gamer and gamers don't die they respawn

[@romaplay630]

True ending:

[@VeryGruh]

@@romaplay630 Kris comes back from the dead

[@VeryGruh]

@@romaplay630 and got revenge on them

[@sussus1146]

I was on his twitch streams i can confirm

[@a_random_dude_lmao]

Gamers never dies

[@ashleyseward8673]

2:10 my favorite part. I can't believe that Kris "waked" away. Didn't know that someone could wake up away. Truly heart touching.

[@ashleyseward8673]

4:03 I think Noelle is strong "enogh"

[@ashleyseward8673]

12:42 Noelle really didn't remeber. She forgor.

[@joeypickering5273]

@@ashleyseward8673yeah, that was the craziest plot twist.

[@supernecoarc6768]

14:35 Spamton now has a new friend :)

[@Disassembly_droneN_]

Finally one of these where I don't DIE.

[@This_Guy_Exists]

SOOOO, YOU'RE TELLING ME THAT [Masterpiece] WAS MADE IN [PowerPoint] ? [Holy Cungadero], THATS JUST [Impressive] ! Really, you deserve a sub for this.

[@This_Guy_Exists]

Also, A Quick question: Was Kris controlled by Red Soul or he was like that by himself?

[@RyanNeoHedgehogOfficial]

@@This_Guy_Exists The soul, represents the player, without a soul, Kris will be in control of their own. Kris rips off their soul (the player) so that we can't interfere with what they're about to do.

[@This_Guy_Exists]

@@RyanNeoHedgehogOfficial ok thx

[@villam-remixes4eva946]

STOP TRYING TO [[Impressions]] ME YOU [[Little sponge]]!!!!

[@shapeshifter16]

HECK YEAH THAT'S SO [hyperlink blocked] BEAUTIFUL

[@GFCOLCQuote]

I would love to see, if this continues, where the soul starts to influence Suzie And then she starts to realize that it wasn't Kris at all, but the soul inside of them influencing them.

[@PlantLollmao]

Finally, a wholesome fan-made genocide ending. Edit: Was gonna edit to correct myself but this is a funny as hell statement.

[@skell6134]

Welp,when you kill everyone and then kill youself basically,yeah,pretty much

[@SourZoder]

*innocent kids soul gets ripped out despite them having no control* yeah. *wholesome*

[@PlantLollmao]

@@SourZoder No like, I mean a good ending.

[@SourZoder]

@@PlantLollmao still kinda sucks. kris can’t control themself and gets murdered because of it

[@link_team3855]

... Actually i'd argue this is comparable to glitchtale in that sense lol.

[@alexknj1]

Wow, that was really well done! The lore gremlin in me is kinda disappointed that the role of the player was sidelined to put the blame on Kris, but I'm otherwise it was a really cool project!

[@jaythatfangirl1857]

This is amazing! Thank you for crediting me Red! I'm proud of the works you do and how far you got with this animation!

[@red_apowerpointguy]

thanks jay!

[@EpicGamer_SansheeFreddy]

5:15 *I like the idea of choosing the attack while the “enemies” try to avoid the attacks.*

[@someonexd835]

POWERPOINT THIS MAN DESERVES AN OSCAR (i just heard its a trophy)

[@red_apowerpointguy]

_its also an ice cream_

[@someonexd835]

@@red_apowerpointguy _hm yes_

[@dylanbouffard5437]

Kris was never the one in control. it was all the player doing this. but that's even worse... because Susie thinks that kris is a monster now, but it was just the player.

[@grumpy5131]

This is amazing!! Well done! I think, the only thing is- Susie turns on Kris and abandons them very quickly, in my opinion. In game they're obviously best friends, and have a bond that Susie probably wouldn't immediately break even if Kris did something awful. She'd talk to them and find out why they're doing this. She wouldn't not only attempt to kill them, but also disregard their death. However, for a story's sake it does work and I understand why lol. Again, thank you! Amazing workk

[@aresrivera9744]

That’s exactly how I felt. Since Susie honestly just views noelle as a friend nothing more. And Kris was like her second friend and he’s probably almost as close as lancer . Like Susie is always the one worrying about Kris . It felt more like a fan reacting instead of Susie. Not that it’s bad I’m just saying

[@grumpy5131]

@@aresrivera9744 I would say Kris is closer to Susie than even Lancer- the thing that binds them both is the fact they're the only ones who actually "know" aout the dark world. They've gone on a genuine journey together- from Bully to best friend and Susie would never want to break that. They've fought together, saved each other, and from what we know Kris cares so much for her as well.

[@aresrivera9744]

@@grumpy5131 yeah so I don’t think she will just try to kill him because of what Noel said. Especially since she’s not like undyne Who has a strong sense of justice. In fact that she more leans towards being a scoundrel so she would have a less intense reaction if she even found out the truth.

[@channelname367]

She needs to really calm him down.

[@T_Dude]

There're tonal issues, obviously. But considering how well done the fight was, alongside the sprites, I think it more than makes up for it. Phenomenal animation.

[@WakaWakaBeyaich_Reborn69]

bro player is gonna be FURIOUS, im telling you. Someone is about to get some Exp.

[@javierbucket7774]

That's it, I'm gonna say it. That soul is a danger to us all. Tha fact that it's now free is even more terrifying. The player can move without a body, which means it could go after Noelle and convinced her to absorb them. If that happens....

[@RomaKING2006]

I don't think that the Kris s soul is reason why weird route happened i think Kris did it on his OWN Which means that Susie shouldn't have took their soul.

[@javierbucket7774]

@@RomaKING2006 no because during the fight with birdly, if kris faints in battle noelle will say "i still hear that menacing voice" signifying that it isn't kris

[@RomaKING2006]

@@javierbucket7774 oh you are right but u forgot about chapter 1 and 2 endings where kris throws his soul away and gets free from player this means only one thing there is second puppeteer other than player

[@javierbucket7774]

@@RomaKING2006 that is true, it could be just kris for all we know. We don't have enough evidence to make a conclusion

[@akemi1728]

@@RomaKING2006 Kris throws "their" soul and then eats that pie. Kris is a weird kid, but he isn't evil.

[@NOno-jl3uv]

13:59 spin

[@SPAMTON249]

spin

[@earthykid172]

13:48 this part give me a huge smile

[@imamercling]

Me To

[@157OneFiveSeven]

I hope you see this comment: The writing and story may not be great, but the animation including the attacks is really good! As for the criticism of the story and writing, it not just requires spelling improvement and perhaps reducing the excessive use of strong words, but there are plot holes like unbelievable character choices and illogical plot developments...also the scapegoat Kris weighs on their back. For example; Spamton, the one who invades the Queen's mansion after fully completing the snowgrave route, does not stop the lightners from sealing the fountain who will "ruin the rise to glory", as he does to Kris. Rather, he uh, forgets about his thirst for power and perhaps his yearning for freedom, but he doesn't talk about that one in the genocide route. As for Kris. They, despite the existence of the anomaly (or the player) who was controlling the two characters and leading them to the genocide route, get to become the scapegoat in this animation. Susie immediately forgets everything about them and aims to terminate them, rather than question the change of their nature and/or attempt to snap them out of this. Same for Ralsei after being convinced by Susie. He does not mind the 'death' of Kris, nor the severity of the prophecy. I hope you find the criticisms helpful and keep them in mind. Thank you!

[@noncloud8965]

Watch out for the Drip jumpscare, that jumpscare give me nightmares on my FNAF run.

[@TheAdvertisement]

Dude holy shit this animation is awesome- you've earned a sub. Everything is so smooth, Noelle's expressions and emotionless sprites are awesome, and all the detail! Susie getting so pissed off she uses not only a Rude Buster but a Red Buster on Kris, Noelle's ice shield, Kris's "proceed" covering the screen to overwhelm Noelle, and in between each flash Susie's getting up and preparing to attack, Ralsei being caught between Kris and Susie not wanting to give up on them, Kris directing Noelle with each attack, Susie's shaking fist in rage, Noelle's blushing sprite in the flashback, Kris trying Snowgrave as a last desperate move, and Lancer falling out of their pocket as it backfires... All of it is so well put together, adding on to an amazing idea. Wonderful job! wait wait wait you made this with POWERPOINT!?

[@matiasalonso7879]

Great animation I liked it! I remember seeing the teaser for it and was very hyped for it and I gotta say it didn't disappoint.

[@youtubebobguy]

I LOVE how in this one it isn't just another animation where Kris is the one winning the battle with justice not being served. I get why they had to win but still. This feels better.

[@droycon]

Yeah no… Susie wouldn’t just immediately think Kris is a murderer once being told.. like it took zero convincing Edit: Also.. In Deltarune Noelle acts like she forgot what happened did not actually happen (The murders) but here she talks about it openly .

[@bork6996]

this dude really just made an entire fucking movie quality animation in powerpoint respect

[@remukko5178]

I think this is really solid! I honestly wanna see a followup to this whenever people know what C3 has, this is an interesting route!

[@lidijababec5395]

9:43 wow, that was really *cold blooded* eh? was that a good pun?

[@thecamilocho4946]

Okey many people have already said this but,this is really cool!The plot i think is good,the animation is also incredible great!The sprite work is really amazing and look very similar to toby's and temmie's style.I overall like very much this animation :D

[@Wolfox12335]

8:51 kris deja de protegerse y agacha la cara probablemente el fue quien ordeno a Noelle que lo congelara y no el jugador

[@kibbeh]

this is really well-made, great work! everything being done in powerpoint is super impressive, I'd love to see some of your process in making this if you're willing to share (no pressure though ofc)

[@cursedhfy3558]

One thing I kinda wish is that kris repeated snowgrave while downed, like how the berdly fight went. But at the same time it's probably part of the tragedy that the lancer fan club never realized that kris wasn't in control.

[@adrianfernandezroyano200]

I like the idea of Noelle freezing Kris instead of Susie, and Spamton living in the castletown

[@danolantern6030]

Bro really pumped out one of the absolute best Deltarune animations i've ever seen with god damn Powerpoint.

[@ItsME_Blueberry]

Ayo the animation and the music here is really good Props to the people working on this

[@red_apowerpointguy]

_including you_

[@This_Guy_Exists]

*insert Obama giving an award to himself meme here*

[@DramaBoy690]

This feels like the canon snowgrave ending. Berdly still dies, but so does kris, leaving us with an ending that is sad, but you kinda feel glad its happening. Good job 👏

[@maila319]

You sure Kris is evil here or is it the player's doing?

[@miniiguy2480]

This sadly doesn’t feel like a true deltarune snowgrave route because I think that genocide should have a bad ending and I definitely think that spamton would have actually fought susie and ralsei because of the deal he had with kris and also the imptortance of the human soul. Anyways the animation was actually really well made even though it was in PowerPoint.

[@cedrolenon]

Exactly

[@mnyehg]

Now I'm thinking of the spooky sequel where Susie finds the soul has gone missing and Kris is still alive (and acting really weird). How would Susie react? Would she tell Kris? If Kris found out, how would they react? What if the soul used Berdly as a temporary vessel?? What would happen????

[@Average_PlayerFromRBX]

lancer and spamton really sound like good duo if we add sans to it then boom perfect trio

[@liarprincessxblindprinceni7067]

don't forget jevil

[@Pokenite_Animations]

4:02 Enogh typo lol BTW BEST ANIMATION EVER MADE BRO

[@henri.K11]

This timeline is amazing! Susie gets to hang out with Noelle, my salesman went to the dark world and THAT ANIMATION WAS FREAKING AWESOME!!!! still a pity that it's a snowgrave timeline tho but "Kris" got sealed on the dark world so that's cool.... But I think he's getting out...

[@TheSecondKidNamedFinger]

Dude, you got to make more of these, the details, the storytelling, everything. Really amazing 🤩

[@nerdycookiebunny856]

10:49 SUSIE NO YOU CAN'T DO THAT THAT WAS A DIRE SITUATION! YOU SHOULD HAVE TOLD HER THE TRUTH..but then again if Noelle knew she Actually killed two people she would be broken..and possibly depressed

[@Megamat695]

Noelle in the light world : Kris, I had a bad dream (Kris doesn’t seem to be awake)

[@magicnomaly_purplespadestudios]

Love this alot actually!! Some things put me off but boy THE ANIMATION! i love the sprites constantly changing and reacting to things, even the smallest bits have sprite changes its great! Susie felt kinda ooc, but this was good! Like the way noelle acted and reacted as well, neat writing. ESPECIALLY with her mentioning berdly then doing tornado attacks, good touch of sadness.

[@guestodagamer6092]

Question: First, Im just saying this is FUCKING AMAZING. And now for the question. Since Kris is finally free, why didn’t he wake up in the library? He did break out of the ice didn’t he? And will there be a part 2?

[@red_apowerpointguy]

there will probably be a part to but I dont want to ruin any surprise

[@guestodagamer6092]

nice

[@skell6134]

@@guestodagamer6092 Dude,Kris literally snowgraved,its not like he can wake up at this point +he die anyway because no soul

[@IdkDiegoiguess]

@@skell6134 have you played chapter 1, and did you actually see that part of the animation, kris can survive without a soul, or at least be conscious, thats confirmed, and uhhhh, he woke up in the dark world, and heavily implied he was alive, why wouldnt he wake up

[@skell6134]

@@IdkDiegoiguess 1.Thanks answering to 2 montha ago comment 2.Kris definitely will stay here without soul for a VERY long time and its not like he can stay alive without soul for too long

[@labyless]

I just don't like that Susie just tried to kill Kris with no explanation, the animation is sick. Also that Ralsei didnt try to stop Susie, considering how he actually is.

[@testerwulf3357]

I mean he did try to talk to her, he's a bit of a pushover and he wouldn't physically stop her

[@tradesminator]

This is so well done. The fact that this is made in powerpoint makes this even more epic xd.

[@bob-uv3ls]

My God this was so GOOD, I can't believe this was made on PowerPoint! Truly amazing

[@flagonking1337]

Out of curiosity, the official Deltarune site's bug list has a bug listed as "I see two souls, one I control." The way it's answered makes me wonder if that res soul is less a soul, more a device that we use to control. So does Kris have another soul besides the red one?

[@red_apowerpointguy]

_actually i have no idea_

[@LightSoul-8]

Maybe the soul they can't control is Susie's, after all, for the majority of chapter 1, you couldn't control Susie at all.

[@Cruxin]

"The way it's answered" he says blatantly and clearly it's a glitch lol, you people will latch onto anything

[@cloverlovania]

@@Cruxin it's funny because in the bug report, he makes fun of the people who would think it's a theory "Q: Does that mean there's two souls!? Or that--" "A: No. It's a glitch."

[@Cruxin]

@@cloverlovania yeah seriously

[@typhondst3363]

I suppose it makes sense that Spamton wouldn't fight Susie when she goes to close the fountain. In Neutral he gets knocked away by just one Rude Buster, and even with his Bluelight Special, he takes over 700 damage from Noelle's Iceshock. The only reason he fights Kris at the end of Snowgrave is because he knows they're alone and can't use magic themselves, putting him at a huge advantage since he can just stall if he can't outright kill Kris. With Susie however, he wouldn't stand much of a chance thanks to her higher Atk and use of magic.

[@QSBraWQ]

Doesn't magic outright ignore defense and that's why blue light special didn't help? Also because nolle probably got some exp from The Kill. Next, if spamton actually knows about save/load and if it's important to Deltarune at all, then he would actually have advatange compared to fighting kris

[@QSBraWQ]

also im pretty sure we fought spamton with susie in the basement, and spamton needed about 10 of the busters to do SPAMTON EX transformaton. Also I don't know if exhausted Noelle can still do good magic

[@xangelxal4855]

I like it, but... Even though it looks happy, It doesn't make me forget the fact Kris was simply a puppet. Without any control of their actions. And now, they have to pay the price of the things the soul made them to make. Hopefully we get a second part to this. Because idk... This doesn't feel like a good ending...

[@benbarlow9469]

I don’t think it’s meant to have a good ending. What the player did caused actions to change with certain characters. None of the characters had the knowledge that kris wasn’t the one who was doing this. And thus they thought that KRIS was doing this (even tho it wasn’t) and they took KRIS’s soul (which his souls location is unknown) But now kris won’t be able to get his soul back.

[@cedrolenon]

@@benbarlow9469 what about Noelle hearing a other voice when we command her During the Snowgrave route, other than this I feel like susie going for the attack and not questioning why Kris is doing this is dumb

[@RyderBurns-ko3eo]

I don't think it's supposed to have a good ending because ralsei will never forget about the death of kris not to mention what will happen to Susie if toriel finds out about the death of kris...

[@redspartan0614]

I would be lying if I said I didn’t expect Defrosted Berdly to show up, but otherwise, this is awesome dude!

[@imlivinginyourwalls9413]

Really good animation and the fight too was incredible well animated.

[@dragoncraft618]

I can't believe that you made this in PowerPoint! It looks so good. Nice job!

[@interstellarnuggo]

DAMN THAT ANIMATION SLAPPED. Incredible job, Red_A! The [[Effects]] and [[Animation]] are almost identical to the [[Hyperlink Blocked.]]

[@charayourownname.dreemurr646]

* "You" are now Susie. * The power of a new vessel shines within you. * (But now you are not Kris.) * (I can be them again.)

[@LeozinCarro]

HOLY SHIT THIS ANIMATION IS SO GOOD

[@glucosehandle]

7:19 kris really said shut the hell up

[@K1ttyGam3r]

Aside from some of the spelling errors, this is freaking amazing!! One could say it’s… _cool._ I’m so sorry

[@lookitsnote1683]

WHAT’S WRONG MY [Little Femboy]? Is the best line in this entire thing

[@watermelon5521]

14:09 Bro... 💀

[@BoochooVlog]

💀 wow

[@meloncholicc]

7:44 i was screaming at ralsei there "ITS BLUE DONT MOVE YOU FUCKING MUPPET RALSEEIII"

[@RyderBurns-ko3eo]

But in the entire Deltarune game ralsei never mentioned about blue attacks so it would be obvious that he wouldn't know

[@epgchannel]

Oh my god, I beg you PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL! Just the pure fact that ALL OF THIS was made in PowerPoint blows my mind! The animation, the story, the sprites, G A H IT’S SO COOL! If the sequel releases I wanna be the FIRST to watch it!

[@ToxicServalFox]

Thus is made on power point- what- that's amazing

[@goldnewofl76]

The sad thing about this is that kris had no control meaning they technically just killed their best friend that enjoyed their company

[@Redhead714]

You made this so well! Not only did you actually play threw the game to know that Kris doesn't need a soul to be alive BUT you made the perfect expressions for each character! Round up a claw a paw and a hand for this Chad.

[@friskdreemurrboy1404]

Question: On this AU/Alternate Timeline, did Kris do all of this willingly or was it the Player or another entity that controls the soul? If it's the second answer, how is the soul gonna affect Susie, and is Kris going to be able to do anything without this soul?

[@link_team3855]

Well. seems like kris can do stuff on his own without the soul anyway seeings how he got out the ice on his own... Which is kinda odd, i thought snowgrave was 100% fatal? guess he was never alive lol

[@friskdreemurrboy1404]

@@link_team3855 Sounds like a good theory, at least on this AU I just don't want another "Kris did the Snowgrave Route, not the Player!" thing

[@chococandyplayz]

My theory is it's the player and we're. Only spectating right now

[@krisspychissp]

This is so good. but it makes me curious of what a bad ending for this would be like. Idk for some reason I love stories where the villain wins. Idk why

[@MrAhmed-jh3wm]

do we have to say the fact that it was the spamton who sold the [thorn ring]? Or should we not grieve the goat prince?

[@red_apowerpointguy]

dont worry everything will come together in the second "chapter"...? "act"? well I think you understood

[@MrAhmed-jh3wm]

@@red_apowerpointguy ok. Awesome video

[@atlasguytinyproductions55]

The intro is actually pretty f’ing cool. It feels almost accurate, I love it!!

[@xangelxal4855]

I have a question: Why after Kris is frozen and their soul ripped out, everyone forgets they exists? Like. Susie and Noelle start flirting out of nowhere while Kris is frozen solid Even Ralsei doesn't look like concerned.

[@Wack910]

Plot.

[@Wack910]

They are like disney characters after the villain dies in a horrifying death

[@real-lacey]

Noelle doesn't really notice Berdly's corpse either, so in that regard it adds up.

[@edanshei1585]

i like how toby did the only game, where you hate not yourself, but even a faceless character you control...

[@sirsins9598]

* SO WAIT, THOSE [Scammers] DOWN AT THE [Fine Dining] THREW YOU INTO THE [Recycling]??? * Yes! Mama Miba, you should've seen how distasteful they were about it. Cake goes well with tea, right? * WE GOT EVERYTHING [Amazon Delivery] IN CYBER CITY, AND THE QUEEN [Software Uninstalled] THE ABILITY TO RATE ANYTHING BESIDES [Her], SO I WOULDN'T REALLY KNOW. * Well then, your city must have poor standards. * [#';l;] YEAH THEY DID! EVERYTHING WENT TO [Mainstream] GARBAGE AFTER THEY KICKED ME OUTTA THE [Hot Seat]. * Hey! Puppet Guy! Ralsei's trying to make more cakes in his castle to inflate the cake market! Your cakes are gonna lose their value! I would be concerned if I knew what any of that meant! * WHAT?!? THAT [Precious Goat Boy] MAY HAVE GIVEN ME A VACATION STRAIGHT TO [Heaven], BUT I WON'T LET HIM CRASH MY $ALES! YOU KNOW THE GIST, KID! * Right! Throw more bikes through the window so he can't get from the cauldron to the kitchen! * ATTA BOY! * Mama Miba, things in Castle Town aren't that expensive, you know. * NOT TILL I BECOME A [Big Shot] THEY AREN'T!

[@titansmashproductions5001]

Well looks like Kris is free in this one. But his body is quite brain dead until he gets back. Man lots of cool interpretations of this stuff.