[FULL STORY] I Suspect My Fiancé of Cheating With My Best Friend So I Make a Plan and...

[@dvdm7525]

Unnecessary prolonging of a story. If you don't have details to fill the story with, keep the video short. Repeating the same sentence, 10 different ways is annoying

[@devhxh1558]

Its written with AI ofc its poetic

[@shells500tutubo]

All of these AI stories are like this. Five minutes of story, fifteen minutes of filler.

[@lianadelaney8699]

And the dramatic reading like it’s Shakespeare and not Reddit 😂

[@MonkIsBestScug]

God- It's so unnecessarily detailed that it sounds like AI

[@cornbread12987]

Creative writing bull

[@FutureNaught]

had me going until the "icy tiles matching the atmosphere"

[@MiaMaraa]

Not that creative 😌

[@jellyplaze2973]

totally creative writing good lord

[@mattappl3119]

100%, but it's good creative writing

[@lyraflow9154]

​@@mattappl3119 no

[@storyteller5557]

Why does the volume keep changing in your videos?

[@storyteller5557]

Its mostly inaudible 👎

[@Osxchaos]

Seriously, I’m wearing headphones and still straining to hear, then boom full volume.

[@derokdeathaxe6984]

@@Osxchaos i agree

[@tweetsypeasy]

I feel like even with creative writting,they can give us a damn update.

[@bellybolaporgie2359]

I don’t even care whether or not the story is real or fake, hearing that person tell the story annoyed the shit out of me

[@kgomotsosekonya9435]

Pretty crappy creative writing exercise

[@Obironnkenobi]

I apparently missed how her pretending to be pregnant is going to somehow prove that her Fiance' is having an affair with her friend. All that proved is that he and her friend were on speaking terms, which OP knew.

[@daniellemitchell3118]

She told her best friend since high school NOT to tell the OP's fiance. THAT was the test. To see if she was more loyal to her or more loyal to the fiance. She got her answer.

[@NourAmsterdam]

And not only did she discover his cheating but also him being infertil. Which is a big deal to keep secret. Listen to the end like wth

[@AverageReader._.]

Girl could've just set up some cameras

[@brianawhittaker8152]

She really could've but she became very strategic lol. Idk how she stayed composed for so long bc I feel like most ppl their emotions would get the best of them and they would just go off and accuse them. She held it together pretty well for someone in her position.

[@_PurpleScent]

100% just a highschool essay

[@Tapps.the.nobody]

OP is 100% some kind of writer

[@kishorkumarpoddar3757]

I don't if it's real or not but I want to know what happens next. I want her to be happy and his ex fiance to suffer Please make an update ❤❤

[@darciemcdonald8609]

The volume change and the fact that it seems like the author appears to be trying to win a creative writing competition makes this story annoying.

[@delbertjohnson6218]

Damn you put people in a awkward position asking to keep secrets

[@chips2935]

Guys please stop hating if it is real, then they put together posts from someone else’s posts and took time to put it to a video and if it is fake they made a good story. Stop posting hate comments

[@Mystery_luvv]

At this point, idk if this is fake, or real :’)

[@peppermintie]

it’s probably fake

[@wendyboothman294]

Fiction like this used to be in women’s magazines years ago but now the writers have a new outlet.

[@markhunter9264]

Unnecessarily complicated strategy. Just got to pretend like you know everything. Eventually, people crack…

[@NourAmsterdam]

Idc if it’s fake I’m enjoying the drama and suspense lol. Also John is a complete hypocrite.

[@Meggsie]

Lol I appreciate that someone was practicing their creative writing but they used every single cliche in purple prose

[@e-s-c3493]

You know it’s fake when there’s quotes and unnecessary details

[@veerzmeerz]

Bro this is a good fiction story

[@moxee33]

Please stop using fake stories. Are there not enough real ones posted eaxh day? 🙄

[@mevan883]

Some of the fake stories are better then the real stories. Cause the fake stories justice is usually granted.

[@lyraflow9154]

Sheesh well that was annoying listening to

[@joshuacodes8693]

i dont understand. she said the years of marraige, then all of a sudden "i cant marry you" .

[@radish6740]

The whispering fluctuations are annoying.

[@shrutiK12312]

Creative writing assignment :D

[@yosairacuevas2484]

Bro there is WAY to many details and also your repeating sentences and beating around the bush and yapping and not getting to the point

[@denilla8034]

"I'll love you forever PHILIP J. FRY"

[@ImmerGenau2624]

This is the stupidest waste of a story. I can’t even. So ridiculous. And the cadence of the speech is all wrong and it’s the worst. Like actually nauseating. I keep trying to give this channel a chance but the choice of stories and the editing just don’t work.

[@oneuup2490]

All I'm hearing is about her feelings. If you actually pay attention to this story, only five minutes of it was directly about the actual story line. Whoever wrote this did a poor job. You need to actually go back to if you went to college your essay on thesis that you write. Take a page out of those books. Because if this was an actual college paper you would have gotten an f. And if you are looking to inquire about a job maybe writing books or short stories. I would say to stick to your day job, and I hope this isn't it.

[@James-pw1kn]

It is fake if they describe it to much

[@HammerdWalrus]

The random lowering of the audio is so god damn annoying.

[@red-k3305]

Bro wrote a whole novel

[@cheslynkuster5002]

Why would you go along with the lie?

[@pretzelicious4200]

How fake, nobody uses so many metaphors xd lol but good entertainment

[@albertgongora6944]

Play the only one that wants to bed 50 bucks that John had a bunch of walking red flags all over him let's say if this story was real but the poster just decided to ignore every one of them

[@BabalonNuit]

Gaw-damn what a load of rambly BS.

[@djipcdelta9641]

Problem whis the audio, sometime wery low

[@tlachinolli-e5t]

What's wrong with the volume? U might check it out

[@LouiseChib]

When a story starts to get too... narrative and too much story telling like describing "the apply falling off the table" blah blah blah... then it's fake and ai

[@MikeHansen-mh8pf]

Well, small sound problems?

[@devhxh1558]

Nice AI story.

[@noishi4658]

It was a novel. So annoying😊

[@hotdealer63]

This is crap.

[@Nuke_Wizard]

Holly yappachino

[@ly_g1ann1]

7:36

[@BeFreedomBusy-ub7mb]

???

[@MILTONMAXIMUS]

first comment plz pin

[@isaacbishow]

shut up pin beggars, if you're gonna comment, comment something abt the video