Galactic Council Laughed At The Human Relic Warship, Until It Roared To Life! | HFY Sci-Fi Story

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[@FeralPreacher]

So what is the meaning of to constant shifting between Speaker and Spiker? Is the Council Speaker actually named Spiker? Quite confusing if you are listening closely. And what is the outcome of the investigation? Do the officials get caught and punished? Will there be a part two to this story? The middle part of the story also seems to be missing. Good partial story that needs work.

[@geofthompson3844]

This would have been great if the middle of the story wasn't missing 😂. It's like you built up the story that should have led to the infiltration and the two allies going to the base but then didn't actually tell that part and instead jumped straight to the conclusion wtf 🙄 I

[@irvinschwantes1052]

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[@robertnelson2720]

Almost all your stories don't have a proper closure. This is irritating because the stories are good except the endings.