PLEASE, Don't Unleash Human Battleships Into This War!

[@onpatrol819]

I'll take a small fleet to help. But then the AI got confused and it turned into our entire fleet. Pretty dumb

[@Realitygetreal]

Totally agree this was interesting until all of the sudden a "Cradle world" had No Home guard, no planetary defense... some people cannot write... SUCKS

[@shealstewart5381]

Logan, "I will take *_a battle group, not a full deployment,_* *A SMALL FORCE,* to assess the threat." *Where are* *_rest_* *of Earth's BATTLE GROUPS and Logon's BATTLE GROUP?*

[@mystikmind2005]

Yep, huge plot hole... also, the entire galaxy is supposedly terrified of Human battleships.... just imagine how many battleships you would need to make the entire galaxy terrified? It would not be F-ing three. The only way to salvage the story from this plot hole is if Earth gov secretly knew about the crax, and sacrificed Earth and the main characters fleet in order to launch a massive surprise strike against the Crax home system while this was going on..... but the story does not even allow this to work really since neither the main character or the Crax are concerned about the whereabouts of Earths main fleets.... not even commenting on the huge amount of destroyed ships and debris that should be around Earth, OR how so many Earth ships got destroyed in the same amount of time it took for the main Characters fleet to have its skirmish and return to Earth.... even if the Crax magically had perfect timing to strike Earth the second the main characters fleet headed off, it is a staggering stretch that no other human ships were still fighting when the main characters fleet returned given the short amount of time that has transpired. The story is quite good but these plot holes destroy it, quite comprehensively.

[@9999plato]

@@mystikmind2005 Gee where was the American fleet at Pearl Harbor? There are many reasons that the fleet could not stop these adversaries. They did not say that the fleet has already been destroyed waiting in a low state of preparedness and with a minimal crew on station when the crinn appeared many ships were unable to fully raise their defenses and even if they had the onslaught would have overwhelmed them in minutes. Sorry, the good guys dont win every time and just like Pearl Harbor our adversaries have their own point of view, that their self preservation comes at a cost of our destruction, the crushing of our military might. We assumed ourselves to be too big to have imagined that any foe would dare a direct assault and that hubris was our very defeat then and in this story. Lesson complete.

[@mystikmind2005]

@@9999plato So you think you make a good point do you? It certainly 'sounds' like a good point.... until you take it in context with certain aspects of the story, such as this "I will take a battle group, not a full deployment, A SMALL FORCE, to assess the threat." Plus the other points i have made, plus the military command has been warned these Aliens know about Terrans and were alarmed by that fact, so there is going to be an alert going out. Taking all this into account your point swings from reasonable to just sad and embarrassing for you.

[@ApostleBerko]

We knew about the Japanese too... even knew the day of the attack...

[@mystikmind2005]

@@ApostleBerko Define 'knew' within a bureaucratically minded military where the left hand does not know what the right hand is doing?? Nevertheless a general alert went out that an attack could be imminent, but it was not effectively heeded... needless to say that is a very famous mistake that no modern military of the world today or into the distant future, will be repeating.

[@jlbeem431]

dropped the ball on this one. was like somebody took 2 books ripple the last half of the chapters of 1 out and stuck the last half of the chapters from the 2nd book in its place

[@DOZZER62]

The AI That wrote this story.It's not even a pale imitation of a heavily drugged human

[@jcalpha2717]

Could you slow the text scrolling? It would be nice if the words matched the narrator.

[@jimhelm9992]

GMTA!! Yes the text really needs to be slowed to match the narration. THIS is something that WILL make me drop my subscribe status.

[@scorchedearth1451]

The words are drawn into the singularity with light spreed. Nobody can stop that. ☹

[@patronus5855]

So the little fleet of ships that went to help the aliens were all the ships Earth had? Seems simply stupid.

[@ChrisTian-ed8ol]

My thoughts too, but, like now, maybe we let our arrogance get the better of us.

[@UltraSuperDuperFreak]

no there werent, he clearly stated they would only take a few ships to help . which means there is many not used.

[@krystalmae5557]

You need to pay attention better🤦🤦🤦

[@Ansatsu209]

Should have said "well, since you don't want the humans involved then we will be expecting your fleets at this locating one week from now. Otherwise we will get the Humans involved."

[@kazoosc]

but Logan had only taken a small fleet to defend the Ocampa .. so there were more ships

[@Realitygetreal]

Well apparently NO, because Humans can build weapons to create black holes, but have NO planetary defense or Home Guard because Why would you include a HUMAN tactic that has existed since humans started having wars... THIS IS SUCKY WRITING

[@Amokhunter]

Kindergarden level of writing. My dad could beat up your dad! Nu-uh, my dad is stronger than your dad! Until we get 2xSuperman in streetclothing...

[@Dejarik512]

Logan called "Broken Arrow!"

[@runpop1]

He should have said you may take humanity but your system will be but a memory. Then proceed to jump to the crins home wold and set off a singlarity.

[@Realitygetreal]

Just shit writing all the way around

[@KifoMilele24]

What's with the double description of events

[@charliehiker2247]

at "Exiggee, homie,son?" 24:38 Like so many other AI read stories - "... the damnable AI 'repeat' glitch struck.... annihilating any interest to linger and continue listening..."

[@Rynigin]

Is there a continuation to this? I want to know what happens in the future when humans come back for revenge.

[@madmacstoo-w7w]

This story was reasonable up to a point and then we got two accounts of the gravity projector firing and the 'consumption of the very stars themselves'. Get a grip, ffs.

[@Sadarsa]

7:20 did i miss something here? It jumps from "watch your back out there" to being knee deep in a battle.

[@lorneschalm5056]

I assume these are written by AI?

[@MrTh3archangel]

Since these have only popped up in the last few years, yeah most likely so.

[@birb1134]

@@MrTh3archangel theyre written on a subreddit called r/HFY but i assume the subtitles are written by an AI

[@matures4me]

Showers of sparks from consoles and pure bolts of energy tore through their hulls like paper seem to be reoccurring themes.

[@invincibleim7988]

They try to prevent what was to come, but their actions have assured what they foresee

[@roberthicks5454]

By destroying the earth's fleet and conquering earth, they might have unleashed the very future they were trying to stop.

[@Valin0s]

I will take a battle fleet.....ends up being whole fleet??? Not a good one here.

[@lifelongconservative3338]

I enjoy the narration, as always, yet this story's ending doesn't sit well. Leaving the story like that; is there a part 2?

[@codyc4035]

The backtracking over an already narrated part of the story really threw it off especially since it changed what was said and what happened

[@Medi0cr3-]

Seems like the audio is all over the place. Not in chronological order.

[@roberthodge2771]

WHY do they replay a single event at least 2 times with different words?

[@antoniothomas9761]

Thank you

[@ExelArts]

This is why ai storys need to be heavily scrutinized before releasing

[@nicholastrawinski]

a lot of these are just ripoffs of human written stories, feed a few details from a story that did well into ai to generate a trash knockoff and post it to make a few bucks. paying someone with any talent to look over the story before it gets posted would probably cost more then the youtube revenue would be.

[@Siekohz]

This sounds like helldiver's a bit, and the crin sound kinda like that one faction from Destiny

[@coreycochran3983]

bad story how dose earth have less then 100 ships 1 battle group all earth can field.. no way

[@DK-pb7tr]

Dose ? , do you not have spell check and why should earth not have less than 100 ships.?! It seems that , that is all they need!.

[@coreycochran3983]

@@DK-pb7tr it less then most bigger powers have now and this is not we are new to the stars and cant real build them and 100 clear was not all they needed if 1 fleet leave left earth with near nothing to cover it.

[@RobertCharcho]

That's all we need field sense they are so powerfull just like how right now we haven't fielded the F22 in battle we don't need to,see i like the story's cuase h8mens are not the well mean8ng dults that they are in almost every other Sci Fi. Seems more realistic to me.. I am interested if they where made by AI though, I all good with AI story's and Art but do worry that in a generation or so are creativity will be a memory just like how no one remembers their phone number and other stuff, who needs to mener8ze things when you can look it up 24,7.

[@DOZZER62]

Take a small battle group yet the Earth is completely Defenseless. No defense Satellites or space stations The story makes no sense

[@vanguard9067]

Why did the story repeat at 21:53 and 24:20?

[@bad1cj]

Be it the text or the repeating story it would seem some editing is needed…

[@ncox001]

Because the AI had a glitch, like Skynet!

[@jammer68]

​@ncox001 not really. It told two different versions completely. This seems a common problem with these stories. A tiny bit of proof reading and editing would go a long way to helping these stories.

[@peterjackhandy]

An awful lot of these tales seem to be similarly corrupted.

[@MatthewCauldwell]

Hi

[@danniemortensen4217]

Ehh. What? The story kind of snaps at The Black hole generatorthing. Repeat it self tvice. And about The system? He Could at least have jumped to The edge of The system and called The planet to check up on it. And when they return to Earth. Where are all humans remaining ships? They only left with a tiny fleat After all. I like many of Thise stories. But Dahm its clear IA still have a long Way to come to keep The red Line in a story.

[@ExelArts]

Wtf lol a few ships turned into our entire fleet smh im aure humanity wouldve built more thrn just one of those powerful ships maybe even greater

[@DuckSith]

This made little sense, the story taking erratic jumps like there was massive pieces removed.

[@payasoPH]

Part 2?

[@barksdalehales438]

The story becomes very disjointed and chaotic.

[@stillrookie]

oh, another one humans are op

[@ronniearroyo6563]

Like the story

[@johnhillbilly8625]

Once again you drew out the story decribing things that no cares about and it sounds like an english teacher trying to impress a class

[@johnsonamy6481]

I found the concept of the story good. But, the rendition qas disjointed.

[@jammer68]

So much of this story either makes no sense or is flat out impossible. The humans are the most terrifying navy in the galaxy yrt first have a massive fleet then the 100 ships of the one fleet are all they have. In battle, they have devastating firepower with one set of weapons systems but can only use them once, apparently the devastating energy beams cant be charged for a second shot even after the fist battle. 100 ships go to an alien system and Earth doesnt have any ships left to defend it even though Humanity is supposed to be the Ultimate power in the galaxy. It would have to be complete idiots running the navy to not have the largest defensive fleet available to defend Humanity's cradle world. Senseless stories likk this is why i am getting very tired of listening to these. You cant tell if they will be decent stories until you get several minutes into most of them.

[@GeorgeOrwell-yz6zx]

I agree 💯. Too many poorly edited AI stories. I am getting to the point I don't even want to listen until I have read the comments to see if it is worth the time

[@jammer68]

@GeorgeOrwell-yz6zx The problem with reading the comments first is there are a LOT of people that are just fine with these stories even as bad as they are and give good comments on them. I'll try listening to them, and if they turn out to be bad, I'll let people know that, at least. Most times, I'll let people know what's wrong so they can choose for themselves.

[@GeorgeOrwell-yz6zx]

@@jammer68 That sounds fair.

[@johnrodriguezjr3491]

Stealing names from the StarTrek series!

[@scottystacker4660]

Did you kill us off?

[@dansallthingspoliticsrelig523]

What a waste of time.

[@stillrookie]

tts is brutal

[@aaronkirk9288]

Awesome story thank you for sharing 88

[@ertymexx]

You do know what that number stands for, right?

[@Realitygetreal]

After a Story as POOR as this he should lose 50% of subscribers

[@martyschrader]

Not a good story. Too much inconsistency. And that is this kaka with multiple endings?

[@Mischief-Mhine]

Dude hope you know your not doing yourself a favor to ask for Aighty aight in comments.. use alphabet it will come to hh .. im not sure if you know what your asking for that could easily ebd up in disaster And if your still not knowing what i mean look history 1933-1945

[@BrianAhamefula]

This is absolute bullshit, at least read what your wrote

[@ertymexx]

I'm sorry what? You will leave a heart for everyone writing that despicable number used by extreme far right? >:(

[@augustiniumihaila4466]

bad....

[@detleflehmann4148]

Shit AI Story 👎

[@gordmorris3368]

booooooo

[@tonynelligan1930]

????????????? it is in english both spoken and scrolling.???????

[@imperialinquisitor510]

AI trash

[@pony0361]

88 That-was-a-fantastic-bit-of-storytelling. Thankyou.

[@seankeen2865]

Eighty eight

[@ianmackay5089]

88 tghankyou

[@davidwearmouth851]

eighty eight !!