Galactic Empire Executes Human Ambassador, Humanity Launches All-Out War | HFY Sci-Fi Story

[@x-WaRRioR-x]

i wish you could get the word spacing right

[@markojotic]

Speech to text program need to be proofed. Could be AI generated as the story is redundant. A complete lack of punctuation is a sign. Human readers typically name the author (mainly on Reddit).

[@stephenpaton9906]

Like a Chinese parts manual.

[@fturla___156]

This story is more a Chinese wishful thinking belief that they can defeat the American military force with hidden technology. They don't have the time, man power, and even the technology to do it. The reason this audio story falls off is because too much of it is cramped into a short story with not enough details through third person perspective. George R. R. Martin and J. R. R. Tolkien took well over three novel sized books to tell about a conflict. I don't think a plot so expansive is entertaining when details are cut from the story.

[@WilliamSmith-zk4tj]

They're lucky I would have use their system to get them to attack each other I would get one planet to believe the other planet was human and vice versa their enemies could be everywhere and nowhere they would look at their own mother and see a demon they would see the Ambassador standing there there would be no sleep no rest

[@fturla___156]

What's hilarious is this 'quantum' problem is a Marvel/Disney issue too.

[@jamesmcgehee2830]

How many times can you use the term ‘quantum’ ?

[@ez2do4u]

terrible, had to quit 3 mins in. Cannot understand what they are saying. No periods or commas. crap

[@JunaidAkhlaq]

Do you guys ever do a recheck? A good story ruined by your laziness. First sci fi story I've had to unlike 🤨

[@markradcliff2946]

This story would have been interesting, but it was executed terribly. Send your AIs to school to learn some basic English.

[@nealrcn]

Lazy AI reader

[@zarb88]

another chen another ccp propaganda piece

[@CoyoteRedoak]

It's one long run-on sentence. Have you ever learned the use of comas and periods? Quotation marks? Grammar? Very hard to listen to.