Galactic Empire Never Had War With Humans Before So We Warned Them: Run | HFY | HFY Sci-Fi Story

[@jizziejustin]

World War i had me laughing lol

[@killiansred1000]

What about World War ii?

[@jizziejustin]

Better call the Saul system lol

[@edswl7681]

"si vis pacem, para bellum" If you want peace, prepare for war.

[@dantheman9228]

Really enjoyed this story 🙂

[@2TONESKY]

Let's be honest if the Empire turned up now, we'd be sold off and in matching gimp suits before you could say 'Unburdened by what has been'

[@je8784]

That was fun! Although I would have slapped them for being stupid. 😊

[@ronniebentley5847]

And no damn Chens.

[@BryinWillis-e8g]

Complete

[@WilliamCairnes-fi2po]

"As night fell over Earth..." ???

[@jizziejustin]

@@WilliamCairnes-fi2po insert Lois Family Guy fallen over/hurt leg meme with the Earth superimposed over Lois's face here lol

[@dbsm666]

The AI was created this story was made by an American, so only USA matter

[@Maelael]

We warned you; you ignored us. Now do you see the folly of your mistake?

[@videogenics86]

??? What year is this supposed to take place in?

[@murphymmc]

If the Empire could see the humans flee the cities, they could see where they went. What, did their cameras lose resolution when the civilians got outside the cities? Yeah, pretty stupid. The time frame with training civilians in Guerilla Warfare doesn't match the battle activity unless a few hours training was deemed sufficient. Everything "becoming" a weapon or emplacement at the last moment doesn't add up. If the humans were so well prepared, all things would already have been in place. A good tactician wouldn't leave things to the last moment in event of a surprise attack. Too many detail failures in this story, guess they don't expect us to pay attention. The Empire showed up with 500 warships, then lost 800 ships? No mention of small fighter craft released, so these were part of the main fleet and they lost more than they brought? Right. This goes from a reasonably good beginning to a confusion of story details in record time. Congratulations.

[@TeamDoc312]

I think you listened to a much different story than I did. Yes, you saw civilians flee, but, they didn't see all of them. Some hid under the cities, the story stated that clearly, as in subways and underground bunkers. The timeline from Read meeting the invaders to give them terms, to the time of Invasion isnt clear. As far as civilians being trained, it doesn't take much to train people when their lives are on the line, but again, the timeline is murky. But in any war on earth, civilians have risen to the occasion with very little training. And remember, in the story, the world leaders had already planned for this outcome, it just had to be implemented. The rosters of people could have been already made, everyone with a job and place of duty already. The farming equipment and vehicles might have been already accounted for, with pre-positioned upgrades just waiting to be installed. We pre-position stuff like that throughout the US, and overseas for our troops to fall in on when needed. You comment about the amount of invader ships lost, they came with 500, but when things going bad, ten thousand more arrived. So my friend, the only one confused, appears to be you. Congratulatoons!

[@georgemitchell9222]

when you said WWIU that was a mistake it was WW2 when we destroyed Hiroshima, and Nagasaka Japan with 2 atomic bombs so please correct your mistake

[@Dr.GeoDave]

I wonder if I could have created a better written story while in Junior High?

[@janremongalura5713]

The names confuse me?

[@jyvben1520]

7:09 "yu developed", well this channel did not develop, 7:17 is his name Reid or Read ? , 7:46 "chumbles" or jungles, 7:50 "we gomp" ??? 11:16 "where at" or "we are at", 17:17 "sivals" silos, 18:04 "the censor officer" sensor, 18:08 "their launching" they are launching, 25:31 "gorilla fighters" guerrilla, Thane or Thang ? 30:00 "they had washed" watched, 33:10 "soul system" solar system, 33:56 "gorilla fighters"

[@carpediem3391]

Earth had a base on mars but had only reach the moon, someone tell me how that works

[@joosyjulie]

Not even a minute in (actually 35 seconds) and it's unreadable. Not everyone can listen to these stories. So please proofread before you let your speech to text program ruin what should be good story. Simple stuff like 'saul system' when it should be 'SOL system'. 'Sleek silver hall' should be 'Sleek silver HULL'. 'Market it for standard' should be 'MARK IT for standard'. Three sentances in and only a natural english speaker could make sense of it when reading it. It certainly isn't readable by any others. I'll add more as I read... Censor officer, should be 'SENSOR officer'. 'Cold like their' should be 'Cold like THEY'RE' (They are, shortened to they're, because the a isn't pronounced in the contracted word.) Too many past and present tenses swapped mid sentance, never mind mid paragraph, keep it to present or past tense please. 6:55 World War IU should be World War 11 or WW11 or World War 2. Where the hell did the U come from. 7:09 Yu should be YOU. 7:46 Chumbles? What the hell is chumbles? 7:51 Gomp? What the f* is gomp? 10:12 is it Read, Reed or Reid? Make your mind up. 16:27 censor should be SENSOR. 17:17 Sivals, what are sivals. SILOS. 18:05 Their should be They're 20:32 Their should be They're 26:04 Can't should be Kent. 36:14 use should be used. The other sentance structure is in the past tense, why is this one word written in present tense. 36:39 wach should be watched

[@marysmith-ps7uj]

Also debris is pronounced like de-bree. Ok?😮

[@rbleisem]

Humans aren't Saiyans. And if their ships can't stand EMP, then they are bad ships, stars generate EMP. Bla, bla, bla. As if they should not have STL & FTL sensors, better then infra-red. Earth should not have had a change. Try again.

[@_starfiend]

You need to get a far better AI voice, or, better still, get a human voice to read them. This AI voice is appalling.

[@janremongalura5713]

Chat Gpt ahh story.

[@frederickwentz4729]

Contradicted itself many times. Couldn’t pronounce words correctly. Constantly and I mean constantly repeating itself. An interesting story that became irritating to listen to.