Final Warning from Humanity to the Galactic Empire: Your Worlds Will Burn | HFY Full Story

[@jacquesb5248]

the story kind of repeats itself at like 35min, the part about the nexus being disrupted and two more then even more

[@squeedikatako]

Luckily the story doesn’t repeat the whole chapter, but just a few sentences. I was worried that I’d have to listen to the entire section again

[@ErnieRoss-i9o]

How in every story Earth has no higher government. It seems all orders are coming from either ambassadors and generals.

[@DavidMcClanahan-us9ih]

So, the future is woke! Women in control of all command decisions. Terrific.

[@AA-le2zv]

Hahahahaha that be some funny shit some overweight blue hair Karen

[@jamespseaman4136]

Doesn’t Scathar realize that if he uses such a weapon on earth that the humans will destroy the hegemony!

[@tonyv8925]

He doesn't care. He has the doomsday mentality, "...if I can't have it, nobody will have it..."

[@jamespseaman4136]

I can’t believe how many mispronounced words your computer commits! Does anyone monitor this thing?

[@ronniebentley5847]

Hegemony seems to be spelled differently every time. I think it's funny as hell.. its just a story

[@jackfollansbee2398]

The narration to text was awful, but the narration wasn't that bad.

[@DanaSecrest]

This AI cannot pronounce much of anything! A human would do much better.

[@billsympson3611]

I just look at it as if it's being read from an alien account and being translated into English

[@startrekker5888]

Remember this moment high arse biter could have been a good mispronunciation. I hope the real high arbiter has a good sense of humour or where duck shit 😱.

[@DarrochJohnson]

But the War was far from over . No more of this phrase , PLEASE !

[@jonnycoathanger8399]

"Oh what what have we done?" should be replaced with; "Suck on that!".

[@michaeltrent2726]

I hate it when my kittens are cracked and dulled

[@voctorfloud9341]

Damn all these complaints about women leaders , it appears these dudes really need to get laid 😂😂😂 if they were secure they would not give AF 😂😂😂 who leads in a scifi fantasy story

[@je8784]

The last 5 of 6 repeated a 10 minute part. I like real people reading. At least they learn from their mispronunciations.

[@houseredoranuberalles4740]

BAM that beam got rid of baryons ENTIRELY. Pants got crapped in all over the galaxy. Frigging Green Lantern Force had to confiscate their shit and enforce arms control lol

[@claytonsmith8646]

The AI is not good, it hurts a very great story.

[@oldschoolmarine3047]

How can someone submit a story?

[@and43048]

Repeat, endless repeats!

[@daviddsantos33]

no one monitors it.... not after the author issued his ol Timmy tum.

[@je8784]

CHEN!!!!

[@jennismith4041]

They use Chen in a lot of storylines, it doesn't matter how many times they use the name it's like Smith Jones and Brown,a good story is what it is. 😊😊

[@SKRRTCOBAIN00]

An already wide spread family name in 2024 is NOTHING SPECIAL in a sci fi story Just think for a second

[@eloyhernandez8652]

Best story ever!!! I loved it!!

[@KillerBreeze420]

Does anyone know what a cycle is in Earth time? Does anyone edit these stories before p[posting? The kind of power they are talking about would take several supermassive blackholes being evaporated ina fraction of a second.

[@roberthodge2771]

Well written and flowed well save for the assorted repeats of what was just said before. Certain phrases seem to be stuck on, repeated often.

[@Scptrainee-r1z]

the names are the best i have heard like operation Prometheus bad ass

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

Look UFO 👽

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

My pendulum is rock 🪨

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

For ever plan

[@ohhshiii4518]

Jiminity is now hegemony

[@jimcramer2559]

Overall good story

[@mdf2mdf287]

I am getting a bit cheesed off with a lot of these woke stories, they all seem to have the main characters portrayed by women.......this one is a classic where the top 4 main characters are women. It is getting like "Wonder Woman" on steroids and becoming a tad monotonous..

[@anthonyn.9228]

For Christ’s’ sake, just enjoy it or turn it off. Stop with the woke bullshit. It’s a story.

[@mdf2mdf287]

@@anthonyn.9228 The only woke shit here is coming from whoever wrote this......I did turn it off the minute the fourth main character chirped. I went to do something that was less insulting to my ears..like gauging my eyes out with a rusty spoon as that was less painful to my brain...!

[@rrgale55]

I agree OP. Notice how all the human leaders are women and all the Alien leaders are ugly disheveled men. Total woke garbage.

[@delord1619]

I find myself wishing the stories were numbered, to make finding the next chapter less time consuming. Ah well... Wadda ya want for nothing?

[@dwork9451]

woke

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

Revelation 5

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

Music 🎵🎶🎵🎶🎵🎶🎵🎶🎶🎵🎶🎵🎶🎵🎶 books 📚 lies Thier works of a daughter was gutted my family for the Hills and I don't believe in you to Hell armeogedon protect you can't handle the y can you

[@groberjager4746]

you really need to fix the abundant mis-spoken words. It's really unprofessional and shows that there is no desire for quality here, just cranking out these silly stories with and abundance of repeated rhetoric and repeated phrases. It is truly getting old and unwanted!!!!!!!

[@sparkeyjames]

No one forced you to listen past your tolerance limit.

[@NickDuran-b1e]

When does God come into the story

[@davidspoole]

So Earth has no male leadership?

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

Horned lizards TbN snakes

[@confedaratewolf]

it would be ok but the ai destroys it

[@Richard-h8j8c]

I can't believe there's not one Male leader?

[@SKRRTCOBAIN00]

Womp womp

[@rebeccascott6508]

Please do all of us a favor and teach your AI how to spell and understand context for pronunciation of some words. Pick one spelling for a name and stick with it throughout the story. Aliens should have alien names... Sk'thar. High Arbiter, not Orbiter.... two totally different words meaning totally different things. Engage the calm system? Try COMM system, short for communication system. A little basic research and editing would help you greatly.

[@waynedowridge4349]

i in even get 5 min yet and i could tell this is going to be good👍

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

Evil 🚽🐍🤑

[@simonberg6505Tar.]

To many Chens and The same names!!! The same story☝

[@parrot849]

Why are all the commanders from earth as well as ambassadors, leading scientists, presidents, fleet admirals, or command ship captains are women, etc. ? Of course, not that there is anything wrong with that 🙄….

[@SKRRTCOBAIN00]

Of course … Paragraph writing ass

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

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[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

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[@speedballjones5235]

Yet another Chen. LMAO!!

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

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[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

Tell TbN stop threatening Force courrsion pedifiles in pulpits banking

[@speedballjones5235]

More AI drivel

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

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[@dwightehowell8179]

I left after it started to repeat. If they want people to listen they need to do at least the kind of basic editing that a smart 5th grader could do. Sorry.

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

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[@OneOutlander]

This is probably one of the worst of these type of stories I've read, and I read a lot of them. It seemed like nothing else could be thought of so they cut and pasted previous conversations. I did not like this story The plot was good The execution was horrible.

[@Andrewgeorge-z1w]

There meny more names than Chen stop using it

[@kennethabagis8392]

Another bland spoken story...Boring A.I.

[@caseymcc2628]

Bad pronunciation. Repetitive storyline.. same characters. Boring.

[@johnyoung5377]

Are these "new" woke creative people so devoid of talent and creativity that the "best" they can do is rehash Snow White! I guarantee that I can get a class of 5 year old kids to write and create a better original story and a make believe world during storytime than the writers at Disney!! The cost to write this would probably be covered by a couple of pizza parties and trips to Dave & Buster's!!!😂😂😂

[@DawnAdams-d5i]

a collation of nonsense

[@simonberg6505Tar.]

Its mathriarchat !??? All commanders - women!???🤔☝✌✌✌🤣🤣🤣🤣🥳

[@dwork9451]

This is a waman story, not for man human.

[@simonberg6505Tar.]

@@dwork9451 🤔🤪

[@dochunnicutt6980]

Just crap i got bored

[@PerfectImperfectchoices]

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