GKS (KGSP) | Personal Statement Feedback Day 3

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Correction: I did not recognize that 'romantical' is a British English word. You are correct, Joana. Sorry for confusing you!

[@mantakaarma1471]

Wish I could come across this video before sending my PS to the embassy. You've always been a source of inspiration to us GKS dreamers. Thank you so much Sir for your unconditional efforts and helping us in this journey. Hope to see more videos soon. Stay healthy and safe. 😊

[@Mnndp]

Hope you are doing well. I am looking forward to this video. Thankyou so much sir.

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

My pleasure!

[@diteesingh_11]

Hi! Aren't the result coming out today?

[@Mnndp]

@Joana Your personal statement was good. I liked it too. Keep it up and do your best I'll be rooting for you. All the best.

[@imnatalieee]

I’ve sent mine but not lucky enough for being chosen ㅠㅠ Hope to see more videos on PS to get more feedback and advices from Mr.Daniel :)

[@pixiie7778]

Hi dear ^^ may I know how you send yours?

[@intanmaisarah1851]

Same. It’s okay. We can try again next year

[@pixiie7778]

@@intanmaisarah1851 hi dear, may I ask how you send?

[@intanmaisarah1851]

@@pixiie7778 I sent it by post to Korea Education Centre in my country

[@Neftae]

We will keep trying to improve, thanks for your support ❤

[@adityatiwari4031]

Thankyou so much sir for your very informative videos.

[@shahanasherin8576]

💯 useful video...

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Thanks 😊

[@bubble5002]

Those three magical points! Will make sure to keep them noted, in all aspects of writings. Thanks Mr. College Concierge for your time!

[@sapna6659]

Hey, I remember you from the previous video's comment. There is no update on the first round result and interview.. am I right?

[@bubble5002]

@@sapna6659 Nah, not yet. Stay tuned to the your concerned websites. I heard results of Round 1 : Document Screening will be out in 15th Oct, i.e tomorrow. Dunno yet. Let's see...

[@sapna6659]

@@bubble5002 Thank you, so they will upload a list or something on embassy's website? Yeah tomorrow is 15th. Let's just hope for the best. All the best to you too👍

[@bubble5002]

@@sapna6659 Not really sure actually. But we'll stay tuned just in case...

[@sapna6659]

@@bubble5002 yeah👍

[@sapna6659]

I am so grateful that I found your channel earlier. Thank you for being a perfect guide for us. ❤

[@arpanak.1649]

Can you tell me your mother nation

[@sapna6659]

@@arpanak.1649 I'm from India

[@arpanak.1649]

@@sapna6659 yaar I just want to know did you receive an email

[@sapna6659]

@@arpanak.1649 yarr I didn't. I don't know what to do now. Did you get your documents apostille btw?

[@arpanak.1649]

@@sapna6659 notarized

[@m0_nys]

I've been pre-selected thanks to all your videos that I've seen like crazy to write a good study plan and personal statement. Thank you soooooooo much 🤧❣ Now let's watch how to be successful during the interview 1000x 😁

[@Inyee]

Goodluck!!

[@khushibelieber6455]

Congrats... From which country u are!? Iam bit tensed 😂 because its the result day today

[@PS-uq8qe]

Woah!!! Congrats 💕

[@PS-uq8qe]

Also does pre selected mean that you are already in? Woah! how pleasant must be your application to the embassy people 👍

[@khushibelieber6455]

@@PS-uq8qe which country is she from!?

[@shrexmy9861]

cant wait for another incredibly inspiring video sir, waiting eagerlyy😆✊🏻

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Very soon!

[@ankita6817]

Sir I also want to fill GKS scholarship form please help(2023)

[@ankita6817]

선생님 저 좀 도와주세요

[@Mnndp]

Thankyou for the video Sir. I was waiting for this video eagerly. Watching a video and learning from it is easier in my opinion but recording a video perfectly is something that requires a lot of effort. Amidst your busy schedule you make time for us, read our personal statements, statements of purpose and then guide us through the do's and don'ts of it; Thankyou so much, it means a lot to us. Sending you Happiness and Praying for your well being 🙇‍♀🙇‍♀

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Thank you for your compliment! And I am glad my feedback videos are helpful. I need your continuous support! Stay safe and healthy! 😊

[@Mnndp]

@@MrCollegeConcierge You don't need to worry about it Sir. We will always be supporting you no matter what. I have been watching your videos since; I think 3-4 months and everytime I watch them; I learn new things. Its like 'The Alchemist' (a book by Paulo Coelho) everytime one reads it; learns a new thing. Also I think now that we have spent so many months together supporting each other; we can call our channel's community a Family. You can count on us the way we count on you.

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

@@Mnndp You just made my day! I will keep it up! 👍

[@Mnndp]

@@MrCollegeConcierge Thankyou so much. Sir! I have an idea to share can I just leave a message on your instagram and then you can decide whether you like it or not. it's related to your channel.

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

@@Mnndp Okay, go ahead.

[@yourbubblyhoangphi1466]

Got through the document screening but couldnt end up in the final 3 slots for my area. Thank you Mr Daniel for your tips ❤️

[@fizasohailkhan5380]

Waiting for the video :)

[@hillalworldly732]

Thank you so much I hope I got selected even for the interview with this kinda missy personal statement 😅 I didn't know that the name of the scholarship would be such a big mistake 😭

[@how_recenty]

The very best of luck who have got chosen. Plz let me know if you have selected for document screening and which country you from. 🥰🥰

[@augustd4805]

It was first time I here you in korean language 😊

[@Imacutebanygirl]

Tnx

[@purpleocean9809]

Please make video on programs or degrees in gks

[@amiraotaku6595]

Thank you so much sir, for all this informations 🥰 it helps me alot 💕

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

My pleasure 🙏🏻 ☺️

[@sajikalasaji8236]

Wow!

[@gianellacrv]

Thank you very much for your videos Sir TT They are truly helpful 💜 I have one question. Do we have to write the Personal Statement in the order of the bullet points?

[@bubble5002]

Time flies slow 🤧. Been waiting for this since the day I sent my PS. Can't wait anymore...**Gulps in Anxiety and Nervousness** Hope you're doing well, read about the Covi-Queen case rise in Korea on Naver. Stay safe, sir.

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Thanks for your patience. You are almost there! 👍

[@bubble5002]

@@diteesingh_11 Yeah. The guildlines do say so. I'll wait till 12, if nothing then I'll call the Embassy and let you know...

[@bubble5002]

@@diteesingh_11 Heya, I checked the website, the Embassy in India is on holiday today for Dussera. So maybe tomorrow, or they might reach out to us thr email. We can wait till tomorrow...

[@PS-uq8qe]

@@bubble5002 is it? But I read that it is open today till 12:30 and will reopen at 2:00 pm and it also says timings may get affected due to dussehra .

[@bubble5002]

@@PS-uq8qe Hmm. All we can do is wait and watch ...

[@RedRose-bi8yw]

I'm in 12th now ...and I wanted to study in korea .... your videos help me to solve my all queries ....thank you so much sir .. 🙂

[@RedRose-bi8yw]

Best luck to you..

[@RedRose-bi8yw]

Where are you from ..

[@RedRose-bi8yw]

Sure

[@lalalyty8299]

- Do I need to get university permission first if I apply for an architect major (5y)? Or is that okay to just send my application directly to the university? - For photos, I have to use in the application Is it okay with a blue background, or do I need to use a white background?

[@lianaliou]

Is it more beneficial for the applicant if they write in Korean? Thanks for all the great tips 🙏

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Not necessarily.

[@chahat1628]

Sir we have to write course related things in personal statement or write about ourself ???

[@kakaogua8094]

Hello, Sir! Thank you so much for your helpful videos! I am watching all of them with a huge interest! I would like to ask you something regarding the recommendation letter. My recommender put the Form 5, the letter and the three copies in one envelope but since I am applying to embassy track I need 4 enveloped in total. Sould I put the recommendation letter only in the first enevople (the original one) and leave the other three copies empty? Thank you in advance!

[@harithaev3527]

Waiting sir 💜

[@alessandrayangua8558]

Thanks for the video, i wanna know if i get a 4 or 5 level in korean , must i talk in korean in the embassy interview or english?? Uwu

[@miss_d2432]

Waiting... Waiting..... 😊😸

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

💃🕺

[@lemontriesherbest7653]

Lets go and apply for graduate program

[@jamesbibarnes]

thank you so much for these videos, they are helping me so much! I have a question, do you think mentioning LGBTQ+ rights would be too controversial? I have written my ba thesis on lgbtq+ rights in korea, but I'm scared to mention it...

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

I think it's fine. Just be yourself!

[@belalamelo6113]

Thank you once again for you videos Sir, but if i graduate in June 2023 will i be able to apply in 2022(for GKS 2023?) Many thanks :)

[@adityatiwari4031]

Sir, I didn't get selected, really sad right now but I will do my best next time. Love you sir💜💜💜, thankyou for your support and I will continue to see your videos and prepare my PS and study plans from today

[@arshiyasiddique337]

Heyy yk we have to get 80+ in 12 or Avg 80+ of class 10,11&12 ??

[@artyscales6354]

Thank you sir, for the video I have a question where do we have see the 1 round document screening? I'm very confused.

[@iromosushi6291]

Ikr, they said they'll release it today but I couldn't find it anywhere

[@intanmaisarah1851]

@@iromosushi6291 I asked my embassy how they’ll release the document screening results and they said only who pass will get the email.

[@artyscales6354]

@@intanmaisarah1851 from which country?

[@artyscales6354]

@@iromosushi6291 me too

[@intanmaisarah1851]

@@artyscales6354 Malaysia

[@major601]

I had an interview yesterday but my application was declined unfortunately. I want to try it again next year but i lost all my confidence sadly :( Hope to see more of your videos they really help me👍👍

[@Ratnnaaa07]

Indian??

[@major601]

@@Ratnnaaa07 no :)

[@farhanabinthossain2930]

You made it?

[@toudoroki]

This video is very informative! Thank you, sir! But I have a question about personal statement. Is it okay to put a data (such as: 'Korea ranked 26th out of 137 countries with biggest infrastructure development') in my personal statement? I also put the source of the information. Thank you, Sir!😊

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Putting correct research data is definitely good!

[@toudoroki]

​@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you for responding my question, sir!😊

[@ikaursaluja8129]

Waiting... Sir

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

See you soon!

[@ikaursaluja8129]

@@MrCollegeConcierge ☺️

[@arpanak.1649]

You are from which country..?

[@belalamelo6113]

Thank you for the video!! Also is your face/chin hurt??

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Just a bit. Thanks for your concern!

[@belalamelo6113]

@@MrCollegeConcierge get well soon, your efforts are greatly valued!

[@betrue7130]

Thank you Soo much sir for fabulous vedios ❤️ Sir i really want to know about something .. Like if we change our major after undergradute , it will make a bad impression to gks committee ?? For exp if somebody has done BS psychology for undergraduate and want to change his major to Fashion Design for masters ... Also if this is possible than we can get job with both BS psychology and fashion design or only one ??? I hope you'll understand my weird ques 😅❤️

[@deepsitapradhan3520]

I have a question sir. Is it mandatory to select University from Type B as well ?

[@jsk5754]

Yes

[@zibamoon5167]

Hello Sir, I hope you're doing well. Unfortunately in my country this opportunity is just for rich people. Regards.

[@iroshadilrukshi]

Hi sir , I would like to tell your videos are more valuable for us. Firstly i gratitude for that. I would like to apply KGSP program at next year. I think your videos are help for me that. i am afraid if you can sir evaluate my personal statement....?

[@sabaparveen5222]

Sir, i wanna know that should i also include my Japanese scholarship experience in my personal statement for gks ba? I didn't get the scholarship but i learnt Japanese upto an elementary level.

[@milenamartirosyan6580]

I have tried asking this question several times but never recieved a decent answer, you are my last hope Sir ㅠㅠ Can I apply to GKS for Master degree if I already have one, but it wasn't acquired in Korea? I've got Bachelor's degree in Translation studies I'm about to get Master's with the same major, but I decided to continue because my parents wanted me to. Now if it's going to interfere with my GKS application I'll drop out and apply for GKS if no I'll continue my Masters in my country then apply to GKS for another one.

[@C.istist]

Hello Sir. Thank you for this great video. I have a question to ask. Does a candidate who wish to pursue Ph.D. need to contact a professor in advance?

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

It's recommended!

[@C.istist]

@@MrCollegeConcierge Okay Thank you Sir for getting back!

[@aimansaleem6166]

Salam... Sir I want know that can we apply for both tracks.. I mean can we apply from university as well from embassy track for same year?? . I really want to know.. Best regards.

[@angelicemman5821]

Well, it's actually prohibited to apply from both tracks. It's compulsory to choose only one track. Best of luck fellow

[@simranbajaj5128]

Hello sir , hope you are doing well. Actually sir my bachelor's degree is in annual exam mode but the KGSP form is in semester mode so how am i supposed to fill that?? Kindly respond.

[@Freethinkers638]

Hello sir quick question for you m already obtained my p.g but I want to do again under this program so can I mention my pg achievements in my personal statement? 2.do I have to submit my p.g certificates and transcripts?

[@pixiie7778]

Hello sir, thank you for the video ^^ ❤️ been waiting for more :D I hope you can tell how to send you mine for review :(

[@ishakasabe2616]

Since to the covid 12 th board result declared late in this year. Recently i took admission for bsc microbiology but i want to apply In korea university.so what can I do ? Should I take gap certificate? And when I would be able to fill this form 😊sir please reply my this question 💯i am fully depends on you 😊

[@anjalimeena3383]

Is the date of gks application will be gone ??? either we can submit application plzzz tell ...

[@aahana_mixtape03]

hello sir , can i underline some points in personal statement . which point i want selection committee should have take a look in my personal statement .

[@rekaharnis5206]

Hi Sir! I have a kinda random question 😂 do we need to write "South Korea", or just "Korea" is enough already?

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

I prefer South Korea or the Republic of Korea.

[@rekaharnis5206]

@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you for the answer, Sir!

[@lian1566]

Good day. Is it okay if I inquire? I'll graduate from high school in June of next year. Is it possible for me to fill out the form for undergraduate in 2022?

[@SUSMITA_AROHAMO]

annyeonghaseyo... I am doing masters, then still i can apply for masters through GKS??

[@bubble9031]

How can I send you my personal statement???

[@shwetanamdeo6281]

Thank you sir. Hope you are doing well. I'm really thankful to your help. Will it helpful to write the personal statement or study plan in Korean?

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

My pleasure! I hope you are staying safe and healthy. If you are fluent in Korean and are confident writing it in Korean, then you should write it in the language. If not, I recommend you write it in English.

[@shwetanamdeo6281]

@@MrCollegeConcierge currently I'm taking Korean language classes, will try to be able to write in Korean soon.🙏

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

@@shwetanamdeo6281 Nice! I'm looking forward to seeing your comments written in Korean!

[@shwetanamdeo6281]

@@MrCollegeConcierge 네 선생님. 감사합니다.. Please forgive me if there any mistake.

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

@@shwetanamdeo6281 Mistakes are welcome. That's how you improve a foreign language! 응원합니다!

[@kaah2999]

Hello Mr. Daniel, I have a question that I have not seen anyone on internet talking about when talking about GKS. For those who are going to apply for graduate courses, It's mandatory to hold a degree thesis? For my undergrad, it's not required to write one but I'm really worried that if I don't write one, I will be not able to apply for GKS.

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

As long as you can submit your BA degree, you are good to go!

[@geeta1452]

Sir can disabled persons apply for kgsp scholarship, if they can, will they select!

[@sepidehdehghani9120]

Such a really helpful and an awesome video like the previous ones, the tips all together have helped me a lot. Thanks sir🙏

[@jingadiikkhiladi]

Hello professor, I have a question if the cgpa of our grades are fulfilled by any one of them .the criteria given in kgsp but not fulfilled the percentage required like 80%or above . should we consider it we are eligible?

[@Mannu_0533]

Yes you are

[@jessicakotelo5342]

I'm super sad that I can't take part in the scholarship because my country South Africa isn't nominated in the Undergraduate section.what makes me sader is that I had all my documents prepared for it😒😭😢

[@junieyaaa5989]

Mr. Daniel, I am wondering if a Master degree holder is qualified to take another Master degree under KGSP?

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

You can only apply for a higher degree.

[@rh_zzz]

Sir, can i ask what is the right age to apply for embassy track? Do i need to finish SENIOR HIGHSCHOOL to apply?

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

You need a high school diploma to apply.

[@geethujoseph459]

Do i have to remove the 5 guide questions inside the box before writing personal statement for gks graduate program?

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Not necessarily!

[@geethujoseph459]

@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you so much for replying

[@Petyusha77]

Sir your video are so informative and great❤️ I m really concerned about my application. Is it mandatory to apostille your documents for university track or can we even notarize it. Cause in my area apostille is taking so much time, at this rate I will be late to my application. Please help me out sir, I would really appreciate that.

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Thanks for watching! I already answered in my other video, so check it out!

[@Lifeofpie929]

Are you from India by any chance?

[@intanmaisarah1851]

Hi. I would like to ask what embassy check in the document screening ?I didn’t pass my document screening today and the embassy already told me that the important thing is to fill my CGPA which I already did. I would like to know so that I don’t repeat the same mistake next time.

[@Ratnnaaa07]

Indian?

[@intanmaisarah1851]

@@Ratnnaaa07 Nope. I’m Malaysian

[@arpanak.1649]

Any Indian student here who has applied for undergraduate 2022....

[@artyscales6354]

I have applied..

[@ikaursaluja8129]

Good luck indian students...☺️☺️

[@ikaursaluja8129]

Am from India arpana! Due to some reasons I didn't apply it...I am practicing korean and focusing on my skills now...good luck to you if you applied...I will apply next year.....

[@artyscales6354]

@@ikaursaluja8129 thank you! good luck!

[@arpanak.1649]

@@ikaursaluja8129 All the best I know you can do it💜

[@desirestory657]

I want to apply but I have no recommendation letter🥺 Can I still apply?

[@palak893]

It is necessary, you can ask one of your school/college teacher/professor to write it.

[@irshadasumama7256]

Hello sir.. em currently senior bachelor's student.. I want to apply for SNU scholarship? But problem is I Do not have any research experience. Sir can you help me out, how to proceed or how to apply , how to prepare my self

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

You should watch my videos and will find what you need to do!

[@armyimnida39]

Hlo sir ur videos are so much helpful💜i also started following u on insta sir it's really interesting to learn like that thank you plz answer to my doubt in some universities are providing division entertainment &sports in that they have dance department can you plz explain about that can we go engineering to dance I'm actually interested in dance kind of activities sorry if I ask weird question if u help me on this I will be more thankful to u sir💜🙏

[@satanlucifer13]

Sir i have this one question how can i send my documents to the respective university from my home country🥺♥️

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

You can send your documents by post mail!

[@satanlucifer13]

@@MrCollegeConcierge Okay Sir Thank You♥️

[@rymmekideche2376]

is that fine to write two pages of a personal statement??? someone answer me

[@palak893]

Yes but it should not exceed two pages.

[@E-light]

Awww, my personal statement wasn't selected ☹️☹️☹️

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

Sorry...Hopefully next time!

[@Ratnnaaa07]

Hey, you are from? And how did to contact to embassy

[@payaldhar6161]

Sir , i have 3 years gap in academic but during this gap I was doing job .. so can I eligible for to apply kgsp ..

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

As long as you meet the age requirement, no problem!

[@payaldhar6161]

Now I am 23 but I want to apply for pg

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

@@payaldhar6161 You mean GKS-G? You can apply!

[@payaldhar6161]

Thank you sir

[@nityashrivastav5572]

Hello sir, I've sent my PS and SOP to you, please give me a feedback too

[@eathanehanthnaidu11a40]

Ya sure he's not an AI?? Creeps me out. How can someone speak like that? Even SIRI sounds more lively. But, but, great content.

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

🤖

[@iroshadilrukshi]

Hi sir , I would like to tell your videos are more valuable for us. Firstly i gratitude for that. I would like to apply KGSP program at next year. I think your videos are help for me that. i am afraid if you can sir evaluate my personal statement....?

[@MrCollegeConcierge]

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