GTA V - STORY MODE - EPISODE 1 [ROCKSTAR EDITOR]

[@mkcaplayz6978]

I'll support you for working hard ☺️😉

[@D0S81]

you know if you hit circle for the cinematic camera on the boat bit when franklin is on it, michael will drive the car himself, and you get some great cinematic shots.

[@JoaquinEnsirkles]

🤣 Looks like you beat me to it, wish I would have looked up whether someone had already done this before I started. Oh well. Nice job. 👍

[@PEGCinema]

You forgot to reference my prologue in your description but it's cool. At least you asked me before unlike some people. Nice work 👍

[@PEGCinema]

@@gta5storymodetvshow125 no problem. I like the final edit anyway. I can tell this took a long time to complete

[@kazmiller7195]

I absolutely love the rockstar editior. I hope you keep it up I used to make tons of videos

[@gta5storymodetvshow125]

Thanks!

[@valenmarchese7555]

how did you use rockatar editor in some moments on the game that says "remember that this clips cant be edited y in the rockstar editor" did you use mods to do it?

[@shadowassassin4401]

Can we use rockstar editor in story mode mean offline mode

[@RazvanHardcore]

How did u made Michael's hair look normal in car?

[@D0S81]

its a great idea, but this needs a lot of work. like music. and syncing audio with the lips when it goes out in post. good lip sync does so much haevy lifting in stuff like this, you would be surprised how much it improves things just by having good lip sync. and defo needs work on what makes good cinematics to push the story along. you don't have to show everything that happens. like when they come out the bank, a lot of the cops getting shot can be removed to get the to the car, or like when Lamarr and Franklin are driving to Simeons, it shows franklin too much instead of the cars, and stays with them the whole way instead of just getting to them quick. and theres no music. even if it was just copyright free, you need something to set the tone of whats happening, and you gotta keep that story moving, if it doesnt add to the story, it doesnt need to be there for the most part. some things are fine like when the guy comes running out the house after they twoc the cars. anyway, im just offering constructive critism, but dont wanna come off as giving sh!t cuz like i said this is a great idea. and even whats here couldnt have been easy. I always thought this games story would be a good machinima/tv show and barely anyone is doing this with it. i think good idea would be to look at the cinematography of other movies that have similar situations, like the car parts in Bullet and the angles used, or even Fast and Furious, or Italian Job. watching a ton of Heist movies would help to get good angles and whats good narratively, like Heat with DeNiro and Pacino which was inspiration for a mission in GTA 4 that inspired the entirety of GTA V. EDIT: the bit after Franklin drops Lamar off at Franklins is great. the montage showing the strip club n stuff is a bit long and should really just show pace that the characters are in and where they are going, so if it showed franklins hood a bit, then showed the beach. but the vibes from what you were trying to do was great. and then cutting from the phonecall with simeon on the beach to frank just being in the car on his way to simeons was good too. you coulda even got away with just cutting after the phonecall straight to him pulling in the back of simeons. but again, this was good. i get the feeling as i watch more, it's gonna get better and better at moving the story along. EDIT EDIT: you drive way too fast on some bits. the part where lamar and frank are on their way to get the bike, you missed half the convo because you got their too soon,and cuz of how erratic your ging they're jiggling about in the car like jelly. yu aren't playing a game, you're making a ''film'', so it looks bad when its like that in a bit where they're driving to a place they wouldn't rush to irl. okay i'ma stfu now. great job man. i love that this exists. GTA V's story is the best.

[@gta5storymodetvshow125]

thankyou for the feedback, I have stopped doing this series but I might get back into it. It's very important to accept feedback well to grow as a filmaker, thankyou so much I have looked through your comment carefully!

[@alexandrequirino7865]

It's San Andreas not California