He Remained Faithful To Her First Love And Reluctant To Touch Me, So I Took The Initiative To Leave

[@NopNowayhozy]

I'd like to add some constructive criticism. Your written words are sometimes wrong or don't match the story. Additionally perhaps instead of every other line being a different color it could be different colors for different sentences, as well as each character (green for the Male lead, blue for the female lead, yellow for a mistress, etc...). Structuring your writing like that will make it easy for others to understand the difference between people and other statements. Otherwise very nice and keep up the good work 👍