HFY Reddit Stories: The Human From A Dungeon - Chapters 25 & 26

[@stephenf98]

I fell in love with this series. Can't wait for the next chapters...

[@andrewmartin2567]

Great continuation on the story with him finding more connections back to earth

[@johnnycampbell3422]

@scify stories most of the story is told from first person, sometimes without clear indication of "who". With your images, you could focus on POV character, and that would be a big help/ enhancement.

[@perjohanaxell9862]

This is actually a problem of a few other stories on this channel as well. I think a short "hi chef Olormac:" in the beginning would be very helpful.

[@johnnycampbell3422]

@perjohanaxell9862 I just figured the pictures/ illustrations could focus on the speaker. I reckon it would be more work, I just don't know by how much.

[@CiscavanOnzen]

The original written story does mention who's POV each chapter is written in.

[@ditchdigger5477]

Spartans, what is your profession? I liked the story, now I'm hooked.

[@beanbag8449]

AUU AUU AUU!

[@zinithin-8208]

Very cool episode!

[@stratometal]

I had to listen closer, it felt to me like Ares was being pronounced weirdly, which I found fitting since its a non-human world. As always great episode! I feel blue balled btw. 🤣

[@cjandauntieyaya1446]

I hope it isn't Curse of Binding because that's a fucked up head piece that Nick would be stuck wearing until he dies.

[@CommanderJPS]

at least it'll hide his human ears 😂 maybe he could pull off acting as elven

[@cjandauntieyaya1446]

@@CommanderJPS Sharp teeth, blue instead of green eyes and no green tint of the skin won't help him.

[@RustyEcks]

Loving it!

[@bobbolan4672]

Nice cliffhanger.

[@anakin50137]

ARES!!!!!

[@wayneresper7761]

I like this story, but the inability for this reader to separate the voices on who is speaking is confusing sometimes...