How To Make Your Writing Flow

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[@jasminetorres6833]

this is so amazing i’ve been struggling with my writing all my life this really opened my eyes to new technique and i thank you so much

[@DrClareLynch]

Glad it helped!

[@AbbasKhan-my4lk]

Professor you have wonderful way of teaching. Suggestion for upcoming videos. Essay components such as a) Relevance b) Structure c) How to handle an argument or to be argumentative d) Counter-viewing the argument e) Avoid superfluity f) English - figurative and metaphoric g) How to pitch your bias h) How to avoid spurious ideas i) How to show difference between specific and general ideas j) Paragraph transition (most important)

[@rickylien9012]

Thanks very much for explaining how to make writing 'flow' from sentence to sentence. You've explained it clearly, and I like the way you labelled the sentence A to B, B to C, C to D. I would also assume that in spoken communication, you could very well follow the same rule. Much appreciated. Additionally, I am enjoying learning so much from your writing course!

[@DrClareLynch]

I'm glad you found the explanation helpful - and I'm delighted to hear you're learning a lot from the course!

[@chirag051]

Love you, This is what I was looking for. Thanks a lot!!!!!!

[@zemedkunmersha2103]

Teacher , your lecture helped me to create confidence on my writing .Many thanks.

[@lite1776]

So good. This flowed so beautifully.

[@rickymolina7390]

Like the subject of this video, your message just flows almost effortlessly. Such a pleasure to watch. Thank you.

[@amazingvipul8392]

Coherence is very well explained. Thank you 🙏

[@beatporthaha]

Nicely done, Dr. Lynch-I enjoyed this educational video. :-) Something to keep in mind for any freelance reporters out there: readers have short attention spans. If you can get the most important details out in a few concise, descriptive sentences, the more likely it is that a reader will finish reading your story. The second example here illustrated flow in long form writing perfectly. Use that example as a reference for writing that is not limited by a word count. Happy writing, everyone!

[@hero-pn4fs]

Thank yu for the tips very helpful indeed!

[@dorukcansev]

Underrated content, thanks

[@fritzseva7602]

Thanks for this idea! 🙂🙂🙂

[@AhmedHassan-yo8gr]

This is one of the most important video I have watched .clear and interested , I would love to reach the her for more advice.Thank you

[@DrClareLynch]

Glad you found it useful, Ahmed. You can get more of tips and advice here: www.dorisandbertie.com/

[@SempiternamentePisa]

That's brilliant! Greetings from Italy...ciao

[@prajwalwarhade7273]

Absolutely amazing video!!! Truly helpful. Thanks!!😁

[@DrClareLynch]

Thank you - glad it was useful!

[@nebatatuhurakasozi3237]

Thank you doe this. It is extremely helpful.

[@DrClareLynch]

You're very welcome!

[@aidennunya5975]

Brilliant!

[@robertsantana3261]

You are wonderful.❤

[@qntkka]

Your voice is excellent!

[@theathomas]

Very useful information 👍

[@MrYusuf-wi1rx]

thank you, it is usefull information

[@chung837]

thank you.May I know if you have persuasive writing course for ESL students ?thanks

[@FirstZen000]

You just saved me from failing my exam thank you so much!😁

[@Zozo-pc2te]

Thank you so much

[@DrClareLynch]

You're most welcome

[@bhaskarbhattacharjee1173]

Excellent

[@jhubert1164]

Thank u🙏🙏🙏

[@qntkka]

Hi! 🙂 I could not help but notice that you paused after "yogurt" where there was no indication of a pause in the writing of your improved paragraph. Was that a mistake in the written structure, or your reading of the paragraph? Thanks!

[@FreshKicks4545]

How many sentences should link around a detail or idea, before moving on to the next detail or idea in the same paragraph?

[@amitbhandari4299]

Very useful

[@DrClareLynch]

Thanks!

[@meyou-qu3rz]

English is my 3rd language, I have difficulty finding connectors, and we at school are constantly told to use PEEL paragraphs (point, example, evidence, link) I cannot figure out how to link these and I keep on getting 4/8

[@swisdom9117]

I have to try this. My writing just sounds like trash these days, especially when I'm writing academic pieces

[@DrClareLynch]

Give it a go!

[@FreshKicks4545]

Would this method work, for Narrative and Expository essay?

[@DrClareLynch]

Yes, it would work for any writing!

[@dollarsgain360]

Nice explanation..

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Woah your voice is so soothing, can you be my mom?

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[@amani9335]

The milk of gods

[@arklanbk]

her shoulders move a lot, like shes in a slow earthquake, kind of distracting xD

[@FreshKicks4545]

Lol then move on Jack!

[@amnawarraich281]

why the lady is giving excessive expression😂