How to Structure Your Screenplay

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Tyler Mowery

Tyler Mowery

4 жыл бұрын

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In this video, I give you a breakdown of the essential elements of storytelling, traditional screenplay structure, and a glimpse into the purpose of stories as a whole. The Story Circle is the most valuable tool for writers struggling to build organic narrative structure into their stories. Understanding it fully will allow you to use it to build your full screenplay, each act, sequence, and even each scene.
Resources:
Using the Story Circle to Break Down The Dark Knight: • Using the Story Circle...
Dan Harmon on the Story Circle: channel101.fandom.com/wiki/St...
Charlie Kaufman's Writing Advice: • Charlie Kaufman | BAFT...
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@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 3 жыл бұрын
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@philipgrigoleit6240
@philipgrigoleit6240 2 жыл бұрын
I got a question: Is the need in the story circle model, the same "need" as in creating a character when want/need is distinguished?
@tejuboymusicchannel
@tejuboymusicchannel 11 ай бұрын
​@@philipgrigoleit6240😊😊😊😊😊😊aaa
@zayng.7553
@zayng.7553 4 жыл бұрын
I don't know who needs to hear this but... Don't attach your identity to the things you write, learn to write garbage and one day when you've pulled through kicking and screaming, you'll write something good. And you'll feel like you can fly.
@MacronLacrom
@MacronLacrom 4 жыл бұрын
Trust me, everything I've written so far is garbage...
@rishikamath6718
@rishikamath6718 4 жыл бұрын
A to the effing Men brother!
@zayng.7553
@zayng.7553 4 жыл бұрын
@@MacronLacrom Perfect, don't you dare stop.
@formulaic78
@formulaic78 4 жыл бұрын
I wrote my first great script in the last few months. It's my seventh and comes 20 years after my first attempt. I read Blake Snyder about ten years ago but found it too constrictive and largely ignored it save for the idea of making your protagonist immediately likable. Then after doing my polished first draft of this script (which I normally would have considered to be finished and sent off to competitions) in my usual way of just following my gut based on years of avid movie watching, I watched a few videos from Michael Hague and followed his structure and character arc guidelines. Through about four rewrites it created a far better script with better defined characters and a clearer structure. The story remained pretty much the same, but the characters really came alive and the story gained more impetus through focusing on constant conflict more than I usually would. I got the script to exactly 110 pages and my break into act two occurs on page 25, but these things happened quite organically rather than me trying to hit exact page numbers.
@zayng.7553
@zayng.7553 4 жыл бұрын
@@formulaic78 Good for You! Keep at it.
@thatoneseen
@thatoneseen 4 жыл бұрын
Structures are great guidelines that help us focus on what we have in our heads! But they aren't everything
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Very true!
@TopShelfFandomVids
@TopShelfFandomVids 4 жыл бұрын
I was disappointed when I saw u were going to talk about the story circle since it has been done so many times but I have to admit u managed to add new layers to this story theory and u showcased it in a very insightful and entertaining way . Big fan of ur work and well done
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad you found it helpful!
@TopShelfFandomVids
@TopShelfFandomVids 4 жыл бұрын
Tyler Mowery I appreciate how u made sure to make the distinction between story theory and A screenwriting template or methodology. I feel that’s incredibly insightful and very important to remember when looking at story theory and various methodologies
@OutstandingScreenplays
@OutstandingScreenplays 4 жыл бұрын
Great video, very insightful! I would say that in your first draft you shouldn't think of structure too much and just write freely and let yourself go. But in the second and third draft, you definitely should try and shape your screenplay in at least somewhat structure so your script will tell a satisfying story. You might say that Quentin Tarantino is against the structure, but he actually writes in chapters and his final films always have a solid structure.
@jan99443
@jan99443 4 жыл бұрын
So well said, completely agree!
@lauraf8625
@lauraf8625 4 жыл бұрын
💯🙌
@KutWrite
@KutWrite 4 жыл бұрын
That makes the initial writing easier, but let me tell you, that first revision is a bitch!
@beekenko2379
@beekenko2379 4 жыл бұрын
@@KutWrite depends how well you know your characters and purpose of conflict
@formulaic78
@formulaic78 4 жыл бұрын
@@KutWrite On the script I just finished I wrote a three page outline of my story before beginning. Then I wrote the script and diverged about 30%. Then I analysed what I'd written and diverged about another 30% in the subsequent rewrites. I don't think I would be able to envisage exactly what happens in a finished story without attempting to write it because so many ideas occur to you along the way, but at the same time without having made an outline to begin with I could have gone off the rails completely and had to completely rewrite the first draft. Which incidentally is the feedback I've had on all my previous scripts where I wrote no outline at all: "Page 1 rewrite"!!
@garfxeo4469
@garfxeo4469 4 жыл бұрын
Really liked the editing in this video, makes understanding your points a lot easier. Keep up the good work!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@UncleMerlin
@UncleMerlin 3 жыл бұрын
@@TylerMowery where did you learn to edit your videos?
@user-go2yu4hq5p
@user-go2yu4hq5p 3 жыл бұрын
@@TylerMowery Hi I am a new writer and I appreciate your helpful videos so much 😊 I am also a video editor I would edit two videos for you for free if you would like🧡 If you are interested tell me thanks 🤠
@DanielEarl
@DanielEarl 4 жыл бұрын
Plot is definitely what people struggle with most.
@formulaic78
@formulaic78 4 жыл бұрын
I find characters far harder. When I have a great high concept idea, I find I can follow that for 110 pages without too many issues. For me the hardest part is making my characters come alive because I don't really care about character, I like plot. For example I don't like Die Hard because of John McCain's pretty stereotypical rendition of a grizzled cop, I like it because of the situation the writer creates and how that unfolds. What I found really helped me with characters is the idea of them each having needs, goals, and psychological and moral weaknesses (which I think I got from Michael Hague). Especially just even being aware of the latter two helped me to bring my characters to life. For example in the script I just finished I gave my lead character a Toronto Blue Jays cap that he wears throughout. This actually belonged to his dead father and he has a mannerism of touching it whenever he feels threatened. The cap also represents his psychological weakness of not being able to trust people because his dad promised he would be back before running into a burning house and dying in the prologue. At the end of the movie he gives the cap to someone he has learned to trust, highlighting his arc of change from being distrustful to trusting. The cap is also a Canadian team cap because another aspect of the story is the struggle his Mexican immigrant friend has to go through to be accepted in America, while his Canadian family easily assimilated. In the past I just would have given him the cap to differentiate him, but not put any thought behind why THAT cap. Developing the characters in this way also really helped my plot though too. By putting greater conflict between them it allows the story to be naturally more interesting, even if it still ends up at the same place.
@yejikim3481
@yejikim3481 3 жыл бұрын
@@formulaic78 yeah, I can relate. I agree that you should have goals for your character, but make sure that it plays a part in the story. Remember, what your character believes controls a lot of what they do. That's why I started writing lots of character-driven stories, which moves forward by what the character believes. Here's an example of a plot: A man goes to the store to buy some milk. Boring, right? We don't know anything about the man. But here's a character driven plot: A man named Bob woke up on a Monday morning, feeling exhausted. He had spent all night working on a project that was due today, but he only started working on it the day before. He had gotten so little sleep, he was so tempted to go back to his bed and take the day off. Hell, he was tempted to just quit! But he knew he couldn't bear to lose his job for the fifth time this year. So instead, he walked to the kitchen and started brewing some coffee. Just to make sure he was fully awake and ready for the day, he made 22 shots of espresso and took a sip, then spit it straight out. It was way to bitter for his taste, since he always preferred to drink latte. Not bothering to clean up the mess, he walked to his fridge to get some milk, only to realize that it was completely empty. He had forgotten to go grocery shopping again. It was only then he really saw himself for who he was. A lazy man who's life was a complete mess and wasn't responsible at all. He didn't used to be like this. But ever since his wife left him, he changed. He knew, that he needed to get his act together. Of course, he knew he couldn't suddenly change his lifestyle at once, but he could start with little things. Like for example, going grocery shopping. Since he was just about to make some coffee, he decided to go buy himself some milk. So he drove to the store. But when he got there, there was so many snacks like chips and chocolate that he was tempted to buy. Yet, he walked passed the tempting snacks, knowing that he should take care of his health more, and went straight to the dairy section and grabbed the milk and came home and placed it in the fridge. Proudly, he nodded in victory as he knew, for the first time since his wife left, he had done something responsible. Yes, it was only milk, but this was the start of a new chapter for Bob. This was the day his life changed forever. From this story, we now know so much about Bob, although the story was literally just about a man going to buy some milk. That's the beauty of character-driven stories. Such simple plots can turn into a great story, because each of his action reveals something about Bob. Why did he spend all night working on a project? Why didn't he start earlier? Why didn't he just forget about it? And why didn't he just go back to bed and forget about his job? Why was he suddenly motivated to buy milk, and why did he refuse to buy snacks instead? All of these question should point back to the character, Bob, rather than the plot. But I guess you could say that this is a very character-driven story with not much plot. I think that even if their was a lot more to this story, it should in some way help the character to develop. For example, what if his car broke down on the way to the store? Would Bob just give up and go back, or continue to persevere and walk all the way to the store and reach his goal? And what if the store was all out of milk? Would he go back and forget about it, or would he be resilient and go to another store and look for milk there? The point is, the plot should not only move the story forward, but also reveal something about the character. Also, a way to tie in the plot with the character's inner conflict is to ask, 'Why does this matter to my character?' Bob is on his way to buy milk, when his car breaks down. Yeah, it's bad because no one wants this to happen to their car, but why is this specifically important for Bob? Because he believes that if he can't accomplish a simple task without breaking something, how on earth is he going to deal with big things? He starts to tell himself that he's an idiot that can't do anything and become depressed. that's how you make a simple sentence into a complex story.
@timothycrash4158
@timothycrash4158 3 жыл бұрын
@@formulaic78 Except with Die Hard, the reason you like the plot is because of the character. Imagine if, instead of a grizzled New York cop, it was an ex Navy Seal, who could dispatch terrorists with ease, and wasn't such an underdog. McLean's character is extremely important for tension. He's not in great shape, he's not a super soldier, he talks like a working class guy, smokes, his wife's more ambitious than him. He's out of his element both in the limo to the party, around his wife, at the party with the wealthy folks, and then totally out of his element with the terrorists. Even the terrorists are in $5000 suits, giving them more in common with the partygoers than McLean. Everything about his character makes that story. Right down to the tension between him and the FBI guys vs. him and the kinship he has with the street cop outside. That movie could have easily been a forgettable straight to video action movie - but his character, that constant contrast with his surroundings, and the allies he creates because of that working-class character are what drive the tension / emotion.
@safireearp7639
@safireearp7639 3 жыл бұрын
I struggle with plot it hard
@ricardomarquezeledutuber8705
@ricardomarquezeledutuber8705 2 жыл бұрын
Tyler, your teachings (and the way you explain concepts, etc) are PURE GOLD. In my humble opinion I believe your channel is the most underrated channel within the film/storytelling/screenwriting space.
@bleh6339
@bleh6339 4 жыл бұрын
Can you analyze a season of a TV show
@solarash9299
@solarash9299 4 жыл бұрын
Thats amazing idea
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Great idea!
@Laughterhouse5
@Laughterhouse5 4 жыл бұрын
Tyler Mowery Breaking Bad?
@solarash9299
@solarash9299 4 жыл бұрын
@@Laughterhouse5 game of thrones seems better
@austinitsua
@austinitsua 4 жыл бұрын
Better Call Saul 😎
@GlaceonStudios
@GlaceonStudios 4 жыл бұрын
I remember reading somebody else's "9-act model" and I lost all faith in the model when the author wrote about how _Nemo_ was a story about Nemo trying to find his lost dad Marvin.
@cavinb11
@cavinb11 4 жыл бұрын
In a way that makes sense, Nemo’s dad feels lost without his wife and he ends up being an overprotective father to his son.
@atomicdancer
@atomicdancer 4 жыл бұрын
"A Guide to How to Write Shocking Twists, by me, atomicdancer" Part One of One: The 9 Point Model Welcome to my guide to teach you how to write the shocking twists in movie scripts. Here is a example from a movie who is call 'Star Wars: The Empire Strikes Again' (1981): *Dark Vader:* "Obi Wan should tell you. Don't you know who is my father?" *Luke Skypewalker:* "I know who is - is Obi Wan who is your father." *Dark Vader:* "No Luke. You is my father!" *Luke Skypewalker:* "Whu?!" *Audience:* 😵 As can see in example, classic twist has 9 point model: 1. back-up 2. set-up 3. question 4. certainty 5. denial 6. reverse 7. reveal 8. whu? 9. confuse. Now you too can create shocking twist with this amazing 9 point model. Thak you, don't forget to lick comment, and subscribe.
@rottensquid
@rottensquid 4 жыл бұрын
@@cavinb11 Yes, but that's not what the movie's story is about. If anyone is trying to find Marvin, it's Marvin.
@DavidBubarYT
@DavidBubarYT 4 жыл бұрын
You're actually right, Nemo's not trying to find Marvin. He's actually trying to find Marlin...
@zakai-kaz
@zakai-kaz 3 жыл бұрын
@@DavidBubarYT no it’s Batman who is trying to find Marvin in Marvels hit classic Sonic and knuckles 3
@marydavis8012
@marydavis8012 2 жыл бұрын
Omg this video helped me out so much! I finished three different books on writing and was starting to experience writer's block because I kept feeling like I wasn't hitting the formula. This helped my block and made me ease up with not being so strict with my writing. Thank you
@david_garibaldi
@david_garibaldi 3 жыл бұрын
This is so good you should be charging 190 $ for the whole Course. Seriously: THANK YOU so much for putting this out FOR FREE! Amazing.
@jeffreyleerobinson
@jeffreyleerobinson 3 жыл бұрын
This understanding of script structure was popularized by the Greek classic plays and formulized by Aristotle in Poetics. Syd Field, indeed, made it more accessible. But hardly the harbinger. Those Valkyries have been flying about for some time.
@stickysushi09
@stickysushi09 4 жыл бұрын
I would love you to make a screenplay structure breakdown on the korean hit movie parasite! It has a really interesting and socially insightful plotline and the characters integrate with each act really well in my opinion.
@huckwalton2307
@huckwalton2307 3 жыл бұрын
After years of tweaking my screen play structures, I have distilled my process into 3 methodologies depending on what I’m writing. If I’m doing an episodic, I use Dan’s story circle. If I’m right a feature, I use Blake Snyder’s save the cat. If I’m writing in epic, then I use Joseph Campbell’s heroes journey. I think it’s important to discover your own system for writing, but I think these three methods best distill the types of density in storytelling. Regardless of the type of storyteller you are, understanding structure simply arms you with information which is never wrong. If you are someone who writes with your gut and not with a roadmap, simply use these structures as guideposts for when something isn’t working. It’s a wonderful tool to be able to realize something is wrong in your script, and look at the structure points for reasons why that might be.
@JoJo-xp6wr
@JoJo-xp6wr 4 жыл бұрын
Sorry for my many comments, but I love the innovation of your editing, Mr. Mowery! Keep it up!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks, will do!
@zenocamera
@zenocamera 2 жыл бұрын
Met this guy at a Rooftop in Chicago last night! Extremely smart and kind human being, keep doing what you're doing my man!
@MatthewHaines
@MatthewHaines 2 жыл бұрын
I used to improvise stories for my middle school students involving a recurring character, but they were never very good...I was always happy when the bell rang and I didn't need to finish the story. I just tried, as an exercise, writing a story outline based on the Story Circle. I'm really impressed at how clearly I have an actual story in mind now. I feel like I could make something up on the spot, using this outline, and it would be way more satisfying.
@philyoung8914
@philyoung8914 2 жыл бұрын
Being new to the field I have been for meaningful guidance. Tyler’s video’s are beautifully put together. Jam packed with stimulating information - it takes me an hour to watch 20 minutes - replaying and scribbling down ideas. A huge thank you from me.
@annomalee8663
@annomalee8663 4 жыл бұрын
You animated the video so well, it really supports the process of understanding the content.
@rohitpawar9676
@rohitpawar9676 3 жыл бұрын
This Story circle is so prominent in Interstellar especially Cooper's character! Good Job mate!
@Clayaga
@Clayaga 3 жыл бұрын
For anyone starting this now; This guys got a lot to learn and has a fairly novice understanding of what makes something a good piece. He references Dan Harmon a lot and I would just go check out Dan Harmons writing techniques.
@cuvvychase3626
@cuvvychase3626 Жыл бұрын
Your content is so inspiring and articulate. This one video has given me more understanding of screenwriting than all the books I’ve ever read on this topic. Thank you Tyler🙏🏽
@orderanycars101
@orderanycars101 2 жыл бұрын
I'm not even sure how to begin to say THANK YOU for such a clear, concise, extremely informative and right to the point video. This is exactly what I've been needing. Appreciative is an understatement. Thanks a million 🤜🤛👍💥🔥💯
@jeffreyleerobinson
@jeffreyleerobinson 3 жыл бұрын
But don't get me wrong - very much appreciate your content here; helpful in it's breakdown - particularly in the the way you cast structure as, well - keep it relevant. relatable. Which is the basis of all story telling - empathy.
@Engelhafen
@Engelhafen 3 жыл бұрын
I recommend everyone immerse the,selves in the diversity off origin films and how variety feeds new visions of story.
@ayizasalman9833
@ayizasalman9833 4 жыл бұрын
You have combined all the elements of your other videos so perfectly into this one while being more detailed and thorough by giving examples. It feels like a class but only the one I loved taking. Thank you for such great content. Can't wait for the next video.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it! My goal is for this channel to be the home of the most clear, practical videos on screenwriting and storytelling
@lasha3688
@lasha3688 Жыл бұрын
I can't believe I am getting access to such wealth of information for free. I cannot thank you enough!
@kaneera4678
@kaneera4678 4 жыл бұрын
Loved the editing on this one - so fluid and clear!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@KutWrite
@KutWrite 4 жыл бұрын
Yes, it's not just great content, well written and narrated, but the actual production, graphics and editing are top-notch, professionally done.
@elsilossos626
@elsilossos626 3 жыл бұрын
Ouf! Your designs and the blending of the charts and graphs you use is getting close to perfect. Big wow!
@maxclark8099
@maxclark8099 3 жыл бұрын
One of my favorite movies of all time. Glad you picked it! Really helped me understand.
@smepable
@smepable 4 жыл бұрын
What you do is GOLD. enjoy every of your Videos, so good analysis and visual presentation. Can t believe its free!
@redfantasy101
@redfantasy101 3 жыл бұрын
It stunned me how my story had that same structure without even knowing, so YES it’s amazing! USE IT PEOPLE
@milanshrestha2924
@milanshrestha2924 4 жыл бұрын
How about German TV series called Dark. It is so complex, how they pulled that off?? Characters, tones, score and screenplay are top notch. I haven't seen such a screenplay in TV shows for years!!!
@carolinamachado6668
@carolinamachado6668 2 жыл бұрын
the way you edit with notes its goalsss
@AndrewStonerock
@AndrewStonerock 2 жыл бұрын
Taking this journey myself. I had a crazy dream and started thinking about it, realized it was about dealing with trauma and loss, and decided to try and write it down. I will be using the story circle for the next phase.
@KutWrite
@KutWrite Жыл бұрын
Tyler: You have so much great content. Your animated graphics support what you're saying and are so well done. Thanks for all your master-ful work.
@davidbjacobs3598
@davidbjacobs3598 4 жыл бұрын
Nice video! I always say you need to know the rules in order to break them. Small aside: Lou Bloom in Nightcrawler does change. He gains power, status, and personal fulfillment. The missing beat is in the cost: while most people in his shoes would feel they sacrificed their humanity to achieve their goal, Lou is completely unfazed by the horrors he's committed and thus lost nothing.
@likestarsonearth5267
@likestarsonearth5267 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for this. I do Filmmaking and I struggle with this.
@gabrielmargolies9154
@gabrielmargolies9154 2 жыл бұрын
While most of the best films follow traditional story structures, I really like when films move away and try something new. My favorite example is Memento, and as there are some spoilers in this comment, here's a SPOILER WARNING. Anyway, Memento actually follows a sort of traditional story and character arc, except it is the audience instead who is the character. We are the ones who start from a position of comfort, enter the unknown, gain information as the film goes on, and eventually have our world changed entirely when we learn that we were lied to the entire time. It's almost like our understanding of the story undergoes the arc usually undergone by the protagonist, and it's brilliant.
@noahtokarski4516
@noahtokarski4516 4 жыл бұрын
Great quality video, very clear and informative. I really like the way that you explain things and break them down. Keep up the good work!
@obenbenisti1507
@obenbenisti1507 3 жыл бұрын
This channel is criminally underrated
@juju10683
@juju10683 Жыл бұрын
I like this a lot more than any plot, Sequence, or scene structure device I have ever seen.
@eartist103
@eartist103 4 жыл бұрын
Tyler continuing to churn out helpful and relevant videos to all screenwriters. We love to see it
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
More to come!
@sinamollajafar7934
@sinamollajafar7934 11 ай бұрын
I have not seen anyone who can teach as well as you, thank you🤩🤩🤩
@elektra81516
@elektra81516 3 жыл бұрын
Something that needs to be understood is that your story won't be perfect on it's first draft. These things take time to make and your first draft will be bad, never be afraid to just write what comes to mind with the structure being at the forefront.
@rgkinghorn9178
@rgkinghorn9178 2 жыл бұрын
these videos have helped me so much! Started planning my first story today!
@IamWaTeR2112
@IamWaTeR2112 2 жыл бұрын
Jesus christ this is amazing. Thank you very much man for just unblocking my mind and giving me amazing tools.
@flemflogan4650
@flemflogan4650 3 жыл бұрын
This is massively helpful and incite full !
@arturolievano1350
@arturolievano1350 3 жыл бұрын
Oh the timing...glad I found you m8, amazing content.
@EpicMindsets
@EpicMindsets 3 жыл бұрын
Greatness!! You are on a level of your own!
@movingamountain
@movingamountain 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks man! This is an awesome course and I appreciate that it is free!
@MariaContreras-kr4ji
@MariaContreras-kr4ji 4 жыл бұрын
Excellent Tyler! What a great video to communicate such a great, helpful tool! Amazing synthesis and explication. My respect!
@YCV624
@YCV624 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!! It's hard to find a video like this ;)
@Yessbabyblue
@Yessbabyblue 2 жыл бұрын
Man so much value all your videos. big thanks to you and your work you put here foe free. bless you
@rne1223
@rne1223 3 жыл бұрын
This video should have more views.
@SonjaPond
@SonjaPond 3 жыл бұрын
Excellent video. I loved the end where you reminded us why we tell stories ❤️
@missintrovert_deluluauthor
@missintrovert_deluluauthor 4 жыл бұрын
I really struggle with writing the middle of my books. The list really helps. I LOVE lists!
@memo-vision
@memo-vision 4 жыл бұрын
The pixar structure is also organic. Your form of divide the film remind me the kishotenketsu. Presentation Develotment Twist Resolution
@KiX-K4T13
@KiX-K4T13 4 жыл бұрын
I really do love these videos, Tyler. These have been so helpful. They have been my lifeblood. I got back into creating only about a year ago and I'm more than serious anymore. I've become obsessed with my comic/graphic novel. (It's really more of a graphic novel.) I just wanted to say thanks for making these. It's just great.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it! Keep writing!
@KiX-K4T13
@KiX-K4T13 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks! I don't want to come off as a braggart, but I'm happy where I'm at. The transition from traditional to digital (the new traditional) has been costly--and with a learning curve at that. It's fun though. Hope you keep on keeping on!
@natalieyale
@natalieyale 3 ай бұрын
thanks so much for this content! I'm an actor working on writing my first short. Super helpful.
@mr.diluaa8941
@mr.diluaa8941 4 жыл бұрын
Wow..... i love this 💓💓💓💗💗
@scadeline805
@scadeline805 3 жыл бұрын
Wow, man great job! Cool story tool you shared with, thank you man!
@PsikologHasanArslan
@PsikologHasanArslan 2 жыл бұрын
Great video. Great channel. Thanks.
@motiv8shands334
@motiv8shands334 4 жыл бұрын
Pretty useful. I loved it. An upgrade of the last video on Story structure you did. Thanks a lot, Tyler. Learned a lot.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@amaree9732
@amaree9732 2 жыл бұрын
Very helpful approach to making your story the best it can be. My advice, keep a dinky pocket notebook handy, because you never know when a great idea will pop into your head.
@abeng6879
@abeng6879 3 жыл бұрын
amazing!
@gigiovanna4515
@gigiovanna4515 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!! Helped a lot
@user-wy4pz8rk9i
@user-wy4pz8rk9i 3 жыл бұрын
Wow, it's very easy explain!
@elm889
@elm889 11 ай бұрын
Wow what a great video, so helpful! Thank you
@RamblingGreek
@RamblingGreek 3 жыл бұрын
This was a very helpful and extremely well made video. Thank you
@gabrielsheley2678
@gabrielsheley2678 3 жыл бұрын
You’re awesome man
@AllThingsFilm1
@AllThingsFilm1 4 жыл бұрын
Great video and suggestions. One technique I used to finish a short film I was writing was after outlining the story, I then wrote out the first draft with scene headings which included loglines for each scene. For me, and the way my brain works, this helped me finally work out the structure to my story through this approach. As you pointed out, there are many books on screenwriting, all suggesting various techniques. I found "The Nutshell Technique" by Jill Chamberlain to be also very helpful. In the end, I think that whatever technique you start out with, in the end it has to make sense to you. Despite the variation in techniques, all of these books share the same need for basic information to drive the story. Like religions, they all share the same basic tenets, it's how to "get there" that varies between them. I do think this 8 point circle system is also very helpful. But, it may take trying other techniques before the 8-point circle makes sense. Just my two sense...er...cents.
@UncleMerlin
@UncleMerlin 3 жыл бұрын
Bruh, I'm writing a book and this is still so useful
@SkYla416
@SkYla416 2 жыл бұрын
Sometimes I have my whole vision somewhat fully realized. With full images, sequences all mapped out in perfect detail. And then writing it out scene by scene I have no idea how to get a solid groove that gets me into these perfectly mapped out parts.
@lou-pw6zr
@lou-pw6zr Жыл бұрын
great video! it helped a lot. thanks
@airpoint9715
@airpoint9715 4 жыл бұрын
This is incredibly enlightening, thanks for doing this. Would be super curious to watch a similar assessment of a video game - TLOU for example.
@jamesfrancis9091
@jamesfrancis9091 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for all you do with these videos! I’ve grown so much as a writer. Question: would you consider doing a video like this for a dramedy tv script? I’d greatly appreciate it!🙏🏾
@safireearp7639
@safireearp7639 3 жыл бұрын
Tyler you such good teacher
@damepieper2163
@damepieper2163 3 жыл бұрын
Mind blown 🤯.
@WINSTEADSTUDIOS
@WINSTEADSTUDIOS 4 жыл бұрын
Thank You! Please continue to analyze great film in this way! Can you make it an ongoing series?
@Hst5212
@Hst5212 4 жыл бұрын
I don't know why people dislike great videos like this. Tyler you are doing good work. I'll always support you bro keep it up
@Wydjacob
@Wydjacob 2 жыл бұрын
I just starting writing an outline for a new crime drama and it’s actually pretty good for a first draft. I only wrote the outline for the introduction scene but it’s still not bad
@marjorie6302
@marjorie6302 4 жыл бұрын
Love your videos
@sadeed22
@sadeed22 4 жыл бұрын
Can you analyse an episode of a TV Show? Like the pilots for Breaking Bad, The Wire or Game of Thrones or any other well known show. Or Analyse the best episodes of these shows?
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Yes!
@KutWrite
@KutWrite 4 жыл бұрын
I'll bet you could do it after watching this video. I think I can. BB is so precisely written, I'm sure it fits this structure at both a macro (whole show) and micro (each scene) level. That's why this structure seems golden to me. Thanks, Tyler!
@felixlima7550
@felixlima7550 2 жыл бұрын
You just blew the lid right off my fucking head. That was awesome. It's amazing the stuff you don't see when you're just watching movies as a viewer and not studying it
@scottedwards459
@scottedwards459 4 жыл бұрын
excellent video.
@grungyasscinema
@grungyasscinema 2 жыл бұрын
This might've helped me finish my project
@chess.profit
@chess.profit 4 жыл бұрын
This video was very honest! Thanks for the information.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@akiroonehundred1162
@akiroonehundred1162 4 жыл бұрын
Thank god you posted this I’m about to work on my fourth screenplay.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!
@kishormepal2513
@kishormepal2513 3 жыл бұрын
Wonderful ideas story progresses Information provided Nice brother love you
@DeadMeatClone
@DeadMeatClone 3 жыл бұрын
I learned more from this than I learned in school.
@mczeno
@mczeno 3 жыл бұрын
I like your videos very much, Tyler.
@albertmailyan9680
@albertmailyan9680 4 жыл бұрын
Just in time :) Thank you brother!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
You bet!
@cedricbruintjies4275
@cedricbruintjies4275 4 жыл бұрын
Great editing...
@benjaminread5287
@benjaminread5287 4 жыл бұрын
It's nice to see that you're doing this type of video again (they're the best) but this is just a repeat video of your last story circle video. Looking forwards to more content.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
It’s not about constant new information. It’s about getting fundamentals down and using new examples to deepen your understanding of a fundamental concept
@benjaminread5287
@benjaminread5287 4 жыл бұрын
@@TylerMowery OK but BTW what was the stop motion that u showed clips of?
@dlababy
@dlababy 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you it's very helpful
@CuelNuggit
@CuelNuggit 3 жыл бұрын
the lofi controlla beat in the background
@DarscioStudios
@DarscioStudios 4 жыл бұрын
Great video as always Tyler 👍
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@FalconFordXR
@FalconFordXR 3 жыл бұрын
I'm the opposite. I find that the 2nd Act and 3rd Act are easiest for me. It's the first 30 pages that's most difficult because it's the most crucial.
@rgkinghorn9178
@rgkinghorn9178 2 жыл бұрын
exactly, if you don't set the story up effectively everything that follows is at risk of being sloppy
@FalconFordXR
@FalconFordXR 2 жыл бұрын
@@rgkinghorn9178 it all comes with experience. I've been writing an Australian Action screenplay for the last five years. When it comes to story, it has potential because it's original. However, executing it perfectly is another matter, but I feel that I'm getting much closer. I'm on my fourth draft. Each draft gets better and better because you get to know your characters more and everything else should improve from then on.
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