How to win an essay competition / my experience and 10 tips

[@Surfing566]

Summary: 1. Choose a question that you relate to the most something that you would want to research 2. Pay attention to the rules and the guidelines, what they are looking for. 3. Read previous winners and match them against the marking criteria, why did they win and put reasons why. Make notes about it. 4. Brainstorm ideas about the topic without research, what is your original stance? 5. Research a lot about the topic. Going online, reading books and articles. Going to the library and bookstores. 6. Save different drafts of the essay 7. Check your grammar and have clear paragraphs 8. Use subject terminology - research will help you with this. 9. Referencing - Use cite this for-me 10. Use evaluation, be creative with this evaluation think about different viewpoints and how they’re affected by the decision. 11. If you lose, it’s not that big of a deal. At the end of the day, you have learnt about something new and material for the personal statement.

[@presence3589]

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[@presence3589]

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[@e.k.o5412]

Where are 3 and 4 lol

[@kainatbatool622]

Thanks

[@Surfing566]

@@e.k.o5412 it’s fixed now.

[@specsNsarcasm]

Guys guys guys, came back here after a month or two and guess what I effing won 2nd place in a national contest 🤧🤧🤧 this video helped me get started. Thank-you ✨✨✨

[@presence3589]

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[@newgenerationanpanman7870]

AAHHH I'm so happy for you!! That's amazing🥳🥳

[@rorygilmoresbookshelf9631]

what else did you do?

[@vigneshkamath164]

Amazing video with original tips you won't find in other videos. I would recommend this to all wanting to do better in essay competitions!

[@presence3589]

Thank youu so much for the comment Vignesh !!!

[@unasaric5739]

excellent video with outstanding tips, a great starting poinr or encouragement to reflect if you are in the middle of the writing process. Thank you for the value you provide to thousands of people online! Keep going!

[@presence3589]

Thank you!

[@Surfing566]

Thank you so much, there aren't any videos on KZbin about this.

[@presence3589]

No worries ! I'm super glad it helped!

[@element6264]

I love how you smile when you talk! You remind me of a friend of mine. She gives expressions like you while talking! Nice video

[@presence3589]

aw thank you! I do smile a lot, I practised before and it became a habit. Try smiling and be sad at the same time, it's hard XD smiling more just makes you happier and more positive

[@element6264]

@@presence3589 Yeah! I do appreciate it! It's impossible to stay sad if you start smiling :P I think it's a really good practice! I try it sometimes too.

[@presence3589]

@@element6264 Ikr, thats great you are xx

[@dawhat8561]

Just submitted my essay for the john locke essay competition, Watching the end of your video to cool my anxiety.

[@presence3589]

Fingers crossed for you!

[@angelgutierrez3115]

she's gorg, smart and sweet, thank you so much! You're helping me.

[@presence3589]

aw thank you xx

[@asadshad3774]

Best video I found for my competition

[@louispride7695]

What advice would you give to someone who has very little experience in the subject of the essay competition because it wasn’t available as an A Level subject?

[@louispride7695]

By the way thanks for this video it was really helpful and you’ve just gained a new subscriber!

[@louispride7695]

One thing that will be hard is using good terminology specific to the subject

[@presence3589]

My essay subject was hardly taught in school , just do a tonne of research ! Read book, Google, podcasts, youtube , you will learn everything you need online 😊 good luck !

[@presence3589]

@@louispride7695 ❤❤thank you ! Feel free to dm me on insta for any questions 😊appreciate the support !

[@presence3589]

@@louispride7695 maybe you can do research and make a list of key terms as you go ? The goal of essay competitions are to learn new content in the process not necessarily the end goal of winning

[@neerajyogi3283]

Ok...so ur video had originality and quality over quantity :) And may be that's y i just came in here without any recommendation but myself coz_as they say the talents rise themselves without any glamour and vain N i know that u'll definetly have more views and positives responses in future ...My best wishes to u

[@presence3589]

Neeraj, this is such a sweet comment thank you so much ! Really appreciate it 🤗😄

[@neerajyogi3283]

@@presence3589 Which editing app do u use?_especially the 1 used for this video

[@presence3589]

@@neerajyogi3283 this i just used imovie 😅the quality and background looking back now is very messy haha.. I'm trying to use final cut pro now

[@alamandaputriajeannety7406]

Do you have any blog that show your previous essay?? So it can be a plus point when judges search for your name on the internet (ohh... This person is already advanced in essay writing *label) Thank you so much.. I would be very happy if you were willing to share❤

[@mittmanncarol]

Do you think that it's possible making an essay without searching other one's quotes? just with my ideas? And could you tell if you did the footnote for the references? I am not a English native speaker so it's harder to understand everything that is on the site :'(

[@presence3589]

yes i think so, quotes arent the most important for essays usually ( it depends on what essay ) but what you are awarded for is your own opinions and arguments , i don't quite understand your other question but there's a lot of ' help you cite' websites and info about footnotes and referencing ^_^ all the best

[@friedfishh]

aaah I'm so glad I found your channel! this is really useful :) and i like your vibes hehe subbing

[@presence3589]

sorry for the late reply, xxx appreciate the support a lot aha

[@zaynababdulwaahid-saalihom29]

Thank you, you mentioned very helpful tips.

[@presence3589]

Glad it was helpful!

[@mittmanncarol]

Have you ever heard about Cambridge Summer School Essay Competition? I am going to apply for this :)

[@ifesjournal]

me too!

[@miaselenalerch7785]

how did it go?

[@e.k.o5412]

Wow how did it go?

[@r.m4915]

Yes! I just did it! It was a great experience and I ended up receiving a 30% scholarship! How did you do?

[@presence3589]

Hi! Sorry for seeing the comment so late - That's amazing , congrats! Are you applying to cambridge this year?

[@charityjeremiah608]

Hi..I'm in an essay competition and I just want to know if I'm supposed to write titles like -INTRODUCTION, MAIN BODY AND CONCLUSIO.

[@ped_cane20__]

Thanks so much am preparing for my TAMSA essays Thanks for the tips and I hope ur doing good wid ur studies 🌹

[@presence3589]

Thank you!

[@aquamarine5374]

PLS HELP ME I'M A 7TH GRADER AND IM IN A COMPETITION BECAUSE NONE OF MY CLASSMATES JOINED AND IDK WHAT TO DO

[@presence3589]

ah i am so sorry i just saw this, how did it go?

[@Leah4everrr]

Thank you this is so helpful!

[@friedfishh]

I've recently discovered I wanna do econ at uni, so I was wondering what were the other essay competitions that you went for?

[@presence3589]

its been a while so sorry i dont remember, i just googled and did as many as i found

[@gauri753]

Keep on posting more videos❤️ soon u will reach 1k subscribers 🤘🏻

[@presence3589]

Thank you so much! Sorry for the late reply x Hope your essay went well btw!

[@talhaerenak7396]

I decided atended this competition on engineering topic. So This year we are find differencies VR and AR. I have a very different idea. I think I will show to differencies to comparison way. I wonder can I do that this competition. Its affected positive?

[@presence3589]

comparing different points of views is a good thing to do

[@vjplayzblockz2720]

What wouldyou suggest if the subject we are suppose to be talking In an essay is more than one?

[@presence3589]

I suppose I would have separate paragraphs, do you have an example?

[@vjplayzblockz2720]

@@presence3589 Protection, Enhancement,and Preservation of our Environment

[@luccagarrit5985]

i didnt understand very well what is a economic content, could somebody help me?

[@logickplays7465]

awesome video, especially like the life is about failure part. its 2022 and until now there are not a lot of videos about this.🙃

[@presence3589]

Thank you!

[@sianwilliams27]

Thank you so much! amazing video! :)

[@presence3589]

Glad you liked it!

[@paulinhamachine]

Oii, im brazilian and im making an essay about the scientist who made the most significant contribution to the world. I am kind of confused about the model, i see in video lessons only argumentative dissertative models, but i only see people talk about their essays in the first person and involving a life story. Should I introduce something that happened to me (which relates to the theme) to create a personality, for the reader to know me, or make a more analytical text? help me!

[@presence3589]

sorry i dont know the essay topic well so cant give specific advice

[@letmetry8586]

Yeah, you know what this really helped me so I also subscribed and liked..... Go to heaven.

[@presence3589]

haha thank you! glad it helped

[@yusufshaharyar8528]

What about essay competition in which you get on the spot topic, without any options. What tips can be used.

[@presence3589]

i would use the same technique just that you don't get to choose XD

[@scaredpottah2749]

That ice cream tho-

[@presence3589]

XD

[@fleurdelacour5247]

Do we have to write the questions given on the website under the topics or we can make our own questions about the topic we choose?

[@presence3589]

depends on the competition :)

[@silvermilk...49]

Anyone here for the immerse education essay?🤧

[@rishitjain5877]

me :)

[@adedokunjames9634]

Nice video ❤

[@carolinasisnando244]

Hi! I just finished my text for this year competition and your videos helped me a lot. Just like you, I don’t have any help, so can I talk to you in private about some doubts? If you can’t, there is no problem at all! You have already helped me! Plus, I’m brazilian, so english is not my first language 🤡

[@presence3589]

yes sure, just send me a dm on insta x

[@carolinasisnando244]

@@presence3589 I just did! And thank u so much

[@kylamaevillareal6736]

there's a part where you speak too fast but I can understand it tho, anyways thank you for this video it helps me summarize my idea of how should i write essay

[@presence3589]

Oops!

[@kylamaevillareal6736]

@@presence3589 hi, just wanna let you know that I won in essay competition. Thanks a lot for ur help. ❤

[@presence3589]

@@kylamaevillareal6736 WOOOO congrats!

[@cam8257]

What university are going to currently?

[@presence3589]

LSE :)

[@cam8257]

​@@presence3589 Is there any school that would of been better for economics or in the uk that is the best and if you have any knowledge about, what would be better for a law degree, LSE or Oxford?

[@mellonear9130]

Does anybody know any more essay competitions apart from the young economist of the world and the JLI ones?

[@presence3589]

IEA has one I remember

[@mahekshaikh3057]

Can we add quotes!??

[@presence3589]

I don't see why not, as long as you add " "

[@presence3589]

Also check the rules

[@mahekshaikh3057]

@@presence3589 Ay Ay captain

[@gopikaarts2759]

congrats mam

[@presence3589]

thank youx

[@dantestudying4343]

Is there a way I can reach you 1 on 1?

[@presence3589]

insta!

[@muhadzibrezkihilmy9351]

oh my godd. Ur so cutee!! thank you for the viideoo!!

[@presence3589]

aw thank you!

[@jessberry9721]

Can I do one in four days?

[@presence3589]

You can do anything if you believe you can :) unrelated but I know someone who went from 30% in maths to 70% in a week so an essay in 4 days is possible if you focus and just take action ;) if you think its overwhelming and stressful then you can choose not to but there's nothing stopping you from doing it right?

[@jessberry9721]

I’m going to give it a shot

[@jessberry9721]

I’ll let you know how it goes!!

[@presence3589]

@@jessberry9721 yeeeeee! You got this ;)

[@presence3589]

how did it go?

[@analeal5260]

I loved the video so much! But I have some doubts, so could I speak to you in private? ☺️

[@presence3589]

insta dms xx