How to Write a Great Music Artist Bio - Get the First Sentence Right!

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I wonder if anyone could offer me feedback on this first try at a one-liner: Weaving hard-earned words of wisdom, truth, courage and love into songs, stories and melodies that shift the inner landscape and heal the soul ✨

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I’m researching on how to promote a single that is coming out very soon. It is a Thanksgiving day song and my hope is it will come back around every fall for many many years. I’m thinking about catching their attention by writing the chorus as the first line…. “She took everything but the turkey, she left without saying a word, now I’m all alone on Thanksgiving day she took it all and gave me the bird” Anybody want to give me some advice?

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How’s this for an opening? Landing between indie, alt-country, and folk, Will Johnson’s 6th album Memento Vivere was born at the crossroads of life and death.

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crossroads of life and death is great ...rest is fine but would be cool to add more about the serious stuff too instead of genres...

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How do you deal with your bio as an upcoming artist who needs a record label 🏷.

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Here's a bio, let me know what you think! Brooding, introverted and volatile are words which grasp at fitting SOMBRA’s music into a niche. The project, based out of Montreal, Canada flirts with the borders of genre and style, often shifting moods within the same song, like the subconscious mind can wander alone in a dark room. Led by producer / multi-instrumentalist, Matthew Cataldo, SOMBRA blends chunky, hip-hop inspired electronic beats with alt-rock sensibility; heavily distorted bass riffs and spiralling synth & guitar lines are the foundation with which melodic vocal lines sit. Inwards-looking and begging to wage war on the inner psyche, SOMBRA’s music reveals a dynamism that examines the reality of the human condition.

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We met at 14 got at married at 20 yrs old been married a decade plus and have now found our way to writing and recording our debut album “hand in hand”. Too much? Lol

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[@ChrisGarby]

Hi, this is the start of my artists bio, I'm curious what you think. I know it can always be better, but is it interesting? THE SIREN STORY: The Siren, was a winged creature who protected the Goddess Persephone, daughter of Zeus and Demeter. One spring solstice, Persephone wandered off through a field of flowers and was abducted by Hades to the Underworld where he forced her to marry him. The Siren failed in her sworn duty to protect Persephone, was stripped of her wings and banished from Mount Olympus to an island off the coast of Sicily. She would remain there until she found Persephone and returned her home safely.

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Hi Chris... no! (sorry) I'm two paragraphs in and I have no idea why I'm reading this. Please rewatch the video and start from scratch. Then, post your next draft here. Let's build this thing together.

[@ChrisGarby]

Outerloop Group ok, will do

[@ChrisGarby]

@@OuterloopGroup Hi Paul, Let me know if this is any better. (In a sea of sameness, Illusions of Grandeur rises from the waters skillfully blending elements of mythology, progressive and fantasy metal. The band will take you on a musical journey through highs and lows and life altering decisions.)

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Too many words. And I would argue "rises from the waters" and "take you on a musical journey" are cliches. And you'll have to differentiate your mythology if you are going to say you're "unique" and then say you're putting mythology in fantasy metal. ALL fantasy metal includes mythology (generally). But "life altering decisions" is interesting. I'm not sure what you're going for there but... if you were to be able to argue something like... Rarely does fantasy metal convince listeners to change their lives. Nor progressive metal. But _____ do just that with their new album/EP/single... It isn't perfect, by any stretch. But... isn't that compelling?

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