How To Write A "Perfect" Power System

[@jonathan4lee]

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[@Lunarinaron]

Okay! I just sent in my form for my story!

[@ska4666]

Dude Making A video about "Perfected Power Systems" and Actually not Talking about BLEACH's power system... i akin to Crime L😂L. That Anime Literally has the Complexity of Nen, The Nuance Of JoJo & Power Sources Better presented than One Piece: I like the concept of Devil fruit, but it just doesn't feel that innate or Natural than what BLEACH has presented.

[@Potable_scent]

I love stands because its just "here, have the ability to create a comedically long rope that can let you doxx people thats a good conducter for your other power, have fun" stands don't get stronger, the user gets more creative

[@Seinsmelled]

"stands dont get stronger" act stands:

[@Potable_scent]

@@Seinsmelled they don't really get stronger, they are unlocked to their full potential

[@Seinsmelled]

@@Potable_scent isnt that literally just getting stronger? act 1 to act 2 is literally a direct upgrade for Tusk

[@Potable_scent]

@@Seinsmelled its more of a stand's potential being unlocked than it is a power boost and thats only the case for like 2 stands

[@ohhellwhereami2574]

​@@Seinsmelledact stands are representation of person growing from their almost none fighting spirit to better fighter like koichi wnd johnny who was scared as shi during boom boom family arc

[@lukeskywalker8706]

And the best part about stands is how insanely creative their powers are

[@daunderrated3106]

On Monday at 9:26 If I throw a coin and it lands on head i would get a banana that give me physical buff and the peel will guarantee to trip you up

[@blokvader8283]

Wonder Of U: If you look at me you fucking die

[@Koifin3]

That’s a big advantage of open ended power systems, you can generally do anything that comes to mind.

[@panth_48]

@@blokvader8283 worse. If you even think about finding me or my identity you get bad luck. This bad luck varies of how much u want to find him or the purpose for

[@OsDijider66]

Fr

[@thewho1419]

Nen and Stands trump as the greatest power systems. I say this because in these 2 systems the users PERSONALITY and CHARACTER greatly impact the way they use their powers. It’s also interesting because in these stories the deeper a person digs into themselves and accepts who they truly are, the stronger they eventually become.

[@faizissa8617]

Lord of the mysteries too

[@gundamloverjk]

Nen and stands are also very creative

[@pn2294]

But that’s how all power systems work.

[@miptachudin9700]

Nope , If it's about per single variation , then cakra > most shounen. If it's about per verse, then one piece > most shounen. Note: single variation here refer to things like in one piece as example , in OP the characters here could be strong by 3 way ( 3 variation) , science like germa for example , devil fruit and/or haki , hence I said variation

[@MrStupidarmy]

>Stand Yes >Nen Overrated, and only good when Togashi write it. If amateur write it , it's gonna be disaster. Nen is overcomplicated power system that need writer with GOOD (really good) writing skills

[@im_skrunkly]

heres a tip if you're making a power system, do NOT under ANY circumstances be inspired by total concentration breathing. it is probably the worst power system in shonen history

[@YakouHikoichi]

Demon slayer imo is the worst example of this, their power system is totally fucked up because most of their abilities are legit copy and pasted of the same thing, not to mention, the writing also made it even worse Because no hashira has gotten the mark yet not until tanjiro came along. Ironically, jjba part 1-2 has better total concentration breathing system, because the way they use it is actually is smart and unique, Joseph especially has the best use of it, making a use out of his hamon with glass and other utilities with his tools

[@blokvader8283]

​​@@YakouHikoichiYeah I was about to say, JoJo knocks it out of the fucking park with Hamon Part 2 is still one of my all-time favorite parts because I love how creative and versatile they make Hamon

[@evilwizardcat1234]

@@blokvader8283 peak gay anime

[@Y_o_r_u]

​@@evilwizardcat1234truly peak.

[@xuanthanhnguyen4856]

​@@evilwizardcat1234tbf, buff men fighting are straighter than twink with a sword

[@Malekski283]

I might be biased but JoJo has the most reasonable power system because it's not like "oh I have more energy I can beat you easily" that type of abilities and hamon is just a better version of breathing styles

[@azashiro9890]

yeah i can see why u say that, but not having a common denominator like chi or reatsu can make things really unbalanced. If you look at every jojo to date, they ALL have all-rounder stands that do not have any crazy restrictions, because otherwise, there would be no common denominator that would make the MC thrive, so in that sense, the posibilities regarding the MC stand power are pretty limited. Look at SBR where until act 4, tusk wasn't that much of a threat, thats why araki added a common denominator ability, namely spin, in order to give the MC a degree of universality in his fighting style, thus becoming even more free in his writing, and making the most appreciated part to date. There is no doubt that araki is a genius and is aware of these facts, and builds every jojo part in that way, I cannot wait to see what he comes up with in part 9 the jojolands.

[@motivationallizard6644]

Generally, if you want to write a “perfect” power system you need 3 core things. 1. You need a basic battery system. Think of Nen, ki, or chakra as an example of a battery system. A battery system allows a character to create energy based attacks through manipulating magic energy, their life force, etc. Ideally this should allow individual characters the ability to express themselves through their techniques. Like you said killua uses his transmutation abilities to create lightning, representing his past trauma turning into a power for him. Obviously though, there should be limitations and rules on how these abilities can be developed, just not TOO many otherwise you begin to constrain and weaken your power system. Naruto’s chakra is an example of this as theoretically you should be able to emit chakra from any part of your body but kishimoto limited most nature energies to basic breath attacks. Whether intentionally or unintentionally the result of this was that chakra became irrelevant over time as the system became focused on basic and powerful attacks like the rasengan, making the fights boring. A battery system is good when it allows for unique created abilities that represent a characters life and backstory. That means having limitations but not TOO many limitations, allowing a writer to express themselves and develop the world at the same time. 2. Secondly, you need an external power system. This can be something like a binding vow in JJk that allows you to increase and change your own powers through making a separate vow, or nature energy in Naruto which operates as an external battery system separate from the main battery system (meaning different rules, consequences, and benefits). The point of an external system is to elaborate and expand on a base battery system. You don’t want to create an external system if you haven’t created a balanced battery system because then you’ll end up with too many cooks in the kitchen never developing either to its full potential. Nature energy in Naruto could’ve operated as an entirely sperate system only accessible to a few characters powerful enough to obtain sage mode and nature energy, thus developing their characters to a greater extent than with just the base level battery system. Everyone is already unique in how they use their base battery powers but they’re even MORE unique in how they develop under an entirely separate system, opening up doors for new character traits, backstories, and plots. It should be noted however that a battery system is internal (it originates from a persons life force) and an external system is based on external energy/ powers. Essentially If your battery system is your own life force then your external system is something that elaborates on that or originates from an entirely separate energy or battery system. 3. Lastly, you need techniques unique to individual users. Stands and devil fruits are the best example of this since they offer people incredibly niche abilities that can overcome otherwise op battery powers where a characters taw aura or or energy allows them to overpower their opponents. It’s not impossible to create these sort of abilities from a battery system but then again the point of a battery system is that there are some limitations to what characters can do. Unique techniques can offer a writer a way to balance that by creating entirely unique powers separate from the base system, creating new problems and new character traits to match the powers of those characters.

[@Vida-jj4on]

I think spiritual energy or pressure from bleach should fit in this category in my opinion.

[@Proxymanade]

I will comment here just to remind myself of this when making my manga, thank you so much

[@rarecandy1886]

In the end every thing can be boiled down to magic the most important thing is presentation and communication with the reader.

[@DemiCape]

generally if you want a good power system, it needs to be consistent and make sense in the context of that world.

[@rarecandy1886]

@@DemiCape Ture but most important thing is you don't have to be the biggest brain mangaka like togashi or something as long as it works it works keep things open don't put restriction unless you're 100% sure.

[@mobzillahz9662]

the amount of subscribers this guy has as opposed to production value is criminal, this is at the very least 100k+ content. amazing work

[@Maidakill]

100k+ kinda stretching it ngl

[@Izosu69]

​@@Maidakill Not really, we got mfs with a 400k to 1.4 million subs whilst having ass editing.

[@Maidakill]

@@Izosu69 you right, but at the same time different niches of content require different levels of editing, anime content in particular has a lot of amazing editors. And this is just my opinion but I don’t think this guy is just at that level yet, I will say it is much better than the sub count he is at right now.

[@Flame-n-Froze]

What made me like Jojo is because of the power system 😅

[@Underpaid_Animator]

Are u sure about that 🤨🤨🤨🤨

[@newcarl1462]

​@@Underpaid_Animatorstands, hamon, spin, etc are just a cool thing

[@Underpaid_Animator]

@@newcarl1462 are u sure it’s not the throbbing muscular piled up men?

[@Flame-n-Froze]

@@Underpaid_Animator 💀

[@oogawoogaa]

@@Underpaid_Animatorand that too

[@babyman177]

in my opinion a good power system is able to be understood simply, but can later be expanded upon within its own rules to make more powerful or interesting powers. Nen is a good example of this, one of the worst things a power system can do is keep adding rules or be too complex for readers to understand.

[@pokeballblaze9835]

5:15 THAT'S SUCH AN AMAZING POINT!

[@kalebyoung1019]

My power system revolves around deityss giving humans abilities through tattoos/markings called "Glyphs", and those with these Glyphs are called champions. The stamina for this is called "Genesis" the energy made from the union of Divine and mortal energies. Abilities granted by ones deity are called "Miracles" they revolve around the domain of that exact deity, but they are slightly modified to the era and the personality of the champion. I took inspiration from Hxh nen conditions, and made "Offerings" a condition, or an oath where you sacrifice or restrict something, or an aspect of something, to gain something else from your deity, whether it be a buff, a new ability or even a modification to ones body that can be a disadvantage at times.Theres also quests, invitations into dungeons made of Genesis, they contain monsters inside them, but if you don't clear the quest within a certain time, the monsters inside will emerge into the mortal realm, 2x stronger than when they were in the dungeon. The main character is the champion of Osiris, his main miracle is that he can't die, whether it's through regeneration, or poison immunity, but he has an offensive miracle, still dont know what it gon do n how it'll tie into the modern era and his personality 🤔 (hes just a non-chalant guy who harbors deep desire for revenge within his heart, because of a past betrayal that caused him to die, but he was soon revived by Osiris and made his champion)

[@Rtktrayy]

THATS TUFF

[@Rtktrayy]

where can i find it

[@kalebyoung1019]

@@Rtktrayy I wanna release it in about a year, but there's currently a discord roleplay server for it in progress.

[@Rtktrayy]

@@kalebyoung1019 can get the link

[@fardin4243]

​@@kalebyoung1019wouldn't making him inmmortal take a lot away from the tension a story can create in a reader's mind while reading?

[@ajsplace4523]

I think one of the most important factors for generating a successful power system is world building and how that power influences other parts of the world told whether it’s a story set on earth or some other world

[@Xyna......698]

jjk power system is the most confusing i swear gege is making new rules every chapter

[@LaylaMiki]

I was waiting for this comment 😂

[@GaionSputro]

1 word: "BindingVow" 😎🤭

[@flowerbloom5782]

I needed to hear this. I’m writing a power system cause I want good build up and pay off. Knowing how the character reacts to said power system says something about them.

[@Davinator12]

Personally I think Stands is the best power system ever created . It’s basically a personality quiz but with superpowers and stand design. Plus on top of that JoJo even incorporates vampirism, Hamon, and even Spin enhancing Stands even more.

[@christophersamueldearlysih262]

jojo POWER SYSTEMS: part 1: special breathing and sun light gives super powers! if you wear this mask you can turn into vampire! (you should put blood on the mask for extra measure😃) Part 2: There is still power breathing but there is also big buff men called pillar men (their basically vampires with power) and the stone of Aja which is concentrated power breathing i guess. part 3: There are spirits from the soul called 'stands" which can do things based on their personality and stuff. (it changes a lot and is literally used for the rest of the anime) part 4: There is still fight spirits but this time there is a arrow which can "evolve" stands, (this is further expanded in part 5) part 5: there is a arrow that would make a stand turn *requiem* it is either has a very complicated meaning or just an ass pull. part 6: there is still stands but there is a dude name Pucci that is "friends" with an other dude named DIO. after some shenanigans there is a greeen baeby which can evolve wite snek into C-MOON. Then after some more shenanigans it can access MIH (Made In Heaven) which would ultimately reset the the universe (with even more shenanigans!). part 7: It is a new universe! (but there is still stands). but also spin *balls* (there are some more *shenanigans*) and there is also a "holy corpse" which is just Jesus' body. if fused it can bring good fortune part 8: there are still stands, but there is a disease which can make people into rocks..., and there is a Locaca fruit that cure anything but if you make a sacrifice too.

[@eertikrux666]

Is it just me or the devils from CSM is kinda a peek power system? It has some realism mixed into it, being based on how much humanity fears things. Plus, everything happens so suddenly, with little to no “aura” visual effect. It’s just so surreal and cosmic. At this point, idek if CSM itself should fit in the same category as the series you mentioned

[@hundredvail]

One piece's power system is so underrated. I like the dynamic of devil fruit and haki

[@Xephoriah]

I'm working on multiple power systems for my own project; a science fantasy world with emphasis on individual freedoms and ambition. Magic and technology coexist, and can even be combined. There is also inherent powers such as Psionics, and more mysterious things like ancient curses and divine relics.

[@Xephoriah]

The main power system is magic, which is used through a language that must be learned and personally understood in order to cast spells, of which its as simple as stringing together the language like speaking to make very specific spells for a variety of purposes. Each "word" is based on a concept like heat, time, life, ect. Though what affects spells the most is the intention behind the words. If you're trying to heal someone who is sick with magic and your intentions aren't genuine or certain, then it's effectiveness could be dampened or even have adverse or unforseen consequences.

[@bourne8636]

In one of my systems I have a power that’s exactly like the language power that you created but it’s also different at the same time.

[@biggimmicke]

Whats crazy is one piece actually has like four or five power systems depending on how you think about it. You got haki and devil fruits, but also martial arts (swordsmanship included) & science (like Nami’s weather manipulation, Usopp’s gear, or Franky just all of Franky) also the hidden fifth power system: money lol

[@biggimmicke]

I separated Martial arts from haki bc there are techniques like the six powers/rokushiki that may or may not be haki adjacent, but also techniques like fishman karate and the Chinjao family’s Hasshoken, or shockwave fist iirc, but if you consider all of that and haki under martial arts, i understand that perspective as well

[@coderaven1107]

Nice video! Love HxH and didnt know the system of Jojo's Bizarre Adventure so far. I think you really sell the chakra system from Naruto short. You are right, it went really wild in the end and Power Scaling is a serious issue, but some parts of it are really great. Elements, Chakra control, different Jutsu types or even Kekkai Genkai were stuff I really enjoyed and where outsmarting the enemy was really necessary. (E.g. the fight of Sasuke against Deidara, or Shikamaru against the immortal guy were really great).

[@satriabuana1747]

I like simple plain power system like fist of north star or fist of blue sky, but the author put this power suitable adapt to narrative/story and the power application execution are dope.

[@af4981]

You never talked about how well One Piece would integrate its power system into the narrative e.g Brook Soul Fruit with him being lonely in the Florian Triangle, sugar fruit to turn people into dolls to enslave them, crocodile taking away the water of Alabasta or Moria taking away the shadows of pirates

[@masonmalykhin5207]

The teason i adore haki so much is that it isnt just a power you train, it also represents your strength of will and inner spirit, even since baratiea its somewhat foreshadowed that its not what power or reputation that makes you strong its your inner strength and determination that makes you strong, which is also the reason i like luffy as the mc, no matter the circumstances he will always get back up and keep fighting which leads to haki, representation of your will being the perfect power system for him.

[@anuragdas4605]

Man you deserve some views + subs , you really make a video about my favourite 3 power system 😊. Personal opinion, i always love OP power system everytime because of the power limitation and balanced + unique way to use your power + you can fight in any way you just want + still not broken to need asspull and complecated to understand.

[@starhalv2427]

For my fantasy world I came up with a separate power system for each of the main species, partially inspired by various anime (And videos like this one), but I'm still coming up with the exact details... except for demons, who are already done. The way demons work, is that they're born looking like completely normal humans, (except they grow up at half the pace meaning they're kids until their mid-20's, and are on average 20cm taller upon reaching adulthood), but depending on their lineage and the phase of the moon they're born under a specific feeling becomes their temptation- but rather than making them feel good, following this emotion directly increases their physical power and gives them access to demonic sorcery (Which is basically instinctual control over elements like wind, water or fire, as well as gravity), but at the same time as a demon keeps giving in to this temptation of power their bodies begin to change, starting with horn or multiple horns growing from their head, then their entire body becoming deformed and covered in dark bonelike shell, and even their minds are changed becoming more animalistic- everything slow enought that they barely notice. However, what makes demons trully special is that those who refuse to fully give in to that temptation can dabble into human magic (Which is creation and manipulating of energy and reality itself), and if they achieve balance they can effectively master two power systems at once, becoming an absolute menace.

[@CrispyCardello]

Chain jail is the only of Kurapikas chains that he can only use on a phantom troupe member.

[@lorddarkrai5753]

As for describing Zoans the worst category it depends.Onigumo is a simple spider yet go fench with him with 9 swords instead of one.Then there's Luffy , Sengoku and Kaido.Do they need any introduction?Moreover , the dinosaurs.The prehistoric beasts.Kaku being a giraffe is the best option out of any of the Cipher Pols.His hybrid form was severly tough to beat because you are looking at just Kaku like the usual Kaku , but he's also 6 metres tall and can perform his Rokushiki like when he is human. Also i am pretty sure the Jacket Jacket fruit isn't a Zoan type.

[@YourIngrownToenail]

I'm surprised nobody mentioned Lord of the Mysteries power system. It is one of if not the best and most thought of power system in the world of literature.

[@DZC-bc2ol]

Thanks bro this vid change's the way I view power system 👍

[@Thegreatlordofall]

Funny how this comes up while i was developing my own power system for my story It also makes me realize that the power system im making is actually eerliy similar to HXH even though ive never actually watched or read it I think right now im working on the trump card aspect of it Like a thing that is the Pinnacle of the system like domain expansion or bankai

[@Koifin3]

To be fair, Nen isn’t far off from being a perfect power system. So, in a way you should be happy that your system is similar to Nen. I’m working on a power system right now that loosely involves colors and their representation of personality with different aspects of the system attached to it. As for Trump Card, I think it might be a good idea to give every individual person a unique (or maybe even not so unique) ability they utilize alongside their base powers. In my story, I have the set up system and something called “Divine Gifts” which are abilities someone is just born with that is usually unique to them save from a few outlier scenarios.

[@Thegreatlordofall]

@@Koifin3 I actually having something similar in my power system And yours actually seems really interesting as it's pretty similar to mine You see it's based around magic and everything but the magic you have is based both around your parents and your own personality So like say one parent has fire manipulation and another earth manipulation The logical next step would be lava manipulation for the kid But based on the personality of the kid it could be lava manipulation or it just be heat manipulation or the ability to summon meteors Basically the main idea of the power you get at birth stays the same but based on your personality you can have a different variation. Another thing is that magic is the creation of all abilities so everything is a branch off from that There's a few other things to note as well but those are some of the most important things

[@faizissa8617]

​@@Koifin3 your power system is basically the same as the power system in orient

[@Thegreatlordofall]

What's orient? ​@@faizissa8617

[@Thegreatlordofall]

​@@faizissa8617what's orient?

[@Vee-sr4sx]

One time when I was a kid, I wrote a book with a kinda interesting power system. In this world, there are gods, and they created and affect the world, similar to Greek gods and stuff. When a god creates/reproduces a person, they are called a "Pure Elemental". These people were usually CRAZY strong, had powers related to the god's domain, and treated as royalty. When a pure elemental has a kid, they can pass on their powers to the kid, but only after dying. Like, if a P.E can manipulate lightning, after they die, their kid can manipulate lightning. But in the world, there are only 5 Pure Elemental bloodlines. There are also "Blessings." Blessings exist when a god chooses a child to bear a heavy fate, and the kid gets a power that will help them in completing what the god wants them to do. A pair of twins in the story that are blessings can travel via shadows and dark places, and their fate is that they will betray and befriend, connect, be transport, be messengers, keep everything interconnected, to implode a system, to rewire the way of the story. In a nutshell, they're there to screw things up, even if unintentional.

[@Chuy_Vr]

Sounds pretty cool

[@StummyTicklePickle]

underrated af. im subscribing

[@cloudykai35]

Thank you so much, I needed help with this

[@rarecandy1886]

Tower of God also has a very underated power system.

[@evgenkhersonets880]

You mean the "whoever casts a bigger explosion - wins" system?

[@mattb.7079]

Nahhhh, ToG's worldbuilding is great but the power system is easily the weakest part. But it's compensated by the fact that the story doesn't progress through fights but games and strategies

[@lanceshadow7335]

I read ToG like 3 years ago and stopped at the Urek Mazino introduction I don't really remember that many fights that involved bigger explosions winning ​@@evgenkhersonets880

[@rarecandy1886]

@@evgenkhersonets880 tog power system is great siu is not smart enough to use it how togashi would have.

[@rarecandy1886]

@@mattb.7079 sinsu is great but siu is not some God level big brain to be able to make the most out of it.

[@yboi2435]

Trion relies on battle equipment, capacity trion, IQ, fast reflexes, and creativity. is so simple

[@lallantopskking4800]

10 types of magic(more difficult to learn as the list goes down): 1. Levitation: Control over gravity's effect on oneself or objects, allowing for flight, hovering, and manipulating the weight of things. 2. Vanish: Temporarily removing an object or oneself from normal perception, rendering it invisible. 3. Production: Creating objects from aura, with complexity and durability depending on the user's skill and aura expenditure. 4. Transformation: Altering the physical form of oneself or other living beings, with limitations on complexity and duration. 5. Transposition : Swapping the positions of two objects or oneself with another location within a range specified by users skill and aura expenditure. 6. Penetration: Allowing energy or matter to pass through solid objects, with limitations on density and thickness. 7. Restoration: Reversing damage to objects or living beings, with limitations on the severity and time since the damage occurred. 8. Escape: An easier teleportation which can be used in a container to launch one out or maybe in various other scenarios. 9. Teleportation : Instantaneously moving oneself or other objects to a distant location with a condition specified by the user. 10. Prediction: Gain spatial awareness of surroundings, All ten of these magic essence can be combined to make powerful techniques. Aura mechanics: ‌• Every human has 100% aura capacity by default. ‌• If current aura capacity is greater or equal to 10% the user can regenerate the aura . ‌• Aura can be recovered by not using magic . ‌• Meditation and sleep increases aura recovery speed. ‌• Aura can be transferred to others but the aura limit can never bypass the 100% limit . If any extra aura is transferred it gets dispersed to the nature. ‌• If any person below 10% aura receives aura he wont be able to recover aura the same rate as before , it becomes slower than earlier. ‌• If aura reaches 0% , the user dies. Additional power ups : ‌• Oath : People can use oath when their base aura is above 90%. This grants them infinite aura for 20 minutes . However after 20 minutes they die. ‌• Demonic oath : A very rare ability , this can be enabled when users are above 50% aura . This is achieved by making a contract with a demon by a ritual . Upon activation, user's aura gets hundred- folds for 20 minutes . After the timer runs out the user's base aura capacity is halved permanently to 50% . The physical and mental strain of this power up is significantly higher than regular oath.A person can only use it twice. Important thing to be considered: There is a thing called aura flow . Every person has a linear aura flow which can be manipulated. Aura flow can be enhanced by training and meditating . A good aura flow offers efficiency in techniques . No person is immortal, even in oath or demonic oath form . Usage of a lot aura at once will faint the user despite of any oath or demonic oath, the chances of this happening can be reduced by enhancing aura flow through the body. ‌

[@benxt]

Hands appears to have a flawless and well-balanced power system

[@donotcare2181]

So base the power system on the driving force behind the characters actions, don’t make the power system where you have vastly different power levels that force you to continually up the force used, allow the power system to be diverse so that every character can have a unique fighting style, make sure there are counters or ways to work around abilities so that one person or group doesn’t have an obvious advantage in every fight.

[@bourne8636]

Read my system? It’s not finished but I’ve been working extremely hard on it. Pursuit of Heaven Power system: “Pursuit of heaven” takes place in a world where samurai utilize an energy known as “Prana” to fight against each other and other worldly beings. Vibrations are the essence of Prana, and depending on a person's soul/spirit, their prana will either be low frequency prana/low vibrations or high frequency prana/high vibrations, the vibrations an individual has will dictate their Magical Affinities/Associations. Prana/Atman/Nadi systems/Shindo: Prana is the most important component for beings in the world of “Pursuit of heaven”. Prana is the energy that allows Samurai to perform many techniques that aid in fighting against opponents. Vibrations are the essence of prana and when an individual learns how to manipulate their vibrations they can learn how to use prana in various ways. (Prana is what vibrations are) Everyone in the world of “pursuit of heaven” has prana. It just takes practice/skill to learn how to manipulate. There are two types of Vibrations that can be potentially used: Physical/Soto/out: Physical vibrations. Spiritual/Noto/In: Spiritual vibrations. (Soto/Out) The utilization of Physical vibrations/prana allows an individual to strengthen their physical bodies for combat. To actually utilize Physical vibrations a samurai must know how to extract prana from their (atman/soul) by using the Nadi systems which are essentially networks in the atman that carry/hold prana. One must practice “Yama” which is a type of Meditation technique that allows an individual to extract prana from their atmanic pool, with the Nadi systems, and then to the Physical Body. By doing this an individual can boost their physical bodies power and speed drastically, the better an individual is at utilizing/flowing prana into their physical bodies, the stronger they can become physically. (Soto/out). The stronger an individual is physically the more endurance they will have while Using prana/Fighting, this is the primary reason why (Soto/out) is so important. (Noto/in) The utilization of Spiritual/atmanic vibrations is much more broad in terms of ability. To utilize Spiritual vibrations an individual just like (Soto/out), must know how to move prana through the Nadi pathways, but they must also know how to vibrate their (Atman/soul). (Noto/in) has two techniques that are essentially the umbrella factor for every power that can be used spiritually: Source prana/Riyu: Pure unchanged prana/varies from person to person. Shake prana/Shindo: Prana that has been changed/molded into magic by vibrating. (Riyu/Source prana) Riyu/source is essentially pure Prana/vibrations that an individual can materialize out of their atmanic pool with the Nadi systems. There are many techniques an individual can use with this pure prana (Riyu Techniques), this is the energy that allows every other spiritual technique to be used. (I’m not really done explaining “Riyu” as I hope to make it much more complex in the future.) Usually warriors that prefer to indulge in Hand to hand combat rather than Fighting from a distance will use “Riyu” (prana/vibrations) in its pure form more often than “shindo”. “Shake prana/Shindo” is a technique that a warrior can use to turn their Prana into a type of magic for fighting. Shindo: when a warrior vibrates their soul and connects to a synonymous realm with their prana, they can shape their prana into magic that the realm holds. Shindo is essentially the process of an individual vibrating their prana/atman and while resonating on the same frequency as an elemental plane, molding said prana into magic/the elemental power that the realm represents/holds. (So warriors are able to connect to a sub realm synonymous with their atmanic path with their Riyu/pure vibrations, and turn it into magic from the realm that they are resonating with.) More advanced explanation Shake prana/Shindo: Vibrational range/Vibrational magic/Shindo: The vibrational range of an individual is based on their atmanic path (where their atman was when it bloomed/up realm-(pengala) or lowrealm-(ida)) and also what elemental plane their atman is synonymous with. When an individual vibrates, (at the correct frequency as a sub realm their atman is synonymous with), (Noto/in) their atman connects to a realm/subrealm inside of their vibrational range, and allows them to mold their prana into magic that the realm holds, by vibrating their atman and connecting with said realm. This Technique of vibrating and molding prana is called “Shindo '' which means “vibrating”. There are many more techniques that were developed during the “warriors wind/Kaze period” which was a great era of pranayama technique development. “Shindo/Shake prana” and “Riyu/Source prana” are just the basics of the system. Blossom Form This is the ultimate power of pursuit of heaven that’s only achieved when an individual's vibrations are able to connect with their “Soul plant” and extract their atman into the real world by getting it to blossom. A blossom form in the world of “pursuit of heaven” is the form an individual reaches when they achieve “divine resonance/Kogoshi grade samurai”. In the world of “pursuit of heaven” atman is created when a “soul plant” from the “Soul wreath” binds to a suitable body on earth. This connection of the Soul plant and a body is what creates/links atman to an individual. To actually achieve a blossom form a warrior must achieve “divine resonance” which is the hardest power to acquire in the series. Having divine resonance is essentially the ability to resonate at the same level as your “soul plant” allowing an individual after many years of practice/vibrational mastery, to extract their soul plant and Blossom their atman into the real world. Blossom forms are extremely hard to achieve, only a handful of great warriors have been able to Become “Kogoshi Grade” warriors. Although it’s hard to achieve, everyone has the ability to achieve a blossom form. The entire system is about growth and self realization, the more in tune with yourself the higher your power.

[@Vor567tez]

Are you Indian? 😮 Using words like Prana, Nadi, Atama.

[@bourne8636]

@@Vor567tezno…. but I did a whole lot of research in the pursuit of creating this power system. I know most of the teaching come from Hinduism, and Buddhism.

[@bourne8636]

@@Vor567tez did you enjoy the system? I feel like it might be hard to understand.

[@Vor567tez]

@@bourne8636 I want to ask, how do the system reflect in Samurai? Can you give an example?

[@bourne8636]

@@Vor567tez Could you rephrase that? It seems like you’re asking what does prana have to do with samurai? If that’s the case it’s rather simple, samurai and enlightenment/Buddhism go hand and hand. The goal of most samurai in history is to attain enlightenment, the blossom form in my series is basically a type of enlightenment that samurai want to achieve.

[@newguy-di5ur]

I actually created my power system Just to be clear I used AI to organise it And that's it The Willforce System (Simplified) Willforce is the Uppers’ power system, fueled by determination and emotional intensity. Stronger willpower means greater potential, but exceeding limits comes with a price. --- Categories of Willforce: 1. Vigormind (Endurance Willforce): Abilities: Enhanced stamina, pain resistance, and focus. Cost: Pain and exhaustion hit after fighting. Appearance: Glowing eyes and prominent veins. 2. Forceheart (Energy Willforce): Abilities: Superhuman strength, speed, and energy manipulation. Cost: Leaves users fatigued and weakened. Appearance: Colored energy aura and faint body glow. 3. Willshroud (Dominance Willforce): Abilities: Intimidation, command over others, and disrupting abilities. Cost: Overuse causes physical and mental harm. Appearance: Ominous aura and glowing, darkened eyes. --- Elemental Integration: Elements (e.g., Fire, Lightning, Ice) amplify with Willforce mastery, unlocking feats like super-speed or extreme resilience. Strong Willforce enables greater control and synergy with elements. --- Limitations of Power: Stages of transformation tied to Willforce and elemental mastery: 1. Power Surge: Doubles power briefly but drains stamina. Risk: Severe exhaustion. 2. Elemental Fusion: Merges body with the element (e.g., turning into fire). Risk: Damages the user if overused. 3. Godhood Awakening: Manipulates the element on a massive scale. Risk: Near-death exhaustion and loss of control. --- Willforce combines raw determination, elemental prowess, and escalating transformations, pushing users toward unimaginable power at a steep personal cost.

[@natalimoina]

We already got the amazing ones in DS, there are even 2 and they compliment each other perfectly

[@OsDijider66]

Bro this vid is so underrated

[@Blickos456]

Dayum this underrated as hell

[@KACE2.]

Literally my top 3 favourite power systems lol

[@reidchikezie1161]

The way i craft power/magic systems is i figure out the theme i want to base the magic on, e.g Duality, Sacrifice etc and then write around that theme.

[@tribaltreegoat]

with stands you forgot stands are able to evolve, through requiem arrows (golden experience requiem, silver chariot requiem) or willpower (tusk, and killer queen bite the dust) and other ways like achieving heaven

[@azashiro9890]

tusk evolved through spin and killer queen evolved through being stabbed again in his new persona ( as we know, stands are a manifestation of psyche not physical) not willpower

[@EMan-xj5cz]

4:22 did you just call him urinal?

[@syrenarch251]

is that a jojoke

[@fpsbambi5822]

Actually for kurapika. I’m pretty sure it’s only the middle finger chain. Whichever one is the dagger one

[@justinjamon6253]

HxH has the best anime power system. In combination with a narrator explaining the technicalities of the fights along with the emotions involved. I cannot find any other anime that has a better power system

[@chrispolo25]

Bungo Stray Dogs and FMAB were underrated power systems, should’ve include them unless you haven’t seen it yet

[@ovenaroundhead2881]

Pretty sure FMA power system is pretty praised considering its part of one of the most praised anime ever, BSD is understandably underrated though, the fact that there seems to be nothing connecting them seems random but the powers do be creative af and are named after real world literature

[@bananabanana484]

I don’t get why people hate on Total Concentration Breathing. It’s not a Top-Tier power system, but it does what it needs to: allow cool fights to happen. The best power systems do that and more, but TCB is effective as a power system. It also plays into the themes of Strength vs Power. The Demon slayers at every level get outclassed by Demons, but through Grit, Determination, and a whole lot of broken swords, they can overcome evil.

[@fikrilahh6040]

Its bad because it lacks creativity, take example hamon from Jojo part 2, they are similiar, they use breathing as their source for power, but in DS they have the same fighting style, just different effect, but in Jojo they actually use it with creativity, such as Joseph use a glass and use hamon on it to deflect a laser.

[@It-is-me-j7]

​​@@fikrilahh6040 I think the whole point is that demon slayers fight at nature's side with the elemental powers while the demons have the "creative powers" that alter the laws of nature. Actually, thats my favourite thing in demon slayer on season 2 and 3 I was like how they will beat a character with this ability I mean upermoons are god level compared to the slayers.

[@Vor567tez]

@@fikrilahh6040 But DS is actual breathing techniques. Not real life techniques I mean in anime it just breathing techniques for wielding the sword better and to enhance their physicality. You won't see the effects if you were in the anime. Those effects r made for viewers. They are fighting like normal sword fighter we see in real life. There's no magic in there. Unless it comes from demon. Whereas Jojo is magic system.

[@natalimoina]

It definitely is top tier, its incredible

[@natalimoina]

@@fikrilahh6040 That's wrong completely, it actually adds way more depth when compared to hamon and is better for the world, characters, etc.

[@javelinmaster2]

I would like to add a thing about Killua. Killua's abilities aren't just coming from his families abuse. His most iconic ability also shows how Gon rubbed of on him. I mean Killua's family all use electricity seperate from their body while Killua's ability IS AN ENHANCEMENT JUST LIKE GON. So Killua's own ability kinda represent both his family's abuse and his friendship with Gon.

[@azashiro9890]

you cooked with this one lowkey. Im not sure about the family comment tho, his family are emmiters that emit chunks of nen, like a ki blast from dbz or rei gun from yuyuhakusho, in order to create electricity or fire or anything of the sort, you have to transmute your nen and thats just impractical for an emitter with 60% proefficiency.

[@RetroGhost16]

Another amazing power system is the majic system of Whitch Hat Atelier. The way .anic works in that sieries is a metaphore for the ability, skill, and devotion required to make amazing art. Spells are sigils that look similar to Owl House but like 100 times better and its also i corporates the personality of the characters into the spells they create. There are basic rules and basic elements that make up spells. But when put together in specific configurations you can do anything from making boots that allow you to fly to at really high level mastery the ability to enchant objects that can part oceans. The obstacles that the characters encounter require them to use their skills and creativity to create they own spells to solve their issues. Also the story and artwork is and absolute 10/10 with its almost medieval story book art style.

[@realo3503]

A power system I really enjoy is the power system of world trigger. Almost everyone has the exact same power (how much varies), so border agents have to rely more on strategy and battle IQ to get themselves far.

[@chickenabuser5474]

World trigger has probably 4rth most favorite power system of all time. Its amazing.

[@baldystick3327]

Up you go! World Trigger is my most favorite shonen anime because of the power system. World Trigger Power System: 1. Trion level. The battery or can be compared to magic power/chakra/ki. Higher trion level is simply more resources and more firepower. However, without access to trigger, you're simply a civilian. And the usage of trion is limited to the trigger used. This trigger restriction make everything more consistent. There's no sudden "unlock mysterious ancient power" or "I learn this technique which can only be used by me because I have high trion level". Training doesn't increase your trion, it's only improve your efficiency in using it and reduce dependency on trion body. Experience and strategy defines power. Kitora with low trion can climb up to A rank with her combat prowess. Chika with humongous trion is simply useless because she cannot act by herself due to lack of combat experience. 2. Normal trigger vs black trigger. Trigger is simply the tool or can be compared to ninjutsu/spell/weapon/item. Normal trigger is mass manufactured because of financial limitation and simply for standard purposes. Every agent have the same access to normal trigger, meaning everyone should have the same tool. However, different agents may have different style of fightings. One can be defensive and practical like Murakami. One can be tricky ans agile like Kuga. One can be chad and cool like Ikoma. Two can be powerful when together like Azuma's disciples. One can be direct and confident like Nino. One can be indirect and stealthy like Kazama. One can be liar by shouting Hound but using Asteroid. This is the best part of combat in world trigger because they are not just punching everything that moves, throwing big power ball that destroy everything while high in the air, have some kind of overpowered trump card that can be used one time only, move lightning fast to behind enemy to attack, etc. The fight is more humane, grounded and logical. Black trigger is simply a power up of normal trigger, with unique abilities. It's not too OP and can have limitation to them. Fujin is a black trigger which can deploy sword slash through solid anywhere the user can see. Sounds great but only several people can use this thing and with limitation of 8 slashes before reloading. How to deal with this is really simple, outnumber the user from many angles, long range atk, and stealth atk. Even black trigger is considered powerful, it still have its weakness. 3. Side effect. Side effect in world trigger is a minor power up to certain character to give them access to unique ability, similar concept to haki but less powerful. One can hear well. One can detect lies. One can learn things fast. One can see the future. Some might sound great, but quite limited because most of the user is just a human, not some God that can teleport everywhere without drawback. And another thing that is executed best in world trigger is objective. It's not just "I need to defeat this guy".

[@tommyplayzxd5453]

Giorno in the thumbnail is wild 💀💀💀

[@tinybonestudios7332]

Perfect timing, I was searching the exact same thing today, for my manga

[@Its.Kagura_BachinTime]

Drop the title homie

[@tarambukis-c2q]

@@Its.Kagura_BachinTime dog nga

[@Its.Kagura_BachinTime]

@@tarambukis-c2q my friend tries to make me read it, the world tries to make me read it, what the hell is this

[@sipdip_7764]

My power system:(tell me if it’s good or nah) So basically shooting stars give people these powers called an Apex. These powers are completely uncanny and diverse but not as wacky as like quirks or dvlfruits. There are special Apexes called a divine Apex, basically they’re the most powerful and are 6 of em. Divine Apexes each have a unique color/element, a weapon that can be created by that element, and armor mode. Each divine apex has its own beliefs/ideology and the more the user matches it the stronger it becomes.

[@bourne8636]

I fw it, getting a power from a shooting star is a dope concept

[@Vor567tez]

It reminds me of Zoadics. You can intertwine your system with it.

[@유라삐삐]

Sounds cool and different !

[@MrEffectfilms]

My power system for the story I'm working on is based on different kinesis powers (Telekinesis, Cytokinesis, Pyrokinesis, etc) and is like if you took the world of something like X-Men or Heroes but gave it the Nen power system. It's more complicated than that of course but that's pretty much how it works in a nutshell.

[@amentsegayee7656]

5:39 who ever made that must have been on something 😂😂😂😂

[@shadowking6905]

Song? 0:08

[@chocolatebar6785]

honorable mentions to spin

[@dudeguyrockfan]

Fire force has a cool "checks and balances" type of power system. The pryokenetics in the show have 'gens' based off the power type they use, non pyrokenetic are just average civilizations, gen 1 is the feral spontaneous combustion ghouls that go out of control, gen 2 can control fire in certain ways, gen 3 can produce there own fire and wield it in certain ways, and gen 4 are chosen few who share a link with the "god" of the world. So a gen 2 could still beat a gen 3 for example, just redirect the flame back at them or cut them off from producing their own flame and physically beat them down.

[@leonkastilyo7463]

One piece is my favorite manga, but haki is not on the same level as nen or stands, with haki you don’t whether they are using normal armament, ryou, adv ryou, acoc or acoc+coa

[@Sceuxm]

Technically there is at least 3 power systems in one piece df haki science and you could count stuff like genetics and the 6 powers to

[@Imagine_animations16]

I have a power system called the supernatural arts in a nonlinear world. Which is created by the god of reality, with a second power system for normal humans in use of future technology in the year 2945.

[@ChicoStick612]

Guys tell me if my power system is decent. It takes a bit of inspiration from one piece. Introduction: My power system ia called "Kengen" or manifestation. It is broken down into 3 seperate types. 1: Beast Kengen Basically there are 3 different kinds of beasts. -Animal Kengen The weakest form, there is only one of each species with a special mark. If the user and animal are compatible, the user can absorb them. -Mythical Kengen It is very similar to the animal version, but these come from another world and are things like phoenix, griffins, exc. -God Kengen The strongest one, very rare, also come from a different world made for gods like zeus, poseidon, exc. If a user has a normal one AND a fod one, it will evolve the normal to mythic. There are 4 forms for regular animal kengen. -1 You get a weapon to summon them, they do the fighting kind of like a pokemon? -2 You are able to use aspects of that animal. Like say you have a fish, if you achieved this for it would be like gills or smth -2.5 (This one is heavily one piece inspired) It depends on if a regular animal is a predator or prey. Preys Instinct: If gives these users heightened senses with dodging and stuff. Predators Instinct: It can give users an insight in the opponents weak points. -3 Perfect merge. Full connection with your Kengen.

[@ChicoStick612]

The second power for Kengen is Aura Kengen You basically have a set amount of aura that you can raise with training, which like one piece you can coat yourself with, but the more aura you have, the harder the shield. You can also form it into a weapon. For example, you could shape boots and blast aura out of the bottom to fly or smth

[@ChicoStick612]

The last one is Spiritual Kengen. It basically is just more efficient Aura Kengen. It will basically let you call and avatar based on your aura. Pretty much it

[@ChicoStick612]

Backstory: The creator was a mad scientist who found a stone. It powered his computer and he was writing a manga and then it make it his own world. He can control it from his computer, but eventually grew up and the computer became outdated, so he abandoned it. Before Abandoning, he make a character like the god of that verse, named The Chosen. He loves toying with the world and owns every power. Legend says if you have every Kengen, you get 3 wishes. The main character I imagine gets all of them in the "final battle" and he owns the eel btw. He then used 3 wishes to return the world to normal. Becomes a blacksmith and make a world cutting sword, then finds the eel with a rainbow mark and since it has a faint connection with all of the other animals, he gets infinite wishes. Kind of op now that I think of it.

[@luhtwin00]

fire

[@gabrielmartins-xt6rx]

"Nen is the most detailed Power system out there" My guy, even if you only watched anime you'd still be wrong.

[@babyman177]

edit: damn i didnt realise i yapped this much lmao this is a little niche (not niche at all if you have read web novels). but my personal favourite power system is from a novel called Lord Of The Mysteries, at first glance it seems limited you have 22 pathways to pick from each representing a concept, and to go further down your pathway you need to do rituals and brew potions made from ancient creatures. But everytime you take another step down the pathway you lose a bit of humanity and (MINOR SPOILER WARNING) slowly change into a mythical creature that fully represents your pathway. For example: there is one pathway who's main concept is war and destruction, the mythical creature form for this pathway is a flaming meteor. Or a pathway whos main concept is controlling and fooling their mythical creature form is a large clump of maggots. to further differentiate those on the same pathway there are all sorts of crazy rituals and artefacts that give power with a random drawback. such as a glove that can absorb powers but needs to be fed a living human everyday (called creeping hunger).

[@rarecandy1886]

I will be real with you this is easily one of the hardest part so unless you're 100% sure I will say don't set things in stone and keep it open with no hard rules remember some of the best fictions like lotr don't have their entire magic or fight system set in stone.

[@Skeptical_Nerd]

How to write an introduction arc?

[@Skeptical_Nerd]

The perfect introduction arc*

[@Ore_Jo]

JoJo is my favorite anime, One Piece is my second, and HxH was my third until just recently. That just goes to show how the incredibly written power systems help make the series as good and enjoyable as they are

[@figofavian]

Oh wow just realized that these three animes are my top 3

[@Weatheringplayz]

5:41 wtf is this power comparison 😭🙏

[@jhoezt5108]

IMO One Piece's Haki is not really a good addition to its already amazing power system. Pre-timeskip the characters have to fight smart to overcome enemies' Logia's OP'ness (Luffy using water and his own blood against Crocodile; Rubber property against Enel; Strawhats using salt against Moria, etc...) which is a more creative way to write the story, instead of "just punch harder with black fist". The limitation of Devil's Fruit ability can't affect user with stronger Haki also scream "my power is bigger than you" system to me.

[@Maybe73]

Well, haki is needed. Otherwise, logias would be unstoppable, and certain df would just be 1 shot kills And besides, I think the aspect of df not affecting haki only works with specific devil fruit attributes or abilities Like how law couldn't cut, switch souls or teleport with big mom and kaido but could silence her using his df Or how luffy was able to turn kaido to rubber So I think the limitation of df only applies to certain abilities and not every ability

[@mrstrangeworld5977]

​@@Maybe73but haki isn't a great power system and some of the issues this guy mention can apply to haki

[@Maybe73]

@@mrstrangeworld5977 I didn't say it was a good system I just said it was needed

[@ИванДовбня-ъ4ч]

honestly, I think other way around. For me the power system before haki was terrible, there was no balance. And the thing that was even worse is that you just simply need to eat some devil fruit and you will get powers. Of course there is a lot of problems, like devil fruits types etc. But with haki I at least understand how characters with motivation like Zoro can fight with some logia user. Let's be real, you would just not be scared of people like Mihawk or Shanks, but instead be scared of Smoker. It would be terrible, but thanks we got a normal power system where you have to train your haki without this devil fruits bullshit

[@t.7124]

I think Haki is fantastic conceptually but has been mishandled. Ideally, it would equalize everyone, like Nami should be using Haki in her own way, but Haki is being used to make strong characters even MORE special.

[@TheSkyOwl]

This is so good

[@AtonedBrawler]

I know I’m nitpicking but diavolo doesn’t have 2 stands. Epitaph is a just an ability the community dubbed as a substand like killer queen sheer heart attack.

[@mystic_absol7808]

ive had ideas for a battle manga for a while, its about people who though a traumatic event and blood being spilt gain an ability from one of 11 elements called a bloodright, and about a guy trying to use his power to improve the world and eventually take on the gods who gave people bloodrights though their sealing, i feel like the big issue with it is writing believable characters and names, i have several dozen characters and exactly 1 name and i feel like i cant write dialogue to save my life, i dont know if i will ever actually write it but i have a story in my mind i would love to share with others edit- i go into more detain on the system in the replys cuz i realised i actually gave very little info on it in this message, but im curious to see what people think of the idea and how i could maybe improve it

[@mystic_absol7808]

for a bit more depth on the system, like i said there are 11 elements, but really only 10, as one is a hybrid element, most of them are standard elements but give me plenty of room for cool abilities, such a dark element ability that allows someone to manipulate shadows or a nature element which lets them generate any type of plant on their body. one major thing the system would be built on would be balance, as more complicated or powerful abilities usually come with bigger drawbacks, making simpler abilities far better, for example, one character in the main cast can use photosynthesis, unleashing very powerful blasts using the sun's energy, but he can only store so much energy at once and needs to stop moving to recharge it. on top of this, a secondary power runs with the bloodrights called aura, being the way people fought the gods before bloodrights were created, at low levels it can be used to detect someone in a crowd and is mostly a hindrance, but some people are able to solidify it after hard training, letting them power up their attacks and completely prevent those who cant solidify aura from attacking them, plus some bloodrights work along side aura, such as the MC whose ability allows him to convert his aura into water he can control, eventually learning how to heat the water to attack with steam as well, or others who are able to use their abilities anywhere inside their aura, making those who are naturally more powerful be able to use their abilities across wider ranges. this isnt everything as i dont want to get into the nitty gritty of every ability, but im curious to see what you think about the system and if you would read a series about it, unfortunately i will probably never be able to make a proper manga since i cant draw to save my life, but maybe one day i will be able to make this into a light novel or something, again, let me know if you would find it an entertaining system to see in a series

[@azashiro9890]

@@mystic_absol7808 you have the right idea definetly. you have clearly put a lot of thought behind this so I want to give you my honest opinion as a art, directorship and writing student, studying in japan. You have incorporated a decent ammount of universality with the aura thingy, as it is importat when thinking to invest a lot into offence, to also think about a more universal way of defence. also the explination is a bit too close to nen there so you should either reduce its importance, and making it a strictly defensive mechanism, or invest more importance and, idk, make it a tool for destruction as well, something that the element-hunters wield in order to eliminate blood users or whatever their name is. And maybe, who knows, the most powerful hunters wield both powers, giving them a clearcut advantage without having to asspull or anything, kinda like devilfruit and haki. and maybe the MC starts as a hunter but gains power and realizes there is more to it, that its not all evil. And although aura is innate, maybe the only ones able to ascend it are the hunters through rigurous training, this way you can provide a cool narative for why the mc becomes strong, kinda like a tailed beast, or how ichigo was a hollow. Back on the topic of solely power system, even tho i understand what you are trying to do with the main cast character, kinda like a megumin type, which provides a sure fire way of achieving victory if the cast is able to buy time. its a cool concept for a fantasy setting with partyes and adveturers or a school setting with classmates, but I personally prefer one on ones for battle manga. what I would do is I would limit the ammount of general power level that the story has, like jojo, concentrate on one on one prowess, like hxh, onepiece, bleach, and jojos too, and create a common denominator of strenght "aura", a defence mechanism "solidification of aura", and an offence mechanism "manipulation of aura/weapon wielding/ martial art/ elemental control etc". why would it be good to have an overall lower powerlevel? because in high power level shows like dbz, bleach or naruto, it either becomes uncertain why a character is stronger than other or it becomes a oneshot fest like bleach where the characters trade oneshots and asspulls (obv bleach is good but the power system isnt its strongest suit). Overall what your story seemingly lacks is 1. universallity : using your method, it would get difficult and boring to create abilities as time goes 2. main goal: people dont usually care about such a noble goal as stopping the gods from messing with humans unless it is either a isekai fantasy format, tournament ONLY battle manga or threiller drama which wont allow you to go into depth regarding battles. its usually better for the main goal to be a personal goal of the MC, wheter it is to retrieve something, protect something, become something, more of a selfish goal paired with the selflessness of the MC, or maybe you make him selfish all the way, but as I said, this hero of humanity trope doesnt work in shounen manga, it works in mahwas maybe. It would be waay more advantageous to take it step by step in creating a main goal focusing more on a looming threat or a fun adventure rather than "im going to kill them all!!" ahh manga. The advantages of this will be: a) world bulding b) freedom c) meaning and morals. You will be able to focus on events involving different characters than the MC, you will be able to abandon the main character without issue, giving you freedom over all your characters, and thus everything would feel meaningful, thus impacting the reader and the side characters alike Obviously i cannot really grasp the essence of your story, but overall you understand what you need to create your own story, you just need to look deeper at the examples from which you, perhaps painfully clear, took inspiration from, and piece together why they are so good, all I did was try to explain. And obviously, maybe I am wrong and didnt understand what you meant, i just went off what was provided to me.

[@mludj3631]

I made Chikara this is more of a grounded and simplistic power system inspired by Chakara, Nen, and Ki. Chikara (力) - Fundamental Energy Chikara represents the innate energy within individuals, granting them spiritual and physical abilities. This energy manifests through various forms, each with unique characteristics and applications. 1. Giki (技気) - Skill Energy Giki embodies the mastery of physical abilities, allowing users to enhance their martial prowess and execute precise techniques. Applications Enhanced Physical Abilities: Augment strength, speed, and agility beyond normal human limits. Precision Strikes: Deliver attacks targeting opponents' weaknesses with pinpoint accuracy. Weapon Mastery: Exhibit exceptional skill in handling various weapons, integrating them seamlessly into combat. Example: Kanna, a Tokushin without a specific elemental affinity, utilizes Giki to identify and exploit opponents' vulnerabilities, defeating them with a single, well-placed strike. 2. Reiki (霊気) - Spiritual Energy Reiki encompasses supernatural powers, enabling users to manipulate elements and alter reality through spiritual force. Applications Elemental Manipulation: Control elements such as fire, water, wind, and electricity. Reality Alteration: Change aspects of the environment or create illusions to deceive opponents. Spiritual Influence: Affect the minds and spirits of others, inducing various psychological effects. Example: Kiro channels his inner fire-based Reiki to conjure and control flames, enhancing his martial arts techniques by enveloping his fists in fire during combat. 3. Nenki (念気) - Mental Energy Nenki reflects a heightened state of mental focus and spiritual awareness, granting users advanced perceptual abilities and resilience. Applications Enhanced Perception: Detect subtle changes in the environment and anticipate opponents' movements. Presence Sensing: Identify the location and intent of others, even when concealed. Mental Fortitude: Resist psychological attacks and maintain composure under duress. Example: Sensei Tastujin employs Nenki to sense an ambush, allowing them to evade attacks and counter with strategic precision. Advanced Forms of Chikara Seiki (精気) - Vital Energy (Integrated within Reiki) Seiki pertains to healing and restorative powers derived from spiritual energy, facilitating rapid recovery and support abilities. Applications: Accelerated Healing: Quickly mend wounds and recover from injuries. Energy Transfer: Share vitality with allies to rejuvenate their strength. Purification: Cleanse negative influences or toxins from oneself or others. Example: Norami uses Seiki to mend a comrade's injuries on the battlefield, enabling them to return to combat swiftly. Combining Chikara Types Warriors often blend different Chikara types to develop versatile combat styles. Giki + Reiki: Integrate elemental energy into physical attacks, such as delivering a punch infused with lightning. Reiki + Nenki: Enhance elemental control with heightened focus, enabling precise manipulation of fire to form defensive barriers. Giki + Nenki: Combine physical prowess with acute awareness, allowing for seamless anticipation and countering of enemy moves. Training and Mastery Achieving proficiency in Chikara requires dedicated training. Giki Training: Focus on physical conditioning, martial arts techniques, and tactical combat skills. Reiki Training: Engage in spiritual practices, meditation, and elemental affinity development. Nenki Training: Cultivate mental discipline, mindfulness, and sensory enhancement exercises

[@TheKnightOfZ0]

Underrated example is Geass and Code of immortality.

[@Ravvox]

Geass is meh but tbh I need to rewatch Code Geass. I didn't understand Zero Requiem at all

[@TheKnightOfZ0]

@@Ravvox u didn’t understand the show either

[@dinisourdoomgaming9139]

Bruh im literally like 15 episodes from catching up to one piece and I'm still seeing spoilers for egghead arc.

[@iiVx_V]

Jjks power system is goated

[@FactoriesSettings]

Jjk power system is confusing as hell

[@azashiro9890]

jjk power system is bleach power system if tite kubo was a dogshit author. And trust me, i like jjk, but the power system is such an amalgamation of what gege thought was cool about other power system, no originality there.

[@FactoriesSettings]

Gege changes the rules every week lmao

[@rulerofeverything6294]

I am going to make warhammer 40k inspired story, wish me luck!

[@nickmccauley8009]

If anyone needs any help for making their dream manga come true. I be more than happy to help get the ground work started with you. I, myself, is making a manga so I know how hard it is to get started. Plz comment if you like any insight (or want to ask about my manga. I won’t be going into it too much for the sake of people not stealing it).

[@Charlitos-gn7fe]

think my 3 favorite power systems are probably 1. Nen (HxH) 2. Toaru 3. Metal Vessels (Magi) Honourable mention probably goes to JoJo.

[@faizissa8617]

Someone mentioning

[@RaftFx]

Whats toaru..?

[@reinsama2.09]

The Law of Ueki has the most consistent power system in all of shonen

[@hahayayak3620]

Chakra, Nen, Stands >>>

[@rexben8027]

Isn’t haki just giving people power level ? Kaido has higher power level/haki so no One can beat him, he tanks all that damage not because of his df but just cause he’s strong, it just returns back to where we started. How is haki built up, if through physical training than we just let go of the whole system we had built garp and roger were one of the strongest in the verse and match strong guys like wb just cause they train harder that’s not a well built ps, and it started off unique but everyone just seems to have conquerer haki now.

[@whocares8576]

This depends. Any other Haki can be trained like armament and observation. The only one that isn’t able to be obtained normally is conquerers, which is used by those who have the ambition of a king.

[@SWIFT_NINJA47]

Devil fruits aren’t that good of a power system ngl you should have replaced it with chakra or spiritual pressure

[@bananasunday3369]

Dand bro this is amazing

[@icyhot2116]

Undead Unluck in my opinion has a perfect power system

[@lorddarkrai5753]

Araki: Creates the first official monster fighting anime out of nowhere Pokémon , Digimon , Yu-Gi-Oh , Bakugan , Magi-Nation , Yokai Watch: He doesn't know it yet but he's created one new anime genre.

[@It-is-me-j7]

As a yugioh fun I can confirm that araki's job has inspired yugioh's mangaka the most.

[@Forteoverload]

I have to disagree with one thing: Nen would absolutely work in JOJO. Moreso the parts 1 and 2 than any other part.

[@samuelespinoza3336]

I like more Nen than the others two mentioned on the video, stands are cool, and fights became more about able to outsmart your opponent, but Araki had shown how broken the system can be examples: The world and wonder of you and though those are exceptions and not the majority of the series, but it feel weird how Jotaro and gappy won more gappy than jotaro because at least jotaro need to think how to use those precious 2 second instead gappy just get new bubble derivate of a system that Gappy never know about it. Haki on the other hand it get a little to much dbz style with that of "Having more haki than x character" but to be fair race do not matter in getting more haki but its obvious that fights became more about haki than thinking how to overcome enemy ability the exception is Katakuri v Luffy that is more a psychological battle intertwined with luffy upgrading his haki , but this is my opinion

[@strait2point_abc]

Mine favourite is jojo !

[@mr-fh2be]

Dude forgot to mention Full Metal Alchemist. Alchemy can be used by those who study it, but can specalise in certain forms. The greater your knowledge in the art, the better you get.

[@RRicefarmer]

I just realized rock Lee is like toji from jjk

[@GRIFFITHdaGOAT]

World trigger has the best power system. Not even nen stands a chance.

[@mrhalfsaid1389]

Magic system... you meant MAGIC system. A power system is how the power is actually measured, not the rules of how the fantastical elements work. I get this sounds very erm akshually but the whole reason why it's important to be make this distinction because a power level is for example: pokemon trainer, gym leader, elite four member, champion. That is a power system because their is a distinct hierarchy of the difficulty to defeat them and their skill. A magic system is the rules of a fictional wirld that makes the characters in said world more powerful than the standard human. The examples of the video are good. Again, seems like semantics but power level is creating a system of categorisation rather than added rules of a universe in fantasy.

[@name_less2139]

Bungou stray dogs also have a very good power system imo

[@Vor567tez]

It's interesting. It takes inspo from poets and their most noted traits. To create magic system.