How to Write a Strong Paragraph

[@barbpetr2941]

Dear Ms. Mozier--I am a high school English teacher trying to help my challenged 9th graders write coherent paragraphs and just found your video. It is excellent. You provide enough time for me to pause the video, direct their attention to our assignment question which allows me the opportunity to speak to them in order to apply your instructions to their work, and then return to the various sections of your video for guidance. The visuals are so, so important--they are right on point! Excellent presentation. Thank you SO MUCH for taking the time (and I know how valuable a teacher's time is!) to share this with all of us! Barb

[@StoryTime_2gg]

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[@alanangel1313]

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[@tjohnsmith5219]

Thank you I actually have an exam tomorrow with these coming in it and my teacher told me to watch this video this was very interesting

[@PatriciaSalsedo-kq4bv]

This is the best explanation for writing thank you

[@ElectrikMe]

Excellent tutorial.

[@FreshKicks4545]

This is a smoothly essay. My question is, if I use "for example ,in addition and as a result" in paragraph one. What can I use in paragraph 2 and 3????

[@jenameagher5712]

I TOTALLY assumed my kids knew how to write a paragraph too...thank you!

[@sarashepherd7663]

I’m being forced to watch this rn❤️

[@mxxnlight663]

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[@crystalcostello6466]

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[@trufee9701]

oh my god you saved me from my exam.thank you

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[@bettyvarnadore6439]

thank you for this hamburger illustration. It helps to remember easily.

[@StoryTime_2gg]

Betty Varnadore why like your own comment

[@datamber2091]

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[@tonyda6405]

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[@alex.not.found03]

You helped me. Thanks

[@star4fun.d]

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[@Silas_229]

Greetings from AbiBox English students!

[@parkosamo2738]

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[@bhadsidd]

To write a perfect paragraph, you must Sandwich your content in 3 parts. Firstly, you write a clear Opening statement. Secondly, write a body which starts with facts, followed by personal examples, opinions and results. Finally, end the paragraph with a conclusive statement which reflects the opening statement and thoughts. Like this, you have a clear paragraph which is easy to read.

[@Braders-pp2kz]

This video is very helpful to understand how to make a strong paragraph

[@mohammadibrahim5429]

Great job, thanks

[@Mr-Asamoah]

thank you very much for such lovely presentation

[@kamal43895]

Excellent .

[@sarahgeorge9309]

Ms Mozier, you need to but space before the first word (My ) .

[@jackeroo75]

The woman is great!

[@recall660]

this help a lot, could you please give some explanation how to write five paragraph easy including the introduction ,thesis and directional thesis and the body paragraph ,and conclusion. Thank you for the efforts

[@w1ll_l]

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[@luv_ziana]

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[@luv_ziana]

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[@dcbros1913]

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[@mickey3705]

no one replied to all of these comments oh good video btw

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[@bluewyvern4496]

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[@mickey3705]

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[@zubairabbasi4996]

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[@TheWeavingBagel]

im being forced to watch dis

[@hllw8700]

I hate this stuff aka my school work

[@kimmson6356]

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