How To Write An Amazing Judgement (Final Paragraph) In Economics

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[@Lenardx]

Instead of in conclusion:: Effectively, in order to [question..], we must [answer/judgement] - < What needs to be so yes, what may limit this? Alternatives?, refer back to question

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as long as ceteris paribus

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Great set of videos! Could you possibly make some question structure videos for 15 and 25 markers in AQA? How many points to raise etc

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[@kyraflame]

I wrote "In conclusion" on my last exam looooooooooocrapooooool

[@zbordek5672]

I wrote "In conclusion" on my paper 1 today rip

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@@zbordek5672 SAME :(

[@crazyweirdgirl115]

@@zbordek5672 oof same. I watched this video waaay too late.

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same here haha

[@markhenley3097]

Why did you watch the video after you finished your exam?

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[@minvs]

Any tips? I'm giving mine in like a few days ehejeoeiwjeoeo

[@zeng_yufei]

Omg,i hope i can also do it well after i watch this video

[@elonmars826]

Thank you for guiding me on the direction of my examination!

[@adietyapokhrel7711]

Thank you sir. Currently i am near to my MA Economics exams. This will be helping me out a lot.

[@jaket8019]

if the question is evaluate the effects of something, for your judgement do you say which effect is most significant ? or what - for paper 1 25 marker

[@wisdomsimeon431]

Can you give judgement starter sentences please?! I'm looking to get full marks on my paper and it will be all down to you, sir!

[@albiebaggins8644]

Speaking Wisdom, From the arguments expressed above we can understand that...

[@Chazzalittlemore]

If you are pressed for time in the exam, how would you make the judgement as effective as possible? Your videos are great btw, has helped with my structure massively - something which really did hinder my grade in AS

[@EconplusDal]

+Chazzalittlemore Great to hear - leave yourself at least 5 minutes for the judgement. Be strict making sure you do, then your judgement will be good. Will avoid you being pressed for time

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[@youknow7294]

Oh yeah yeah

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I wish I watched this video 8 hours earlier :D

[@personpeople665]

In concluding that was a great video.

[@brianevans4]

Does this apply to new spec economics edexcel?

[@adrianawang3687]

Thank you so much sir, I got my A in AS economics

[@JJones96]

Great videos! Still use your paragraph videos at uni!

[@korbinian8704]

So what's the difference between a judgement and an evaluation?

[@nicolassilon8118]

a judgement is an answer to the question however an evaluation is where you point out the flaws or strengths of an argument that you made

[@ElberLeagueOfLegends]

If only my teacher could teach 1/10 of this video :')

[@DangerousDec27]

Great video, I'm just curious, Regarding 1:51 ... What should I do if the question cant be answered with a yes or no e.g. Evaluate the main influences on the pattern of trade between countries and changes in trade flows between countries

[@joshchabalaendure6223]

5:47 major key

[@sunnywang8362]

Hi, this video is really helpful to my examination. Thanks a lot! But my teacher told me not to make a judgement on whether a policy should be adopted or not. So I'm a little confused now...

[@nas4331]

Sunny Wang judgement: The government should not nationalise the railway industry but should leave the industry to operate under the ‘invisible hand’ of the price mechanism. Despite the large gains of economies of scale through the transfer of ownership to the public sector that would cause costs to decrease followed by prices, in turn allowing the government to operate at an optimal level at a point in which the industry becomes allocatively Efficient. We should take into consideration the economic climate and the introduction of an austerity policy, the government can not afford to maintain or nationalise large industries due to the cutting down of government spending and thus the price mechanism would be more efficient at allocating resources. However that’s not to say that there should be no intervention in the governments part. The government should keep the rail way industry privatised but should regulate alongside through the introduction of a price cap. Ultimately the government should keep the industry privatised but should regulate it to some degree. Hows that I tried my best so if you can tweak it please do tell me. I hope that helped :)

[@ryanchiwade-rh9mm]

@@nas4331 Now that's what I Call a Judgement. Thanks for this as I'm Currently in Year 1 As for Economics so I'll definitely adopt to this structure.

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[@tap1148]

Changes to interest rates the money supply and exchange rates by the bank of England in order to influence AD

[@sylviaxu3248]

how to avoid repeating words that have been written in the body paragraphs when justfying points in the final judgment? i find myself summarizing and my final judgment has more words than each body paragraph lol

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Big up Vikkstar man

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Great video - thank you!

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lol who else watching this the day before their a level ECON3 exam :')

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Econ alevel exam tomorrow haha

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Econ alevel exam tomorrow haha

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You’re a life saver!

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great video sir

[@alvarobertran5429]

If we shouldnt use"in conclusion", which phrase should we use to begin the final paragraph?

[@jimmyconrad1102]

Alvaro Bertran therefore overall the most effective policy to implement is...

[@Samibarihussain]

Can you give judgement starter sentences please? I'm used to write in conclusion.

[@minjaijung]

Thank you!

[@MoeezAfzal]

watching this in 2023 and its still relevant if i get an A it will be cus of u

[@zeroone6608]

I'm a bit confused with the balance bit, shouldn't we write like 'this policy is not good, because even though this policy is good for... but more importantly it is a huge disadvantage in the long term...' something like this rather than 'the answer will be yes if.....'

[@samstiles7053]

So is it 4KAA 4EV and then judgement?

[@ronturford5744]

Tremendous. Thanks

[@seerpou]

how long should a judgement be?

[@rgyasithchamodya392]

Thank You Very Much 😊

[@histeeiop7680]

this really helps!

[@dejialonge]

Whats the best way of starting a judgement to a question?

[@minvs]

I always struggle with providing real-life examples. Any tips?

[@sandzy124uz]

Great video! How many marks can a quality judgement be worth? Say for example in a 30 mark Edexcel Unit 4 question?

[@EconplusDal]

+sandzy124uz Thank you very much - glad you liked it. Very important in your 30 marker - worth up to 5 marks as your judgement gets you into Level 5 and determines the final mark within that level i.e. between 26 and 30

[@broadwall5456]

God bless you!

[@ravkaur955]

in your judgement, would you need to include your own opinion when making a judgement. I need a little sample paragraph with an amazing judgement please! I am so stuck ; help!

[@jimmyconrad1102]

Rav Kaur don’t use the phrase ‘I’ in an exam, simply state your argument ie. therefore the most effective policy to implement is...

[@rejuvenatedsoul1016]

Can you please share a sample answer for an 8 marker?

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Thank you, Sir

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Do we have to mention conclusion in all the types of question? and where can we find u in gmail...?

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Thanks for the awesome video

[@roadtoscratchgolf7425]

Im doing my assignment rn and I'm staring at my "in conclusion" fml

[@KanishkKedia]

for the real world examples, can I make them up?

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This video is over 5 years old, just finding comfort in the most recent comment around here!!!

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Thank you

[@shushshush9310]

So helpful

[@ss11111ss]

is this for aqa aswell?

[@MissTsarova]

Hi,Is the judgment paragraph the same as the final evaluation paragraph ?

[@patrickdaniel1030]

No, you should be writing an evaluation after every point you write, this is to conclude your total essay

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[@adamaziz5]

Does this come at the end of a 25 mark question??

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did you ever find out?

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is this for edexcel???

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+mat drav okay

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np

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[@Syrafs_]

Hi there, firstly thanks for uploading this very helpful video! I just want to ask, is this the same as evaluating? The best way is to evaluate after each point right?

[@EconplusDal]

+Syahmi Shaarani For sure a lot of what your write in your judgement will be evaluation but evaluating after each point is important as well. You need to do both. If you don't evaluate after each point, your judgement will be hard to follow and fully understand. The examiner should have a feeling of what you will say in your judgement before they read it, hence why evaluation throughout your essay is important. The judgement ties everything together and gives an explicit, justified and balanced answer to the question

[@Syrafs_]

So can we say that the judgement is the evaluation of the evaluations?

[@leskipbayless3280]

+Syahmi Shaarani No its a summary of your evaluations...

[@shihafashihab4608]

@@EconplusDal do you also do Cambridge economics past papers?

[@JamilMiah]

3:05

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econplusdal when you write “in conclusion” : 🤬

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Hero

[@dylandemery5085]

Can I use "Overall" to start this paragraph?

[@TheScarletGamer]

My teacher says "Overalls are for art". Yet he tells us to say 'In conclusion' or 'To conclude'. I don't think it's a gamechanger tbh if your essay is good.

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Specific tax is per unit

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Fiscal government spending borrowing and taxation

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Anyone else here an hour before the exam lol?

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Economic growth is when real GDP growth happens over a year

[@showtimemaster1824]

wait yall write half a page in 5 minutes??

[@muhammadowais3676]

judgement is answer to the question the 3 pages i wrote : are we a joke to you

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Ad valorem is a percentage

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Common W

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Long live dal

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Basically shitting myself right now, 2.5 hrs til the macro paper starts.....

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lost the plot at 0:55

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Hahaha let me delete my In conclusion