"Human, What Is That Third Leg There? Can I Touch It?" ‐Cute Alien Girl | HFY Sci‐Fi Story

[@marcelocampoamor4761]

I'm going to make a critique that will try to be constructive. I've read several of these novels and most have many things in common which makes them very repetitive and clearly shows a formula. Names, situations, and all of them with several recurring themes, the union, the joint struggle, including the recurring theme of the alien woman who asks about the human reproductive system as bait. I don't know if she's an AI or someone who makes variations of the same theme, also the times in which the events take place are very unreal, the original idea is not bad, now this of repeating in the long run gets tiring, the names Chen Rodriguez etc appear in almost all of them and the aliens' names always begin with T, X or Z, the hybrids with L, to spend some time reading one or two it's not bad but if the idea is to subscribe it doesn't work.

[@whitedomerobert]

This is a plot from Star Trek where an ancient device was prepared for an asteroid strike to protect a planet. Kirk get the girl after he looses his memory. His native (American) wife convinces him that he is the “savior” for told, “I am the “ku Aack”; Spock fixes the ancient protector’s device, saves Kick, who Miraculously has his memory back. Cries a little because he lost his Wife and the simple life, and off the Enterprise and crew go back to their 5 year cruise to seek out strange new worlds where no ONE has …..

[@glennstinsonbookerjr.4824]

88, this is good. Kind of like star trek.