"I dove to depths uncharted. They should have stayed that way" Creepypasta

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[@godbearxd]

Damn...All that time later & the radio still works? That's a damn good radio!

[@ZedMazaus480]

It must be hooked up to the energizer bunny. Lol

[@godbearxd]

@@ZedMazaus480 😂🤣💀

[@src6339]

Brett: where's the bottom" _swims off alone_ MC: damn it, Bretts reasonings been compromised. Lets Grab him! We're going back up! The End.

[@cyte112]

Freaky but frustrating. The divers leave the bell, disregarding their own safety, and both of their first reactions when encountering dead fish covered in parasites is to poke it.

[@ilovesteveclark6084]

Saturation Diving is so risky, you have to be handpicked and go through extremely rigorous training. They are so brave.

[@TheNaeNaeGoblin]

You do know this is a fake story right?

[@Dragonsoul892]

@@TheNaeNaeGoblin are you dense?

[@yourroyalhighness6297]

Sometimes it's not the big creatures in the ocean that are frightening but millions of tiny and feisty ones. This is the first story I've heard that didn't have an enormous monster. I love the idea, I wish we'll discover more about the ocean but I also wish we don't get ourselves killed in the process. Lol

[@LuckyLucifer999]

Oh man 😳 I love deep sea creepies...they're just drip with horror! Deep sea and forest ranger,l stories, always get me the most.

[@lisajames3650]

Me too !!!

[@graywolf1339]

Ha Drip

[@fanebabanu3735]

I think that the reaper leviathan roars are a nice addition to the backround

[@authorauthority7193]

Subnautica scared me more than any horror since i first watched the grudge

[@Veladus]

But it's a gamechanger when you download one of the mods that adds weapons. Suddenly, you're not stuck on this planet with leviathans. Leviathans are stuck on this planet with you.

[@expertoflizardcorrugation3967]

@@Veladus I'll be shocked if nobody's made a mod that adds doom weapons

[@ADITADDICTS]

Thought the light they saw when swimming back was going to be a giant angler fish.

[@AgHQ-xc4be]

Same

[@1206overlord]

Actually, I considered that. The original story was going to be angler fish

[@deacondawg1416]

Ditto

[@ZedMazaus480]

@@1206overlord Good choice to get away from the angler fish and going with the mysterious red wurms. This has the potential to be a full horror novel or series. The mysterious void in the depth of the ocean, the creepy dangerous monster, and a strange company sending out smaller ones as expendable or sacrificial resorces for unknown reasons. All the while sending them out on false pretenses. Love it!

[@1206overlord]

@@ZedMazaus480 well the NOAA is a real thing lol, but yeah I’ve been considering a follow up story lol

[@JimmmyRaynor]

me: *inhales deeply* time for the water level.

[@shadeslinger7986]

Dame water levels

[@OIdPudding]

Every time I play subnautica i feel like I'm suffocating

[@CosmicErrata]

Reminds me of one where it's about worm things deeper than Mariana Trench.

[@ImmortalAbsol]

I wish it was warm when I dove in the Galapagos, I almost didn't recover from the loss of body heat despite the good wetsuit.

[@ZedMazaus480]

Oof! Glad you made it back ok in the end.

[@theequalizer694]

The poor humpback whale is still alive. At least he’s not suffering alone anymore….

[@oceanicwhitetip8984]

Forced to devour another... hopefully the two are now at peace..

[@xdz70175]

You have uploaded two videos back-to-back that are exactly twenty-two minutes and twenty-two seconds in length.

[@neko_606]

I thought I was the only one who noticed xD

[@summatime88]

And you have 22 likes🤔

[@badwolf_gtv7725]

@@summatime88 2.2k likes when i saw xD

[@brianhuntington6347]

Damn, that was F-ing scary!!!!! Things like this is why I have a fear of deep water I can't see in!!!!

[@furfurlove9162]

Perfect to listen to, and scare my customers while I'm at work lol

[@trishamingin9003]

love ya CreepsMcPasta! I couldn't get through my days and definitely not my nights without your stories/ voice! I wish I could give u more money a month cause you deserve it. Someday I might be able to. Thank u so much for all you do sir!☺😘😘

[@joshuaromano6538]

Love listening during work just passes the time very well

[@ilovesteveclark6084]

Why don't they know that all you have to do is follow your triple cable (umbilical cord,) to find the bell, since one end is attached to the bell and the other to the diver.

[@berry7usagii]

Poor Brett :( I felt more pity for him rather than fear, that’s one of the worst ways to go (especially since he’s not fully dead yet either) T__T

[@brandonschwartz3154]

All though I’m not a huge fan of these kinds of stories lacking a ferocious sharp tooth monster, I did enjoy this one a lot.

[@wittyjoker4631]

Those worms seemed to have pretty sharp teeth, and are you unfamiliar with a whale? It's rather large. Those wormkin lurked waiting in ambush for the dicers to return. That's intelligence and malice. So big sharptoothed wicked monster check check and check... I fail to get what youre saying.

[@pelaaja1337]

@@wittyjoker4631 That sounds like a you problem

[@wittyjoker4631]

@@pelaaja1337 so you and Brandon add up to a combined iq of 45. Well done.

[@pelaaja1337]

@@wittyjoker4631 Weird flex, but okay.

[@wittyjoker4631]

@@pelaaja1337 lol dumb. That's not a flex it's an insult you Muppet.

[@realfalanuhlaalu]

good story for someone currently studying marine/aquatic bio.

[@dovahgoatdragonbear3075]

That's why you never mess with vents kids It's sus

[@danajones5896]

Great story Creeps, excellent storytelling, my vivid imagination get so happy when I get a notification, thanks!😊❤❤👍👍💯💯

[@DeathEyedGrin]

Diving bells do not have water in them. Neither the open bells or the closed bells, like whats in the story. It kinda defeats the purpose if they did. The only time a bell is flooded is when equipment is being installed inside and then its only partially flooded. Nor can it be operated from inside, only from the surface. So there would be no, "button," to push to rise back to the surface, as the MC did. Hence the whole purpose of having a crane operator to begin with. Maybe I misinterpreted what was said but, "the water inside didn't jostle or move but we could feel..." seems to imply it was full of water, as you wouldn't expect that from a few drops from you entering. Something else they seemed to miss, which I am less educated about so I could be wrong: At that depth, you wouldn't be wearing a typical wetsuit but a drysuit and a heavy one at that. That's what the umbilical from the diving bell attaches to, to keep you breathing. It also provides electricity and heat to keep you from freezing to death. As well as allowing the ability to communicate, as you're not wearing a mouthpiece and at a significant distance from the control center. So there would be no swimming around the bell, as they do. You would sink like a stone. They would need to already be in the bell, before it even touched the water. I could be wrong again but the fact that they lose their way when they clearly said they attached their lines to the umbilical is kinda confusing. The only time the umbilical wouldn't be attached is in an emergency, when they were running on the emergency air tanks affixed to the suit. All this, and other inconsistencies that I missed, adds up and makes the story less enjoyable than it could have been. Guess this is why that old adage, "write about what you know," exists.

[@1206overlord]

About the bell, I wasn’t aware of that. I had done research but I also heard an irl story about people who drowned in a bell when their umbilical became severed. Guess I should have looked into that more. Also I’m pretty sure weather or not it could be operated from the inside would depend on the bell, as they aren’t all the same. As for the suits, I mentioned that they were using expensive suits from the NOAA to combat the pressure, and even specifically mentioned that these suits would allow them to go down to the vents. The story I wrote does mention that they hooked to the umbilical as they entered the bell, and unhooked as they left it.

[@DeathEyedGrin]

@@1206overlord ah, I heard expensive suits and immediately assumed a drysuit for saturated diving, as they're outrageously expensive. My bad. Which is why I assumed they were being used to go to the vents, being that it would allow them to walk on the bottom, where the vents would be, and keep them from boiling alive in the water around the vents. I must have missed the unhooking part, and just assumed thats something you would never ever do during that sort of dive. Sorry again.

[@michaelpettus91]

Decent story. Both Brett & the MC were pretty dumb, which made certain bits of the story really frustrating. Also, I feel like the ending was a bit rushed. We don't really get any explanation for what those things were, or get see the reactions of the other two crew mates at the end. It seems like the story was setting for some sort pay off on those elements since it seems like the crew was set up.

[@1206overlord]

I appreciate the criticism, I do agree that I put it out a bit too fast, I was too excited to have my first story go up. However I will say I plan on writing a sequel, which is why there are seemingly unpaid setups ;). If you don’t mind, I’d love to hear what it was you didn’t like about Brett and Jason/what decisions you think were dumb. I’m always looking to improve future stories

[@sam-db4yx]

@@1206overlord research dive safety more, there are a lot of basic stuff that these guys don’t do, like the if the dive master says something you do it and safety lines so you know your way back are basic stuff, and these are supposed to be expired divers and they do recluse stuff that no diver would do

[@michaelpettus91]

@@1206overlord basically just want Sam said. These guys didn't seem like experienced divers with some of the actions they took. Leaving the bell is an unknown under water location that was difficult to see in & not having any lines back to the bell just strikes me as silly.

[@SynthLove]

@@1206overlord incompetent characters aren’t really interesting they’re frustrating like the other guy said. Smart and strong characters are fun. It’s like watching a horror movie and watching the character do something stupid and your yelling at them in your head “why would u do that?!?” Or “how are you this stupid and emotional?!?”

[@simtexa]

I get the impression that the author doesn't know very much about saturation diving or how to operate while diving.

[@reneoosthuizen9210]

I did a brief search for zombie worms. I think they were Osedax.

[@L3_EnvyOnTTok]

Early squaddddd! Who else?

[@SgtLuke]

!!!Early Squad!!!

[@JustSomeGuywithEpicGrasses]

@@SgtLuke ¡¡¡!!!EARLY SQUAD GANG!!!¡¡¡

[@SevenHunnid]

I review weed products on my KZbin channel for educational reasons

[@SgtLuke]

@@SevenHunnid Is that legal?

[@GPReeds]

Yo

[@AlishaWolfe]

These October stories are so Amazing 😄❤️

[@adi8724]

Yeah you look amazing

[@cosmicdraco7041]

I swear I hear a reaper leviathan sound in the background. If so like in subnautica, it's a very distinct sound. Very fitting though, great idea

[@ZedMazaus480]

After lissening to water stories like this one I want to avoid the ocean for a couple weeks. I won't go back until about the year 2052 by my last count. Lol

[@verenaamaris804]

Woo-Hoo, something to help keep me awake.

[@ThoughtfulStoic]

Bravo. A well written terror!

[@KimchiYeo]

This is your second video that has the exact time of 22:22 this pleases my ocd side haha 😋🥰

[@racatiwood]

I've always heard the agency pronounced like "Noah"

[@0yCrazyb]

Underwater creepy pasta time *Inhales straight 100% pure pleasure*

[@ryantaylor3170]

Bro, they literally have a seaglide from subnautica!

[@1206overlord]

That’s a real thing haha

[@ArtByCole]

I think you could use the term ground control. One definition of ground includes the sea, elevation is based on the Mean Sea Level, GPS elevation uses the geodetic model of the earth (based on the geoid: the egg-like shape of the Earth which is more accurate than MSL for gravitational purposes). It's a random thought I had while listening. Had to get it out so I could continue without distraction. Yay short attention spans! 😆

[@ApocalypticTruthTeller]

“Egg shape of the earth” 😂😂😂😂😂 🫵♿️🤡

[@d0m2288]

Good one.

[@Kylie-zm6vw]

Lovee ocean storiess😍

[@outblucks6724]

I loved this so much

[@-JA-]

Thank you.

[@IvanTheProducer]

Your last video was 22:22

[@carolheward6479]

Oh thats harsh. Oh what hes still down there.

[@missmiagi2147]

Whoa! I really enjoyed this one 😈

[@yourlocalclown8394]

Introducing one of the reasons I have thalassophobia Things that are unknown should stay that way...

[@Steady_Thready]

I love me some ocean creepypastas!

[@Leahrachelle19xx]

Anyone else pay attention to numbers? The last two videos have been 2222 👀 which means abundance is coming 💕

[@trionhd7223]

This was somewhat eerie for me as it reminded me of some Subnautica inspired nightmare I had, Even if it wasnt super connected with thhis Story Also is it Even theoretically possible to be this deep wirh all the pressure and no vehicle for protection?

[@1206overlord]

I had off handedly mentioned that they were using special depth suits to allow them to resist the pressure, as normally no, it isn’t.

[@ssjabelincoln420]

I don't think that's how radios or batteries work lol

[@Darkshade_01]

Awesome

[@ethanjenkins8121]

Good

[@fizzy1550]

If this is another Cthulhu story, I swear to Pete...

[@Chimera936]

Roger Roger *clone wars flashbacks* 😂

[@Goldwodka]

I love water ones!!!

[@randlerichardson5826]

Hey CreepsMcPasta

[@majestic8404]

2 back to back video of 22:22 long? Hmmmm

[@GhxstMode]

Saving this one for later

[@The_Goblinn]

I have Thallasophobia… thank you

[@candiceperry5817]

This story would make me fall asleep

[@christyfielding7498]

Can we please get stories where the characters aren't so stupid? It frustrates me so much when they do obviously stupid things to move the storyline along. Surely someone can write halfway logical people and still make a good creepy story.

[@bizzyizzy9526]

And this is why I only go as deep as my bathtub 😏

[@crisspyg.9742]

I’ll go as far as the bottom of the swimming pool, like 12ft but if it requires gear, nopesauce

[@EllySoccerstar]

I wouldn’t mind going as deep as a hot tub again. My asshole thinking mom at the middle of the summer took it down bc it broke but she fixed it so wth I miss it 😪😭😭🥺🥺🥺

[@EllySoccerstar]

@@crisspyg.9742 I wish I can swim underwater but I never learned. Is it cool like I imagine it is Please get back to me. Love Anna Ross

[@crisspyg.9742]

@@EllySoccerstar it is! If you ever do try it, make sure you wear goggles lol your eyes will thank you if you open them! I had an X who couldn’t put his head underwater, we worked through it and he finally was able to do crawl stroke with his face down instead of up (better position for staying afloat) If he could do it, I have faith you can too ( he was a bit of a ninny) take it slow, try the shallow end and just sit on the bottom. Gives a neat perspective, then as your more comfortable, explore 😊 honestly when I was a kid o was OBSESSED with The Little Mermaid, and when my mom would take us to the pool I always pretended I was a mermaid 🥰 let your imagination run wild for a bit, I think you’ll have some fun 🤩

[@drea7421]

Yes! OCEAN PASTA

[@SneakyShades]

stories like this are so frustrating, the concept is interesting but the characters acting so stupid just makes me mad

[@guysmiley515]

Reason # 17 why I don't go in the ocean

[@josephmckee3342]

Ahhhh.. You seen one of them on CNN that made it all make sense.

[@pleasejoe]

Zombie whale...

[@underfall2749]

Hello nightmares my old friend

[@liemduongthanh8386]

so, subnautica?

[@bizzyizzy9526]

First! 😮

[@abigoreternal7537]

Beat you by 3 lol 😆 You got it next time

[@bizzyizzy9526]

@@abigoreternal7537 😉

[@kennethgrundmann5576]

🏴‍☠️🏴‍☠️🏴‍☠️🏴‍☠️🏴‍☠️

[@Adam-118]

More parasites. The venting is a nasty description

[@Chopconezz]

I like these story's a lot ay they're pretty mean. I listen to these sometimes before I go to sleep like a bed time story

[@jamesgatz4490]

Did you find Nathan Drake

[@dmitrykhramov1832]

👌👍💪

[@abigoreternal7537]

1st again yayyyy

[@Bluesit32]

A humpback whale? Thousands of meters down? And still alive? Just...how? I could suspend my disbelief up to that point. If it had been a whale carcass, I could still suspend my disbelief, but not a live one. Also, pretty sure humpback's can't open their mouths to let a human inside, but I guess the worms somehow broke through the baleen

[@BIGDAWGSUZZY42069]

Earliest I've been

[@princeguernsey57]

Me too

[@witchling1678]

Back 4 Blood, underwater dlc?

[@noechoprime]

bruh this is not creepy. it's gross

[@PrettyDopeKitty3]

Creeps can you make another channel for us that can't handle the gore & viscera I love your voice but most of your content gives me nightmares please make a less scary channel.

[@Auriculatus]

.... Then just stop listening to it 🤣🤣

[@jazztronic10]

... his name is literally Creeps. He's a horror story narrator. That's his niche.

[@PrettyDopeKitty3]

@@jazztronic10 you can tell a scary story without blood and guts.

[@PrettyDopeKitty3]

@@Auriculatus Wrong !