i hate ivy league kids.

[@jam-hy5qm]

the among us essay was genuinely genius

[@abdullahtalks650]

Pretty creative

[@징징-u4f]

@@abdullahtalks650 in my opinion it wasn't that creative lol it was just different from what you would see on collegevine or college essay guy. it was literally just the description of the game with a weak connection that ties in a lesson + some friendship element. Idea was ok but the way he brought it out was very lame. Could've been better if approached in a different light.

[@mosasako4679]

Thats exactly what these ivy leagues receive with every essay. Somethink “special“. U really think ur the only one?

[@lkm630y79]

Well, he sure went for the unexpected and took his risk. Which I can respect, since his risks sure got him into the ivy.

[@ann.178]

’they like people who got into MIT' speechless tbh 😭

[@annieadelina3766]

It was so violating LOL

[@kyletsai]

yeah that one hurt 😔

[@sarahhh9136]

I WAS LIKE *hand covering mouth* OOP

[@holagirl7144]

my hand flew to my mouth. that was destructive

[@haurahaura872]

What is MIT

[@niniextra7642]

I would low-key cry because of the effort it took to write those essays

[@mayuhmetal]

No I am literally so sensitive I would’ve been crying dying screaming 😭

[@cnidocyte]

lauren is legit so well spoken n funny it’s impressive. like literally her Fucking among us essay critique effortlessly tops anything i’ve ever made in a HEARTBEAT. her college app was just a link to this vid n they gave her full scholarship. then i saw she had 300k … no wonder

[@cnidocyte]

[@sasharowen9584]

do u still have the link please??

[@sasharowen9584]

@@cnidocyte does she have her college app on it?

[@cnidocyte]

@@sasharowen9584 no i was joking😭 but tbh she might

[@k.s.2091]

THEY’RE BRUTALL THIS IS HILARIOUS

[@kyletsai]

they rly were

[@caposolomon8745]

Honestly no one needs to go to an ivy league. I used to think that college name means everything but come to find out that you get the exact same education if you go to a community college. I originally went to a top engineering school in the country but then transfer to a community college because I was not happy. Finishing up my Physics degree at Liberty, and got into John Hopkins and Purdue for Graduate programs in engineering. What I'm trying to say is that we need to rethink our preceptive when it comes to college.

[@phanminhchau2002]

in terms of getting the same education you refer to undergrad and not graduate degrees right?

[@caposolomon8745]

@@phanminhchau2002 both, it really doesn't make a difference. The thing that we need to look at is the accreditation. If the highest accreditation is there then the education standards are the same.

[@frogtheasian3111]

maybe, but the fact you worked hard until high school to be accepted into an ivy already shows your work ethic tbh.

[@phanminhchau2002]

@@frogtheasian3111 tbf though a lot of people who work hard still get rejected. It's a lottery up in those ranks

[@MHI638]

What a story man, I hope everything is going well now.

[@ricardozamora8023]

Watching this just makes think about how admissions mocked my essays before rejecting me

[@denim4938]

Literally.. I wanna cry but momma ain’t raise no beech💪🏼😈

[@xalpacazeu1332]

oop

[@princess7jasmine]

Don't worry, your essays aren't interesting enough to be mocked

[@princess7jasmine]

@Toru ??? How is that even relevant lmao. The tense in my post was fine.

[@princess7jasmine]

@Darren Take your own advice

[@ashleyokp]

thanks for making me realize I need to revise all my essays

[@alrenobenjamin6566]

ooooffffff

[@avi4875]

This isn't what I expected when I clicked this but I kinda love it. Everything about it is perfect. It's adorable.

[@mirrowbell5137]

cute enough to watch huh?

[@jenosleftshoulder]

HAHHAHAHAH

[@haomingtsai2000]

Great courage to open for critiques, Kyle. It’s good to know the peers reviews for reference, as we move forward to better ourselves. I like your essay and hosting. Great job！

[@yimingsong7300]

King

[@girlscoutfather2710]

Literally the thesis of the essay that got me into Stanford: “There are quite a few characters in the English language. A certain number of characters that I will not count on my fingers - I am eating Cheez-Itz. Numbers. Numbers remind me of the times that I have fallen and picked myself off of the pavement that usually cradles my toes.” Not exactly, but that was basically my introduction. Edit: Needed grammatical adjustments to prevent online ridicule and doubt. I don’t care enough to revise completely.

[@tegelstenen4178]

WHAT

[@tegelstenen4178]

I need the full document of that essay because that's some legendary shitposting.

[@girlscoutfather2710]

@@tegelstenen4178 Thought about posting the final draft on Reddit, lol.

[@linagarett]

@@girlscoutfather2710 Please post it. I'd want to see the greatest academic shitpost inspo.

[@tegelstenen4178]

@@girlscoutfather2710 Does that final draft still exist?

[@barsaa._.]

It wasn’t weird until you called the characters adorable 🥴🥴

[@itz_ary]

I mean... lowkey true tho

[@taylorswift13pt2]

I have a lot more confidence in writing an essay for college-

[@btsforever7815]

These essays are much better than anything I have and they’re getting roasted like mad😭

[@elliot_ps420]

That Among Us essay was horrific😁 My self confidence has gone up

[@desivillarauz4575]

how do you even allow people to read your work. I don’t even like to reread my work after i’ve turned it in, let alone let my friends make fun of it.

[@parad0x.76]

fr tho i never reread my work since it’ll just end up me making another whole ass essay bc i disliked the last 1

[@cady5499]

Same here. I feel ashamed of my work hahaha.

[@Jesuslovesyoupraisehim]

I would littlery sometimes look up on goggle or the. Try to rember how I writing it is done and or just make stuff up that might be ture But I would not let people read ,y work unless it's someone I not friends with or see them every bule moon

[@diegodesigns3976]

I think it’s a privilege to have friends who critique and criticize your work so you could build in your craft 😌

[@sudhanshugupta3969]

i shouldn't have seen this, although it is funny at times, I am now questioning what I am writing in college essays. It is amazing content though

[@tazziiiee]

Ur in senior year of high school?

[@sudhanshugupta3969]

@@tazziiiee yea

[@tazziiiee]

@@sudhanshugupta3969 don't worry, it will all be alright bro, just stay true to urself and ur personality, don't worry or panic and just nail the essay 🤗✌🏼😊

[@sudhanshugupta3969]

@@tazziiiee hope so bro💜 thank you

[@sridevisudhahar309]

bro same, i dont even know why I'm here good grief

[@NiDasia2984]

This is great but the "physically apart, but emotionally together." That right there 😭🤚 you're pushing it.

[@JDubs1464]

I’m just impressed somebody is in contact with this many Ivy level students

[@AccordingToWillow]

honestly this is rly helping me with my essays

[@chillaxmoknin3708]

I want to know how they don’t stutter at all when reading the essays and stumble on their words when roasting. I mean THAT takes skill. Btw nice essays! I’m going to learn from your excellento word choices

[@tobennaokoli4450]

When you think about it, all college does is prepare you for your career. And while it is VERY good to have an Ivy on your résumé for a job, people without them are still making getting top tier jobs - and are less likely to be in debt if they couldn’t afford an Ivy education. Ivy’s are great but they don’t ruin your future cause you didn’t get in. For some people it meant they could go to a great college, not be in debt, and start their future with a clean slate.

[@randyel-khouri8506]

I really liked your Standford essay it felt genuine and it really showcased how you were as a person (positive and negative) instead of being some perfect human being

[@amitarao9888]

THIS IS SO FUNNY LMAOOOO UR FRIENDS R SO REAL

[@bjao8619]

I would have died on the spot, props to you for staying alive

[@itz_ary]

OMGGGG you're honestly so confident. I could never. Ngl I kinda liked the among us essay though. It was ACCURATE and you reminded me of my bsf cause she also be playing with us and that girl is a serial killer when it comes to that game😭😭. Also the roomie one sounded really honest and genuine cause i'm also a night owl with a stress eating problem so i would've loved to be your roomie. Generous of you to share tho😗

[@danielkyong9766]

I LOVE YOU FOR INCLUDING THE SINGING

[@maryelgayar3149]

this is hilarious and it has no right to be

[@teti9087]

I'm in community college.. and lemme just say these essays are something else lmao

[@antares3518]

Ivy league kids in college: haha I'm rich and in a top institute Also ivy league kids: why do I have so much crippling debt?

[@Selenanina19]

Alternate title: Being roasted for my Squidward vibes for 25 minutes...

[@madinamir4543]

He resisted so much criticism, and laughter, most of them obviously hurts the hurt. This kid will go far.

[@CarolinaGonzalez-gx2bd]

Tbh my friend's essay that got her into Stanford is about her baking bread.

[@goodgrief4543]

that was just a imposter x crewmate fanfic

[@jaskatharina]

i fuckin died when you quoted eminem in the caltech essay

[@saturn746]

man really wrote an essay about among us for a college admissions essay

[@spacetime9673]

So they’re criticising those essays that I can’t even write them out 🥲

[@miavillana860]

this was sooo funny! thanks for making my day! and making me rethink every essay i've ever written

[@adpadillar]

Bro wrote an among us essay and got into princeton 💀💀💀

[@edombelihu5571]

i’m i tears… man they really violated you.

[@grandmaster2914]

God damn they really went for your throat

[@johnly_]

This was a hilarious video. That's pretty courageous to allow yourself to be roasted this much. Respect

[@jiatong8123]

i like how he made this video to roast himself but at the end of the video he says “i like how i’m doing pre-med” SIR EXCUSE ME

[@honestabe_9207]

The last time DeAndre Hopkins was deemed as a small player was when he probably played high school football 😂

[@ternedo6074]

You can't even be mad at her for the Steph curry "undersized!" As a man who is 6' 3" I can 100% tell you I am NOT undersized!

[@carrotbund3199]

Omg they obviously don’t know what dry mouth is for a clarinetist or any wind player… it’s one of the symptoms of pre performance anxiety and nervousness… that’s why a spit generator would be awesome…. Your friends obviously don’t know that much about musicians… seeing how they were teasing u about a perfectly reasonable invention that im pretty sure all wind musicians would love to have 🙄

[@kapjoteh]

Drink water

[@OEBlackman]

@@kapjoteh bro we all ready do that, we still need to make sure that we have at least some saliva, hence the spit generator.

[@badlilthang2]

this masterpiece is a year old now

[@LivingDead53]

One of my essays said that America crawled out of the ocean, and then it went everywhere. Maybe Kyle is schizophrenic or lost his logic to Bjork. Anyway, I had to rewrite my essay, which is good. Anyway, if I were ever to write an entrance essay, I'd write it about my bicycle. That was my independence and where I had a lot of philosophical talks with myself. Honestly, I've been blasted by Ivy League students, especially SD. I was still shy about telling people about my family life, my learning disability, how I was taught to read, which messes up my ability to spell at times, or the fact that I had to ride over 20 miles a day to give my money to my often intoxicated mother. We won't get into my bio dad. mom is doing better, at least. I gave up not saying anything about it. When I got my ACT score back, I saw my 21 and was like, off to OTC we go, a community college. As far as math goes, I made a 17 on that section. I am a curious person and will take Math 050 this spring. I really want to learn Trigonometry.

[@timothye7153]

My voices in the head just keep telling that this guy is being cut at the core of his personality and wow you will never forget

[@joetepan6102]

I can smell the debt

[@interesting795]

Pre med he’ll be fine

[@bepoo8267]

@@interesting795 graduate at 30, get free of debt in another 10

[@gn2630]

if ur parents make like less than 80k, most ivies give u VERY generous grants

[@f52_yeevy]

Today I've learnt that lists make Ivy League kids laugh

[@w.cryies]

Honestly I don't think I could ever do this with my friends T^T I would be okay wityh them proof reading but reading it outloud in front of other people is just-

[@Jesuslovesyoupraisehim]

People ask why we dont ask other students for help :- When we do this happens?

[@2010waspeak]

The title-“I hate IVY league kids” The thumbnail-included schools that aren’t ivies

[@zhady6188]

R.I.P. self esteem

[@brodypenn]

Six days until early action apps are due, thanks for showing some of your essay I now must edit.

[@daviwantsout]

I wanna be Ariane's friend so bad

[@tylerbowman4397]

I feel like good advice for these essays is to just be geniune. Many of these clithches and critismis can be avoided by not overthinking it to the moon and back.

[@adelinewhite5720]

These kids are all avid participants in the ATC subreddit

[@Jesuslovesyoupraisehim]

People dont understand how hard it is to even write a essay its like texting what do you do when you have nothing to say

[@_aiko020]

"Because I was the admissions officer that actually read this essay."

[@mlcsiy]

no but i love your essays sm 😭🤚🏼

[@Prince-bu4mm]

I actually loved the first "Among us" piece he wrote and I feel like the girl was trying to nitpick just for the sake of nitpicking. First, we both agree, her and I, that the piece was eloquent - Is a talent to be able to present a piece in a beautiful way - Aesthetics, right ? What I don't agree with are assertions that it wasn't rigorous in its content. The boy was writing a piece on a game he loves to play, and not describing the implications of a genocide in Darfur. How cathartic do you then expect it to be? Conversely, the fact that he was able to take a seemingly inane" topic and write a piece about it, not only creatively but also beautifully is actually commendable. Also, the fact that he wrote a piece about a game that has Machiavellian tendencies is not a bad thing, nor does it necessarily endow him with manipulative tendencies because all values are objective in nature . It is only after we give those values a direction and a focus by using them to our subjective benefits, that they then start to take on various forms and colors. So, Congratulations on your acceptance to Princeton. I am sure they loved your piece, as much as I did !!!!!! :)

[@mega1chiken6dancr9]

bruh do you have friends

[@kelab4599]

Dude, it’s her opinion. She’s allowed to feel how she feels about the essay.

[@Prince-bu4mm]

@@kelab4599 Agreed !!!! 👍

[@moommoom6915]

@@kelab4599 And this is his opinion 😟

[@kelab4599]

@@moommoom6915 I never said it wasn’t 😱

[@ethanma3916]

'i hate ivy league kids' - an ivy league kid

[@hushaway779]

through MY leadership. oh lord, i love this video 😭✌️

[@tomerschannel3248]

This video really shows the diversity of IV league schools

[@nausheenhossain8408]

I would be annihilated if they read my essays💀

[@hoanganh995]

“you can tell he’s never tried weed” lol

[@cerealbeforemilk8976]

"Hi, I'm Sophia, I'm going to Princeton and I'm here to steal all of Kyle's simps" 1:27 LMAOOOO

[@riri1366]

OMG LAURENNNNN I loveeee her edits!!!

[@VinOnline]

I got rejected from Harvard therefore I hate them

[@kungfuryclub1425]

Nah bruh these essays were funny asf, nobody else in that call could write something like that

[@estherl.3688]

Now I know. Before I submit my college essays I should ask my friends to roast me on them 🙃

[@nanananana1264]

they're laughing but what about their essays 🤨😶

[@kelab4599]

I’m sure they’re better at writing essays than him hence why he went to them for constructive criticism.

[@kelab4599]

@buyucu serefsiz Well I’m sure he might think they are

[@sanp2032]

@buyucu serefsiz nope pretty sure the other person was right

[@penguinxrock]

i think they're already a step above him if they didn't write about among us

[@cristangarza7895]

Man wanted to start a new epidemic of addictions in the U.S.

[@andrewturkington369]

The more important degree is any graduate degree you pursue. What matters is the education and skills you have, not the college name on the diploma. Ivy Leagues are a waste of money, you can get the same education at a good state school for undergraduate degrees

[@Elricsedric]

How are these essay like this isn't even about education😅

[@Jesuslovesyoupraisehim]

Well I think it's a essay about what he likes

[@80xdplays88]

17:15 he tried to make a fancier apple watch.

[@bellazh3735]

This video made me laughed soooo much, my favorite KZbin video out of anything I watched!

[@Jionnis123]

Me looking at the thumbnail like “Stanford isn’t an Ivy League school.”

[@cerealbeforemilk8976]

lmaoooo kyle's friends and their roasts 😭😭

[@cristangarza7895]

Among us essay was neat and then the others made me mad that you got into Princeton

[@ohthatsruby]

This video was a little cringey. In all my 30 years of life I’ve never witnessed a group of friends roast a friend in this manner. Maybe it was for entertainment purposes but I hope that Kyle isn’t emotionally or mentally impacted by this critique.

[@jassingh6943]

It wasn't that bad

[@ohthatsruby]

@@kaitlyn3452 is that what it is? Am I just old lol.

[@ravantheoghacker863]

@@jassingh6943 it was very bad, the herd mentality kicked in for all these people.

[@Keke_Poutri]

Right? As much as comfortably a friendship is getting, boundaries still exist. Being close ≠ Being an a$$hole because you "already know them", just like how a typical toxic relationship would sound.

[@MilaniaSamuda]

I just wanna go to Yale for the food tbh

[@sparklinglemon-limepop8442]

Me hearing the essays: *curl*🐙🐙🐙 *curl*

[@ashishronak5774]

The only difference between schools from IVY League/Competitive Schools and schools like Penn State is opportunity.

[@LivingDead53]

If I were going to invent something, I'd find a way to make sleeping for enhanced intelligence and extra time in the human life. I do hours of things in during sleep. Sleep, to me, uneducated about it, seems not being in a crazy world, the brain uses it to stay stimulated as you heal and rest. I mean, especially when I was younger, I had an entirely different life in my sleep, and I even had a memory separate from the one in the waking world.

[@PassiveandMoon]

Wtf bro I can’t even keep up with this game theory class at Yale

[@stephaniecole-sanchez9570]

I'd never choose the roommate prompt. Not unless I could choose the roommate. 'Seems a trap.

[@raynemarquez9787]

bruh i would’ve been, “shitting and throwing up,” after hearing those critiques.

[@kyeanahrobinson1194]

You looked so hurt though 😂

[@zac3807]

One of the only good KZbin videos I’ve watched in a WHILE

[@terrenceking3644]

Not the “erase this essay from your mind” if you want to get into MIT

[@swevasaurus6648]

lmao this was a fun vid! but as a senior in high school i gotta be honest them essay prompts daunt the shit outta me :’)

[@PandaMikey05]

I like to imagine that everyone else applying to college also writes essays like these

[@lovpiliv3732]

This video reminded me why diversity is important

[@Jesuslovesyoupraisehim]

On god their so judgmental

[@cauarodrigues9964]

This is my favorite video. I feel less anxious watching it.

[@Kyle-fu7zs]

I did not apply nor get accepted into any of these schools and yet i feel like my application was better than this 😂 this was pretty funny though, im subbed.

[@sapratruong]

KEEP DOING YOU 😀😀

[@hannahhh7210]

OMG YES the SACRED all state band gang 😭😭😭