"I Live In A Small Town In Rural Ohio, There Are Rules That Must Be Followed" Creepypasta

[@jbaker1341]

This is probably the best-written "rules" story I've heard on this channel.

[@robertleamon1419]

What about mine

[@duckmeat4674]

​@@robertleamon1419good try

[@almightygod2144]

Not hard, they suck

[@nathanielmillington4950]

There is another very good “rule” story about a Cinema Usher who works at a not so normal theater and it’s on par with this one in quality… in my opinion of course. The “rule” stories really fall off after that 😂

[@apocalypticpyromaniac7518]

7 mins in and no rules yet

[@ermmagerdskerples]

Im mad that she left him when he insisted she shouldn’t go in the first place and god forbid she traumatizes herself and punishes him for it. Crazy.

[@ogcipher4967]

Well, trauma is a bitch.

[@Jes9119]

Are you really expecting a college age and "educated" woman to listen to anything a man has to say? Honestly? The world and internet has an overabundance of these "strong and independent" westernized feminist type women. Its not even close to a stretch of the imagination the she wouldnt want to deal with the consequences of her actions. He said "no," she said "you can't tell me what to do" and she lost her eye and couldnt bear to live with the "i told you so" she would feel for the rest of her life because she was too arrogant to listen. Again. The internet is full of mid-20s and older women constantly screaming on social media about how they shouldve listened to the men around them when they gave advice on anything and how feminism scammed them. But what do I know...Im just a man who regularly deals with women every day.

[@aaronweaver9751]

Well, that's another town off my bucket list. Back to Derry for me. Kudos to the narrator and author 🎉.

[@darkiss4428]

Say hi to pennywise for me!

[@bigdaddysatan8075]

I Actually do live in a small rural town in Ohio! All we have is 3 bars, 2 pizza places, and a Lion's Den! It's where dreams come to die!!!

[@1ronw1ll78]

LOL!!

[@sarahllamamama9]

Same except we have 3 bars 3 pizza places and two stop lights .

[@torreydunn7034]

Zanesville? Lol

[@STYX129]

I do too, except all we have is a strange looking grain elevator

[@Deathbecomesme3]

Quaker city?

[@wadd8813]

Rule 1: from 8:15-8:30 (i might be wrong about the time) close your eyes, or you will lose one Rule 2: At noon, the second sun will appear, do not look at it, or you will lose an eye Rule 3: dont look at the birds for long. They will steal your eye Rule 4: If your reflection doesn't look right, break the reflection, or it will steal your eye Rule 5: Dont look into the eyes of the eyeless, or you must give them your eye. You must pull it out yourself The creatures that take your eye will enjoy their meal.

[@alexandreman8601]

It's from 8:10 to 8:25 specificially

[@Scottocaster6668]

Thank you!

[@TierraSanea87]

So basically no matter what you do, you're losing that damn eye.😂🤷🏾‍♀️

[@TrueInvisible]

8 minutes for the 1st rule... in a video that's 1 hour and 25 minutes. doesn't sound too bad.

[@swishsplash]

Perfect timing for a rules story. These are my favorite.

[@Averagedestiny2addict]

Agreed

[@wyattjuliot1324]

Yeah

[@Themcquillan]

I love the rules/list stories I can’t get enough of them

[@hunny_bunny2335]

Holy crap.. that was brutal!!! Great read as always Sir!! Definitely keep them coming. I love my bed time stories ❤❤

[@RowieFox]

I read sir as siri and was like nooo! great bedtime stories indeed

[@jkfjsfaugueyfhsdfjfafajjgu6769]

I don’t get what rule 5 is since you have an eye doctor breaking it all the time? What eyes of the eyeless? the glass eyes? the holes?

[@Astraeaa__]

the holes, the doctor treats people who still have on eye

[@choppsticc]

It means don’t look into the eye sockets of the “people” (not even sure if they’re people because they made it seem as if they weren’t) who lost both of their eyes. You can treat someone who has just lost one eye though, but I’m assuming losing both eyes makes it so you’re not “you” anymore, which is probably why he said “you’re not him” when he was talking to eyeless-Demarcus or whatever his name was.

[@terriwetz6077]

Wouldn't surprise me at all if there really is a town/place like this in Ohio. We have a LOT of paranormal activity in this state.

[@yomogami4561]

was thinking the same. central ohio here and wracking my brain on locations

[@hiddenleafdrip3869]

The paranormal mystery is how they managed to have such good fried chicken tbh. How is it so crispy?

[@briggan007]

@@hiddenleafdrip3869cornstarch

[@StainsStainsStains]

No you don’t

[@matchamelon330]

@@StainsStainsStains??

[@Gfish17]

Zeynep said she understood the rules. Zeynep didn't break the mirror all because Reasons.

[@7thjester16]

Yeah, the whole 'but it's your step mom's' part pulled me out of the story a bit... like you have experience dealing with supernatural entities, understand the rules and consequences... but don't follow them because you don't want to break someone else's mirror?

[@NoArtisticLimitation]

Ingrained “don’t break the mirror because bad luck”, respect for someone else’s house, panic/shock, and the fact this is probably the first time she’s ever actually seen a rule break in action. People don’t know what they’ll do in times of stress... That said, rules come with consequences if you don’t follow them...

[@chrisschreier8433]

Finally. Love stories you narrate that have list of rules

[@jeffreybrunette-lb1dy]

Well done! Squeamish, a good flowing rule story and more original than most. Great narration as always.

[@Chakra-ze2mw]

I've had four heart attacks and three strokes from listening to Mr Creeps professionally telling them stories over the past 10 years and counting!🥺😏😬🤫❤🤥

[@Kim_YoJong]

I'd have strokes too if I listened to that motonous voice for so long

[@alistairogilvy7696]

Wow, nice survival rate... Just out of curiosity, did you get the jab, and (if yes) how many happened subsequently? Regardless, here's to your health in the future. All the best 😁👍

[@jpatton5567]

​@alistairogilvy7696 weirdo

[@iitim2152]

Shoulda have followed the rules then ..

[@Chakra-ze2mw]

@@iitim2152 damn skippy! 🤥

[@soraya7655]

living for these rual town stories they are my fav

[@jonathanjackgoodman2764]

People from Ohio hate the place yet always move back there. I'll never understand. It's a strange phenomenon.

[@gantin100]

It's a place of familiarity, you can leave and comeback and not feel lost. Plus outside of the big cities, most of the towns relatively safe.

[@remembernovember9059]

This is the first rules story I've heard where you learn the rules as you go

[@kimberlyshepherd270]

My husband and I live in Ohio. When there's a video about Ohio I can't help but listen lol.

[@mobilematthew]

A Nice long story i love these you can get into it more than short 20-30 minute ones

[@AbsolutionArmament]

There's another final part to this story. "My Hometown Had Rules: Recovery"

[@V8DV]

Where's that part?

[@AbsolutionArmament]

@@V8DV it's on Reddit, I didn't post the link in case KZbin blocks the comment, the OP of the story didn't hyperlink it with the first 5 parts. Just Google what I put in quotations it will pop up.

[@1-MOOSE]

What a story, I’m glad he was free in the end.

[@jasonmichel8698]

They literally told her several times and she didn’t listen

[@suomynona4420]

It's crazy cause my School growing up went k-12 in one building. We only had around two dozen kids per grade, at most, and the school services two separate towns at once.

[@ajzorn7736]

My brother was visiting from Cincinnati and I mentioned that Ohio seem to be in the news a lot, past and present. He agreed because it's true. It's an active fun state.

[@TheStuart-of-Cosby]

Magnificent as always Sir Creeps.

[@etherraichu]

I had to wear an eye patch for a week once, due to non-cursed town related reasons. It really is hard to keep your eye closed for that long.

[@ajspencer788]

I fall asleep almost every night with your stories on, please don't stop making videos please 🙏

[@tinadove632]

WOW, What a sad story, This one made me question, What the Hell am I Listening to???

[@joeyporter6307]

I’m from Ohio and I wish my town only had these 5 rules!!!

[@michelangelop3923]

1:15:04 The cat Cameo.

[@MrsCaranAmy]

This was a great story. Excellent narration. Thank you 🤗 💖 🌟

[@stopmotionman2742]

As an Ohio citizen I can confirm

[@akehapkap6143]

I’ve heard this a couple of times. It’s so sad, but his stepmother loves him and wants to take care of him. That is just so sweet. The rules should make everyone leave the place lol

[@vincere_]

The original owner of Winderson's, Chuck, was a great guy. Wonder why Sneed sold it.

[@axell4013]

LMAO

[@kentworch]

Thank you Mr Creeps for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always. Definitely made my night.🖤🖤🖤🖤

[@redoofhealerisinteresting7206]

My 3am binging ass legit thought you had pasta💀😭 I need to go to sleep😂

[@jamesrogers7049]

Hey just so you guys know I’m pretty sure The thing in the beginning is footage that someone sent to KZbin Night Mind as a fun interactive ARG for him to solve.

[@Krensharpaw]

Sometimes when I hear you read these stories. I like to think it's the same guy who keeps goin though the same stuff and is just one of the unlucky people around lol.

[@NoArtisticLimitation]

Same sometimes

[@rfroese2502]

"Only in ohio 🤓"

[@SarahfaithlynnMccloskey]

I say the same thing about my city too, there nothing I put past anything to happen day or night gotta love Kensington 😂

[@bazookabeaver6517]

That's so Sigma skibidi rizz Ohio 🤓👍🗿

[@chainsofscarlet9054]

​@@bazookabeaver6517How dare you subject anybody to this reply!

[@choco_cookies6862]

​@@bazookabeaver6517bro let's be skibidi sigma together and let's gets sum gayyt using Ohio rizz

[@SamSparks95]

​@@bazookabeaver6517 your comment made me misread the title as "my hometown has rizz"

[@abeminslow4085]

Even when he's not doing comedy, he's just chillin having a drink, he awesome

[@rubytrotter3766]

One of the crazy states. Why would anybody in their right mind stay in a town like that?

[@kalekain3521]

What always gets me about these rules stories is that in reality these towns/jobs/buildings/whatever would be abandon faster than Helldivers 2. No one would realistically stay in that kind of insane situation.

[@incompetech_kmac]

Thanks for using my music!

[@joeyl669]

Bad ending. You can't kill the character who narrates the story, because how would they tell the story?

[@iceis82]

It’s a story dude.. Fiction… We’re in his thoughts..

[@jonmendelson1104]

It's not the ending. There's a part 6 that for some reason wasn't linked with the rest of the story. If you search google for "My Hometown Had Rules: Recovery" it comes up.

[@willjessieleroy6265]

I started to continue it in a second series but couldn't really find the right way to tell it. It is a miraculous survival that is anything but a miracle.

[@Dreamsycle421]

I love how I'm sitting here playing Cold War Zombies and I hear Echoes of the Damned from both my TV and the video XD I thought I was losing my.mind

[@apitapi]

Somehow never get tired of rules stories

[@fishbarbeque8540]

We haven't gotten a rules story in so long!!! and this is the best one ive heard!!!! Zainep is the best ever!!

[@ariz1450]

Unrelated to the video but, the thumbnail in this video alone is a great looking promise for a video game.

[@muffinmuffin8946]

Oh good god, i hate having a visual imagination, I can feel and smell and hear EVERYTHING ABOUT HIS EYE BEING PULLED OUT, my eyeball hurts

[@KristosMenfes]

need more ppl like this to warn us to buy stuff before we cant

[@KellJell]

I lived in Knoxville and went to UT for a couple semesters. 😬

[@Cmz083]

Lol I'm from Ohio and ive noticed a lot of horror stories, ghost stories and true crime coming from here. What can say, we are a crazy bunch here. 😂

[@MJT_animation]

I LOVE these storys 😁

[@LeeroyPorkins]

Tune in next week for "In Ohio There's A Potato Perrogi Pizza. It's Delicious."

[@alistairogilvy7696]

I was expecting '...I think it's eating the customers'. Also, isn't it 'pierogi'?

[@LeeroyPorkins]

@@alistairogilvy7696 I have no idea 😅

[@ChristopheRobyn]

😂 they also bite back. . . Nah just nibble 😂😂

[@Saint3188]

Sounds good to me

[@src6339]

Followed by "there was once a porrogi pizza in ohio, but leeroy ate it. At least we have chicken" 😏🍗

[@grendeloemga]

Steubenville,Oh for me. Dean Martin’s hometown. Just right across from West Virginia, so lots of weird in that area.

[@Its-PAC]

This story was friggin awesome

[@haayokaaythen7975]

Loved this one!

[@jackdurden466]

That had a lot of potential, and it was really good still, maybe I’m just used to knowing the rules before they’re broken and it’s a sort of formatting for the rules stories that has become the standard. This one didn’t follow that and instead told them when it was already too late, which gave me a sort of frustration when you knew that something had been broken but had no idea what or why. So I can’t say that I loved the design of the story, but I did like the parts had they been in a different format. Of course if they were to all follow that same pattern every time, eventually it’s going to lose its momentum and we’ll get plain tired of the “rules format” until it is changed to something different. I just don’t think that this is quite it. Props for taking the chance though, definitely so!

[@RowieFox]

the rule videos are my favorites!

[@ThestuffthatSaralikes]

So THIS is why all the Buckeyes move down here… Ok. I get it now.

[@reedcamp5631]

Love the videos man!!! Keep it up

[@yomogami4561]

ladybless! that was utterly surreal oh thanks for the narration

[@ZombroESOGod]

As a small town Ohio resident, I can say this sounds legit. 👌

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

Love the rule stories

[@B1GGBRADY]

Bro did you just curse me? What was the beginning of the video?

[@jonherrmann9772]

there's a meow! 1:15:05

[@JordanMayjor3p7]

Yesssss! 😸

[@susanbutler2542]

Good afternoon thank you for the great stories❤❤❤

[@ogcipher4967]

Always the most unbelievable thing about these stories is some dude going back to pseudo-hell again and again

[@dirgewordsmithe]

This story is the product of a deeply sick and twisted mind.

[@willjessieleroy6265]

Yes, it is.

[@TattooedPink]

Cheers! Been waiting for this 😊

[@Farquid]

Tryna eat a Lunchable while stocking shelves at work and the eyeball part had to come on. Lol

[@willjessieleroy6265]

Yay, my story is up.

[@nevasoba5953]

This looks spooky af

[@gaboonjah]

YYYEEESSSSS ANOTHER RULES VID DROP LETS GOOOOOOOOOOO❤❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉

[@ScarLunacyAlter]

Sounds like Ohio is being ruled by an SCP

[@hunny_bunny2335]

I live next to Ohio. Too close to home! 😅

[@Hierophant_Bean]

this one was a banger

[@king81992]

Thumbnail Image- In small town rural Ohio, one man makes a violent (last?)stand against sinister rules and their demonic enforcers. The past of MC's girlfriend sounds interesting. But why are the rules so focused on eyes? That was an abrupt ending

[@deznuts6707]

You gotta keep an eye out for those rules hahahaha😂

[@jamiescott1062]

Ok ok what the hell is up with these names? We on mars?

[@willjessieleroy6265]

The girlfriend's name was the 3rd most popular Turkish name when I was writing. She's from Turkey. Neveah is a common Black American name.

[@nicholaslegnon9207]

Love this one

[@Jc-xf6cj]

Damn can't even keep your eyes in Oho

[@KingInYellow.]

Bruh I FW this story but also kinda infuriating, like who and there right minds sees the consequences of these rules but stays because “Hey the crops do be growing” And the girlfriend really triggered me, like she almost felt manipulative in getting MC back to this hell of a town Great story but ugh

[@christhiancosta1844]

I have to say this was more infuriating than scary, body horror well done but holy shit why, at the end all I feel is being pissed protag didn't do away with the old geezer or the town itself after it took so much from them in so many stupid ways

[@neorox__6671]

Thank you for my nightly hit. 😊

[@cjbrags1344]

The opening to this immediately made me think of letterkenny

[@borb4330]

cheeks clenched at the end oml

[@dezzy5963]

I love rules stories

[@terrycrewslover3297]

LETS GOO RULES STORY!!!!

[@youngarnold4]

Well shit, I'm from Ohio and I can tell you these rules are real.

[@TASmith-ou3is]

😂😂❤

[@3RAN7ON]

Do all people in Ohio have crazy names like these?

[@AlbertoMartinez765]

So Why would this Town let any outsiders into it? Its not like the other Rules stories where you have to go to a certain place and not break the rules the rules are everywhere and you couldn't expect everyone from outside to follow them which would result in so many Maiming and deaths that the town would be shut down as a Safety to public health. I love these rules stories but they need to have at least some Logic to them.

[@900bobby900]

Lots of unanswered questions and a bad ending, but I still love the narration

[@jonmendelson1104]

That wasn't the ending. For whatever reason part 6 wasn't linked with the rest of the story but you can find it by googling "My Hometown Had Rules: Recovery"

[@willjessieleroy6265]

I started to continue it in a second series but couldn't really find the right way to tell it. It is a miraculous survival that is anything but a miracle.

[@kevinlin431]

Can someone explain the ending for me? Squeeze the finger and then be freed from all the rules because of rule 5???

[@benjaminmercy1071]

Real good one

[@ericbrown191]

Hey mr creeps I was wondering if u could go back to I’m a monster and trying to protect humanity I really liked that series

[@stephwilliams9351]

Creepy in beginning😮😮😮😮😮❤

[@ChristopheRobyn]

The dad makes a very intelligent decision after realizing the hard way that they should leave that hellhole and he's looked at as the crazy and mean one. That protagonist is one of the dumbest and most selfish turds portrayed in a story that I've heard of and his demise felt like a merciful release from a horrific existence

[@chasitydejohn796]

Ohio?! There's a state called Ohio?! 😂

[@StarBrained]

Keep up these intros and I’m going to start calling you Mr. Claire Witch

[@AlanMedina314]

WTF, brutal story.