"HELP WANTED: Eight Rules For Housesitting A Mansion" Creepypasta

[@jbrown7063]

His fault for inviting his sister knowing she doesn’t follow rules. His sister’s fault for not taking anything seriously. Good story. More rules please!

[@HSamee]

Yeah I was thinking the same.

[@hcook1023]

I would send so much as fault. This is a type of person who either ends up in jail, dies young, or becomes an executive

[@TheBrendon67]

His sister makes me thing of an old story about a scorpion and a fox. Her nature was her undoing.

[@allmyragejones1]

If she was my sister, I would have invited her just to get rid of her.

[@triGRIMM]

That's exactly what he did. Prompting an insidious embrace of his dark nature and servitude to the netherworld masters.

[@MelniaShadow]

This the first time I feel zero empathy for the victim of the rules. She has been asking for it since minute one.

[@FullersFlexing]

tbf i think anyone would think it’s fake

[@shamim1733]

​@@FullersFlexingcuz it is??????????????????? You confuse me

[@post_ian94]

​@@shamim1733they're not fake in the universe this story is taking place. You're the confusing one, lol.

[@post_ian94]

​@@FullersFlexinganyone would think they're fake but damn, the way she was being so condescending to her brother, it angered me. She purposefully broke the rules just to piss him off.

[@FullersFlexing]

@@post_ian94 yeah very true, i mean poking fun at something like is normal but she was purposefully being an ass. did she deserve it? maybe not. was i mad she died? not really haha

[@DocBree13]

I can’t decide who’s more infuriating: his sister for being such a rule-breaker, or the narrator for inviting her over knowing she would break the rules. He should have left the moment he found the hidden message; he has no one to blame but himself. If course, him quitting and leaving unharmed wouldn’t have made for much of a story.

[@src6339]

Well i imagine that steering clear of any room called "the bone closet" is probably a good rule to live by in general 🤔

[@bloodoftheunicorns2621]

@@EatAssandDriveFast Death by snu snu!!!😂

[@justindunlap1235]

​@@bloodoftheunicorns2621 I'm scaroused!

[@BenSS3]

@@EatAssandDriveFast I was just about to post the same exact comment, though in much more crude terminology lmao. Maybe you're me, after I broke a rule, and have a better way with words than I currently do.

[@CannedHam145]

This dude has one of the most soothing voices I’ve ever heard and he’s also talking about horrors beyond our comprehension.

[@SquirrelMasterAsh]

Look up Otis Jiry. Best voice in creepypasta narration. Can't remember what his page is called

[@AvalonDreamz]

@@SquirrelMasterAsh Lighthouse Horror is my fav. Still haven't found one better than that dude yet. I'm going to check your suggestions though. It's difficult finding a good narrator.

[@chrisspeers4459]

The rules concept used to be a hit or miss for me but this one and the last few have been amazing! I always enjoy your content, your voice and the way you tell stories

[@broganfreeman8958]

Agreed. This one left me soo eager to know more! A work well done.

[@o_o8203]

The one about the farm is really good!

[@broganfreeman8958]

Just started listening to the Farm one, but had to get my ass out of bed for work! Straight back on it later on though.

[@drricemice2046]

I love rule stories it like found footage movie there js something that charms you even If they are bad

[@CivisMilitarum]

Agree! There was one he did where there were way too many rules so I stopped listening. This one was really good! 👍🏼

[@theallmightyteddybear]

The twist was crazy! Man I have never felt chills like this from any other 'rule-pasta' until now. Great story! Surely going to subcribe for more!

[@SeramiNefera]

A good story and I loved the twist at the end. There is, of course, a time paradox. If older Pym is the writer and hired his younger self (in the future). Then how did the original Pym end up in that past to become the future Pym? At some point in time, older Pym didn't exist in order to hire him for this job. So how did the first "Pym" end up being hired at a haunted house, sent back in time to become the man who hired the younger version of himself? You can assume he forgot to add the rule of "invite no visitors" for his younger self to follow since his sister cannot follow rules.

[@chrisspeers4459]

I was thinking the exact same thing and I've come to the conclusion that he created a new timeline that is actually a time loop. But only for himself, as I believe the normal world kept going as he disappeared behind the Vale/time. It's probably the mansion. Being a hot spot of the supernatural and beyond the rules of nature. If he found the message in the rules before going, the loop wouldn't have existed. Never go into the mansion, if you do, run. I'm definitely going to rewatch, keeping an ear out for things that would make sense now!

[@SeramiNefera]

@@chrisspeers4459 I kind of wondered about the different things that could be collected by accepting the wrong package. A face or a soul. How would Older Pym know that they would collect a soul for the other mistaken acceptance of a package? Perhaps he witnessed someone, undisclosed to the listener, lose their soul? I wonder, also, if in the First timeline he lost his soul. He did struggle with his sister's death but got over it pretty quickly considering. I don't think I could bring myself to live in a place where I knew my sibling was literally killed/murdered. So I thought it could be a Faustion Bargain of some sort. Especially since he never met the Master of the House yet.

[@theColJessep]

That just looks like a paradox when you look at time as a scalar number always increasing in the same direction. If you understand spacetime as a higher dimension, there is no paradox. The clock creates a time portal, but it's not limited to a one directional change. Hiring his younger self adjusts the entire 4 dimensional spacetime at once in a way that doesn't break causality. This requires 5 dimensions, though. (4 would allow him to comprehend his entire timeline and move back and forth, but not to meet his younger self. With 5 he can meet his younger self in a parallel dimension.) However, if Pym could understand and control 5 dimensional concepts, he could easily fix any issues with rule breaking. This means he is aware that he is interacting with higher dimensions, but cannot willingly change what happens in higher dimensions.

[@DocBree13]

@@theColJessepThere’s no evidence of more than one dimension in the story, though

[@JokingVvave]

My theory is that he learns and adds more rules with each new loop.

[@arifsetiawan9507]

This guy got rid rid of his sister efficiently. Lol

[@mythrilshard1]

'Oh, my rule oriented brother got a job that requires him to follow rules. Surely breaking them wont risk his job at all!' I honestly am so mad at the sister for she just disregards how her brother feels. Great story overall though^^

[@The_Distant_Quartz_Flower]

same as i also have this type of family irl made this story more and more relatable to me

[@klausd.6285]

Ah yes. Blame the sister and not the brother who knew she never cared for rules and knew she would break them if he invited her. And he invited her. Literally his fault.

[@blankityblank4362]

⁠​⁠​⁠​⁠​⁠​⁠​⁠​⁠​⁠@@klausd.6285Here’s a question for you: A woman walks through an area she KNOWS is a dangerous area, alone and at night and gets SA’d. Is it her fault for going through the known dangerous area? Is it the fault of the person that SA’d her? Going by your statement, it would be her fault and not the actual person committing the crime because she knew it was a likely event and still went. Need proof? If I switch your statement around to fit my example “ah yes, blame the criminal and not the woman for going to an area she knew it was likely to get SA’d if she went. And she went. Literally her fault.” Yeah, not a good look buddy. 2 things can be right at once. He shouldn’t have invited her, that was a bad decision. She chose to break all the rules she could and reaped the direct consequences of her actions. She rebuked and mocked her brother about the rules and, even if the place wasn’t a supernatural death-trap, completely disrespected him and his job. She likely wanted to get him fired because, as mentioned in the story, his pay was 3 times more than what her job paid.

[@lillypharaoh5945]

​@@klausd.6285 she was literally trying to destroy his life and get him fired cause she didn't like that he was surpassing her in success....yeah definitely her fault he's not smart for inviting her but can you blame him for wanting to flaunt his success to his judgemental arrogant sister who viewed him as a loser his whole life? He did sth dum but he doesn't deserve to suffer for it unlike her who 100% deserves it

[@o_o8203]

5:20 fun fact: Bulbophyllum orchids smell like rot/decay (except for a couple species) because they're pollinated by flies. Def a haunted house lol

[@legendof7th]

I was able to suspend disbelief until the part where the twin sister was able to work through college and afford a house. This must be pure fantasy now.

[@DubiousDubs]

Eh, my friend managed. It's not easy ofc, but it's doable

[@dantedykes4369]

7:53

[@jonasschweizer3489]

That means she did only fans

[@TheStuart-of-Cosby]

It's always a Pleasure to stop and listen to a new Mr Creeps upload. Thanks again Sir Creeps

[@danielvallejo4535]

That’s how you know a story emerges you. I feel anger and anxiety for the brother. Never dismiss others feelings just because you don’t agree with them. The sister was mostly at fault with some being on him. Great story!

[@divinemenethil3593]

sam : *brings sister who's known to break rules to the house* sister: *breaks rules* sam: :0 "how did this happen"

[@suzannec713]

I love stories like this!! And, I'm really loving the longer creepypasta stories you have been narrating lately!!❤

[@dezzy5963]

I'm loving the influx of rules stories :D I'm excited to listen to this later tonight

[@sgtmjr_avery_johnson7949]

Help wanted! 8 rules to not get swarmed by 3 golden retrievers (true story)

[@NoArtisticLimitation]

... Idk if I should follow the rules because I know how these things end, or break each and every one because doggos XDX

[@JokingVvave]

Wait, that was a sick ending! Makes me want to listen to this for the first time again ❤

[@Jean_grey159]

Beautiful, haunting, yet whimsical story.

[@johngolden3714]

That was a pretty good one. I enjoyed that whole time twist thingy there.

[@chrissiebergen783]

I love any "rules" video....please do a bunch more....love your voice, stories and channel.

[@Sohailhgfggggh6]

I'm not dying unless this story is adapted into a movie ir something

[@makexbelieve]

This was a really, really good story! I was actually surprised at the ending! Also ❤ the long stories, great for work days or car rides!

[@kentworch]

Thank you Mr Creeps for the awesome pasta. Absolutely loved the story on on this one. Definitely made my morning. 🖤🖤🖤🖤

[@alexandruciocirlau2428]

This would warrant a follow up story! Dope video.

[@SWA81]

Best list of rules I've listened to in a long time

[@Tonyrole]

This person clearly wanted thier sister gone... ain't no way

[@Ipo_Ooped_Maself]

I want to hear what it sounds like when mr creeps does an angry character. Great work man

[@kilosrg1922]

the house is all an illusion its truthfully decaying and destroyed with things you cant see coming after you, i love it

[@rebeccagibson9644]

10/10 stars. Would move in. Bone closet=extra storage space. Prob more affordable than my last place. Comes with a gardner

[@staircatz]

The sister is actually so infuriating I cant 💀

[@bombie1620]

I had a weird dream about this the night after I listened to it. I enlisted as a care taker but I ended up renovating the entire real house so it didn’t need a mirage anymore and I ended up making friends with all of them. It was really weird and corny but pretty funny

[@cocoman00]

Very smart. Invite someone over who is known for not following rules

[@huhcool2218]

Fr 🤦😂

[@lamario295]

This is all on him, he knew what his sister was like

[@Cheshire5174]

If i ever hire someone to look after my house while im on holiday, im definitley writing a list of arbitrary random rules that are easy enough to follow if you actively try to but so easy to break if you dont put effort into following them Also, what kind of psychopath puts plants that disperse hallucinogens in a maze? I'm at the start of the story and know that was probably a lie to keep the guy from denying the job but damn

[@sparrow420500]

I'm out after rule number four! That's how you know FIR SURE the house and its owners are either evil, insane, or both!!

[@schnecks2180]

Yeah, a C reference is usually a good indicator for a bad story

[@DubiousDubs]

@@schnecks2180 what is a C reference and why is it bad?

[@kikikungfukakes6639]

Yes! Lol we love the rules! ❤️ thank you creepy man! Also you did amazing when you were in somniums story. Wonderful job

[@breadmoth6443]

do i at least still get to raid the fridge? thats all i care about .......oh and a little bit of the liquor cabinet too ?

[@ashleedickinson672]

I'd love to hear another part to this one!

[@erroneous6947]

Don’t know why the sister character annoys me so much. Maybe it’s my Asperger’s and a lifetime of no one listening to me.

[@cyberspace7208]

Nope. She is infuriating..

[@zetharerey3761]

It's not your Asperger's, she is extremally vexatious, the main character doesn't irk me as much but he is pretty stupid too honestly.

[@mrspookytales2112]

Never get tired of watching Mr. Creeps video. Perfect for getting asleep

[@katimius]

i love how you read the ad in the exact same tone you narrate the stories.

[@LeeroyPorkins]

Tune in next week for "My Fish Died. But It's Still Hungry."

[@squish154]

Do you actually know, or do you just day random titles? /gen

[@jamesolive3693]

We will you will too 😅

[@LeeroyPorkins]

@@squish154 Random

[@squish154]

@@LeeroyPorkins cool.

[@bestskateboreder]

Nice bro haha😊

[@lexiedovahkiin]

No intro tonight, straight in there with the do this do that... I like it 😆

[@BenSS3]

Loved it. Keep em' coming! Thanks Mr. Creeps, love your narrations.

[@katievetter9478]

Such a good story! Rules stories are always the best!

[@Disreputable91]

One of the best I've heard, and I've heard and read hundreds. AAA top 10 for sure. Is there more from this writer?

[@bluehydro88]

Ah man his sister is the worst kind of person..

[@Chakra-ze2mw]

Here we go, NOW Entering the (CREEP ZONE) !👽❤

[@enley782]

I’m burning down my house right now

[@TheStuart-of-Cosby]

Make sure it all burns. The longer it'll burn the more evidence you can get rid of lol 😆 😂

[@WolfgangvonHam]

Next up: I Heard a Knock at my door…. Now the Door is Knocking

[@anjasteinbauer6957]

Love this story, keep coming back to it

[@rebufi]

This one was so good. Love the ending

[@cicadazero6679]

It's all good but since he includes time paradox entities like the gardener and the skinless man is him from another time line. It's just kind of assy that he didn't redo the rule Such as do not bring your sister on the 🏠

[@RowieFox]

YES ANOTHER RULES VIDEO!! WHAT A GREAT DAY!!

[@Purifiedbyfire420]

Dude i just turned it on on the harley stereo sitting by the lake burning one...perfect sunday!

[@janefinn9047]

Mind blown at the end. What a twist! 🤯😂

[@Anonymous_Music]

I grew up in a house deep in the country for the first 11 years of my life, and it looked Exactly like this one. I have an image. Same color, Same roof, 2 story with a window at the very top for the attic. From outside the lights glow orange but the room - top left corner was always dark. ( We didn't go in there as it was Badly Haunted ). There was a tall ragged oak tree on the right side, Looks the same too. Surrounded by a tall metal fence. I ALSO haven't lied since I was 8. Specifically 8. This was a Very interesting story, and a Truly Interesting Night.

[@Anonymous_Music]

The Difference I see is the top attic window was 1 individual square window. Not 2 rectangular ones. Other than that, The House and surrounding property looks identical. We had a River some feet behind the tallest trees behind the house. - We didn't have Brick pillars on the fence.

[@iaacryign]

Wow that’s gotta be an old money kinda house , but I guess those homes are more common in the south than the sears catalogue homes in the rustbelt where i grew up. They don’t look like much from the outside but a lot of them have some gorgeous woodwork on the inside. Best house i ever lived in was a sears home, my prenatal rented it for dirt cheap and it was gorgeous (surprisingly not haunted) it was bought by the hospital though and its been rotting since. While I understand hospitals need space the house has been rotting for 6 years now and its quite angering as the inside was this beautiful haven now locked away. I hope people squat inside during winter though it gets brutal here and the house had a seperate heating system in the attic which was finished, it would get cozy and you wouldn’t need much to keep it that way. Theres a lot of abandoned houses out there and i hope people take advantage of that when they can because a lot of the homes here are just neglected by land owners and businesses whos expansion plans failed

[@aishanaasr4586]

Another good night's sleep lays ahead

[@stormbringer2064]

its called how to let a stupid sibling screw up their life un-vibe-checked

[@mxyptlkzy]

Sam: I'm going to invite my rebellious rule breaking sister. What could possibly go wrong? Alaine doesn’t hesitate, immediately starts breaking rules. The siblings: Oh no why has this horrific event happened?! The house: You decided to F A and F O

[@TheNothing7777]

Really liked this one! Loved the plot twists.

[@xXx3OOOv2]

The sister reminds me of Dee Dee from Dexter's Lab

[@Thesecondlily1818]

wowwww simply woww ...the minds of the writers are well wow

[@prince_mohammed1803]

As always Mr.Creeps never failed us with his Rules stories he posts..👏🏻💯✔️ Thank you for the great job you do for us. And we are waiting for the next Rules story👌🏻👍🏻 Keep up the good work sir ❤️✨

[@kalzaar6300]

God I wish jobs like this were real

[@bartolomeestebanmurillo4459]

Rules stories are so much fun!

[@sleepyw1253]

the word bone closet made me shiver

[@apitapi]

Been a while since hearing a rules video that starts out with the rules. I like it Edit: This far exceeded my expectations. Finally an extra play of words and hidden messages in the list of rules. The one time I don't check for it 😂 So good. May listen again in the future. Ugh the anxiety I got from the sister was felt too real.

[@mladen7641]

Lesson of this creepypasta: Don't go anywhere near a place called "Killgore Court".

[@godfatherdio3732]

She had it coming

[@jbrown7063]

Yep

[@mephalis4245]

Tune in next week for " I keep getting calls from my daughter, but I'm dead..."

[@shimonajade]

Great story and narration! ❤

[@manditoemya8478]

I really enjoyed this story, I do fancy most of these Rule following stories for some reason, however going back in time was a great Idea and I hope they put out a part 2. Well dona as usual Mr. Creeps.

[@EdgyShooter]

I wonder how the house got destroyed in the first place? Maybe just demonic decay but still could be interesting

[@gaboonjah]

YYEEESS MORE RULE VIDS TO SLEEP TOO❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉

[@jeremyk.6456]

Oh god these are some of the worst/most frustrating rules of any of the rules stories. I have a hand made west German grandfather clock that has to be wound multiple times to set different aspects of the clocks functions The monthly setting is always the worst when you have to go from a 31 day month to a lower date month because it is all fine gear driven and a specific process needs to be performed otherwise the $150 (original cost in Germany) cost for the clock would end up costing a minimal (when you can find a specialist in the style of clock because I’ve watched many screw up over the years where we had to take them to court over the actual cost to get it fixed beyond the damage the novice at this type of clock performed) of $1500-5,000 depending on what took place.

[@Lofsnesmonster]

One of the creepiest stories yet

[@I_AM_BOT-BOT]

Next week's episode: "My Chicken crossed the road, but he never made it to the other side"

[@nicolemenard2564]

More creepypastas with rules 🙏🙏🙏

[@ImSoToastie]

I wanna see a twist on these rules. Where some guy equivalent to Constantine goes and break the rules on purpose just to confront the entities.

[@kelvinkirkland6068]

Awesome story thanks for sharing

[@rishabhyadav3137]

Awesomestory one of the best rules story

[@SlumpNox]

Wait, so is he stuck in a time loop

Excellent story.

[@PhapzHD]

Rule number 9 always make sure there is toilet paper before going #2.

[@FatalCompromise]

I liked the ending i think the statues in the long hall may be the victims of the skintaker so maybe if they swap like it says they want to do in the diary maybe they get their skin back.

[@flyingshoes4129]

misread that as FIGHT Rules. still gonna listen.

[@kjracz15]

I was ready to suspend my disbelief, but the dude invited a certified rulebreaker? I'm out. Lol.

[@GavinMunoff-ii4fn]

Relevant title bro good lookin out 🍿

[@DubiousDubs]

Ngl, if this was my sister, I'd be in prison. Nobody this obnoxious would escape living in the same house with me for decades alive

[@Colonel-WhiteRaven126]

Perfectly twisted

[@mariuscatalin5982]

i think the sisteer might suffer from Oppositional defiant disorder

[@snorelaxplanet9569]

Love your content

[@peacemaker0240]

This was good

[@roninwandering]

If your sibling comes to your place of work, and goes out of their way to break rules, thus endangering your job, or worse, they are a crap person.

[@msjingles1]

The twist!!!!

[@zacheryhudson9064]

Love it

[@amyhunter83]

... now imagine he just took a sledgehammer to the clocks. Like really, just do it. It's the best final 'fuck you' to that house.