That was an amazing story! Reminded me a bit of "the village", yet had its own unique flavor. Like a prequel or part 2 seen from other villagers eyes
@virginiavarble78185 жыл бұрын
Must make a part 2 to explain their origins.
@troysimon99335 жыл бұрын
Their little town is kinda like the one in M. Night Shamalans, "The Village"...even with the.. "monsters in the forest". But THESE psychotic townies won't rely on just... fear, to keep any locals from trying to leave. They just have Mr. Barnes give them, a dirt nap. So... as it turns out... there really IS, a "monster" in the woods. And this monster, WILL kill you..& the monsters name.. is Mr Barnes.
@dr.seussie29593 жыл бұрын
This reminded me of that story as well, wish the author finished this one though :/
@kilmcm455 жыл бұрын
This tale is only about half as effective if you've seen The Village...too bad...this is better.
@faithruckdeschel12945 жыл бұрын
I agree, and that's exactly how most of MKS's movies are. They draw u in and the endings are 💩 I can only explain them as if they're a bunch of orgasms, who never got their happy endings....most men and women can unfortunately attest to that. 😆 The Visit, was pretty good tho....psycho fake Grampy was still dead ass wrong for mushing that 💩 diaper in that little boy's face tho!!! 😆🤢
@jeffbell26685 жыл бұрын
conner kilmeri agree the village was a disappointment. I would love to see this turned into a film.
@kilmcm455 жыл бұрын
@@faithruckdeschel1294 in my experience the Orgasm IS the happy ending....the ending of coitus to be precise....well, or tugjob/footjob /bj/behind the knee/ ECT, ECT. Just realized....I know squat about you so kindly disregard that shit if your too young to hear ...or uh, see that shit. As far as the Shamham goes...I'm not as down on him as most ppl. I genuinely love some of his films like Unbreakable and Sixth Sense...I even like Lady in the Water...I'm a sucker for world building narrative and that film has it own mythology, creatures, and rules...plus I think the reason most critics piss on it is the scene where the film critic character is horrifically killed and eaten by the grasswolf. However, his shitty-ass adaptation of Avatar the Last Airbender is a crime against god and anime....yes, I know Avatar is American animation (well American by way of Korea)....but there's enough anime influence.
@jimmyshrimbe93615 жыл бұрын
@@kilmcm45 dude, grammar.
@catgang44655 жыл бұрын
I felt the same way. however it was 20 years ago. (the movie)
@faithruckdeschel12945 жыл бұрын
I always seem to know exactly when I get a notification for one of ur videos, because I'll think a bout ur channel and get a happy feeling! 😊 Also, please don't ever feel u need to change how u narrate(I know some of ur videos gets comments from ppl wanting u to narrate like an non emotional robot 🙄🤷)but I feel that a truly gifted narrator tells their stories with emotion and alters their voices whenever they're speaking from a child or female's point of view. It doesn't sound/seem right when a man(with a deep muscular voice)narrates something like, "When I was 9 yrs old" or "Last year when I gave birth to my first baby boy". So dear friend....please continue to just be u??? 🤗💖
@JeffreyNadolny5 жыл бұрын
The Village was a corny movie this was a great story though
@catgang44655 жыл бұрын
I remember the movie. Do not remember the name of movie.
@tiffanybenefield19805 жыл бұрын
It's called the Village of the Damned with Nichole Kidman.
@JeffreyNadolny5 жыл бұрын
@@tiffanybenefield1980 no Village of the Damned was definitely not with Nicole Kidman The Village was the M Night Shyamalan movie where they were separated and told that monsters lived in the wilderness
@catgang44655 жыл бұрын
@fire rises I am not an IDIOT. I am A CUN_ OR Can"t Understand Normal Thinking. Just the first letters.
@catgang44655 жыл бұрын
@@tiffanybenefield1980 Thank You!
@notplebbes91085 жыл бұрын
i love to listen to your stories as i go to bed. its quite soothing
@Simply79er5 жыл бұрын
Me too, but background music was icing on cake which is missing now.
@babalon77785 жыл бұрын
I really enjoyed this! I want to know more, like how things got this way. What is a Topeka jacket anyway? Troop Force would have been hella funny!
@Telos954x5 жыл бұрын
Unless there's a 2nd part, this is real weak. As a standalone story there's no explanation for the narrator to know what Google is or anything else mentioned at the start.
@guysmiley5155 жыл бұрын
A Topeka jacket??!!!oh man and I thought my members only jacket was cool.damn
@babalon77785 жыл бұрын
Lol! I got a leather one for Christmas once, I wanted a biker jacket. Bless my grandma's heart, she just didn't know.
@guysmiley5155 жыл бұрын
@@babalon7778 hahaha that's great! Gram has some style
@babalon77785 жыл бұрын
@@guysmiley515 Lol, that she did, thanks! She liked my pleated patent dominatrix skirt.
@CarayMay4 жыл бұрын
Great story. I would really like to hear a part II. Jake's voice is amazing.
@jbeerz34425 жыл бұрын
Holy cow....very good
@ginasharpley6155 жыл бұрын
I understand the parents playing along with the monsters crap and saying Rudy didn't ezist but how did they get Jake,the other little kid to play along? Jake had met Rudy and everything too. How did they convince Jake to play along at the end of the story?Or did they wipe his memory somehow? But if they can wipe memories they could have wiped Jakes memory so.....
@LuckyHyde3 жыл бұрын
The village was about how far people would go to be safe from the violence. It was an interesting and sad story. This story is also good.
@tiffanybenefield19805 жыл бұрын
Well this story reminds me of the movie, "Village of the Damned" with Nichole Kidman that used to be married to Tom Cruise & married to Keith Urban now. It came out 10-15 years ago if I'm not badly mistaken.
@kimdodson60892 жыл бұрын
What's wild is there probably are places like that here.
@chryssmetzler20985 жыл бұрын
Sounds more like wayward pines.
@yoshtheman1155 жыл бұрын
Sounds like terrifying dystopia.
@foreverxadan_mc40585 жыл бұрын
This is a pretty good story. I wonder if we will have a part 2 , 3 or even 4 ? :P
@jeffryan62093 жыл бұрын
Im stationed at Fort Riley Kansas, so hearing some of the towns I've been to is pretty cool
@nicolemendez44115 жыл бұрын
This story reminds me so much of the movie "The Village".
@virginiavarble78185 жыл бұрын
Why do they hide in the woods? Why do they lie to their children? Are they a cult?
@ivanmorales20695 жыл бұрын
Certain people like to maintain a certain sort of lifestyle therefore try to enforce the lifestyle upon others because they consider that lifestyle safe and comforting. And then anyone who opposes that lifestyle or trys to leave that lifestyle in search of a better one is considered a threat to that lifestyle. I am in no way bashing these folk, but a great example of this are conservatives. They aren't fond of change such as accepting of gays or other things of the nature because they don't understand it, or see it as a threat to there perspective. People always react harshly when there form of lifestyle is threatened by a whole other form of lifestyle.
@akeembarnes-woessner77885 жыл бұрын
Topeka jacket ahh love for my hometown
@stacyrichardson80985 жыл бұрын
This one is very interesting I would love to hear more of it. It's great 😊 I love it 💞🎆
@jonathanporter52235 жыл бұрын
It's like The Village, but with a shittier ending!
@rockspoon65285 жыл бұрын
Around 19:10, and I'm ready to do some freedoming on this town.
@NexusBladeGaming5 жыл бұрын
These kinds of plots just make me hate the characters, I'm sorry but this one only frustrated me, maybe it's just not my type of story.
@Nyctophora5 жыл бұрын
Well executed. No, the story.
@akshykdowlut84394 жыл бұрын
This need Part 2
@bertramgunn5 жыл бұрын
Nyc here to relax doc rules brooklyn
@erikdeusenberry53073 жыл бұрын
He lived meaning he escaped at some point.
@peterparker65845 жыл бұрын
there are actually places like this. I don't know about the Whole killing outsiders part but there are Amish communities like this in the United States and Canada. Some of the more remote ones have things set up so that their children, and sometimes even parents have never seen the outside world. Last I recall, there was a big to do a few years back, forcing them to either join the United States or leave the country. What I mean by that isthis little Amish communities did not interact with the rest of the country. They didn't pay taxes or anything like that. Never had anything to do with money and so forth. During the Obama administration laws were put forth, forcing them to start paying taxes using legal currency, or have their properties taken away from them. So in effect, they were forced to either to some degree. Join the United States or leave the country. Apparently the government considered it quite a problem where there were communities like in the story where whole generations had never seen the outside world. They didn't use American currency and so forth. And there were less remote communities that were technically aware of the outside world. But once again, were not paying taxes, and so forth. They had been getting away with it under religious exemption, but it got taken away a few years back. I've also heard of communities in more remote parts of the United States that are made up of two or three families up in the mountains or remote places like that, where they don't have electricity or any kind of civilized nation, and they've been living that way. Hundreds of years without real interaction with the outside world. What they're describing in the story, sounds like a cult , and there's been a few over the years that the government Went in and rounded everybody up where they'd been living like this and raising their children, as if nothing existed outside of their compound or little village typeArea in the remote wilderness. i live in tatamagouche Nova Scotia. You'd be surprised when it comes to finding it on a map, and so forth. Been having problems to do with GPS units, not recognizing its existence. You can see cell phone towers, not for from my house and not get proper cell service for over 40 miles. As another example, they still haven't figured out what is in the area, interfering with cell phone service. Likewise, things like CB radios and such don't work properly. Was recently in a car accident where a rookie officer didn't believe me that there was no phone service. He then found out the radio in his squad car could get a signal. He had to get a portable radio out of the trunk of his car and walked quite a distance in order to get any signal at all, and communicate with the dispatcher's office, short of going to somebody's house and using their phone. LOL.
@jeanniebosch36285 жыл бұрын
Please!! Please have a part 2,3,4 and 5!!! Lol
@starryart24295 жыл бұрын
good news.
@ejupa5 жыл бұрын
Was a plot of movie in the late 90s or early 2000.
@MartinTaggart5 жыл бұрын
More Wayward Pines than The Village....imho
@Michael_Breiter5 жыл бұрын
The Village (2019)
@kellylawrence94385 жыл бұрын
The village seen by a child. Cool
@aria.vega55 жыл бұрын
Alpena Michigan! Look on map youll see. Its where i live. So i can relate
@madreverbowski61045 жыл бұрын
👍👍👍
@deathbycake76375 жыл бұрын
Haha Kansas my homestate I was born in Fort Riley, Kansas
@howardtaylor37313 жыл бұрын
Hayyyyyye
@mouseman69805 жыл бұрын
Early heck yeah
@kaydencetwigg71805 жыл бұрын
lol
@zvir74935 жыл бұрын
Yeet
@WeirdLife7773 жыл бұрын
Is this story a cult?
@joleenphillips24155 жыл бұрын
King George Washington... Hmmm. That's scary to think that if this pattern kept up to modern day, it means Trump is the king of America. Now thats a scary thought.