I Made Thor Love & Thunder Better

[@shivamshinghrana6323]

This version will stay much longer in my head than original movie🙂😇

[@sangbithde]

This sounded sooo much better. I dont know what MCU is doing while writing stories and scripts but if this kind of story as told by Mohit was shown on screen then Thor Love and Thunder would have been very good.

[@vishwasmeshram9241]

marvel focusing on 13-16 year olds, thats why the sugarcoated storylines in recent movies

[@varunjangid9587]

@@vishwasmeshram9241 man I'm just 15 but I also found the movie very bad. Forceful humor, less screen time to gorr, no seriousness and etc

[@stickwatch5163]

@@vishwasmeshram9241 not really dude even though they focus on youngsters, they could easily make a good story , when you make movies for a 13-16 year old you might make the movie soft ,like showing less blood and all that

[@mastermind3977]

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[@snea3x171]

bro kisi writer ne nahi likhi yeh movie iska screenplay taika tatti ne likha hai hai isiliye itni shit movie bani hai woh director kaisa bhi ho uski writing ikdum bakwas hai

[@SonGoku-bu4fn]

I never expected that a doctor would come up with a really nice script than professional writers of international level.. 😂

[@_avijit.halder_]

Puri ki puri movie concept ankhon ke samne aa gaya, what a imagination 💖🔥, aur aakhir mein Necrosword wala post credit scene sunkar ek bada muskan aur goosebumps aay gaya hai, totally amazing 🤗❤️❤️

[@hunterislive3263]

if we saw his version than the movie will be G.O.A.T

[@Chaudharysunny17]

Kevin fiege be like : Salary discuss kare

[@RasodaOP]

🤣🤣🤣

[@Noobplayer73459]

Him making every movie better

[@piratesgamers4904]

Salle puri video to dekh Lee 😅 Video dalte hi comment kar diya

[@nmad346]

Him🥺

[@shuvamacharya8001]

Far faaaar faaaaaaaar betterrrr

[@syedsameer4069]

8:23 Jeus ke beta ka kya hoga story line..wo thar ke doshman kaise bane ga

[@siddhant8430]

Mohit damage control krne se kuch nhi hoga, movie flop ho chuki h, move on

[@rajbhadoria866]

This version is way better than what we saw in theatres 👌

[@arindammishra2329]

Zack Snyder vs theatrical version

[@rajbhadoria866]

@𝗩𝗞 𝟮𝟰*𝟳 𝗳𝗮𝗰𝘁𝘀 bhai sponsor krde movie b bana denge

[@Kalankit5409]

यह संस्करण कहीं ज्यादा बेहतर है जिसे हमने थिएटरों में देखा था 👌

[@Kalankit5409]

@𝗩𝗞 𝟮𝟰*𝟳 𝗳𝗮𝗰𝘁𝘀 फिल्म मेकिंग और स्टोरी/स्क्रिप्ट राइटिंग में फर्क होता है भैया... वैसे में बस ओरिजनल कॉमेंट का हिंदी अनुवाद कर रहा हूं

[@RajatKumar-eo2hx]

@𝗩𝗞 𝟮𝟰*𝟳 𝗳𝗮𝗰𝘁𝘀 Tere Kya baap lgte hai marvel wale ghatiya movie bnane per unhe criticism bhi na de

[@vanshmangal5920]

I loved how Mohit was like "its Mohin time" when he was going to kill thor and gorr at the same time

[@piyushk_09]

dude it's wayyyy better than the actual story people would've totally loved this story in the actual movie.

[@arshadahmed4668]

If the story would have gone this way, it would have shown evilness of GORR , the way we were craving for...and probably would have been my fav MCU movie

[@pushparaghuwanshi5892]

Next time Kevin feige calls Mohit and give him 250million dollar and tell him to make movies 😂😂

[@aaedits7470]

Mohit is be like 'hum hai ''Christopher Nolan''😂😂

[@Hercinove]

I had read your original unedited comment 😁lol

[@saikobhai1168]

Chiristuphuur lolan

[@Rabin1]

@@Hercinove what was that😁🤣?

[@Anyway_woah]

@Thor herald of none maybe he' is (loved his justice league cut) ,but you can't sleep on Nolan .

[@somework4919]

No,Lan 😂😂

[@shuvadeepdas6295]

Marvel should appoint him as a permanent writer...just OP🔥

[@riteshbangera4223]

MCU is really not doing good these days , these kind of stories is what fans deserve 😍😍😍😍 thankyou Sir for sharing your version ❤️

[@Kalankit5409]

एमसीयू सचमें इन दिनों अच्छा काम नहीं कर रहा , इस तरह की कहानियां ही तो हम फैंस चाहते हैं 😍😍😍😍 धन्यवाद भैया अपना वर्जन साझा करने के लिए ❤️

[@fahadshaikhful]

I really like the part of making Neckrosword disappear into space and following it's 2nd post credit scene (Knull), I didn't understood why you made changes to the importance of "Stormbreaker" as not being the "key" coz as you also stated Marvel have "plans" in future, this might be also their one of the plan to connect in future and gave the importance to Stormbreaker as the "Key"

[@AreebAhmed--]

i literally got goosebumps when you described the entrance of Gor!! Amazing

[@90sthings39]

They could have stretch this movie more because it was very short so they couldn’t narrate the story well. I like the way you make this concept

[@ayushraj1888]

Climax sequence really sounds good . Specially guardians of the galaxy part.

[@shariqplays]

Now MCU will hire Mohit for writing there movies😂❤️

[@thelintik7643]

Kaash Yhi Story Movie Mein Hoti With Same Screenplay Toh Movie Ko Aaj Itni Hate Nhi Milti🙂❤️ Well Done Mohit Bhaiya🙌❤️

[@phoenixplays0702]

Marvel be like:- get this man a pen and book and let him make the greatest mcu story ever

[@iamPrinceK]

Ye badhiya tha guru 😁

[@gamesforever3696]

@@iamPrinceK good

[@gamesforever3696]

Aiisshhhh

[@siddhant8430]

Mohit damage control krne se kuch nhi hoga, movie flop ho chuki h, move on

[@shaunstark1365]

@@siddhant8430 bhai isme koi damage control to nahi tha bekar movies ki rewrite to sab karte hain nando v movies se lekar troyoboyo sab log re write kiye hain. Better ideas sun na itna bura idea to nahi lagta

[@normal981]

I got goosebumps when I heard about the post credit scene in which the necro sword is floating in space and echoing 'Find me'

[@jharnabhattacharjee1109]

This is much better than what we saw there in the theater...

[@highjumpwithstars1230]

Bohat Achha Tha Mohit Bhai Bas Last main Guardians ke jagha pe past present aur future Thor ajata toh aur maza ata aur waha past ka Thor thoda pahle ajata aur use Gorr Torture karta toh aur maza ata

[@artendo8938]

I would not be surprised when marvel will use the script refrence from him. Maja hi aa gya..

[@mastermind3977]

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[@shreechatane9215]

Kuch bhi

[@Sanket_1020]

Much better than the actual story! I love your concept of putting your own story for an average movie. Also loved the same that you've done for the Multiverse of Madness. We want these kind of MARVEL level stories, for which it known for...

[@SASUKEUCHIHA-qr4hh]

Someone give this man a script for a movie 😂

[@amanlimbu218]

Retired army man A doctor A nerd A loving husband A true friend And now a superb screen play writer or script writer This man got all my respect

[@rohitthapa42]

He is retired army?

[@archit2748]

@@rohitthapa42 no he served as a doctor in army

[@amanlimbu218]

@@rohitthapa42 yes he served his services in army as a doctor

[@Ritik0035]

The ending could be literally awesome Suppose if thor killed gorr before him entering the eternity gate , thor could wish back iron man back and we would get our favourite one back

[@simpleperson5492]

Bro..even I want Iron man back but this does not make any sense to me...cause thor cannot beat Gorr...so killing him just by taking out necro sword does not make any sense.

[@marvelexplainer3803]

❤️ you made it 200% better

[@imshubhamdas]

Great man , loved it . At least in your story Gor is having some justice to his character and also the Necrosword .Movie me to joke bana diya ha Gor ka vi or Necrosword ka vi and yes you made it far better

[@aryanbisht1541]

This remake is more exciting & awesome than the Oringinal. Thanks Mohit Bhaiya. 🙂🙃🙏👍

[@palashlalwani1124]

Bhaiya really aapne toh Taika sir and movie ke writer se bhi achhi kahani banayi hai 🤩👍🏻👏🏻 . Big fan of yours ...

[@asadfayaz]

If any how Kevin fiege listen your story he would approach you and hire you as the head writer for the screen play of all Marvel movies.... You are awesome bro 😘 Lots of love 😍❤️ Keep it bro man I wondered How much talented are you.

[@amangwalia1572]

They should hire you brother 🥺

[@subodh.kanbale2446]

it was really good bro i got goosebumps while imagining gorr torturing gods

[@rishabhtripathi421]

He is truly a Superhero Nerd

[@mananbahl4842]

I was imagining the whole time and it was so amazing, just wanted to add that comic book wala detail too Like after fighting with gorr when gorr tells thor about how selfish gods are Thor became unworthy and then Jane come to support Thor and made him worthy again

[@salamkhan519]

Seriously bahut achha laga bro... Post credit scene to wow👌👌

[@bhavikmehta3895]

I imagined every scene till end... Enjoyed the script nice work😊😊

[@froghead8905]

That guardians entry was really unexpected and op 🔥

[@arindammishra2329]

Yeah

[@kalyanvblogs8365]

Guardians entry was epic 🔥 In Last credit scene they could've introduce knull 🔥

[@DareDevil-wd1jb]

Your final postcredit scene was way better than Valhalla one

[@anuragthakur2570]

story toh achi thi but i have some things to point out ki thor aur gor asguard kar ladte jab gorr itna strong nhi tha aur ek jabarjust action delne ko milta and no. 2 ki thor aur gor phir omnipotent city mein milte Jaise apne bataya but gor and thor ke bitccch mein ek fight sequence jisme thor gorr ki powers ko kam ankta hai and gorr usko overpowered kar deta hain and 3. is ki mereko eternity wala matter pasand kuch achi ending mein kuch heavy changes hote

[@supersentaii5590]

Thor Love and Thunder should've been that extra 30 min longer, + they really wasted gorr, first the appearance was not comic accurate but i had hopes with his acting but turns out he didn't had that much screentime,

[@Harshtamrkar8]

@@CookingBeastAyaz bssdddkkk Bhaggg yaha se..😡😡😒😒 Har Jagah spammm krne Aa jata he...😡😡😒😒

[@silverback9714]

@@CookingBeastAyaz abe e begging mat kar bhik maang ke jo subscribers tu le rha haina aage jaake pachtaaega tu! Tujhe bhi bura feel hoga ki maine apni success ke liye ye kiya tha!

[@movieleaks7578]

Me: Where is korg Mohit: With rock🤣🤣

[@mayur1703]

Better story than Original 💯🔥

[@arindammishra2329]

Just like justice league

[@kirtikaadhikary1983]

This needs to be released in the theatres!

[@sabrangaming]

We want writer and director like you

[@aloksahu3439]

This version was really interesting and would have loved to watch this instead of the original.. good work..

[@arindammishra2329]

Imagine if Sam raimi direct this movie Then this because very great Atleast gorr get enough screen time and we also see his butchering

[@Kalankit5409]

यह संस्करण सचमें काफी अच्छा था और ओरिजनल की जगह देखने में ज्यादा मजा आता... अच्छा काम किया...

[@devilseye107]

I like this story bro ❤️ Happy friendship day to all

[@ingridnerd1943]

Although I agree with you Bhai. But if my opinion would go, I would give Gorr at least a duology, like that of Thanos in Infinity War & Endgame. Where first movie would explore Gorr, his origins, powers, intentions & his butchering. While the next movie would be about Thor vs Gorr & in the end I would also setup Knull for the future of Symbiote War storyline. But without killing of Gorr, rather erasing his memories like that of comics, so that he may be utilized in future.

[@vishaljayraj8527]

I Agree👍

[@theanirudhagnihotri]

ya... but as he told in this video, neither of us know what's the future of mcu. so, if they played out that diluted ending, they must have some plans and future vision behind that.

[@sunderarao4729]

This story's runtime would be like 2hr 55minutes.

[@Tushar_995]

@@sunderarao4729 No, It would barely increase 10 min that also when thor would see gods hanging on rope in starting. After that every changes will coordinate with original movie time.

[@mkg2427]

Get this man a writer chance in MCU ❤️

[@krishnapanchal3809]

That gaurdian entry was too awesome man 😍

[@hriteshmaikap7506]

Amazing story...would have loved if this was actually done on the big screen 🔥🔥

[@syedsameer4069]

8:25 Jeus ke beta ka kya hoga story line wo thor ke doshman kaise bane ga

[@hriteshmaikap7506]

@@syedsameer4069 you cannot satisfy every one There has to one down if you making one up Even Mohit said this in the end

[@syedsameer4069]

@@hriteshmaikap7506 bro lakin wo thor ki next movie ke liye sat up tha and this is important

[@syedsameer4069]

@@hriteshmaikap7506 mohit can said this because of thor gaor attack on omnipotent city..so jeus blame thor and he said Hercules to kill thor

[@hriteshmaikap7506]

@@syedsameer4069 sabko soch ek jaisi nhi hoti It is his opinion video to which I agree

[@akshatgupta15]

6:30 this scene got me hyped up fr like I could see this imagine it happening

[@PiyushMishra110]

Ok Honestly, this was the hype & Expectation i had for Love & Thunder while watching the movie but it disappointed me... But now thanks to your narration.. I can feel that same feeling i had expected for the movie ❤️⚡🙌 The sequence and playouts of Jane story.. The proper involvement of Guardians... The proper timings of jokes and proper given timing for seriousness now i can feel it too 🙌🙌❤️🙏🙏 Thanks Mohit urf ComicVerse.. Big Fan from Men Of Culture audience and now all of you 3 guys 💯❤️🙏

[@siddhant8430]

Mohit damage control krne se kuch nhi hoga, movie flop ho chuki h, move on

[@PiyushMishra110]

@@siddhant8430 we all are moved on... But ek mann mei santushti was requried now it got fullfilled 😅🙌

[@imskylerwhite_yo]

@@siddhant8430 itna hurt ho raha hai kya tujhe jo har comment mai aake ro raha hai

[@actionkatta7385]

While watching, it felt like Gorr scens are taken from different movie and added to thor movie

[@aniketbele1266]

Mohit bhaiya I really liked your script mainly the buthering and showing how powerful gorr and badass he is with necrosword which movie 🎥 didn't show us.I want @PJ Explained and @BnfTV to review your script on upcoming podcast of @men of culture.

[@princek8694]

Damnn Mil gya Marvel ka nya Script Writer 🌹🧿 Bohot sahii changes maza aagya 😊

[@MovieFeedHindi]

😂😂😂Dear Marvel, Please Hire Mohit as Writer For Next Thor Movie 👍👍

[@bhushansah6154]

This was actually awesome mann. What we didnt get from marvel, Mohit gave it. Marvel waalo kuxx to siikho 🤣

[@thescrmedia7053]

You should really write official screenplay of any Marvel movie ♥️

[@werewolfgamer4980]

Who want an animated version of this ?

[@Nanashi404]

HISHE Dubs

[@itsmoonknight]

Recent every Marvel releases are being heavily edited, with such big production they should have many different story arc on similar plot like Mohit explained one, but are taking more of a neutral approach.😌😌😌 Don't know why??🤔🤔🤔 Hope they release the extended cut of these movies!!! 😎😎😎

[@cricketwitharyan1784]

Hey Mohit from Comicverse I am from Marvel Studios I am seeing you have made the story of our last two movies better than the original. Would you like to write our next movie and double check the others which are already written🤣🤣🤣❤️

[@KrDramaHindi]

Hey i am mohit Why not sir...😅

[@siddhant8430]

Mohit damage control krne se kuch nhi hoga, movie flop ho chuki h, move on

[@shubhambanerjee168]

bro loved it..................Way better than og script...........Any plans of becoming a scriptwritter for mcu???????????

[@ommankar6716]

Got goosebumps while imagining the 2nd post credit and all the scenes Mohit mentioned that had Gorr in it

[@vatsalvaibhav2609]

Gorr's reveal from your story gave me goosebumps...and incorporating Portunus in the plot rather than the children would have been more interesting since it showed Gorr's hate for the Gods, instead of him kidnapping kids......loved your take👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

[@Harshhhkk]

Awesome amazing superb fantastic fabulous extraordinary wonderful brilliant ultimate next level spectacular legendary excellent incredible outstanding and mind blowing video bhaiya Jiii

[@muhduzair8932]

Badhiya

[@Harshhhkk]

@@muhduzair8932 😁👍🏻

[@CrimsoNAnimE01]

You should approach Marvel for story writing ❤️🔥

[@アデイテイヤ]

This is the 'Thor : Love and Thunder' that I wished to see... 😌

[@TheSuperMania]

Your story was really very very good and it would be very awesome to see. But one thing, if Gor do not need strombreaker then why he goes to new asgard ??

[@riyasingh9280]

To kill thor

[@vatsalyaa.m]

2nd post credit scene sounds really terrifying . Possible entry of Knull

[@tc6771]

sony have rights of knull

[@arindammishra2329]

@@tc6771 Sony and Marvel can Collab this character just like Spiderman

[@ssahai04]

See, this is how a well and tight written script is like...

[@kunalswarnakar1546]

Man you should go to the marvel studio and teach them some lessons! You make it more more better ♥️

[@princemehra5908]

Bro its awesome....😍😍.... This story was full of goosebumps..... Hope marvel will do better in next movies and want to know when could be the next thor and doctor strange's movie will appear??? Just estimation.

[@mohammadhadi6706]

I think the post credit scene should be like necrosword is floating in space and we hear a distinct heavy dark voice that could foreshadow 'Null'

[@jatinkhemka9393]

Everything makes sense... but if they followed this story line they wouldn't have been able to set up Hercules..... ⚡⚡

[@prakharbharatdwaj6052]

They'd still be able to set up Hercules as he's a SuperHero in Marvel Comics not a villain, somewhat like an antihero or a careless arrogant god.... Just in a different manner...

[@harshvaish3337]

i guess they would just when hercules would be shown in movies they have to just show how arrogant and careless he is and he doesnt care about lives just want to fulfill his motives no matter the cost this will show a tussle or friction him and avengers or rest of heroes which is i guess a good story plot

[@vikash9065]

Right bro MCU have future plans

[@sagarsahasrbuddhi9752]

You deserve to be script writer for comic movies❤️💞

[@lightyagami7085]

this guy only created this casually without much effort, Imagine the level of story he can create with more time and support from other writers.

[@Kalankit5409]

इस आदमी ने बिना ज्यादा प्रयास किए इसे बना दिया, सोचो किस स्तर की कहानी ये बना सकता है थोड़े और समय और दूसरे और लेखकों के सहयोग से।

[@RajatKumar-eo2hx]

@@Kalankit5409 😂😂😂

[@chandangowda1241]

If u would have worked on this story for like some months or years like how the story writers do...this could be one of the best movie script for thor4🔥

[@alokpimpare4705]

Mohit awesome man kdk story telling ke sat sath story writing bhi aur thumari side off view story ka bahot accha tha Marvel ko yehi as it is , same to same film karna chahiye tha. Thank Q

[@bhaveshthakur4578]

People complaining about short runtime of dr strange 2 and thor 4 are the same who were criticising Eternals for its long runtime 🤡

[@moviesblack55]

This is better than any movie I see

[@Chiragtiwari321]

Mohit can make heropanti 2 better also 😂😂

[@dheerajjaisawal851]

Nice one

[@realsau.gat1]

Bhai ne edible food ko khane layak banaya he Tatti ko xhini ghol ke muffin Nahi Bana sakte uey

[@nishantgupta35]

Just imagined every part of the story you narrate and it was awesome ❤️

[@Tanishk420]

In the last scene you said that "Necrosoward ko space me flot hota hua dikha dete aur background me aawaz aati find me " at that point i realise that is the best time to introduce knull (god of Symbiots) in MCU.

[@Ashubhh]

If this would have happened in Thor: love and thunder, movie would be so much more fantastic! This was the best story believe me.. And we even want your version of doctors strange in the multiverse of madness

[@ronin_115]

I will request Marvel to hire this man . He knows how to fulfil fans demand and request 😀

[@Neerajkumarnk68]

Well that's actually a good story of Thor Love & Thunder.I think Kevin Frige should watch this video and hire you as their story writer. There's another thing which could be added in final battle of Thor,Jane and Gorr, when both were fighting and Thor was losing against Gorr then there should Hercules who will help them in winning the battle, Since Gorr is overpowered and Jane is a human and was dying of Cancer then she was also losing against Gorr and Thor fell helpless, then Hercules would come and hitted Gorr with his weapon and Gorr was flying across that Tribunal hall.. and after that Thor and Hercules hold each hand of Gorr, Necrosword is still in Gorr's hand and giving him more power,now even Hercules find it difficult to hold Gorr and then Jane come forward and hit Gorr hand so hardly that Necrosword will be separated from Gorr's hand and goes into Bifrost portal or space. Gorr's hand is badly hurt by that and is bleeding with black blood and now Gorr become so angry he hold Thor and Hercules with his hands,(holding Thor with his bleeding hand so that Thor looks little weaker than Hercules) and threw them across Tribunal hall and seeing that Jane attacks Gorr with hammer but Gorr doges it, hammer goes elsewhere and Gorr grabs Jane neck with his hands having big nails and goes into the portal which lead to Eternity, seeing that Thor come flying into that portal and portal closes. Hercules and Guardians were looking at them, now monsters are dead without Gorr and Necrosword.At the Place of Eternity Thor sees Jane in human form covering with blood and he cries and rest will be same as in the story he speaks to Gorr and Told about his daughter ... Gorr realises everything. The End.

[@parikshitchoudhury3485]

Damn!! This is robust and raw....wish itvwas as u depicted mate

[@mdrashed-xb3el]

Ab jakr as a Thor fan satisfaction mila thanks Mohit and Comic verse

[@Anonymous-mk3cv]

Ig think marvel studios is trying to lower the standards their movies have created as they have very big plans for phase 5 n 6.

[@koushalpant]

Wow this was actually an amazing story and script, definitely better than the original script. As the necrosword is now floating in space we could have gotten another villian who uses it in Thor 5, then Thor could've destroyed it somehow.

[@babayaga3241]

The Knull will get the sword the real owner of the Necrosword

[@waqas.shabbir]

What an amazing story. The guardians entry, and the 2nd post credit scene are unexpected. Keep it up Mohit Bro.

[@arindammishra2329]

Just like Loki and korg army entry in Thor Ragnarok

[@ayush4168]

I guess zeus is a skrull who want to start war between superheroes and gods

[@abhishekpandey4995]

Wah waah kya story banayi hai mohit ne Sach me yaar itna maza mujhe 2 ghante ki film (Thor 4) me nahi aayi jitna aapki 15 minute ki imaginary story me aa gaya Mohit aap ek din time nikalo aur marvel ke liye writer ki post ke liye apply kar do Kevin chacha ka no. Du😂😂 Superb bhai ❤❤

[@AkshatJaiswal.]

JUST IMAGINING THE WHOLE SCREENPLAY GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS🔥🔥