I tried to compose an etude (kinda failed)

[@MakoDMusic]

I think this is really amazing!! Love the harmonic feel

[@Benatural1]

@@MakoDMusic thankyou so much!

[@Jqh73o]

The pedal shouldn’t be in the two staves, just in the lower one. Aside from that, I enjoyed it.

[@Benatural1]

​@@Jqh73oIt could have been my mistake as I didn't recheck each parts correctly and uploaded it without paying attention(hence the reason for the title),I'm a beginner as I'm currently at grade 6,but because of the feedback I'm getting from you guys,It definitely helps in writing sheet music. I'm glad my piece atleast got you to enjoy!

[@Destinyyah]

deine musik ist sehr gut

[@Benatural1]

@@Destinyyah Danke!

[@YukiEhms]

​@@Benatural1look out for voice leading and melody call and response theory. Listen more developments by Beethoven and Chopin melodies like in his B minor waltz

[@oddguys178]

It was beautiful till you tried giving it a weird harmony, and at times it's still good

[@Benatural1]

Yep, I'm a still a beginner at this and so it's hard to actually incorporate logical flow of harmony,once I get better understanding,I hope I'll be able to compose my ideas into actual good pieces, thanks for commenting!

[@oddguys178]

@Benatural1 personally, I like to start a melody slowly. Either by playing longer notes in the beginning, or by giving it a suddle introduction