Very well written, held my attention all through the story, but then I can enjoy a good read with out picking it apart...
@runeingebretsen83783 ай бұрын
why do lawyers get to run wild,and why are they not checked out mentally like therapists to rule out psycopaths sosiopats and other mental disorders
@rustyreese40062 ай бұрын
@@runeingebretsen8378the story is fiction. You know that right? I can't remember the author but I read his series years ago on literotica. This is his story of a world where men are abused by an evil group that was started by a wealthy woman whose husband cheated on her. It's a fun series to read. I especially like the ones that involve Ron Wiseman and his wife Amy. Those are really fun to read.
@whtbear12Ай бұрын
@@rustyreese4006 Yes I know, but I guess unlike some people don't need to pick a story apart. I enjoy reading, and will read just about anything. If I enjoy it, I'll read it again and check out what else the author wrote.
@identifiesasavelociraptor89893 ай бұрын
"I understand as well," the narrator said.' 🤣🤣🤣🤣
@garyvincent6424Ай бұрын
This 2 part story was well written. Held my attention throughout. Kuddos to the Author.
@IanNicholas-l4x2 ай бұрын
Absolute brilliance. Just keep stories like this coming please. Easy to get totally addicted❤😂
@mobthefundamentalsguy3 ай бұрын
Excellent story, full of twists and turns
@AnthonyBreed-g8oАй бұрын
Loved it
@StorieSegrete13 ай бұрын
great story!
@Brown_Buffalo3 ай бұрын
34:25 what’s with ordering Lasagna or pizza in these stories what’s wrong with KFC or a big juicy burger and fries from Wendy’s? Everybody’s got to be LaDeDa and order Italian.😐
@runeingebretsen83783 ай бұрын
what's wrong with potatoes,beef steak,mashed peas and pepper sauce?
@rustyreese40062 ай бұрын
Why would they pass on a great Italian restaurant for fast food. I like both of your suggestions in a pinch, but I would much rather have the Italian every single time with a choice.
@Brown_Buffalo2 ай бұрын
@@rustyreese4006 I get where you’re coming from what I’m saying is almost every story on KZbin every time the subjects of the story want to eat they invariably head to some fancy Italian restaurant for lasagna.
@rustyreese40062 ай бұрын
@@Brown_Buffalo every author has their little quirks. If you want the real uncut stories you will have to read them for yourself. Most of these guys have an editor so the Mistakes that the AI make are not present in the originals. Plus you can check out other authors in the genre and not expose yourself to an author that you have become annoyed with. Don't ask me why they call it this, but the category is called loving wives on literotica. All of these stories Plus hundreds more can be found there, and all of them are better than these KZbin videos that butcher them for the censorship of KZbin.
All these stories, lasagna and mustangs no imaginations LOL !!
@rustyreese40062 ай бұрын
The mustangs are the trademark of the author stangstar on literotica. All of his stories involve a mustang. As far as the AI screwing up, what do you expect from a computer program. They are all full of bugs.
@leedavis22223 ай бұрын
That was a wasted hour!
@brycecarswell8922 ай бұрын
Great story but way too long. It could have been reduced to one video imo.
@nellynelson9653 ай бұрын
So. Less than a month after being given divorce papers and all that, he gets a NEW gf and lives happily ever after. And who the fuck carried pictures around in a breif case? This particular writes staries on literotica always go a bt too far with teh plots.
@jhawkins44123 ай бұрын
Lol 😂
@rustyreese40062 ай бұрын
The stories are a very creative way for the author to point out serious flaws in family laws. The biggest is no fault laws. No fault laws are nothing but punishment for the spouse that did nothing wrong. They exist because states are lazy and want the easy way out. Far too often though they maliciously punish men that are forced to pay child support for children that are not biologically his. And pay for the mortgage on the home he loses and many times allimony while the cheating wife gets to keep screwing her ap. It can also happen the other way around but it's very rare that a wife would have to pay allimony unless she is extremely wealthy.
@MC-fv4vv3 ай бұрын
When the graphics illustrations pixillate, the little girl looks creepy! I have tried not to look at the images since the first one of the little girl.
@jhawkins44123 ай бұрын
That's what the Old Man's little girl looked like when no one was looking! 😂😂😂😂
@kaycrishun10753 ай бұрын
Good story. I'm just wondering why the crazy organization started to target faithful men? Wasn't the purpose originally to make cheating me pay for cheating? How did they become a man hating group who set up and stole from men who did nothing wrong? Also, how could her father not know she was bat shit crazy? If her mom was nuts, he had to have seen the signs. Overall it definitely kept me entertained.
@rustyreese40062 ай бұрын
Just think about it a little. The group started gaining traction and becoming political in an attempt to change laws in their favor. It's not really that hard to believe. Just look at the BLM scam or the current lgtb crap. It's all a plot to get power and money. All of these "non-threatening " movements are. This fiction story series is the authors attempt at showing what happens when things go to far. It's an entertaining series and I recommend finding them on literotica. There are several in this universe and they are entertaining while pointing out some significant problems with the family law system that could very easily become what he created if not carefully watched. No fault laws are the biggest threat in reality.
@jimschwalbe86183 ай бұрын
Decent story but what the hell is the Divorce Investigation Unit of the Federal Government. There is no such thing. At least use facts and common sense when you tell a story
@txquilter6083 ай бұрын
Who knows where our tax dollars go.
@bobettinger10933 ай бұрын
It’s a fictional story. Does it matter?
@jimschwalbe86183 ай бұрын
@@bobettinger1093 Even fiction needs to make sense
@rustyreese40062 ай бұрын
@@jimschwalbe8618no it doesn't. Fiction by definition is not based on facts. But it's clear that the true meaning of what the author wrote has completely flew over your head. This is one story in a series of stories that take place in the same universe. I think your just mad at how close to home this made up universe is to reality. I read these several years ago and it's truly amazing how close this plot is to what's happening today in reality. And I'm not talking about the subject matter of the stories, just the corruption they clearly demonstrate through the series. But don't think about it too much or you'll probably strain your last braincell or something.
@richardcline13373 ай бұрын
WHY can't these people at least keep the actor's names straight? That AI narrator is bad enough but this just makes it looks ridiculously STUPID!!!!!