Sounds very chromatic, the main theme sounds promising but gets overwhelmed by the chromatic figure in the counterpoint (opposite voice). You could use the dissonance created by the semitone steps to make a harmonious section with mostly consonance. For example take a shorter simplified version of your main theme and let it be played by all 3 voice layered over each other. That way it wont sound just dissonant all the time and therefore the same all the time. It would be like a enlighted section in a stream of overflowing concious thoughts :D
@ingemarjansen14 сағат бұрын
my god, thanks! i’ll definitely try it out ❤
@ikbintom7 сағат бұрын
I really like the bass prominence in the end
@colonelsakuraКүн бұрын
toads are dancing
@chermandercher269413 сағат бұрын
Kaaaaalinka malinka kalinka moya💃
@Artemka2009_SB12 сағат бұрын
Sounds like an instrumental version of some level music from a horror game from a tensionfull level I actually like it
@ingemarjansen11 сағат бұрын
@Artemka2009_SB thanks! glad you appreciated it ❤️
@DemirSezer2 күн бұрын
banging my head
@ingemarjansenКүн бұрын
i hope not on a desk out of disgust
@nserikjaba2 сағат бұрын
hello buddy nihuya u are so polite to those u interact with Im not expert in this kind of music, but im proud of u because u r my best dura, lovely I also know just two fugues, and one of them encoded like F44.1. Second is a fish (it also looks like dura). so, dont give up, i believe in u 💋
@ingemarjansen10 минут бұрын
@@nserikjaba ah my beloved fish
@ingemarjansen10 минут бұрын
@@nserikjaba goo goo ga ga
@onethegogd578314 сағат бұрын
"rate this fugue" *steps on piano*
@ingemarjansen14 сағат бұрын
yes 🗿
@ilmari148816 сағат бұрын
people with no sense of harmony should generally not be given composing equipment
@LukeofSmeg16 сағат бұрын
The concept of harmony is in itself a lie as it's subjective term, to teach it as theory is objectively wrong. That being said, this song just sounds crap in my opinion, but each to their own.
@onethegogd578314 сағат бұрын
@@LukeofSmegthere are general statements of harmony, you're acting foolishly because everyone knows that a fifth sounds more consonant then minor seventh , and so on
@ingemarjansen14 сағат бұрын
judging my sense of harmony out of one work is kinda bold, but thanks for your thoughts, appreciate it
@ingemarjansen14 сағат бұрын
@@LukeofSmegye, i think this sounds crappy also, cos its just an educational experiment of mine. i tried - next time i’ll try harder 😊
@luftlayersoroma510513 сағат бұрын
Some people simply cannot interpret more complex music because their ears are not trained enough for it. A lot of modern music is like this, and many people enjoy it, especially those whose senses are attuned to it. Your comment is incredibly malicious and narrow-minded
@Bababoboboa-gu3iu8 сағат бұрын
I'm sorry, but these are just a bunch of random notes. This isn't a composition, you literally just rolled your head over your keyboard.
@ingemarjansen7 сағат бұрын
@@Bababoboboa-gu3iu so rolling my head over the keyboard in a particular patterns doesn’t fit your idea of composition? ok, that’s totally fair for you! thanks for feedback ❤️ maybe next time i will roll my head over an orchestra and you’ll not be able to stop me 💀