IELTS TOEFL Writing Full essay (high score)

How to write a task 2 essay, from understanding the task, to planning, to writing the introduction, body, and conclusion. See proper essay structure, sentence and vocabulary variety, and good support. Two versions of the essay are presented.
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Adam, I'm taking the CPE Cambridge at the end of the year and there's a compulsory essay which is a nightmare at times!! It's an essay of evaluation and opinion of two texts which present similar or opposing views. I found your paragraph video very useful. Could you explain this kind of essay in another video? Thanks a lot.

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M Abubakar Talal haha thanks but believe me writing a good essay for CPE takes a lot of practice and involves different skills. For example, paraphrasing is quite challenging in some cases and adding examples when you don't know a lot about the topic haha.

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Thanks for this great video, please can you analyse task one as well?Thank you.

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[@lizeth5210]

Violence is a common issue these days. We can see them in the news, in the streets, but as well in the media, as in televition, internet, video games and movies, easily accesable to our youth and children. How much does this impact in our lives? is the media the main reason? should this stop?. In my view what we see and hear is personal decision and we are able to decide wether if we pick this up or we take a step back In addition, violence can work in some sports, consequenly, we do not need the control of the goverment. First, it is going to restrain our freedom as well as the freedom of the creators of these expression ways. We know that relative to expressions, there is a lot of variety and we are not able to judge and discriminate one type. On the other hand, we are not able to ignore the people who watch and see this material and have a completely different reaction, such as pacificms or completely away of the violence because of the consequences their practicants get. For instance, my cousin, who is father of three little children, loves action movies and video games, but he has always been a pacific citizen and preacher. Furthermore, we everybody have our agency and parents in families are able to decide what they are going to allow their children to watch and see. According to this, parents are able to control instead the laws. Lastly, violence is able to be something good sometimes. We know that many respectful sports are inspired in violence, such as martial arts, rackling and free. These sports are very important worldwide, giving a lot of recognision to nations and the sportists as well. Without of at least a little of violence incentive, these sport will not be the same. There are a lot of children and youth who do not see themselves playing with a ball or swimming in a pool, but these violent sport incetivate them, being, of course, a better option than a sedentary life. For example I met a missionary in my church who practiced rackling and competed in international games. He was once robbed in my country and his reaction was pacific. We conclude that as we have freedom, agency and a little violence sometimes can be good, there is no need in restrinction of the violence in the media.

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Very helpful and informative! This is what I exactly needed!!! not just tips like others.. Thank you so much!!!

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i am aware of most of the words used in the essay. However, these rarely ever come to mind while writing the essay :(

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Wow!!! I passed one week writing 500 words paper and was a total mess. Thank you!!!

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