IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task2-Lesson-4 Conclusions

Writing task 2, lesson 4: Conclusions
In the video lesson I explained my technique for writing one-sentence conclusions.
Paraphrasing is the key skill to focus on if you want to become better at writing
conclusions in the way that I suggest.
To highlight some examples of the paraphrasing that I used in the lesson, I’ve left gaps in
the questions, introductions and conclusions below. Fill each gap with the word that I used
in the video. Correct answers can be found on page 3.
1. Discussion question
In many cities the use of video _____ in public places is being increased in order to
reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual
freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Introduction
It is true that video _____ has become commonplace in many cities in recent years. While
I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of privacy, I believe that there are
more benefits than drawbacks.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of using video _____ _____ in public
places do outweigh the disadvantages.
2. Opinion question
Families who send their children to private schools should not be _____ _____
_____ taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Introduction
Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not _____
_____ _____ to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with this
view.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I do not believe that any _____ _____ should be made for people who
choose private education.
3. Problem and solution question
In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.
What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures
that could be taken to _____ the impact of ageing populations.
Introduction
It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before.
Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies
can take steps to _____ these potential problems.
Conclusion
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to _____ the problems that are certain to
arise as the populations of countries grow older.
4. Two-part question
There are many different types of music in the world today.
Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than
the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Introduction
It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world. Music is a
____ part of all human ____ for a range of reasons, and I would argue that traditional
music is more important than modern, international music.
Conclusion
In conclusion, music is a ____ part of human ____ , and I believe that traditional music
should be given more importance than international music.
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