ReCap: Writing a Short Story- Jamain Hatton

[@JamainHatton]

Please note FICTION and Not FRICTION lol

[@ririx.x5180]

Hey can you do Lorna Goodison selected poems analysis ? Or something CAPE related ?

[@jamarimcfarlane4844]

"And they lived happily ever after" No.boooooring! 😂

[@phylisiaphillip3658]

Sir you have to publish more of those stories please.That story stir up so much emotion I could of cry

[@JamainHatton]

Lol

[@rickelsamuel4509]

thank you so much i am learning so much in preparation for my exams in may

[@jasonsmithy4247]

"Nah cuss up nobody" 😂😂😂

[@JamainHatton]

You’re enjoying this. Lol I love it

[@jasonsmithy4247]

@@JamainHatton I am, I even encouraged my class to stop by. Do you currently reside in Ann's Grove??

[@JamainHatton]

@@jasonsmithy4247 yes I do.

[@JamainHatton]

When you quote for the argument, be brief and say where it’s coming from. Ex. According to Dr Lee, Japanese Scientist, children learn more when they see others do things. Then you continue with the point you were making.

[@jasonsmithy4247]

@@JamainHatton #thebestpeople 😅😅

[@tallissajohns2115]

My problem is CSEC wants us to 'show, not tell' and I tend to tell more. They want all the five senses to be utilized in a creative way while staying true to the plot. How can I learn to show more while staying within the word limit?

[@4kelly446]

"Man kills wife... no that's too dangerous" Sir really? 😭😩

[@TraneceMcCurdy-uv2nc]

Really love how you went through the main features of the CSEC Short Story aspect ,This gives me be understanding on how I should approach my Exams and be successful❤❤By the way I'm a Grade 11 student of Guyana who's about to write my first Exam which is English in about the next 1 and half week❤❤

[@mandyphillips371]

I'm writing cxc next week Monday

[@aayshahrudder7975]

This was somewhat interesting!!! Guess I can never get too much of English, Mind you, I'll still be watching all these videos after I've completed my secondary education.

[@joshuajay7537]

We won't curse sir 😂😂😂

[@donnatrump1403]

Speaking patois is more comfortable than speaking English. Doesn't necessarily mean you lack intelligence.

[@Betty_Edw]

Exactly!

[@Nightengale0000]

Can you show us how to tunnel the story

[@jamarimcfarlane4844]

I am always first. I like this lesson.

[@JamainHatton]

Hope you'll also be the first to tell me you got a Grade 1.

[@jamarimcfarlane4844]

@@JamainHatton Tbh this is my most hated subject. I am a Physics and Maths guy. Knowing that I could get the help from your channel is the reason I didn't drop it. u r the reason I am doing it 😂😂

[@jamarimcfarlane4844]

@@JamainHatton Is a IV accepted?😂😂Just kidding I can get a II

[@JamainHatton]

Physics was my thing in school too. Logic gates was my favourite topic and I still know Newton's laws until today... English may not have been my cup of tea either so I know you'll be alright. Just keep practising.

[@shaniaramdyal4503]

What is the name of the school you teach at?

[@syrailemaitre7028]

what is expression? in the story

[@Nightengale0000]

I mean more of a chart

[@Jo_sh_travels_and_vacations]

interesting whooo!!!!!!!!!!!

[@shanniajoseph4768]

Loved this, however , I don't like the fact that you said 'the character might not be well educated' due to their creole. I had to go back to confirm what I heard. That doesn't mean and shouldn't that we or characters are less Talented.

[@JamainHatton]

While I see your reasoning that all creole speakers are might not necessarily be uneducated, can you expect people without a formal education to speak standard English?

[@shanniajoseph4768]

And what do you mean by formal education? Please note it's not an argument and I just want to understand.

[@donnatrump1403]

Imagery

[@empsiemanual6117]

your story is dark dude hahaha there's a lot of killing,rape and hate

[@JamainHatton]

Sounds a lot like life

[@empsiemanual6117]

@@JamainHatton true it happends in ones life but not all. It was still a good story