Interesting and today I have seen somebody I know!
@momentos_sg10 ай бұрын
:-)
@sgseelooksnapshot85252 ай бұрын
Too long of similar track music in the background can be quite tiring to the ears.. Can soften and some description sparsely.
@momentos_sg2 ай бұрын
Thanks for the good tips
@biot_travel10 ай бұрын
i found the first few minutes almost depressing - didnt feel like it was going anywhere, then you show a great sunrise as a peak between the top of the train carriage and the roof of the station. The area looks alright and interesting but the sparseness of people again gives a flat feel. You should subtitle the munchies to because most people wont know what your consuming and find yummy. The museum section was a great idea. The concept is great, just needs a few more practice runs across the 'caseway' hahahaha
@momentos_sg10 ай бұрын
haha, attempt of cinematic mood turns depressing mood. Definitely practice makes perfect, will be going JB again soon. Storytelling is work in progress. Thanks for the tips
@biot_travel10 ай бұрын
@@momentos_sg keep at it, you will nail it eventually ! there is different ways of expressing a cinematic mood just starring a rail barriers and peek-a-boo sunrises i dont think worked to well - it needs to engage the viewer.