Hey Daniel... No matter what I do I don't get notifs either! 😮 WTF? I havta a daily alarm for 3:45. "LOOK AT ME JORDAN! ITS ALL FOR YOU¡ IT'S ALL FOR YOU!" 😂
@lindaarrington9397 Жыл бұрын
Lol I had ta take a muscle relaxer. Haven't been awake till a little while ago I'm chronically late lol😅
@cheddar_boss Жыл бұрын
Lol Triggs is the THUMBNAIL! Edit, nice story! Awesome job writing that! A real great listen.
@williamfawkes8379 Жыл бұрын
That was quite refreshing. Thank you, sir.
@ricksanchez4813 Жыл бұрын
22 mm is a fucking mortar shell
@ZedMazaus480 Жыл бұрын
More like depleted uranium rounds that are ment to be tank busters. Remember Bert's big ass gun from tremers2? Those rounds stop short of nothing less than a mountain.
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
yes I said it wrong, thank you.
@keithblount229 Жыл бұрын
Thanks again Jordan. Man you just keep getting better and better every time!!! Keep on rocking it man!!!
@doughovious5317 Жыл бұрын
Awesome thanks!!!
@onetruedodd11 ай бұрын
Just a quick note: A 22 millimeter would be an .86 caliber. That would be an anti-tank round (think larger than a .50 cal. You would no longer have a thoracic anything.) Ideally, one would not confuse the terms "millimeter" and "caliber".
@thequackhouse4658 Жыл бұрын
Outstanding Narration!! To Author, on Your next story just remember, your shooter will always do proper recon first, He/she will always trust a gut feeling, it keeps You alive. The "assault weapon" will be for an shtf close scenario, to get You out of trouble. Bolt Action Rifle for long range engagement. Your side arm is a last ditch effort weapon. It's always best to use a blade for a silent confrontation. I absolutely LOVE Your story. Please don't take this in a bad way, it's constructive criticism. Can't wait to hear the next one!!!!
@toddwilson22976 ай бұрын
Rifle not necessary, blade, water source, bandages for the feet and good shoes. The handgun was a plus. He has all he needed. Great story
@deseanroot752 ай бұрын
A shooter wouldn't call it an "assault rifle" in the first place.
@thequackhouse46582 ай бұрын
@deseanroot75 No, but for people not in the "know" it tells them exactly what it is. Quick to identify
@CaptainStaySea Жыл бұрын
Good stuff!
@oliviam7226 Жыл бұрын
Liked the story! I got a Battle Royale vibe before you read the Hunger Games reference. Got a laugh from it. Thank you for the great read. :)
@aggromando7323 Жыл бұрын
Bad ass story man. Well done. 👍
@antonioruizrogers2621 Жыл бұрын
Stooooked
@evelynwade3973 Жыл бұрын
👍🏻👍🏻tremendously supreme, this story was very entertaining. I loved it. Thanks Jordan.😇💖
@bobbiferrall8032 Жыл бұрын
So happy to be here yet again!!! Wouldn’t miss your story’s 👍🍷
@haroldbrown5887 Жыл бұрын
Well bro it's good to be able to say to the author a hell of a story, and thank you very much!
@davidmcgahan5328 Жыл бұрын
As always awesome story.
@r1ba1asan1311 ай бұрын
I like your new take on an old story. What some people dont understand is that creativity is inspired and you were inspired correctly, no cap.
@jdtravels5140 Жыл бұрын
A different type of story. Very engaging.
@motourge3061 Жыл бұрын
I'm quickly becoming a fan. Subscribed and binging your other episodes...
@kimberlyshepherd270 Жыл бұрын
Hollows End series is one of my favorites 💯
@diannshowers9129 Жыл бұрын
WOW great story
@nickanderson9393 Жыл бұрын
Another great story with a very good potential for more stories! Great idea for a book! Awesome job brother!
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@nickanderson9393 Жыл бұрын
Very much so! You have an interesting cadence and way of setting landmines for listeners that border on sarcasm. I am definitely a fan! 8 billion aps on nothing on. But a good story and narrator beats all that hands down!
@0mfgeeze Жыл бұрын
This is a play on the hunger games series.
@nickanderson9393 Жыл бұрын
@@0mfgeeze very much so but an amazing twist with a lot of action emotion thought and depth in such a short amount of time. And making it gave the character possibilities of sub stories. One could be the hit man could be in a sub story involving a relative or comrades seeking justice. Please use if you like @JordanGrupe I have no claim to it! But just to illustrate a point of how deep the story was while making fun of the starting base of the story! Talented!!!
@darkbb187 Жыл бұрын
JG I like this story. Hopefully you continue it. I can't lie I'm hoping the guy get to retire
@NicholasIsaacs87 Жыл бұрын
Fantastic
@KurtisMiel-ys1md Жыл бұрын
No reason to kill until next year when they bring you back as the champion bullshit you are not trapped until you die😂
@christianrodriguez629 Жыл бұрын
My first time listening and I’m already subscribed! This is great content !
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
Welcome aboard!
@christianrodriguez629 Жыл бұрын
@@JordanGrupe keep up the great content
@alexanderslemp4855 Жыл бұрын
😂😂😂 that lil choked out exchange got me.
@dotari4982 Жыл бұрын
thanks for the story hope we get the next year sequel
@edf777 Жыл бұрын
All ready ..tucked up in bed.cant wait to listen 😊 thank you ❤
@einienj3281 Жыл бұрын
Great story, Thank You 💜💚
@donaldfoster5959 Жыл бұрын
Really enjoyed this story!!!
@alanfisk9166 Жыл бұрын
That was a great story you are talented in many ways ty
@kimberlyshepherd270 Жыл бұрын
Sorry I'm late 😔. My head has been hurting really bad and I haven't slept in 2 days 🤕😴. Thank you Jordan!! I'm listening now as I lay down and try to sleep 😴. I think your voice is soothing. I hope you're doing well ❤️
@ZedMazaus480 Жыл бұрын
Assassin is that you?! LOL Seriously though sorry to hear about your hurting head, and hope you feel better soon. I agree he's got that soft sweet sultry voice that is caressingly soothing to listen to. Have a good rest, and good luck on getting rid of that pesky migrain.
@leneecasteel2005 Жыл бұрын
I'm so sorry you suffer from those damnable headaches as well. They tend to screw up an entire day. Ever since I started having problems with my neck, my sleep has been hit and miss also. I'll pray for you tonight when I'm trying to get some sleep tonight. Lots of love, and take care of yourself! ❤😊❤ God bless hun
@DustBunny7 Жыл бұрын
I hope you feel better soon!🤗
@lindaarrington9397 Жыл бұрын
Hope u feel better soon I've been very sick to Miss our meeting up on utube I worry about you kim
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
Hey Kimberly glad to hear from you! hope you're doing okay
@redditmanllegnisthebirdofh9887 Жыл бұрын
Amazing!
@BlackCrystal615 Жыл бұрын
Great Story Jordan!
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@DocBree13 Жыл бұрын
That unlocked front door would have made me think it was a trap. The whole situation was too easy - too good to be true.
@gracedocherty9314 Жыл бұрын
I never lock my door
@jeanmaynes3684 Жыл бұрын
I really like this one . Well done😊
@BrandonMcDougal-o7g Жыл бұрын
Yea this got me wide awake. lol good job 🎉
@magoose84 Жыл бұрын
Loved the story and has so much room to extend into an amazing series! ❤
@christinebadagliacco8972 Жыл бұрын
You are a really good writer, I’ve enjoyed all your stories. Thanks Jordan. 💕
@lindaarrington9397 Жыл бұрын
Wow you are growing Told ya u would when u started..😊❤ You're just so danged talented Take care of yourself Jordan Love n respect from Va.
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
Thank you!!
@lindaarrington9397 Жыл бұрын
@@JordanGrupe my pleasure
@kimberlyshepherd270 Жыл бұрын
@@lindaarrington9397 🫂❤️💞💕💙💐💜💖
@jamesbookout96518 ай бұрын
1:43 a 22mm wouldn't ping pong nothing that just blows a hole through ya. I think they ment 22 caliber, ps love the stories and narrations
@aidanharper94467 ай бұрын
I was thinking that same thing
@yvette_is_Mamacado Жыл бұрын
I made it! Just gotta jewelry show tomorrow so my hands are too full to play! Hope all my fellow Grupies are happy and well. 🥰 Wish me luck manyana! It's a "big un!"😂
@Badassoldwoman Жыл бұрын
Good luck with the show!
@haroldbrown5887 Жыл бұрын
Good luck with your show
@kimberlyshepherd270 Жыл бұрын
Good luck!!!
@CollectiveMindFilms Жыл бұрын
Good luck! I remember those days, it’s always crazy the night before a show! And then you sell out and have to build your stock up again!!! Do you ever get that thing where you work on a piece, then can visualize the person that’ll buy it? Sure enough, they waltz in and fit the description perfectly! That would happen to me all the time! I stopped questioning all the unique bits and bobs lol
@yvette_is_Mamacado Жыл бұрын
@@CollectiveMindFilms Absolutely! Its surreal when that happens! Such is the mind of an artist. And we're all artists to some degree. It's not defined by paint and canvas that's for sure. 😃 And yes the anxiety of being depleted right before Christmas is setting in hardcore! 😁 That's a good thing tho. NOT an anxiety I mind. 😂
@chaimsamuels755311 ай бұрын
Just waiting for the movie now
@sharonpaterson1281 Жыл бұрын
Cool story thank you Jordan 😊 love hitman story’s reminds me of when I was younger 😉
@spookywoods11 ай бұрын
If you like hitman stories...listen to I hired a hit man on myself by corpse husband
@sharonpaterson128111 ай бұрын
@@spookywoods I’ve heard it it’s awesome too thanks though hun
@PritamSingh-s8b Жыл бұрын
Hey Jordan! Can you please do the 50 foot ant series? It's awesome and would be great with your voice and style. Thanks! It's a very long creepypasta.
@kimberlyshepherd270 Жыл бұрын
Not to sound stupid but what is the 50 foot ant series? If it's on Reddit can you please share the link?
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the idea! I'll check it out
@scrappydoo7887 Жыл бұрын
Yea humper monkeys ghost story too is a long but excellent story
@ganglians11 ай бұрын
Excellent suggestions
@lindaarrington9397 Жыл бұрын
Ty This sounds like uts gonna be a good one.just starting. Know im gonna love it ❤
@kimberlyshepherd270 Жыл бұрын
Remember me asking you about a comment that you replied to me on one of my comments? I think you were asking something about my health 🤔. I never found it 😢
@lindaarrington9397 Жыл бұрын
@@kimberlyshepherd270 oh no I've been in bed for 2 months Been so sick Can't remember but I'm always late by the time I wake up to comment. Much
@diannshowers9129 Жыл бұрын
Hey hey everyone. A new GREAT story. Im an hour and a half early. Wont be late today.
@nanona2228 Жыл бұрын
we need part 2 !!
@MizMorgue13 ай бұрын
Better than the Hunger Games. A bunch of poor kids offing each other is just so evil. Game like that SHOULD be top notch assassins. Another excellent story, Grupe😎💜
@onsitenerd Жыл бұрын
You knocked it out of the park again! You have a gift, as a writer as well as a narrator. Thank you.
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you!
@thomasn3071 Жыл бұрын
You wouldn't survive being shot by a 22mm projectile. That's almost an inch. I think you ment .22 caliber, probably a .22 long rifle judging by the description.
@christianmcpherson8118 Жыл бұрын
Why is no one asking for a part 2? That was great and the ending says he’ll be seen again in a year. Make this a series
@joyburton3967 Жыл бұрын
Okay, how many of you knew what a ya novel is? Yep. I had to look it up. Thanks for another goody, Jordan! 👍⚘️🙋♀️
@ScullyPop Жыл бұрын
Jordan!
@Itsgonnabemayy9 ай бұрын
I just joined your patron page, I really like your stories, especially because a lot of them have humor and I love that. Great work
@JordanGrupe9 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for your support!!
@Noname00101AS2 ай бұрын
I like how grupe just can jump in the story pretty good
@user-PuppyDan Жыл бұрын
I am watching from the start and i had to laugh at the hunger games referance.
@lindaarrington9397 Жыл бұрын
Hey can do do a super creepy scary werewolf story One that runs chills up and down our back You know the hair raises up on your neck kinda story. Where we cant guess who it is till the end. Love um ty hun You get better and better all the time 😊❤
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
I like it! And I do have something like it in the works...
@kimberlyshepherd270 Жыл бұрын
@@JordanGrupe Nice!!
@MichaelSchisler-jx3uc Жыл бұрын
I TRULY ENJOYED TOUR STORY AND I ENJOYED THE READ ALSO❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY
@terrabladenstuff40211 ай бұрын
I really liked the story. it is different from most horror stories I see and this is more like an action story but I'm more happy with this. please write a part 2 because this was excellent and i hope that you write more stories yourself because I'm sure they will all be great and are great for listening to
@nevaeva7333 Жыл бұрын
Great story. Would be awesome if it was 2/3 hours to learn more about the characters. Maybe next year. 🤔
@roden70 Жыл бұрын
Cool story!
@jppotgieter36008 ай бұрын
Outstanding story. Really loved it😊
@lostsoultheemokat9 ай бұрын
Fantastic story very well done my man!
@StephsonBagwell4 ай бұрын
This story out of many I really enjoyed thank you
@old_timey_prospector11 ай бұрын
You know, sometimes it's refreshing to go back to the basics. This was a straight-forward classic and the hundredth version of the millionth telling. But I listened to the whole thing in one sitting and I enjoyed it all the same.
@JordanGrupe11 ай бұрын
I love this trope
@old_timey_prospector11 ай бұрын
@@JordanGrupe It's a classic for a reason. Everybody loves a good death game.
@raymondstoner5555 Жыл бұрын
How we need a part 2 please
@nikolasspade2700 Жыл бұрын
Very nice story
@acedroesbeke6542 Жыл бұрын
Seems more like that movie with stone cold where he's dropped on an island with convicts and they have to play the illing game
@Titangoboom99 Жыл бұрын
Another shift another video. Maybe i should write a story about the mundane life of someone who lives an hour outside of the city.
@lindaarrington9397 Жыл бұрын
Plz do we need new stories
@Titangoboom99 Жыл бұрын
@@lindaarrington9397 Jordan would have to promise to read it out on here. I could tell the stories of my encounters with crazy hermits and beasts that live in the deep forrest out here.
@Titangoboom99 Жыл бұрын
Great now I HAVE to. Alright. I will begin working on it soon.
@kimberlyshepherd270 Жыл бұрын
@@Titangoboom99 I can't wait to hear your stories!!!
@americanhunter9985 Жыл бұрын
a 22mm would not just ping pong around in you. that's a bowling ball lol. I'm sure u meant .22 cal
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
yeah thats what i meant
@JohnWick-qj2hj Жыл бұрын
Love your content and this was a great story just 1 thing if I may. When you mentioned he had previous gunshot scars you said he took a 22 millimeter to his chest but you mean a .22 caliber. A 22 millimeter would be a massive round nearly twice the size of a .50 BMG sniper round. Again phenomenal story and you should definitely make a part 2 or even different characters entirely.
@angelgoo777211 ай бұрын
Or maybe the antagonist is just built like that 🤔
@Per_Johnsen11 ай бұрын
You voice, the storytelling, the story's you choose to narrate and the sound effects you add= 9/10. I don't give out a perfect score on principle because there's ALWAYS room for improvement somehow. You've earned yourself a new subscriber though👋
@avmelidor11 ай бұрын
I liked this
@ronwilson851 Жыл бұрын
Maaan this would be a great series 😅
@amgroves76Ай бұрын
Catching up on ones I missed, I found this ...wow, was there ever a sequel? I really enjoyed the concept
@JordanGrupeАй бұрын
No sequel yet but I feel like maybe I should
@falcongamingproductions993811 ай бұрын
Excellent story, really well put together and all around enjoyable! The only thing I can really dog on is the 22 millimeter round bit. A 22mm round would be huge. For reference, a 20mm round is typically fixed with an explosive payload and used for anti aircraft or anti armor purposes. In other words, a 22mm would rip our protagonist in half 💀 I’m assuming you were thinking of the .22 caliber round, which would be much more realistic. Honestly this isn’t even really a complaint anymore as much as it’s me wanting to flex my gun knowledge
@theldun15 ай бұрын
Good story. The ejection port is on the wrong side of that AR15/M4.
@juannegrete402911 ай бұрын
Wow first story I’ve heard from you I can’t believe you wrote that it was awesome I just subscribed and waiting for next upload hope to hear one live
@JordanGrupe11 ай бұрын
Thank you so much!!
@MemeS-sb2cq Жыл бұрын
This was soooo good, I was glued to it. Thank you for another great story.
@ChristineH-u8g2 ай бұрын
❤ wow you're a very good writer bro! Loved it and the smarass thing your character says about the hunger games reference lol funny 😊 Nicely done!!❤
@harrygrimley4352 Жыл бұрын
How'd you get the idea for this?🤔. Entertaining. Thanks for sharing this with us.
@JordanGrupe Жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it! It was kinda inspired by hunger games and the Hunt
@harrygrimley4352 Жыл бұрын
@@JordanGrupeI was being sarcastic. It was obvious. But entertaining. Thanks.
@RAThatFNGirlChicago5 ай бұрын
This needs a part 2 frfr
@OutlawNation111 ай бұрын
I really want to know where you get your thumbnails this one is my fav so far and your narrations are so relaxing keep up the good work dude
@JordanGrupe11 ай бұрын
Thank you! I make the thumbnails myself with canva using images generated by midjourney 😀
@michaelswords982711 ай бұрын
Wen does part 2 come out 😮😮😮😮😮
@JZT-JZT Жыл бұрын
My attack cat (Chaco Taco) is all I need to defend against assassins 😁
@gracedocherty9314 Жыл бұрын
I remember when the first woman became a greenberry
@BrotherGrimm101311 ай бұрын
First time I've listen to one of your videos. Damn fine, sir.
@lakeyawheeler1695 Жыл бұрын
How did they think they were going to split it 50/50? The overseer would have made sure the didn't
@pocadon Жыл бұрын
Yeah...I'm at that part and the first thing that came to mind is only 1 winner. It feels like Hunger Games so maybe it will include their refusal to kill each other and they will both commit suicide instead changing the rich assholes worldview. First the sneaky sniper needs to be found. Sniper often "nest" and prepare traps behind themselves. I don't know if we'll have the perfect end. They should backtrack to find where the sniper went...probably looking down at the tower where he can kill both. Maybe he's in a tree or maybe he's still there dressed in mud and leaves..? We'll see!
@Badkarma12498 Жыл бұрын
Fuck story love it❤❤❤
@StephenFinski-en5pz6 ай бұрын
Respect Jordan but right when dude hooked up with Tia the announcer said 3 contestants left then you said bang bang bang Triggs got 3 more. Doesn’t matter just pointing out a good antagonist or evil bad guy would’ve caught that. Also to I got a great name for one of those 🤔 just sayn!
@silverdrag0n_ Жыл бұрын
me after i join a round of minecraft survival games
@philsturgill343511 ай бұрын
You’re a much better writer than narrator but I enjoyed the story quite a bit and look forward to your next chapter.
@anneknowles107811 ай бұрын
Tjis is great. Is this your real voice man. Its nice. You sound a bit Canadian with the inflection. Cool