Layne - Impatient

Took some time with this one. Wrote a little under half of it a few days ago, and didn't get around to finishing it till this afternoon. I think it turned out well, the bridge was unexpected, I just realized how well Am worked as the next chord after the verse progression. The lyrics speak for themselves. I seem to write my best work when I'm thinking about someone.
Lyrics:
I think I'm busy keeping note of all the times you could have text me, re-reading lyrics that I wrote and I'm always second guessing, feeling up wrapping fluff to find out if it's awesome, or another piece of clothing I'll forget and say "I lost 'em"
I'm impatient, immature, what can I say? Invasive looks, I've given up the play, you're only what you've made, clumsy counting down the days, till you're here, I nearly missed it now, it's love hamfisted, wow, it's so clear in it's sound, as I've feared
Open apps, shift through crap, just to check if you have sent me, harnessed hopes, jumping ropes, make excuses for my blessings
If you ever have a thing to say, you know I'm here for everything, like a pet that's just waiting to play, I've always been in hand
But I'm impatient, immature, what can I say? Invasive looks, I've given up the play, you're only what you've made, clumsy counting down the days, till you're here, I nearly missed it now, it's love hamfisted, wow, it's so clear in it's sound, as I've feared

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