I feel that I owe money to this man for this video
@zoranspirkovski97214 жыл бұрын
You do. Please send cash by mail to his address. He's retired now, so don't send it to the university.
@saralanzuise21124 жыл бұрын
same
@donsan64044 жыл бұрын
me too
@TheGoddon4 жыл бұрын
If I was young enough I would have gotten into uchicago
@zacheryspire32594 жыл бұрын
same same
@craigtalbot6074 жыл бұрын
While writing my doctoral dissertation, I discovered that 90% of what mattered to my committee (and the university) was my ability it weave other peoples ideas with my own grammar and sentence structure to make it look like I had discovered brilliant nuggets of information no one else knew while CLEARLY (based on a seven page bibliography) filling the paper with other people’s ideas. Madness!!! But it got me a degree!!
@gebbygebbers Жыл бұрын
bachelor here, i still feel like our whole final project is a scam
@dpakholly8 ай бұрын
@@gebbygebbersyou’re right.
@tenorgabrielma5 жыл бұрын
As a graduated master student, I wish I had such a teacher to guide me in my writing when I was in school. Most enlightening, thank you, Dr. McEnerney.
@sethmendis84714 жыл бұрын
You sure he was never your teacher? You kind of look like that guy in the back at 16:28
@tenorgabrielma4 жыл бұрын
Sethumi Agampodi hahaha... alas I Never went to UoC!
@DairangerSentai73 жыл бұрын
You're successful in my eyes, man.
@pitikidbb22843 жыл бұрын
@@sethmendis8471 looks like the guy in the first row too 🤔
@AMTWOSEVEN2 жыл бұрын
@@sethmendis8471 l
@leixun4 жыл бұрын
*My takeaways:* 1. This lecture is about 1.1 Why people that are really smart can have writing issues, 1.2 some techniques to solve these issues 2:17 2. More on 1.1 5:30, writings need to be clear, organized, persuasive and VALUABLE 3. Think about readers and the function of writing is important 7:25 4. Domain experts use writing to help themselves with thinking 9:20, if contents are very complex, it is impossible to do good thinking (e.g. outline) first and then start writing. DO them together 5. One of the reasons that smart people can't do good writing is, in school, their readers (e.g. teachers) are paid (tuition) to read their writings, but other than that, their writings have no other values to their readers 11:20 6. An example 19:40 7. We shouldn't ALWAYS use short sentences 30:20 8. We were trained in school to use writing to express our idea, to show our understanding, not to create values for our readers 33:10 9. Stop thinking about writing rules 34:18, language is not rule-following, is about control the reading process 36:30 10. How to make writing valuable to readers 40:30 - make arguments, tell what questions (i.e. reader's questions) that the paper will answer 11. We value about reading bad stuff 55:25. I guess the way people tend to use "bad word" for eye-catching could be related to a TED talk about bad stuff last in our mind longer: *Getting stuck in the negatives (and how to get unstuck) | Alison Ledgerwood | TEDxUCDavis* kzbin.info/www/bejne/bYmpfYd6hpl9g80 12. Readers don't trust writers 1:02:45 13. Think about how we should struct our writing based on who is our potential readers 1:05:40. In English, subject is the focus of a sentence
@user-ib4ez9gl5u4 жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot!
@zhanged90804 жыл бұрын
another great job for the review after your 1st for The Craft of Writing Effectively!!!
@leixun4 жыл бұрын
@@zhanged9080 You are welcome!
@王麗-g7v4 жыл бұрын
Thanks again, it is useful.
@martinnhantran4 жыл бұрын
Very good notes Lei. How do you do it?
@birdnerd66513 жыл бұрын
A writing professor once said to us: you need to satisfy the intellectual and emotional needs of your reader. His words have always stayed with me; that was the first time I was properly oriented toward my readers. Lucky for me I was young because I write policy now. I miss the UofC!
@ritazanin1429 Жыл бұрын
That’s what a top teacher does. He/she tells the truth to encourage students to do the same once they’re out of the academia and even while they’re studying. Value those teachers because they’re precious. Actually, they’re a rarity.
@dr-johngy-brongen5 жыл бұрын
"you've been writing garb.. ineffectively" 28:55 lol, this professor is killing it! i'm really thankful for having access to his lectures
@Cyberlord_Blaze2 жыл бұрын
very down to earth but in a most respectful way at the same time.
@walkaway.2 жыл бұрын
@@Cyberlord_Blaze does he have a website?
@goradalibargun71857 күн бұрын
I am watching this lecture the second time hoping that I can reimagine what professional writing is all about. As a new graduate, I am now facing the merciless and unforgiving world where readers hate me. My job of forcing them to read my work (because I am taking their time ) appears demanding as a new reality. I am, however, astonished that only this professor discusses these life-saving skills in professional settings. Professor Larry's students were lucky to learn the truth this early. Thank you Professor Larry for sharing your knowledge with the public.
@TheHorus471 Жыл бұрын
Pure joy he has on 50:46, you can see it in every fiber of his being. He is such a passionate and quality teacher that what he transfers is his whole life. What a great person. Insprational lesson for all of us. Thank you for giving out these lessons, and also thank you chicago college for sharing us with this treasure that you have allowed to encubate in your classrooms. This is the greatest writing lesson i have ever watched and none can match the pure passion and joy this gentleman, imparts on his students. Bravo.
@juliecuvellier443 жыл бұрын
I'm not a student anymore, I don't write so there are very little chances I'd be watching this video until the end ,...and yet I found those two lectures utterly and ridiculously interesting and as I'm writing this yes I think about this theory applies to all spheres of communication! Thank you Professor !!
@gonzobrain53942 жыл бұрын
"Concision isn't the number of words in the page, it's how long it takes readers to process what's on the page"
@LianaBuzea5 жыл бұрын
I loved the 2 lectures I've seen from Mr. Larry McEnerney! They've been strategic, engaging & helpful. Thank you for sharing them!
@superseamstersewingshow5145 жыл бұрын
For me as well. I just stumbled onto him yesterday. I have seen the two lectures also. I am in a writing class for teachers right now at CSU Bakersfield. I have to write a journal. I'm hoping to be able to incorporate the value into it.
@xy53934 жыл бұрын
LOVE UR TITLE OF SEXOLOGICAL, I CAN TEACH MEN MANY TRICKS TO WOOOOO THEIR FEMALE PARTNERS. EVEN THOUGH I'M ONLY 38YRS AND HAD FEW GFS, I BELIEVE WOMEN ARE AMAZING
@johndoe40734 жыл бұрын
This is 100% spot on! Too many important concepts for just one viewing. Will definitely be watching this again in the future. I can't thank Larry and the University of Chicago enough for making this available for public consumption. Anyone who writes anything longer than a tweet should watch this and take notes.
@gintongaparador9994 жыл бұрын
This makes so much sense to me now... around 11:15 what he said... I found that I have trouble writing outlines. My teachers would tell me to write an outline first before writing my thoughts, but I end up writing nothing. My thoughts were always jumbled, and writing them down on paper helped me sort out my thoughts.
@eliasdanilov5643 Жыл бұрын
I swear, when I was listening to this lecture at 10 minutes and 12 seconds, I jumped and slammed my left hand on my right so painfully that I instantly regretted the stupid painful display of emotion, but forgot about it after 3 seconds. I shouted: "Damn it, he’s so precise and cool, and he knows what he’s saying." I send my warmest greetings from Poland from a lost and downtrodden Belarusian who is writing his first, and perhaps only, but very important book! Thank you professor! I hear you!
@marykinsella417 Жыл бұрын
Does it have to be entertaining to hold the readers attention ?
@eliasdanilov5643 Жыл бұрын
I don't think it would be suitable for a military or catastrophe report, but people like to be entertained. I'd even say they love it. @@marykinsella417
@thehazarika6 жыл бұрын
I love how much truth he is telling. It's utterly unbearable for people like me, who have been taught to write inside the system, to absorb this. But these are the hard truths we need to learn.
@ltrinhmuseum5 жыл бұрын
So is learning, thinking, decision-making and problem-solving. These at the fundamental components of how one makes progress in life, and they are not taught :)
@JML6895 жыл бұрын
@@ltrinhmuseum the problem is the polar opposite is being taught and these are ignored
@moralubis4 жыл бұрын
kzbin.info/www/bejne/sILLen59g6ymgNU
@MRSoefeldt4 жыл бұрын
Hard truths or just truths?
@ltrinhmuseum4 жыл бұрын
@la ba I should add the word ‘explicitly’, ‘directly’ and ‘deeply’. During learning people can make profoundly different inferences and connections. They may even develop different approaches to a problem without recognizing their own bias due to lack of formal frameworks for problem-solving. Have your teachers produced world-class engineers or did the student discover and integrate their own methologies? What is the contributing factor of the two? Looking back I should have been more accurate say, teachers underestimate and under-deliver in their role to nuture problem finders and thinkers.
@janeferguson37434 жыл бұрын
Learned more in the past 1hr 16mins than in the past 15 years working in a university
@johngleason62946 жыл бұрын
Mr. McEnerney: I listened to this lecture last night and found it insightful, VALUABLE, and unique. In my experience you are a rare type of teacher, the type we all wish we had more of when attending college, someone who cares, who knows what works in the real world, and who is bold enough to dismiss distractive teaching methods. Cheers to you.
@URestURust4 жыл бұрын
Can you explain what you mean by distractive teaching methods?
@nikomax7726 жыл бұрын
Professor McEnerney is absolutely right! His lectures are one of the best that I have ever listen! Thank you, Professor McEnerney!
@patrickmccormack43184 жыл бұрын
If memory serves, McEnerney is not a Professor. If not the case, please, let me know.
@РусланДементьев-с7п4 жыл бұрын
@@patrickmccormack4318 Yeah, he did not complete his doctoral studies. Alas he is retiring this year...
@hereigoagain50502 жыл бұрын
Larry demonstrates real concern for students by shooting down wrong opinions instead of constant affirmation.
@edwardlloyd94684 жыл бұрын
It's certainly quite a revelation when we realize there is a bigger world out there than the one that spins inside our heads.
@deftdelivery10 ай бұрын
This man changed my life.
@poseanyesequioa76694 жыл бұрын
I love the way he teaches. So connected, so focused and professionally gentle on a serious topic that matters - writing.
@NavdeepGaur3 жыл бұрын
this man has blown my mind in the first 10 minutes, one hour more to go. think with an outline, write when you are done thinking.
@NavdeepGaur3 жыл бұрын
mind=blown again in the next minute. what you write about the world has a job, its job is to cause the readers to change how they think about the world.
@olgan.nakonechna9813 жыл бұрын
These Philippines really don't understand how much lucky they are to sit here and listen to this fantastic teacher)
@anthonydeloach8055 жыл бұрын
I love this guy, I often think about my writing and want to improve and it is good to know the things you must be aware of. Namely the reader and value.
@sanketrane7311 Жыл бұрын
This is treasure for sript writers as well. Thankyou & God bless Dr. McEnerney & the person who uploaded this. He has unlocked some pretty awesome points where writers get stuck on a page.
@trishnamukherjeeTM3 жыл бұрын
Thank you Dr. McEnerney for such an insightful video. As a person who is a student of Literature all I have done is write but now that I have graduated from university I have been stuck on making my writing accessible and meaningful for a larger audience. Your lecture has provided me key points for reorienting my writing and making it valuable. Thank you so much!
@bagasmuktiwibowo9194 жыл бұрын
I like when he guided his speech as what he basically wanted to share to the audience. He doesn't care about what's inside his mind but he cares of something valuable and the problem that he wanted to resolve for the audience.
@mulliganstew724 жыл бұрын
He Does a great job of talking in terms of what’s in it for them by listening to what he has to say. Prime example of talking the talk and walk in the walk.
@mmjsj29293 жыл бұрын
Notes: - He opens the lecture by explaining who he is, why he's there, and why he hopes he can be valuable to you. - His goal is to help you avoid common, easily avoidable writing issues. - He breaks it down into two levels: first, explaining why it is that really smart people have trouble writing effectively (mostly because academia doesn't teach you to do real writing), and then specific techniques and exercises that you can use to improve. - Your writing should be clear, organized, persuasive, and above all else - valuable. - Jargon isn't always bad - you can use it to provide value. It's often used in a way that destroys value. Jargon is useful when you know that your audience knows what you mean when you're using the jargon - it's a way to condense information and convey ideas more efficiently to readers who have prerequisite knowledge. - Most people use their writing process to help themselves to think. This is necessary step, especially when you're dealing with complex issues that you can't figure out in your head. - Some teachers tell students to think before they write - to create an outline before they write their paper. This is nonsense - writing and thinking are iterative processes. You use your writing to think, and then your thinking improves, and you write using this improved thinking. - The purpose of writing is to change how your readers view the world. - In school, your grades don't reflect the degree to which your writing changed your teacher's view of the world. Your teachers get paid to review your work and grade it based on criteria that usually don't relate to how useful the paper is. - We have 20 years' of bad habits built up by people getting paid to care about us in school. - He reviews three examples of writing from Roger Myerson: - He notes some differences: the presence of equations in the first, the shorter sentences in the second. Shorter sentences have their place, but you shouldn't avoid long sentences. It depends on a lot of things - your reader, their objectives, your position in the piece. The end of a sentence is a microstressor. You can use these microstresses to convey importance and deliver value. But you don't want the entire piece to be hundreds of important things - otherwise nothing is important. Long sentences allow you to use "important things" to build up to "very important things". For example: the last sentence of Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address Continued: www.karma.fm/p/M8G0hSj/writing-beyond-the-academy---larry-mcenerney-university-of-c
@jnaught13582 жыл бұрын
I fell asleep as this was coming on.. I woke up wise beyond my wildest imaginations!! I actually interjected in my sleep!’ Whoever this man is… I owe him a check!! 🙏
@mrrb_8883 жыл бұрын
I could listen to him for hours! very interesting and mind blowing stuff!
@dennismorris75734 жыл бұрын
Excellent, inspirational professor, Dr. Larry McEnerney of the University of Chicago.
@patrickmccormack43184 жыл бұрын
If memory serves, McEnerney is not a professor. If not the case, please, let me know.
@gcywart5 ай бұрын
I have been working for over 5 years now. I really wish I had known these things when I was in school. It would have made my career much smoother.
@grjesus99792 жыл бұрын
I see a man trying to help. Thank you so much. This comes with consciusness, the more you are the more easy it gets to catch what he says.
@curtgno2771 Жыл бұрын
Dr McEnerney thank you for this knowledge . When you are telling us this you are communicating with the crowd by changing our thoughts of how we should be writing also the main point of why we are writhing.this video is the perfect example of it . Over; students don’t pay attention in class not because we don’t want to but because most teacher couldn’t communicates with the students.
@sarahmassie750411 ай бұрын
Thank you Mr. McErnerney. I was just about to commit every mistake you outlined. Your insights have enabled me to realise that I needed to radically change my direction and that before I even put pen to paper I must first identify who my reader is. and secondly, what is my intention of function. Now the hard part.
@hichamelmechchate52243 жыл бұрын
Great pieces of Academic tips: 1."Language is not rules. Language is controlling the reading process." A great writer should use language to guide. It is not to make the reader get lost. 2. Novice writers have not got trained to get value out of writing products or make it valuable for expert reader-evaluator. 3. Writers should care more about spelling and forget about ready does and don'ts. 4. Short sentences lead to convincing the reader to list numerous points of strengths. 5. For me, this lecture is a revolution against those ready and superficially rules . It is a call for deep research and tips from practitioners and teachers of writing. 6. ...
@everydaystuffandthingsguy455411 ай бұрын
Man! He really speaks good. I like the stuff he nos. He does the best ideals that are good but I never thought of them.
@patakainstitute3463 жыл бұрын
This was one of the best lessons I've had on any topic let alone writing. Thank you Professor McEnerney.
@la-ov5zw3 жыл бұрын
Amazing course taught by an amazing professor who definitely knows how to convey his point. Lots of gratitude for this video. I wish the audience was more reactive, he deserves it so much, look how much energy and enthusiasm he gives !!!!!
@CarlineFrancois8 жыл бұрын
This was a wonderful video on writing at the expert level. Thank you for the teaching Prof. McEnerney.
@URestURust6 жыл бұрын
Carline Francois agree. This guy is a world class professor.
@superseamstersewingshow5145 жыл бұрын
@@URestURust "World Class!" Wow! I will be watching his videos a few more times for sure.
@РусланДементьев-с7п4 жыл бұрын
In fact, he is not a professor LOL
@ALTHEGREAT1013 жыл бұрын
awesome! just what I needed. After writing about a thousand pages about an important topic that nobody seems to understand now I know that I have only been writing to organize my thoughts and have some ideas about what to do next. WOW!
@DreamWalker8862 жыл бұрын
This wonderful teacher is giving the most valuable lesson about writing, and we have this student eating some soap in class.
@skit5553 жыл бұрын
This Pr. McEnerney is basically filling the gaps of my intuitions on the topic and I love it!
@KimiaXLife4 жыл бұрын
When text-based advice is given, ask for which readers and what function. I loved this.
@rodneymacomber6337 Жыл бұрын
This guy is so good someone like me an un educated man that needs to communicate with people we all can use this lecture when we communicate verbally to people around us I’m learning a second language the importance is to communicate not grammar or punctuation The purpose of writing is to communicate we all want people to value us so we should communicate things that make people want to know us I’m 60 and I only went to the seventh grade so forgive me for wasting your time ❤
@ikhahfarikhah77789 ай бұрын
Thank you Professor, your class has been travelling away to my screen and I felt so lucky to be able to find you and followed your session.
@ayoubbenelmoudden43604 жыл бұрын
Interactive and engaging writing. I have enjoyed each and every single moment of this lecture.
@k1vd0382 жыл бұрын
after getting out of school and having to convince a boss with 10+ years of experience in basically an elevator pitch why my idea will solve the problem he was having, you quickly learn that the value of the speech or text to the reader/listener is the most important. This was a great refresher and I have gotten great value out of it.
@C3yl04 жыл бұрын
This class should be taught in all colleges.
@craigtalbot6074 жыл бұрын
We write horribly because our payment is a grade - and our “teachers” get a paycheck for dispensing the currency of grades!! We are held hostage to their styles and their values as long as we are students ... and as you said, changing habits and thinking and perception of value after 20 years is INCREDIBLY DIFFICULT!!! It can be done, but it’s like detoxing from a drug addiction!!
@davidheard7093 жыл бұрын
This is inspiration for learning detailed writing, it is a way of meeting the challenges which provoke thoughts in brainstorming. How do you as a writer bring value to your work?
@sunriseeternity3004 жыл бұрын
Thank you Larry McEnerney (University of Chicago Writing Program). Thank you, Thank you, Thank you.
@b.d.walters94022 жыл бұрын
Now I know why I had to reword and reframe everything in college...I had to put the text into language that made sense to me!!! To simply regurgitate the facts and stats was useless...I would even create lists that were almost lyrical. Using the techniques of master students, I stopped simply reading text, and began writing it as if I was composing my own piece to be published, using the common knowledge within the author's book. Today, I do this in conversation as well...without correcting others, I simply reframe, rephrase, and sometimes question the other person to see if what I said is what they meant. Context and Content matter...depending on the consumer/reader of the composition. Text book writers are only interested in the information, not the composition of how it's presented. That's understandable because too many different kinds of students engage with the text. Students need to learn that it's ok to reformat the information and knowledge, so they can then discuss it and write about it their way. It won't matter how the test questions are worded because the student understands and comprehends the whole of the content, and the message contained within.
@mxyzptlk...5 жыл бұрын
I need more of this guy.
@AG-yj1jv6 жыл бұрын
Prof. McEnerney -- your video is so practical, and insightfully done, I needed to pause & applaud. While I did hear many of these pointers 30 years ago, but over time and tumult, I'd gotten away from them -- to the point, I was just wondering the other day, how it could be, that two people with University degrees, could have so much difficulty communicating effectively with one another in something so simple as texts. Thank you for the answer and the solutions to the problems!
@SK-le1gm3 жыл бұрын
This is the first person to really teach me about writing since Hunter S Thompson
@amfsuseraccount2 жыл бұрын
This way of teaching is just great! I wish I had had such interesting lectures and that I could give them! Brilliant!
@jordanweimer7882 жыл бұрын
As an academic failure - seventeenth from last in my high school class before dropping out - my favorite part is when let’s these undoubtedly brilliant people realize they’re boring and that only a paid reader would read their boring work because I’m to a large degree a failure because I always made my papers hilarious and readable. My teacher once wrote on my paper, “the grade doesn’t reflect the quality of your work.” I was never one to obey minimum course requirements and was selected against. Btw, if you’re one of the “brilliant” people in these classes, you’re not necessarily the best and the brightest; you’re the best and the brightest that did everything you were told. Break more rules! Just kidding I fix espresso machines. You do you.
@ILikeWatermelon-z4 жыл бұрын
My writing skills improved to a whole new level due to this video. Please provide a link to the handout so that we could learn more about this wonderful lesson.
@ayoubbenelmoudden43604 жыл бұрын
Watching this valuable lecture is mind-altering. I did not feel it was boring or long during every minute of it. Thank you poster 👍👍👍👍
@waindayoungthain21475 жыл бұрын
🙏🏼 I hope to have a chance to learn with him. How lucky for the student to take course with him.
@craigtalbot6074 жыл бұрын
The "accepted styles" in academia also contribute to soulless writing! They're meant to keep things consistent and keep all the references easy to follow, but the unintentional consequences is that they also make expression extremely difficult and "level the playing field" to make everyone's writing appear the same. Only naturally gifted writers typically break through this barrier, the rest just see it as one more link in the chain to an assignment where they are not allowed to express any of their own valuable thoughts.
@cabbagefart74323 жыл бұрын
Unfortunately academia is more effective in formatting people to their unfounded assumptions then stimulate thinking.
@coolisfoolable4 жыл бұрын
This workshop is pure gold.
@malennkhattab54425 жыл бұрын
Many thanks to Dr. McEnerney.
@FireflyOnTheMoon Жыл бұрын
I do wish someone could teach people to communicate in this way in every day life - writing and speaking - less narcisstic solipsism and more awareness of the people who are listening to you, why they are listening to you.
@jakeb.29903 жыл бұрын
This lecture helped me confirm I loathe writing and I must make my living in fields that don't require writing for a public that needs to "buy my writing" It took me 3 attempts, I kept getting bored and falling asleep. But I recognise he's correct about his premises and that is useful. thankfully I'm doing very well in 1 or 2 of those (computer security - hole disclosure, bounties; microelectronics design - if the design is good and works, they will read the little text that needs to be written) I've been toying with the idea of writing technical books with some of my insights in these fields, but I can foresee it being a completely unbearable experience to me. The social aspect of it particularly.
@mayer72333 жыл бұрын
All of my team learned this vedio--very useful. key point --Create Values For Readers 1. whom is Reading? 2.what is the function?(what's your reader's needs/questions/focus on) 3.Do ur readers care about it?
@jayjuarez27533 жыл бұрын
Accidentally left this playing last night, and I woke up to straight facts
@stephenkrus Жыл бұрын
Larry👑you're a Legend! And this lecture is Legendary!👑✨👍
@yangjiao91364 жыл бұрын
Extremely helpful for my writing project right now. I need to constantly think about who my readers are and what's valuable to them, and change their views!
@zenowl30934 жыл бұрын
This has been so enlightening, huge value to my life. Thank you.
@BioStock085 жыл бұрын
"Tell them what you are going to tell them." That YEHOVAH, I had been hammered that thought in my face my entire life.
@Christopher_Bachm3 жыл бұрын
A fellow consultant. Awesome! Now, I get why I relate... Leadership matters. Valuable writing matters. Keep it going!
@flux2022 жыл бұрын
This man is probably the greatest writer.
@QoraxAudio4 жыл бұрын
That thinking and writing of the writer support each other is just part of human nature. I mean, even little kids write diaries and it helps them to make sense of how to perceive the world around them.
@janicechiaretto70823 жыл бұрын
I am so lucky. In high school I had a wonderful English comp teacher who taught these things. I am not a terrific writer ; believe it or not you can unlearn much of this if you do not practice, and worse, you may wind up reading a great deal of terrible work by many "professional writers'" . Lately I have had to begin writing grant proposals aimed at divers funding sources. This has forced me to remember!
@gothgrey53942 жыл бұрын
this just captured history back in 2015.. like ongoing worldly problems. Thats wild. KZbin & professor good job!
@deprogramr4 жыл бұрын
To those interested in this material, I think you may like the book "Six Memos for the Next Millennium" by Italo Calvino... It's less specific perhaps, but also very enlightening about the writing process... check it out if you're so inclined...
@arrowb34085 жыл бұрын
Well, this is a really awesome writing class that I learned from Prof main points of attracting my readers on my works. This needs a lot of eyes in details for writers and eyes catching for readers. Again, this is kind art to fabricate the writing with mind and heart.............STF..........
@amyzhaoding3 жыл бұрын
Love this. Although it's meant for "outside academia", I find the advice very much suitable for academic writing in my field (management and organizations)
@PeanutsandPopcorn7 ай бұрын
This was heaven. Enjoyed every second.
@okbelbab3 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Dr. McEnerney. I argued to myself that I failed to obtain my MA degree in audiovisual translation because I was to some extent rebellion enough and could not embrace many academic writing rules, therefore I am totally convinced I will be a good writer. Hopefully I am not just a dreamer.
@IlterisOney-o4d Жыл бұрын
if you watched this, people check comments if the lecture is good. You are wrong. it is brilliant.
@baqirhemraj76392 жыл бұрын
Writing entails two things: draft writing and editing. I use short sentences in my first draft to keep my writing simple and then have a combination of short and long sentences when editing. Likewise in the first draft, I do not mind writing passive sentences and then turning most of them into active sentences when editing. In my draft, I tend to overwrite and then delete some of the sentences which are redundant when editing.
@tomfoxtrot96094 жыл бұрын
Fantastic, especially for those that enter academia later in life. Also, people eating a proper meal at their tables... unbelievable! Do people have no respect for their teacher and fellow students anymore.
@EmersonAlvesdosSantos5 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Dr. McEnerney.
@patrickmccormack43184 жыл бұрын
Everyone refers to McEerney as either a Professor or Dr. If memory serves, he is neither. Let me know if not the case.
@rozasawicka82564 жыл бұрын
@@patrickmccormack4318 That's the matter of ancient academia courtesy and it shall remain so.
@hernanperez912 Жыл бұрын
This video is so valuable I am watching it again 0:29 in 2023
@jiyoungpark6233 Жыл бұрын
oh, thank you for good lectures i think we need lots of time to practice sentences to write well, precisely to write correctly..., without substantial time, we can't reach our goals
@Zero-z-k8k3 ай бұрын
Language is not rule following, it is controlling the reading process. It is understanding how readers read.
@biancastarr77443 жыл бұрын
So i feel like his comments are the real assignments and the questions are the standardized walk through i love how he speaks at a particular parrallel to teach both mindsets simultaneously. Does this dude still teach
@jonaht21455 жыл бұрын
This is my guy right here. A true god.
@uncletony62104 жыл бұрын
let's not get carried away.
@what_is_going_on71662 жыл бұрын
Russia a ukraine conflict won't be put down these days! Thank your for the great lecture!
@jackzhu24432 жыл бұрын
Purely, purely gold
@jasons44252 жыл бұрын
56:21 Blows me away we are still talking about Ukraine-Russia at present. It’s like the professor was reading into the future
@zyozero52922 жыл бұрын
I was thinking the same thing.. makes me want to read the article.
@0201Cosmic2 жыл бұрын
Or Crimea was happening
@jennv20304 жыл бұрын
This is gold, I wish i had found this my freshmen year.
@muhammadishfaq24423 жыл бұрын
Great to see and hear this untapped valuable knowledge about fine writing skill. It might be helpful for me ahead.....
@jennyaskswhy4 жыл бұрын
I wish someone would make that movie about the contented happy people. It would be radically different from the miserablist stuff that the world is normally engrossed by. As you said people want to feel better about themselves. How will they really learn that by looking at the constant crisis fodder of journalism? Freedom from sickness is not the same thing as health. Fixed mindset is different from equanimity.
@JohnMcLaughlin484 жыл бұрын
Top notch. Value is the key word from this seminar.