Might sound weird but I like how after Athena stepped up, Telemachus didn't suddenly become some incredible fighter out of nowhere when realistically he's had little to no training. He was still on the back foot the whole time against a much more experienced fighter, but he got the confidence and ability to at least start to hold his own and showed he's not a complete pushover to the suitors.
@Nyx_4044 ай бұрын
He would have some fighting experience, but yeah he was cooked from the start
@axolochi43274 ай бұрын
That's exactly what I thought! Athena gave him the ability that helps figure things out, but that doesn't change the fact that he's physically much weaker and has had probably no training.
@moon-oq3ph4 ай бұрын
My thoughts exactly even though he now has the goddess of wisdom on his side he still lacks a lot of experience when it comes to fighting but even with that he at least showed that he was able to hold his own if only for a few moments
@demonslayer62674 ай бұрын
honestly im...actually somewhat on the opposite end of stuff here, in the oficial animation Telemachus beat the living shit out of Antinous in that part and nearly won had it not been for one big counter from Anitinous, and he was very much pissed off about it with the ''Go back and cry in your corner'' so im slightly waiting for an animatic to go the rout of ''Alright and here Telemachus goes ultra mega badass mode'' maybe even have Anitnous win by cheating or straight up by pulling out a weapon in a fist fight
@esbeng.s.a97614 ай бұрын
@@demonslayer6267 No Antinous didn't just win because of one strong punch. Before that he blocked all Telemachus punches after taking some hits. He became more defensive while looking for a opening and took it. Yeas Telemachus beat the living shit out of him after Athena made his thoughtsproces quicker but Anitinous was the more skilled fighter out of those two. What I like about this animatic is how both resorcesfullness and opetunistic Telemachus is as he goes to bite while being grapple, headbutts and uses his cape to throw Antinous of. He may be less skilled but he is still Odyssius son
@archsteel73 ай бұрын
It’s a small detail, but I love the way Antonius shuts Telemachus down in this. A lot of animatics have Telemachus do something stupid, but in this Antonius just tanks through the punches and grabs Telemachus’s hand. It comes down to a very simple difference in physicality. Antonius is so much stronger that no amount of strategy and clever tactics are gonna beat him in a straight up fist fight. It makes it so that Telemachus didn’t do anything “wrong” that made him lose the fight, there was just nothing “right” he could have done to win it. It makes both of them feel competent.
@AngelaRafter3 ай бұрын
I know it gave of a "this was fun but it's about time I end it" vibes
@juliaboskamp9666Ай бұрын
Like Antonius is in his 30s or something and has experience in fighting. Telemachus is only 20 and has no experience in fighting, probably because his dad and all the people who were close to his dad are gone, so he had nobody who could train him to fight. A fully grown adult can easy beat someone who is just out of teenhood, especially if the adult knows how to fight and the 20 year old doesn't know annything about fighting. Telemachus is lucky aunty Athena came to safe him.
@makynnleedanielsАй бұрын
@@juliaboskamp9666antinous is actually 19 but other than that all your points make so much sense and it explains it perfectly
@StatuessАй бұрын
@makynnleedanielsThat's the historical figure Antinous of Rome. Odyssey Antinous could easily be late 20s though!
@JamesF079011 күн бұрын
Sometimes you can make all the right choices and still lose.
@Lenin941FN4 ай бұрын
I like how the other suitors push him back into the fight. It's always good when animatics involve the background characters too, it makes the whole scene come together better
@terra48224 ай бұрын
Yeah, I always imagined that scene when I listened snippet of little Wolf for the first time.
@redhoodie41114 ай бұрын
It'd be weird if they weren't involved considered the main antagonist guy has backup singers like Eurylochus did
@Lenin941FN4 ай бұрын
@@redhoodie4111 yeah true but I noticed not a whole lot of animatic creators get the background singers involved in the scene, they're usually just kinda standing there or running around. Neal illustrator's ruthlessness animatic definitely did it the best, having the crew fully involved as they desperately try to sail away from Poseidon while he's battering their ship with waves
@juliaboskamp9666Ай бұрын
I mean in the original story they all bullied Telemachus because he wanted to find his dad. So it makes sence that they are also involed in giving Telemachus a hard time. No wonder Odysseus later in the story teach his son to use a sword on the people who tried to marry his wife.
@AdmyreHolbrookАй бұрын
@@redhoodie4111 Eurylochus Eurylochus Eurylochus, Odysseus Odysseus Odysseus. (There is no price he won’t pay) I AM NOT LETTUNG YOU GET IN MY WAY!
@BB_Creative4 ай бұрын
I love how even though Telemachus has 0 fighting experience he is using whatever he has on him to defend himself. He bit Antinous to let him go, used his cloak to slow him down, and head bumped him when he was cornered. Telemachus is clever and a bit of a trickster, using whatever he can to defend himself. With Athena’s confidence boost you can see that’s where he starts using his head more. Kinda like Odysseus whenever he is stuck in a corner. Which we really shouldn’t be surprised since they are related to Hermes
@ThatOneNerdInCabin134 ай бұрын
“He starts using his head more.” … HE LITERALLY HEADBUTTED ANTINOUS-
@LUNARSTAR-b2q4 ай бұрын
@@ThatOneNerdInCabin13 HAHA I like it good joke
@ThatOneNerdInCabin134 ай бұрын
@@LUNARSTAR-b2q I mean…..the boy actually started using his head…
@smokescreen1002 ай бұрын
He's a scrappy Lil fella
@LUNARSTAR-b2q2 ай бұрын
@ yeah he is but he’s a absolute scrappy little fella
@mavenology4 ай бұрын
THE SPEAR BONK ON ATHENA'S "NO" IM CRYING
@rebekah72574 ай бұрын
Yeah it made me think of Rafiki from the Lion King XD
@emmasorrels62863 ай бұрын
I know!!I LOVE THAT DETAIL ITS SO CUTE!!!❤
@jennifernitschke12423 ай бұрын
"No!" •bonks Telemachus•
@cynemi_cybr2 ай бұрын
Here’s the part :) : 1:32
@LordCommander-ui2fw16 күн бұрын
@@rebekah7257Glad I’m not the only one.
@linklauncher22114 ай бұрын
Having Antinuous take off his cloak in the beginning and having him immediately dunk on Telemachus for wearing his is peak understanding right there.
@archsteel74 ай бұрын
It’s just such fantastic characterization, instantly showing the massive experience gap between the two of them.
@linklauncher22113 ай бұрын
@@archsteel7 exactly
@bradyon62613 ай бұрын
I didn’t even pick up on the at first! Such a great detail.
@tempesttossed60292 ай бұрын
Even more, the cloak is part of his fighting by the end.
@WeissSchneezusАй бұрын
Then Telemachus adapting using that same cloak to block and defend himself against Antinuous right after truthfully if Telemachus had more experience this fight would have went very different
@malemrajoinam4 ай бұрын
I like how Telemachus used his Robe, it kinda looked like he was one of those Matadors fighting a Bull Shows how much of a BULLy Antonius is
@crimsonmaverick82374 ай бұрын
It also shows how Telemachus’s strength is not gonna come from his physical prowess but in his wit- like his father.
@moon-oq3ph4 ай бұрын
Yep I think this also shows that Antoninus solely relies on brute strength rather than thinking through his fights he probably thinks that if he hits hard enough he’ll win but I think we all know once Ody comes that brute strength isn’t gonna mean much
@boxelastra4 ай бұрын
@@crimsonmaverick8237 Which is a really nice detail considering Athena isn't just a god of war but specifically a god of strategy and leadership, unlike her counterpart ares. It shows how much she rubs off on the both of them
@navimcfarland91134 ай бұрын
I literally screamed "TORO B-" when that happened
@bella_daze30924 ай бұрын
I LOVED THAT TOO
@sketchyghost_yt4 ай бұрын
I think I’ve said it before but I absolutely love how Telemachus looks a bit more feminine in style and such, it really makes him being raised by Penelope alone a focus. Like, he’s a mama’s boy (in a good way!) and combining that flair with him struggling but never stopping his fight creates such a beautiful dichotomy within him (Also him realising his head is bleeding, so gross, its incredible)
@KORIR99Ай бұрын
he's a mama's boy bc he didn't really have a choice LMAO
@sketchyghost_ytАй бұрын
@@KORIR99 FOUL LMAO
@mingchen673527 күн бұрын
@@KORIR99BAHAHHAH
@thatonegirlwithtoomanyfandoms15 күн бұрын
@@KORIR99 YOU DID NOT- 😭
@LauraSleepy14 күн бұрын
@@KORIR99OMG😭😭😭
@Arthur_Morgan18784 ай бұрын
“Spectacular give me 14 of them right now”
@SHOESTEALER_YT4 ай бұрын
literally me
@Therian_Raven4 ай бұрын
Fr
@thatonegirlwithtoomanyfandoms4 ай бұрын
I’ll buy your entire stock 😤
@diva_qween4 ай бұрын
“Really!? Do you know what’s in here?”
@Rosesucks1014 ай бұрын
I WAS GONNA SAY THAT
@finleyforevermore3 ай бұрын
Athena playfully bonking Telemachus with her spear at 1:32 is SO cute! i love little things like that, it makes the animatic and characters feel more alive!
@jennyduong24664 ай бұрын
I like how you show Antinous is more experienced with how “playful” he is as he fights Telemachus. And how Telemachus is a scrappy fella with how he bites and throws wide punches.
@vismaykedilaya13184 ай бұрын
he doesn't even fight until telemachus bites his hand, which is a power move if i've ever seen one
@Potatoesop3 ай бұрын
Other than the choke, Antinous doesn’t take it further until Telemachus actually goes for a punch (AFTER the bite)…at least in this animatic, Antinous was just playing around until Telemachus fought back.
@bluepancake12694 ай бұрын
oh i LOVE how telemachus started fighting *smarter* and not *stronger*. he didnt get any magical powers after all athena just helped him see new ways to defend himself and land his punches better by using the cape OH IM IN LOVE WITH THIS
@actuallyMia154 ай бұрын
0:40 THE WAY TELEMACHUS ACTUALLY BIT HIM LMAO 😭💀
@kinro-o9l4 ай бұрын
NOM NOM NOM
@JabiloJoseph4 ай бұрын
little wolf indeed
@Therian_Raven4 ай бұрын
*Chomp*
@fernandonava66934 ай бұрын
He said "bet"
@bean52544 ай бұрын
Nummies
@Fallenjan3 ай бұрын
1:10 I cannot get over how well you animated Athena taking off (transforming?) her helmet to go to the beat of Quick-Thought, such a clean take that it blew me away.
@CrossSilver4 ай бұрын
I LOVE your Athena design, she's such a tomboy!!! And also love how you incorporate "monster-like" or fantasy elements to differentiate gods like her and Zeus from actual humans, it's so cool
@amw52884 ай бұрын
Thats Cool Aunt Athena!
@eris_of_olympus4 ай бұрын
yeah and i love how the hair design looks like feathers along with her claws and arm feather design!
@boopinoop45454 ай бұрын
It’s reminiscent of Eda the owl lady from the owl house, especially her first time skip design in season 3
@Slow_Internet4 ай бұрын
@@boopinoop4545literally my first thought too
@ShrillyGlitch4 ай бұрын
I think the reason Athena has short hair could be because it would be better in combat, more hair gives you a larger target to your head which isn't ideal and could very easily cause tons of brain damage in fights. That's one of the reasons I cut my hair for wrestling, it's a good but overlooked tatic that is very useful. Also the helmet would probably be Hella hot and longer hair keeps more heat in (mainly if it's thick) since hair acts as a flexible barricade of sorts, not allowing heat to escape. (Sorry if this makes no sense im only in my second year of middle school 😅 )
@jessjess84393 ай бұрын
0:20 why he serving💅
@Ally_Caffeine3 ай бұрын
real 🙌
@EmpressAlligator3 ай бұрын
Straight up facts 👏🌈
@4e22chingyanwong-ed4es3 ай бұрын
Fr
@julianriviera58373 ай бұрын
He's an ancient Greek man. Nuff said 💅✨
@raphaellebanar53193 ай бұрын
Im always like "slayyyy girrrlllll" at this moment 😂
@malemrajoinam4 ай бұрын
1:07 Athena kinda sounds like the female version of " Need a break from the ads?" Guy or Alexa
@meynyarden15274 ай бұрын
Bruh 😂😂😂
@ixpastel4 ай бұрын
How DARE you put this in to the universe! Now I can't unhear it
@MadiWeir4 ай бұрын
I’m glad I wasn’t the only one who thought of this
@littlewyvern173612 күн бұрын
LOL My sister thought I was crying when giggling at that comment
@heyoitsollie4 ай бұрын
Really like how you incorporated the lines to show Antinous toying with him. Like the 0:34 “teach you all the lessons” leading up to grabbing him by the throat and then being amused and slightly impressed after Tel bites him with “wanna entertain me?” Kinda like “oh you’ve actually got some fight? You asked for it kid”
@eowynsisterdaughter4 ай бұрын
It's great how Antinuous does look genuinely entertained and that he's so, relatively, young looking. All the suitors are presumably the guys who were too young to go to the Trojan war. Adored you having Telemachus actually BITE with the appropriate lyrics, showing both how determined, and how unskilled he is. The way you had him instantly shift to more strategic attacks after Athena's help was excellent, especially with how you can infer that she's explaining and setting each of them up with Quickthought.
@Mara-cc1qx3 ай бұрын
Imagine when Odysseus was away for just one month , and Then Penelope See alot of 11/12 years old Walking to her home and and asking her in marriage ? 😂
@ezracohen60203 ай бұрын
@@Mara-cc1qx they had more respect than that (as strange as that sentence is to say about the suitors), there were no suitors until after 10 years once the war was over and Odysseus was not back despite everyone else coming back from war (or having their stories told so that people would know they died)
@Mara-cc1qx3 ай бұрын
@@ezracohen6020 Oh Okay thanks
@mushlii3 ай бұрын
I’d assume these guys would be like mid 30s then no? How old was Ody when he left and what were the age requirements in Greece?
@eowynsisterdaughter3 ай бұрын
@@mushlii Contextually, Odysseus was about 20 when he left for war, so yeah, the suitors are probably mid thirties or younger, though maybe there were some teenagers who came to war.
@blindlark6468Ай бұрын
I love how noble Telemachus looks at 2:00 in comparison to Antinous. it really looks like a noble wolf staring down a mongrel dog.
@MrJameson9004 ай бұрын
I loved how he used his cape! It really showed that Athena gave him time to think through the fight. He knew he couldn't win through strength, so trickery is the next best option.
@anansajohnson91394 ай бұрын
Just like his papa😊
@Jun-Ana4 ай бұрын
@@anansajohnson9139And their grandpa!
@J0hnzie4 ай бұрын
I love *how* Telemachus fought back in this animatic. He doesn't just suddenly start punching harder or start dodging hits he probably shouldn't with his inexperience- he takes advantage of Antinuous's overconfidence. It looks like he takes off his cloak and uses it to wrap Anti's arm behind his back for a moment, or that solid headbutt while Anti has put himself way too close. It does a great job of further selling Tele's inexperience and weakness as a young and sheltered fighter, and the suitors' brutality, and an even greater job of pushing Athena's modus operandi. She wants a warrior of the *mind*, not just some brute. Telemachus here is graced by Athena's influence on time, not just magically made stronger for a moment only for it to end for no reason. Great work.
@Cross-Warrior4 ай бұрын
I love that Telemachus doesn't miraculously get stronger or anything after Athena appears. He just starts fighting smarter, like with how he incorporates his Cape 😍
@beckerini60154 ай бұрын
I love how you show Telemachus' fighting spirit. I feel like too many people in fandom lean so far into "precious sunshine boy" that they neglect Telemachus' desire to rid his home of the monsters overrunning it. But your Telemachus is a fighter, even if no one taught him how. He bites and headbutts and gets some good hits in before Antinous' experience overpowers him. Also love your Antinous design and your Athena (! battle-scarred Athena is an untapped commodity around here!)
@willasyn313627 күн бұрын
Sunshine can burn!
@myasmith182019 күн бұрын
Exactly! These people seem to forget that Telemachus helped his father kill the suitors at the end of myths. He’s clearly not this golden retriever guy.
@수연-s4s3k4 ай бұрын
Love that Telemachus looks actually 20 not like other animatics.
@EpsoofKyiv4 ай бұрын
YES like ah in others he is 16 at best
@IceQueen9754 ай бұрын
Yeaaaah. Like. Guys. He's 20. Not 12. pLeAsE
@hectornonayurbusiness26314 ай бұрын
He still looks 16 here.
@EpsoofKyiv4 ай бұрын
@@hectornonayurbusiness2631 i was looking like this when i was 22
@hectornonayurbusiness26314 ай бұрын
Everyone else is like a head taller than him.
@your_SecondShadow4 ай бұрын
I adore he turned what was a weakness in the first half of the fight in his cape into a way to advantage by making it so he couldn't get a stright strike and on every miss wrapping it around Antinous's arm to pull him into uppercuts shows that like his father Telemachus is also a warrior of the mind just one who is not practised in fighting
@passerinity4 ай бұрын
I love how this didn’t lean into Telemachus being completely inept to being a god. He stayed at the same skill level he just started fighting more confidently and tactically when Athena guided him
@mickmash134 ай бұрын
I love, love, love how you draw Telemachus', Antinuous', and Athena's faces. They're so expressive & distinctive! I also love how you show Telemachus is an untrained but clever fighter. The whole cape/robe thing is so smart! And when you're getting your ass beat by someone who intends you serious harm, everything is on the table, including biting! It just shows how Telemachus is fighting for his own safety, whereas Antinuous is toying with him. This is one of my favorite songs, and this is easily my favorite animatic for it!
@Muleadin4 ай бұрын
The “oooooof” I let out when Telemachus pulled his hand away with all the blood on it. This is soooo good!
@petalpencil13974 ай бұрын
IKR?! I was like: "Aww, tough luck, kiddo. At least the worst of it is over. All you did was fall ove-AAHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT'S BLOOD"😱😱😱 He better get a bandage by the next animatic. That would look kinda sick now that I think about it.....
@Logan-tinyplanetss3 ай бұрын
ME TOO the string of blood makes it really visceral, i shuddered a bit
@xhaoticprince4 ай бұрын
The way I am actually obsessed with everything in this tho. Like the designs, the way the characters are protrayed (esp. Telemachus bc I think people tend to forget he is a whole ass adult), Athena, the background characters.... This is so good 😭
@lucasmonson66724 ай бұрын
This now and Gigis in an hour and a half!!!!!!
@malenejensen024 ай бұрын
Wait what Gigi? Bye
@malenejensen024 ай бұрын
Oh it's not out yet, now I see what you mean! In half an hour now
@lucasmonson66724 ай бұрын
@@malenejensen02 30 minutes!!
@wisegirl55214 ай бұрын
I love how Antinuos isn't taking Telemachus seriously in the beginning. He is just trying to extert dominance. Then Telemachus bites him and that's when the anger and bloodlust kick in. He is smiling as he beats him down; truly savage and I love it.
@maylie12344 ай бұрын
OH I LOVE THAT ATHENA TAKES OFF HER HELMET it makes her feel sorta approachable and even a bit more human? like she obviously isnt, but its a level of vulnerability that i imagine most people dont get from her. And i love that she too has scars, showing that even she isn't 100% infallible. like Yes shes the goddess of wisdom, but shes also imperfect too like the people shes so fond of. AND THE ACTION IN THIS!!!! YOU DID SO GOOD WITH THE FIGHT IT FEELS SO FLUID!!!!! every animatic you put out i just get more and more impressed by your skill
@Duvetbox4 ай бұрын
I’m so glad you noticed she trying to be more approachable! She’s trying not to make the same mistakes with Telemachus haha
@maylie12344 ай бұрын
@@Duvetbox I LOVE THAT!!! its such a good detail
@ThatOneNerdInCabin133 ай бұрын
About the scar…….. You think she tried to eat a stapler when she was two as well? Cuz then, that may be a sibling thing…
@lunasspace26944 күн бұрын
Jason Grace from of Olympus? xD
@hydrodyne62644 ай бұрын
i really liked how compared to a lot of other animatics, Antonius wasn't swinging right out of the gate. The uppercut was also clean af too.
@cynemi_cybr2 ай бұрын
2:37 How I stare at my friends when I’m right behind them and they say the most out of pocket thing on planet earth
@CharmanderTheGecko1627 күн бұрын
LOL
@deerqueen_37384 ай бұрын
WAKE UP BABE NEW DUVETBOX ANIMATIC
@vrishtikumar-u4j3 ай бұрын
antinuous's voice completely fits this design it tickles my brain so good
@marielucia93164 ай бұрын
THE WAY YOUR ANTONIUS LOOKS..
@-flick-19434 ай бұрын
Ah nah....
@federerlkonig3304 ай бұрын
He Is the gorgeous pirate prince of our Dreams.
@PiaPancakes3 ай бұрын
He kinda… 🫣
@Evortless2 ай бұрын
He’s so punchable but also..????
@tomiyinn2 ай бұрын
finally someone said it 😭
@kalinatankova35784 ай бұрын
Something that makes an impression is that - she never tells him her name. Telemachus deduces she is Athena completely on his own. This is a parallel to how Odysseus knows who she is when they first met. It also shows that Telemachus is also clever, giving Athena good reasons to want to guide him instead of just doing it for Odysseus's sake.
@Shoemeru4 ай бұрын
I LOVE HOW AT 2:33 HE LITERALLY TANJIRO HEADBUTTS HIS WAY OUT OF BEING PINNED UP DFSHGSHS LMAOOOOOOOOO
@your_SecondShadow4 ай бұрын
I think you put in thevwrong line code thats 2:23
@xXThat_MenaceXxАй бұрын
I LOVE the way you draw Athena. She looks so badass with short hair and the scars. Most animatics I've seen havent shown what athena looks like under her helmet; I love this concept!
@Nix-thegoddessofnight4 ай бұрын
WOAH WOAH WOAHHHHH ATHENA LOOKS SO BADASS HOLY CRAP AND THE COREO OF FGE FIGHTING THE ANGLES HOW IS IT LEGITIMATELY PERFECT-!!!
@notsolonedesert4 ай бұрын
This is so literally EPIC. Your Athena design is so badass and cool (just as all your other designs are) and the way she bonks Telemachus on his head with the spear and also how she smoothly heals him, and how her face shows a bit of her burden at the end, it is so good omg!!!!
I love the fact that he started using tricks like with the cape, cause any one coached by Athena would focus on strategy rather than brute force ^.^
@eisdrache75234 ай бұрын
The character design for Antinous looks SO GOOD 😩 The animation is amazing! I love all the little details (including the suitors, Antinous not taking the fight very serious in the beginning bc he knows telemachus doesn't stand a chance,...) and I am OBESESSED with Athena's look when she takes off her helmet! 😍
@zervikprime46424 ай бұрын
OMG, THAT ANTONIUS LOOKS HOT AF! But the ATHENA DESIGN ALSO; HER OWL FACIAL TRATIS LOOKS SO FUCKING COOL! This video just cause me a lot of Bi Panic! I love that in the "Bite" Tele bite, hahaha EDIT: Open a goddamit Pateron and my soul will be yours
@MothThatLikesLamps4 ай бұрын
You may just have a scar fetish
@MothThatLikesLamps4 ай бұрын
You may just like scars
@Kao_Chuuyahat4 ай бұрын
How does that have to do with comment? Just asking. @@MothThatLikesLamps
@MothThatLikesLamps4 ай бұрын
@@Kao_Chuuyahat both of them have facial scars
@Kao_Chuuyahat4 ай бұрын
@@MothThatLikesLamps I know. I was just confused as to why you said that.
@solitutial4 ай бұрын
I was SO happy when I saw this!!! I LOVE ur character designs and art style and have been watching your Legendary animatic on repeat for so long! I especially loved the sequence at 1:53 where all the colour came back as Athena snapped her fingers!!!
@PretentiousGamer4 ай бұрын
This animatic goes way too hard, from the fight choreography to Athena design and quick thought implementation, everything just looks so good.
@UchihaFan97PL4 ай бұрын
I simply love that little "bonk" that Athena gives Telemachus when he starts overthinking
@Arobis4 ай бұрын
I am still not over how looks so much like Odyseuss❤❤AND ATHENAS LOOK!!! AAAAAA THE WAY TELEMACHUS LOOKED AT HIM WHEN HE SAID "YOUR DADDY NEVER COULD" OR THE WAY TELEMACHAUS THROW HIS ROPE AND LOOK SEROUS OR THE WAY HE MAKE HIS HAIR BACK WHEN SAID "IF SHE DONT CHOOSE A MEN TO ADORN HER" AAA!!!! What Animatic are planning to do next!!! In case I hqvent told enough!! YOU ARE THE BEST ANIMATOR!!! I AM WATCHING THIS OVER AND OVER AGAIN!!!!!💙💙
@jaysnow42483 ай бұрын
1)Gigi 2) Duevbox
@skullsramen4 ай бұрын
as always, i adore your character design!! ATHENA HAVING OWL-LIKE FEATURES IS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT AAAAAA
@gwenward21414 ай бұрын
I like the detail where Telemachus used his cloak to distract the other guy in the second half of the fight. It was a weakness earlier, when the other guy used the back of his cape to throw him around, but he was able to use it to his benefit once he new he had to loose it. I feel like we're not seeing as much of clever Telemachus in these animatics, and I want that badly
@MildlyPerturbed4 ай бұрын
Yeah, let my boy be smart! He’s the son of Penelope and Odysseus, who were both known for their cleverness!
@ThatOneNerdInCabin134 ай бұрын
@@MildlyPerturbedYea! I think Ody is known for the Trojan horse among other things, and Penelope is known for using the shroud as a distraction while waiting for Ody to come home(and for the challenge
@myasmith182019 күн бұрын
@@ThatOneNerdInCabin13Exactly, his parents are known for their cleverness especially Penelope who is said to keep up with her husband. She tricked these suitors for years and the test she gave Odyessus was genius. There’s no way Penelope would raise a kid who isn’t clever.
@starsatlas25704 ай бұрын
you make some of my FAVOURITE epic animatics!! i love how he's active in the fight and has some bite (haha) before athena shows up, and her presence and help makes him fight back in a more cunning way instead of just getting stronger also your athena design made me GASP out loud
@aiko1374 ай бұрын
1:25 I love how you animated that uppercut! You animated this fight sequence so well!
@MildlyPerturbed4 ай бұрын
I love how Athena spins and points to the suitors when she sings “a larger heart than all these men combined!”
@myoldnamewssocringe2 ай бұрын
Frr
@sebaredghost90684 ай бұрын
Your Athena design rocks.🤘🏻 The scars across the nose & lips gives the vibes of a true War goddess. And the way Antonius casually 0:28 walks to & pass Telemachus, for then grabbing him by the throat is pure gold.
@scarletnightshade65584 ай бұрын
I really liked how he is just like his dad in being tactical. Experience and strength he is outmatched so using his cloak for an advantage is *french kiss*
@meganmay52774 ай бұрын
I love your Athena design! The scar on her lip. Oh my, I'm in love 1:32 favorite part so far
@galaksina4 ай бұрын
I love how dynamic you made this entire fight, a lot ive seen just have them throw 2 punches but this was an outright continued strike - really well done!
@dinomaster3374 ай бұрын
Dude! I love how brutal and dirty it is! This is not a clean fight, these two are giving each other some serious injuries (Telemachus was bleeding from the back of his head, like Jesus!). Well done! You have an eye for action and it makes me wanna see more animatics that are action packed like this (RUTHLESSNESS PLEASE)! Keep up the good work and continue to inspire!
@Sarah-Has-Arrived4 ай бұрын
I have SO MANY thoughts about this animatic omfg!!! Antonius immediately proving he has more fighting knowledge than Tele by removing his cape because he knows it’s a liability because it can be grabbed and it weighs him down and inhibits speed and movement. Antonius just PLAYING with Tele, even though Tele is obviously taking this seriously. And I LOVE that Tele actually throws punches and fights back BEFORE Athena comes into the picture - the other animatics I’ve seen really don’t seem to have him trying at all, or have his attempts be halfhearted at best. Your Tele is obviously putting power behind his punches and is SCRAPPY. Antonius looks so sassy at 0:20 help I love it 😂 Tell him to bite? Alright. This isn’t a fair fight anyway. He’s in it to survive. So yeah he’s gonna BITE. Hell yeah Tele. And honestly? The fact that he thinks to do this BEFORE Athena shows he has the ability to be wily like his father. He was in a bad position and he got himself out of it by playing dirty. Total Ody move. We love to see it. I love how you have Antonius doing more than just punching Tele. You are showing that he is a skilled fighter in this sequence - he’s not just a typical schoolyard bully. He KNOWS how to fight. But he’s USING IT to be a schoolyard bully. The crowd of suitors catching Tele and then pushing back into the “ring” because Antonius isn’t done with him and they aren’t done being entertained? *chef’s kiss* They are not just passive watchers here egging Antonius on - they are just as culpable in this, despite not being the ones throwing the punches. Tele actually managing to sloppily block some of Antonius’ punches - again! Love to see that he DOES have some self defense training. Which MAKES SENSE considering that he is the prince. The reason why he can’t be crowned king is because there’s too much unrest and he has no support and people just want Penelope to remarry. SHORT HAIR ATHENA LES FUCKIN GOOOOOOOOO!!!! For the SAME REASON capes are a liability in the field, SO IS LONG HAIR! Athena having short hair is a FANTASTIC CHOICE!! And her having noticeable scars?! Like, yes she’s a goddess, but she’s the goddess of WAR and she has 100% fought against other gods who ARE capable of scarring her. HELL YEAH. And standing simply in a soldiers stance? Duvetbox you mad genius. Athena giving Tele the information on how to do the uppercut - the proper stance and form since he said himself HE DOESN’T KNOW HOW. So just telling him to do something won’t help. And that transition of his eyes lighting up as he gets the info from her, to the black and white shot of the proper fighting positions, to him successfully completing it? *screeching happily* AMAZING!! Lmao Athena bonking his head with her spear “no.” 😉 Her instantly healing his wounds with a simple wave of her hand? THE POWER OF THE GODS AND THE POWER OF YOUR ANIMATION AAAAAAAAA 🙌 I actually really like that we can see that time is still slowly passing even during quick thought. Antonius isn’t stuck in the punched position, he’s not on the ground completely - he’s slowly getting up. Because quick throught does NOT stop time. So things are still happening. Very slowly, yes. But there was SOME progress in time. Antonius actually grinning after getting sucker punched by Tele. He’s like “ooh is the little wolf actually gonna make this fun?” He’s still not even worried. 😭 I like Athena’s spin at 2:05 because it kinda gives her cape that wing effect! 🦉 Go matador Tele! This further proves he is 100% Ody’s son - his cape was used against him so he knew it was bad to wear it. Result? Take it off but use it against your enemy. Sure, Antonius still managed to grab at it and use it against him too, but he LEARNED and used his head (literally like 5 seconds later lmao). Ody AND Athena would be/are proud. 💜 I also like during the fight that even when Tele’s punches land you can tell they don’t hit as hard as Antonius’s do. Tele just isn’t as strong as him and he doesn’t have as much force behind his hits. So even when his punches DO land, they don’t pack as much power as Antonius’s do unfortunately. I loved that Antonius DID have blood on him at the end. Tele DID uppercut him. He DID get at least ONE good hit in. Yeah, he didn’t win, but I think it’s important to see Antonius bleeding right next to Tele. The monster can bleed too. Then at the end, when Tele is smiling at her and is happy and Athena looks away… she’s obviously thinking “what do I say here? How much do I reveal to him? I don’t want to mess this up too.” THIS WHOLE THING IS A MASTERPIECE I WANT TO KISS YOUR BRAIN /p
@Duvetbox4 ай бұрын
WONDERFUL ANALYSIS GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT🙏🙏
@Heavenly_inthestars4 ай бұрын
The way I screamed "GYAT" when I saw Athena oh my god 😭😭😭😭😭🙏🏾 I love telemachus I love your designs so much actually AUGH please keep up the good work
@Nameless_Angel4 ай бұрын
IKR ATHENA IS SO GORGEOUS-
@Heavenly_inthestars4 ай бұрын
@@Nameless_Angel RIGHT????? LIKE OH MY GOD. I LOVE THEIR DESIGNS OF EVERYONE IN THE WAY MY MIND BLEW WHEN THEY DREW ATHENA??! OH MY GODDD
@mavenology4 ай бұрын
NO LITERALLY ATHENA IS GORGEOUS IN THIS STYLE LIKE OMGGG.. all their designs on the characters is chefs kiss
@Heavenly_inthestars4 ай бұрын
@@mavenology So real true, in love with all of them AUGHHHH
@r113453 ай бұрын
Zawg what
@1_Artemis_2_Rule_Them_All4 ай бұрын
Okay, I am absolutely OBSESSED with Athena's design. Like, seriously. The small hints of owl in her facial features, her clawed fingers, and the feathers designed into her wrist guards are all insanely brilliant. Excellent job!
@morganayling4 ай бұрын
0:11 and this is exactly why edna says No capes!!!!!
@michealduncan96594 ай бұрын
Because they tend to get in the way or trip you up
@jennisa-w-56944 ай бұрын
same with long hair tbh if you don't have the skill require to keep it out of the way THEN DON'T HAVE IT XD
@BrandonLee-v8z4 ай бұрын
@@jennisa-w-5694 can't hit your hair with a weapon when you have no hands
@Plaguestris3 ай бұрын
And Peter B. Parker
@auiak76893 ай бұрын
@@jennisa-w-5694rubber bands: Hairpins:
@DragonFaerie4 ай бұрын
I ADORE your Athena holy shit she looks epic (pun intended) And i also love your version of Telemachus, 20 year olds may technically be adults but theyre also just slightly smarter teens with limited life expirence and that is so clear with our boy here
@Wolf_Lover199 күн бұрын
I love how Athena's face reveal is that she's not beauty goddess but has such tomboyish look to her and l love it. Really fits with the goddess of war
@Umbra_Dux4 ай бұрын
I'd let Antonius beat me up too- WHAT WHO SAID THAT???? But for real I LOVE Your art so fuckin much the excitement seeing you posted was REAL
@Leeooof3 ай бұрын
2:25 he did a dark souls roll
@aaliyah84714 ай бұрын
ieeeeeee i loveee. athena's design but also how tele learned to fight smarter instead of JUST with his fists. idk if that was the intention but i think it was, it was great great, your line art is so amazing.
@SleepyWinter034 ай бұрын
This is wonderful, I love how he fights like he has the time to think about his actions but still isn’t a good fighter. When I started fencing I thought way too much and ended up freezing, if you actually had the time to think you would definitely have an easier start but would absolutely still lose.
@willow43714 ай бұрын
I literally screamed when I saw the thumbnail and Telemachus gives me “I look like my dad but with the mind of my mother.” Vibes. I think you showed really well though how Odysseus protectiveness definitely became genetic. I designate them both as certified Crashouts.
@caseyp56424 ай бұрын
OH THAT LOOK AT THE END, also I love how you implemented that he really isn’t a strong fighter, so he had to use his cloak, dodge a whole bunch, basically a bunch of nice dirty tactics in order to even land solid hits on the jerk. Beautiful animation
@judgmentprince51294 ай бұрын
your athena design is to die for
@marinaeditsfandoms3 ай бұрын
1. The way Antonius is so playful like a cat with a mouse 2. The others pushing Telemachus back 3. Athena's design 4. The bonk on the head with a spear lol. 5. The way Telemachus is actually visibly injured, then we see his injuries cured by Athena and then he's injured even more. 6. The fight itself is animated SOSOSOSOSO GOOOOODDD 7. The way Athena is acting like a fangirlie 8. The madness in Antonius's eyes like what 9.How Athena actually looked concerned and guilty in the balcony scene. She was worried Telemachus would turn her down just like Odysseus did, but is relieved when Telemachus turns around and is... Grateful IT'S SO GOOD IM SUBSCRIBING
@esteban84714 ай бұрын
Out of all the Little Wolf animatics I've seen so far, this one has the most fun portrayal of the fight in my opinion. Telemachus starts trying to keep up with Antinous, but can't. But after Athena gives him some help, he starts using his robe to block attacks and using Antinous' weight against him. It really shows that he's more like his father than he realizes.
@moss16404 ай бұрын
Ooooo im in love with your designs Athena is so beautiful and i love the scars which show her battles and power instead of changing her appearance to hide them
@marzenamaslanka65654 ай бұрын
FINALLY! Lord, Athena's design? Ate. Literally the best and most orginally I ever seen. Also, the suitors pushing Telemachus back into the fight? Perfect, I love when animatics have background characters, it make it more realistic😍 what can I say, I'm in love.
@fxllenx4 ай бұрын
AND WE ALL CHEERED WAHOOOO🗣️🗣️🗣️‼️‼️‼️
@Isbah-Izzy-Lou4 ай бұрын
WAHOOOOO
@SHOESTEALER_YT4 ай бұрын
WAHOO!!
@ShiroTheToast3 ай бұрын
WAHOOOOOO‼️‼️‼️
@a.morphous663 ай бұрын
I love how Athena doesn't take off her helmet, she kinda just brushes it away. It's such a subtle display of supernatural power.
@DND202 ай бұрын
1:41 I have not respect for bullies, thoses who impose their will. It feels like she is almost talking about herself, she did impose ther will on Ody in telling him to kill the cyclops which led to him snapping and revealing his name, and to the hateful goodbye they had. I think this is 100% her regretting what happened and trying to atone what she did with Ody by helping his son.
@kristap87544 ай бұрын
I love EVERYTHING about this!!! Telemachus looking his age, masc Athena, the bonk, the skill difference, the snap to dismiss Quick Thought, how scrappy Telemachus is. The STYLE. EVERYTHING.
@CalixionArtz4 ай бұрын
Between this and your Legendary animatic I think your interpretation of Telemachus is my favorite. The fighting in this is great, and you really take advantage of the flow and outcome of the fight to really give it that "shonen protagonist that just received new powers but overestimated himself in his first fight with them." trope. In short, I loved this.
@glamourweaver4 ай бұрын
“I’ve no respect for bullies” Every spider on earth simultaneously looks into the camera like they’re on the Office
@stroodledoodles4 ай бұрын
1:32 get bonked silly child I love this, the choreography was so well done! Also the androgynous design for Athena is really cool!
@Logan-tinyplanetss3 ай бұрын
your athena design is so good i GASPED on her face reveal. the short spiky hair!! the SCARS!! she really does feel like a goddess of warriors here, it's amazing!!!
@slomosis89234 ай бұрын
AND THE AUDIENCE CHEERED AND SCREAMED FOR THE LOVELY ANIMATIC!!!
@JinxDoesChaos4 ай бұрын
Antinuos: *Does anything * Me: I hate him Also me at 0:58: *tries not to faint *
@panpanmonday35854 ай бұрын
2:52 Not Odysseus wearing a gake mustache while watching his kid get beat that's gotta be messed up man😞😞😞
@falconstudios1464 ай бұрын
Oh my God you're right
@fuyim4 ай бұрын
I LOVE THESE DESIGNS LIKE THEY LOOK SO AMAZING
@TubaLady4 ай бұрын
DSJSJFJFKF I LOVE your artstyle!! All of your character designs are immaculate and OH MY let me tell you my jaw dropped when I saw Athena she is SOOOO PRETTY!!!
@Ella163604 ай бұрын
Woah! This was amazing!! The fight was awesome! Favorite Little Wolf animatic so far!
@geethenerd4 ай бұрын
Telemachus actually using strategy after Athena helps him, but fighting like a rabid animal before that is such a nice touch!!! Thank you!!
@LajosnéCzeffer4 ай бұрын
Omg, this is amazing. I love this so much. The fight choregraphy is really good and the characater designs (especially Telechamus in my opnion) are awesome
@tinkertess3 ай бұрын
THIS IS MY FAVE ANIMATIC OF ALL THE EPIC ONES IVE SEEN! I agree w all the comments and love everything about it. FANTASTIC job!!
@hiiiiiiii-.10Ай бұрын
I love how telemachus just wiped the blood on the wall like oh hey let's jus wipe blood on the wall it's chill
@alainlemy19392 күн бұрын
Just realized, that moment lead to Hold them down. When Telemachus start to fight back, it took Antinous off guard. He probably said to himself " He is getting balder, if he is like his dad he will be a threat"
@gemmasantos87023 ай бұрын
Your Telemachus is just ✨MWAH✨ and now the new design I simp for😀
@yourboyneedsahobby4 ай бұрын
now entering the match: HOT ANDROGYNOUS ATHENA !!!!
@VegaTheLyra4 ай бұрын
This was amazing! I love how Athena has a slash near her lips! Very unique!