Long Haulers Episode 10 - The Cosmic Crunch 🌌🚀🤿🔥

Knox Vega’s next delivery takes him to the remote water world of Depthika, where he must navigate uncharted depths to reach an enigmatic alien known as Tagool. What seems like a simple drop-off quickly turns into a mind-bending encounter that challenges Knox’s grasp on reality. Can Knox survive the mysteries of the deep and deliver his cargo, or will Tagool's profound intellect leave him floundering?
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[@cj9136]

Thanks M.G

[@MetaHeezie]

Bravo 👏🏾 this was excellent. I was entertained from being to end 🎉

[@WriterMcG]

Thank you for watching it. How amazing is it that we now have copyright protections as AI storytellers?

[@wleebraz]

He was almost losing it. Tripping. Been there, done that. Well, to be truthful, I am in my 70s and my hearing is not too good. I like my music a little louder but I`ve blown out speakers in my younger days. I will concede to the young lady.

[@WriterMcG]

I left a note about this on the community page. Thank you for watching as I grow and learn.

[@AdamosDad]

I think I saw this once while on acid.

[@Vickyvee97]

Thank you for fixing the volume, still alittle loud but not distorting anything like before.

[@WriterMcG]

Thank you for letting me know. I just posted a note about my learning curve and process. I truly appreciate you watching my show and helping me get better at telling stories in this new medium.

[@Vickyvee97]

@@WriterMcG No worries, I wish you well and I really do love these videos. It's a rarity today that this type of YT story telling, most just try to have a cliff hanger, I much prefer a beginning middle and end in each episode.

[@WriterMcG]

@@Vickyvee97 thank you for this helpful feedback! Are you an industry pro? That’s not an insight many would have. In fact, friends of mine who star on network TV shows have marveled at how I am able to make very small three act shows. It’s not easy! I keep this show very simple for a good reason. Your feedback means a lot to me. In just a few months I am sure I can expand and deepen the storytelling.

[@kfrashmon]

Buffalonickel, are you in the 716? I will gladly support a local content creator. Go Bills!

[@WriterMcG]

Born and raised in Bills Country but a little south, the 607. Thanks for the support!

[@qdllc]

Not bad, but too many AI glitching.

[@WriterMcG]

@@qdllc I’m probably one of the least technically proficient users of AI tools. I learn fast and this will improve. IMHO consider AI storytelling like a puppet show at this moment. Thank you for watching!

[@mattcarlson8262]

Hmmm, well first off, get rid of the song, it's terrible and too loud. Your AI characters are also too loud, and they shouldn't be staring into the camera...Also, did not connect with your characters or the story line ...Good luck next time !

[@WriterMcG]

@@mattcarlson8262 thanks for taking time to make this comment. This is the very first inning in a new storytelling medium. I do not take any offense at criticism. The critic makes nothing. When I make something I enjoy the process and learning. But “your characters should not be staring into camera” made me have a good laugh.

[@jamdonut]

@@WriterMcG it was interesting seieng it, my first ever AI episode... it's bizarre but interesting. The AI writing I feel makes it not feel massively enjoyable.

[@WriterMcG]

@ I understand. Due to the complexity of a multi layered animation process I intentionally keep the storytelling very simplistic but that will change soon. I can’t control your personal tastes but I can stand firmly on the basic three act structure and all the possibilities going forward will mean more complex storytelling. I’m a professional writer who wrote Colin Farrells first movie (Tigerland) and multiple novels and I am extremely strong with narrative. Consider checking back in a month and see how much it’s improved. I have only been using AI tools for about 7 months now and my workflow is getting more manageable so the storytelling can become more robust.