Lost Colony | Do you remember me ? | Sci-Fi HFY Story | Sort HFY Story

[@thomasdevine867]

This reminds me of both Bradbury's "Dark They were and Golden Eyed," and Le Guin's "Vaster than Empires and more Slow." But it lacks the poetry of either of those. I see some influence of Van Vogt's "The Village" as well.

[@GiantHFY]

Thank you for your thoughts. I hope I can achieve a smoother narration in future stories.

[@johnmac4769]

wish the story line was better put together.

[@GiantHFY]

Thank you for commenting. I hope it will be more settled in future stories. I am trying to improve.

[@EllenCrawford-h1f]

Story keeps repeating itself need to communicate with your editor to prevent that from happening

[@GiantHFY]

I am working on it. Thank you for your valuable comment. 🙏

[@Svensk7119]

Less a story than a description. Basically, the Colonists went native, like, "Dark They Were, And Golden-Eyed". The discovery of the artifact is mentioned twice. The story is poorly edited.

[@GiantHFY]

@@Svensk7119 Thank you for your thoughts. I hope I can achieve a smoother narration in future stories.