Mage | Mercy Reacts & Analysis of 666Problems - Darkmage4 w/

[@guyhood6916]

I really appreciate your bravery and vulnerability in this. It's not exactly in my wheelhouse but I'll toss out some thoughts. A few of the lines felt off. I recall you talking about still working on your rapping and wonder if it's that. I dunno if it's a flow or cadence or what. I'm not that knowledgeable. What I do know is that you don't work on something this hard without there being passion behind it. Keep working on it and when you're happy with it you'll have what you need from it. Keep it up man! PS If I'm mistaken due to unfamiliarity to genre or any other of a myriad of possible reasons please ignore my constructive criticism and accept all the encouragement I can give

[@Darkmage4]

@@guyhood6916 cadence might be off. I did release the final version! Sometimes moving the tracks can be some what finicky. But as well as, sometime I may miss a point on my own. So I definitely try! It is fully out as of right now btw everywhere. Thank you for your comment! As I grow and learn. I’ll be more on point! 😁 definitely better than the original I had. That one was definitely bad. lol.

[@guyhood6916]

@Darkmage4 Practice makes perfect my man and you both saw growth from version one to version two. The more ya work at it the faster it'll all come together. I may not have artistic ability but I know you're doing a ton of stuff that's involving a lot of different skillets. I'll check it out of course.

[@Darkmage4]

@guyhood6916 Indeed! I have a lot of rap vocals. Definitely not as good as Ren. 😅 but, I’ll get there eventually. Maybe not his level. Haha. However, I talk rap most of the time, and try to be on beat. I release for personal. But also, to get my messages out there.

[@guyhood6916]

@@Darkmage4 I'm a Ren fan. Ren does his music for himself first and foremost. It's how he gets out his thoughts and feelings so you know I respect that. You should check out his song Power when you get a chance. It actually talks about just that so it'd probably really connect with you on those parts. Plus it's just a bop lol